salma, pooja, riya, twinky, loveleen, baby, vidushi, zikra, mitali, shamz, sanam, rupam, tara, srija, tamanna, fatarajo, samriya, jerly, shreya, aastha, truth aware, fiona, aakansha, sidmin(twinj), prapti, lama.Srsy guys i wanna give a tight wala hug to ALL of u!…. thanks a lot
No, mitali i m not on instagram but soon i will be creating an account in it then we can bcm frnds…. sorry
Tara, no worries i will send u the reqst again
The episode starts….
pluto is barking outside twinj’s room and there twinkle and kunj are busy composing themselves wid all shyness.
K: iss pluto ki toh mai…. i will not leave him today!
kunj starts heading towards the door but twinkle holds his hand and stops him
T: dont u dare do anything wid my baby.. infact u should be thankful to him
K:whao twinkle he broke our romance and ur saying that i should be thankful to him
T:ya ofcourse bcus u were not getting controlled only. u were kissing me like it is our suhagraat(honeymoon)
kunj’s mouth gets wide opened as he saw twinkle’s anger just for pluto she was not in senses wht she was speaking.
T:ab ghur kya rahe ho go nd open the door
kunj makes faces but he didnt had anyother option left.
As soon as he opened the door pluto jumped on him… making him fall on floor…. pluto above him
K:aa… aaa twinkle save me i think he is gonna rape me today!
pluto is still above kunj staring him angrily
T: wht the heck r u saying are u in yr senses my pluto can never do that
Kunj stares twinkle shockingly
K thinks: kunj beta dhyan rakhna kahi ye kutta hi twinkle se shaadi na karle
K: maaf kar de meri maa…. now pls take him
Twinkle goes towards pluto and lifts him up were lovingly
T:awww… my baby sorry baccha kunj was late in opening the door thats y u r angry on him ri8!
pluto licks twinkle’s cheeks in agreement
K thinks: iss kuttey ka kuch toh jugad karna hi padega
just then a maid cms in room
Maid: twinkle di leela mam is calling u and kunj sir in hall
T: oh… ok u just take pluto and feed him ok!
M: ya sure di
T: bye baby
maid takes over pluto and goes
K thinks: chalo chutkaara mila
T: wht r u thinking mr. cm. fast
K: oh ya okay!
They both go down where leela is standing wid a person… his back is facing towards twinj…. Mahi and uv r also there.
L:oh thank god u both came…. project completed na
twinj look into eo and blushes recalling the moment
T:(still blushing)yup mom done
L: gud…. now see who came twinkle(pointing towards the person who is facing his back)
The person turns and is revealed to be kabir
Twinkle gets happy!
T:(jumping in excitement)Kabirrrr!
she runs towards him and hugs him tightly
k thinks:(funny anger)oh hoo hoo look at this siyaooa queen… mere alava sabko hug karegi… pehle pluto and now ye kabir…. i dont know. y but smwere i feel dis kabir is not what he is showing… i mean look at his expressions….. his face is hiding a big mystry i suppose… offo kunj u r thinking over now!
just then twinkle interupts… he cms out frm thougths
ka: hey twinky yaar i m soooooo happy for u…. leela aunty told me the whole story….. nyc plan by the way(holding her waist and pulling her towards him)kunj notices this and goes near them just to break thier closeness
K:(forwarding his hand)Hi…. dis is kunj…. kunj sarna… ur best frnd’s would be husband
Ka: oh hi bro!
they had a handshake but kabir was holding kunj’s hand very tightly it seemed tht he was taking out his frustration
kunj notices this and frowns a bit. Then both break the handshake
T: Kabir now till my marriage gets over u will have to stay here only… no choice its my order
Ka:ofcourse twinkle hw can i miss my wedding
All there stood shocked..
T:y… yr. wedding
Ka: arre baba i mean my best frnd’s wedding
All laugh accept kunj
K thinks: wht is he upto!
L: ok ok enough of masti mazak…. i want to tell u all (to twinj and uhi)that i hv called a choreographer to teach us dance for all ur wedding functions
M: wow maa who is he
T: ya tell tell
Leela points towards kabir.
L: he is ur choreographer
Twinkle shiws are 180 volts smile
T: oh wowwww! how can i forget yaar…. kabir is the best choreograher in all over london
I m sooooo very much xcited yaar
saying this she again hugs him… this tym a short one
just then pluto cms running
P: bow vow… bow vow
K thinks: ye kabir toh gaya ab…. he hugged twinkle no…. now this pluto will not leave him… accha hai pluto kahi toh kaam aaya
Pluto is running towards kabir…. surprisingly for kunj…. kabir bends down and open his arms and pluto jumps on him and starts licking him
Ka: hey junior… we met after a long tym
K:(not in his senses)why didnt this pluto attacked kabir!
all gets shock listening to his quesktion
Ka:(smiles a bit) bcus kunj… wen i used to stay in amritsar…… i, twinky, pluto and mahi used to play endlessly… thts y i nd pluto also share a gr8 chemistry… nd my junior can never think of attacking me… ri8 jr.?
p: bow vow (in agreement)
K: shit yaar…. (slowly)
but our twinkle hears it
T: narrowing her eyes…. wht did u say
Kunj gets tensed
K: n… no… nothing
L: ok ok now stop it…. twinkle- mahi punditji came and he told tht muhrat for ur haldi ceremony is after two days… so kabir…
Ka: dont worry aunty i will teach u all dance within a day only
Leela smiles
To be continued…
sorry sorry sorry sorry guys for this boring epi… even i can feel its boring… but these days i m very busy so dont hv tym to think smthing interesting and i wrote a shirt update bcus i dont know abt the rituals of the marriage so i will ask my mom everything tmro as its 11:40 pm here.. soorry guys
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who told u that it is boring . i m laughing till now on our bechara kunj . anwz u r on fb ?
Bad luck for kunj………two villains in his cute love story….pluto & kabir………awwwwwwwwww so poor……. abt pluto, i think himself & kunj will patch up……. but that kabir….i think he will surely try to break this marriage……… π anyways nice episode yaar,…..Ritzi….. π loved it….. loved twinj knok joke….. π but i think it would be better if twinkle understand kunj’s situation….and send quality time with him than with kabir………. but its ur wish to choose……. π
Ritzi I’m commenting fr the first tm and I’m sry fr being a silent reader so far…. I have read ur ff since d beginning its just awesome u indeed r a gr8 writer
hi ritzi. i’m also a silent reader of ur ff. but i really really love ur ff and it’s amazing.
i think kabir is in love with twinkle right?and realy this was not boooring.interesting.cant wait for the next epi.plz plz plz plz plz post soooon and try to post evryday as i asked you this everyday but you disobey my order BTW LOVE IT
you’re great examples for others
waiting for next one π π π
*example instead of example
Who tld its boring its fantastic ritzi…I too think kabir s in love with twinkle n I als think Kunj n Pluto ll patch up n den a dono kabir ki band baja age…cnt wait fr nxt plz post asap n it shld b longer
It was nt boring….it was funny….
wow its amazing. bechara kunj
Iss kabir ko toh..hmmphh?…anyways it was a good epi but post d next one soon..
verrrrrrrrrrrrrry niiiiic ritzi i know i commented after so much time but trust me i was so much busy but i have read all ur past epi
ritzi if u can read my eff then i will be more happy
good episode keep it up
awesome one…bt this kabir…..bt then it will be masala less..so m xcited for the next one..
Awesome but next episode fast with lots of masti and pluto
Oh wow I just luv this Pluto
Ritzi u r just so fab dear . Luv u and do post the next one soon
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its not boring at all. i was laughing while reading it. bechara kunj. i am excited that what will happen next. do cont soon plzzzz
m jus laughing imagning kunjs xpressn evrytym…u write so nyc dear
Ritzi yaar muahhhhh love u. And wait a min who told u its boring, it is not at all boring. Its just amazing. So sorry dear for not commenting before but what to do this IX ki padai is a lil difficult. I suppose kabir likes twinkle that is y he said how can I miss my wedding.
Hey ritzi r u on fb?? If u r so plz add me. My email id- [email protected]
hey ritzi i jus got an idea so thot of sharing it wid u i dnt knw if u ll lyk it or nt…it is such dat u can bring a gf fr pluto it wl b funnier if kunj brings it so dat he can romance peacefully…lol…i knw its ur stry n u may nt lyk if i giv u such ideas…n m sry if i interfered in ur stry…bt jus i cud nt resist frm sharing it wid u….m sry again….u cn ignore if u dnt lyk it…???
Loveleen it’s a good idea. If there would be a b*t*h (female dog) in the story then kunj would be to romance his twinkle without any disturbance by Pluto. I m also so sorry ritzi for interfering in ur story line.
Hey Ritz never say that again coz for me it was a mind blowing episode keep it up
As always ur ff ws jus amazing dear loved it so much do cont soon plzzzzz btw it ws funny tooo…..????
Woww!!!….nyc epi ….n its was nt a boring one yrr..srry 4 nt commemting evrytym…bt i read it daily yrr..r u on fb??..
Wooooow Ritzi……Awesome episode…..Love it to the moon and back…..u r really a great writer Ritzi……but plz give us twinj romance
amazing ritzi u r amazing beautiful rtr bt yah we need twinj bechara kunj in 2days episode bt u r amazing u rite very beautifully i luv ur ff
I’m commenting for the first time but I always enjoyed your ff it is funny as well as heartwarming. KABIR IS THE VILLIAN RIGHT.ββββββββ‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β‘β₯β₯β₯β₯β₯β₯β₯βββ????????????????β€?????
D epi was awsum….luved it……..plzz post d nxt part soonβ€
Ritzi who said ur ff is boring it’s awesome yaar and it’s too good and entertaining keep it up π