Hey guys m sooooooo sorry na but like someother ff writers like aakansha, tara, sanam, pali i too am not able to write daily due to studies nd all but i really wanna thanks roshni, kruti, krystal, mitali, cutie, twinky, sadaf khan, sasmerra, zikra, loveleen, lama, jaya, sam, anushka, ria, riya, sanam, panchi, rupam, baby, fiona, cutie pie, romaisah…. thnks for supporting guys!
Recap: revelation of kabir’s evil intentions to u guys…
the episode starts…..
Mehandi day…
Taneja mansion…
The preparations r going on for the mehandi functions leela is guiding the workers…. mahi nd twinkle r getting ready in their respective rooms
Just then sarnas arrive…
L: arre aiye aiya usha ji, bebe, kunj, manohar ji… pls aiye
U: namaste leela ji
L: namste ji (in the hall)arre baithiye na…
just then luthras arrive… leela greets them too
kunj’s eyes were searching for someone…. arre why a m making puzzles i know tht u all know kunj’s eyes r searching for his twinkle
leela notices this
L:(teasing way)ahem! ahem! kunj twinkle bas aati hi hogi
K: (not in senses)kab ayegi ye beauty queen
uv shakes kunj with his shoulders… kunj cms in his senses
All laugh nd kunj shyes
L: lo aa gayi
K: kaha hai kahi hai!
Uv: mahi aa gayi… nt twinkle
all laughs again
mahi is climbing down… uv goes and offers his hand… mahi holds his hand happily
K: ve siyappa quuen aayi kyu nhi abhi tak… isski behen aa gayi lekin issko toh miss india ka award jeetna hai na! nahi nahi… miss india bhi taiyar hone mei itna tym nhi leti hogi
just then kabir arrives in the hall… he looks at kunj with evil sigh
ka thinks: tu karega meri twinkle se shaado uh! bhul ja tu ussko… twinkle is only mine
when kunj looks at kabir…. kabir changes his evil sigh into a fake smile.. kunj also smiles at him
L: lo ji aa gayi!
K: arre maa kitni baar bologe… pata hai mahi aa gayi… twinkle kab ayegi ye batao na
Uv: iss baar leela maa twinkle ki hi baat kar rahe hai…
Uv rocked again… kunj shocked again… hehe
kunj looks at the stairs…. nd was numb for a while… seeing twinkle… she was wearing a parrot green lehenga nd skin coliur bliyse with oarrit green border in it along with a pink dupatta… her hairs rolled down nd were open along with a medium puff….
K thinks: be! yeh to sach mei miss india nikli yaar…. kya lag rahi hai
uv: tu usse aise hi ghurega ya usse lene bhi jayega… ya kabir ko bolu usse leke aye
K: nhi nhi m.. mei jaa rha hu na
kunj quickly runs towrds twinkle it seemed like he was in a race nd twinkle was his trophy hehe!
ka thinks: twinkle teri adao ne mujhe deewana bana diya yaar(typical villian wali line)…. kash aaj iss kunj ki jagah mei jota waha… lekin tension mat le tu… i will b there soon.. very soon
kunj goes towards twinkle nd bends on his knees(he too was wearing green sherwani)
K:(forwarding his hand) may i!
twinkle blushes nd gives her hand to him
T: u may!
kunj holds her hand nd smilingly gets up
they both also walk towards everyone
L: toh ab function shuru kare!
all nodes in yes
Twinkle nd mahi were made to sit on a sofa where other girls were applying mehandi on thier hands
just then uv nd kunj dances on sajan ji ghar aaye along with few girls nd bebe, leela, usha and anita
mahi nd twinkle were enjoying the dance
just then kabir goes towards twinkle nd hugs her by her shoulder twinkle couldnt hug him back as mehendi was getting applied on her hand
kunj notices this while dancing
k thinks: no.. no.. no kunj u r again douting kabir… he is just frnd yaar…. par ye usse itna chipakta kyu hai?
the song gets over nd kunj finally got the chance to hear their coversations… he to went near kabir nd twinkle… kabir broke the hug seeing kunj
just then a lady asks
Lady: arrey twinkle tumhare haath pe konsa letter likhna hai..
before twinkle could speak anything
kunj nd kabir: K
kunj nd twinkle keeps staring kabir..
ka: haha what a coincidence na twinkle k for kabir nd k for kunj haha… ab kisiko pata kaise chalega ki tumhare naam pe kiski mehandi lagegi hahaa
kunj got a bit angry while twinkle was confused with his talks these days
k: (to the mehandi girl) aap aisa karo sirf K mat likhna… Kunj likhna… taki koi confusion na ho… ab thik hai na kabir
ka: arre name likhne ki kya zarurat hai… sirf K likho na!
Twinkle got more shocked
T: kyu…. ham naam kyu nhi likh sakte haan!
ka: a.. aam… ummm… v.. vo… hum g.. generally… sirf letter… h.. hi likhte h.. hai.. na!
T: aisa zaruri thodi hai… (to the mehandi girl) aap mere hath pe kunj likhna
the girl nodes
kunj was getting hell happy… seeing tht twinkle was taking his side nd nt kabir’s
T: kabir tumhe ho kya gaya hai? y r u behaving so weired these days? r u hiding smthng frm me?
kabir was shocked with twinkle’s sudden doubt on him
ka thinks: arre kabir thoda soch samj kar kadam uthaya kar…u knw na how sharp nd intelligent is ur twinkle!
ka: arre arre baby doll its nthing like tht ok… how cm i cn hide anything frm u……. accha i will go bd hv sm drink ok… u guys carry on.
kabir goes frm there nd kunj nd twinkle eyes eo in confusion… but thier eyelock breaks when a lady sitting there says
lady: arrey twinkle nd mahi… tumhe pata hai iss mehendi se tum log pata laga sakte ho tht how much yr fiances love u
T nd M: how aunty?
Lady: arrey dekho…. tumhare hatho pe jitna gehra rang chadega utna hi gehra tumhare hone wale patio ka pyaar hoga!
all laighs nd twinkle shyingly looks at kunj
k: vaise toh i dont belive all this bcus ny love for twinkle is eternal nd it cannot be measured by just the mehandi’s colour… bcus it is very small unit of measurment for my love towards twinkle but still twinkle kalse tere haath dikhenge hi nahi kyuki tere hatho pe mehandi ka rabg his itna gehra chadega
all present there: ohooo
But twinkle was just lost in kunj’s words nd had tears of happiness in her eyes…. kunj notices this
all others go frm there as the mehendi was fully applied on twinkle’s hand nd mahi went to uv
kunj wipes her tears
K: roya mat kar na yaar!
T: kunj u love me so much!
K: more than my life twinkle
twinkle hugs kunj tightly but preventing her hands nt to touch kunj due to mehandi
kunj too hugs her back tightly
just then leela cms there along with anita nd usha
L: arre arre dekhi to inhe!
twinj break the hug in awkwardness
K: a.. aap log kab aye?
A: jab tune dono ishq ke pech lada rahe the
both shys
L: accha accha kunj abhi twinkle go hug kar liye lekin ab tum isse hug nhi kar sakte
K:(worriedly)kyu????
A: arre hug karna toh dur tum usse chu bhi nhi skte
K: kyu? kyu?
U: arre touch karna toh dur tum usse mil bhi nhi sakte
K: kyu? kyu? kyu?
L: arre milna toh dhr tum usse dekh bhi nhi sakte
K:(almost crying):kyu? kyu? kyu? kyu?
L: are riwaz(ritual)hai issiliye
leela goes nd puts veil on twinkle’s face
K: arre maa twinkle ka chehra kyu dhaka… muje usse dekhna hai
twinkle too was nt understanding wht was happening so she decided to just go wid the flow
U:chup kar besharm! abhi shadi tak tu usse nhi dekh sakta… aur shadi mei der hi kitni hai sirf 1 hafta(week)
Kunj worriedly stands up
K: maa…. sirf ek hafta nhi pura ek hafta…. u mean to say i will nt be able to touch, hug, see, meet twinkle till…. he quickly opens calculator in his mobile….. oh my god…. i will nt be able to do all this for 168 hours… mummmy!
all laugh! nd twinkle was srsly blushing inside the viel bit was a little worried
just then anita cms with mahi who also had veil on her face nd uv pleading her
Uv: maa ye kaise riwaz hai yaar?
K: vhi toh…. iss riwaz ki toh mai!
supermoms: aye!
kunj backs off being scared
kunj smirks
K: lekin mai toh twinkle se itne tym tak dur nhi rahunga… mai toh usse nilke hi rahunga
uv: haan.. haan mai bhi mahi se milke hi rahunga
supermoms(sm): kaise miloge?
uv nd kunj smirks
K: arre teeno hamesha tog hamara peecha nhi karpaoge na! kisse pata mai raat ko twinkle se milu… tab toh leela ma nd maa toh soo rahe honge
Uv: haan haan same goes to u mom!
all there moms get worried for a while…. but laughs after smtym
L: haha…. but we hv a bodyguard for my daughters…. haahahaa
k & uv (angrily): who?
just then…. bow vow… bow vow
kunj nd uv widout looking back… where pluto was stading
K nd uv:(putting thier hands on thier head): arre yaar! pluto!!! argh!
all the three moms were laughing endlessly while twinkle nd mahi were blushing nd laughing too in thier velis itself
T thinks: ab dekti hu kunj bacchu tu kaise mujhse milega… pluto ke changul se bachna… impossible! hehe… its gonna be fun baby!
36 Comments
It ws really gud ☺but I have a doubt that aftr mehendi how can marriage be aftr 1 week it’s usually aftr 2 day ? If I not wrong n y did u stop giving the precap?
Hahaha….loved it sooo much…was w8ing 4 this update….
hi dear plz update luv in heaven ..i know tumhe apne hi ghar m phone ki choori karni pad rhi h phir v ek try karna
OMG RITZIIII…. U ROCK SWEETHEART… i was laughing soo hard awesome episode… one of the best episode love u nd ur ff ????
Today’s episode was so funny! I really enjoyed it! Keep writing 🙂
Commenting fr d first time but ur ff is awesome ; super; duper; jhakasss; fabulous…. no more wrds coz if I started writing d wrds then my comment would get d award for d biggest comment on TU page…
I just love it and plzzz post next as early as possible.
OMG…….last part was damn funny……..laughaed my heart out??? ……..& the epi was amazing ……..post d next one soon
you rocked ….wonderfull episode it sure was a treat too read your ep. i likee the way twinklle supported kunj and not kabir
I was eagerly waiting for your update. The episode was amazing. And, I love Pluto. He’s making the episodes funnier. Please post the next one soon.
I loved ur ff specially the last line yaar
Its so funny & amazing dear
Amazing…. loved it…. eagerly waiting for the next episode……
Superb episode.. I jusss luv it yrrrr..pls upload next as soon as possible pls plssss
Ritzi… it just osm!! U rockd it.. it was a lol episode??.. eagerly waiting for ur nxt epi… r u there in fb?
It ws jus amazing epi dear loved it so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do cont asap plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz…..
epi was awesome fantastic superb amazing mind blowing and full of emotions
and
8 more epi to reach half century
post next one soon
Pluto rocked……..post next one asap and expose kabir soon
Awsome episode plzz next episode upload kar ne me der mat lagana??
Epi s muaaaaaaahhhhh…I ws impatiently waiting for ur ff ritzi…I think nw its crt tym to bring gf fr Pluto so plz brng it…well its jst my suggestion its up to you…cnt wait to read nxt epi…post it soon
Omg u rock dear
awesomee….i was laughing while reading…amazing..fantastic
Awsm Ritzi…. Really Amazing…. 🙂
Love u loved it , really a nice and funny 1
finally u updated dear. it was just fav… after so many days i got such a beautiful piece of writing..i knw ur in standard 10… and ur classes are started and there is a lot of pressure on u…so dear don’t take tension we all can understand..so my cute little sis take ur time and continue to write such funny episode
OMG yaar awesome….fabulous….fantastic episode….loved it to the moon and back….
Awesome epi dear……… loved it…… eagerly wtng fr nxt one ………. bt dnt wry …….post d epi whenever u r free ….. as study comes first ……
yaar ritzi missed ur ff so much I’ll forgive u as I am very happy today nice episode Ritzi luv u n ur ff ….
Omg ritzi u wr amazing as always oh god jst luvd it twinj luv u u wr osm maza aa gya srsly luvd it yr ☺☺?????
Awesome and so funny can u pls give English translation thanx
I apologize for not cmntng yaar…it was too good as always
Nice episode ritzi…….I guess u watch motu patlu(just bcoz of d lst dialogue)…..lolzzzz…….anyways waiting fr d nxt episode