hellooooooo. beautiful girls!! ….. so how r u all…. u knw i tried to watch tei ystrday but srsly found no interest in watching it widout sidhant…… chalo yaar ab jaldi se jdj mei aake apna pyara sa face dikha do na bunny…… kabse marri ja rhi hu tumhe dekhne ke liye…… so so so….. u must be knowing wht nxt…… ri8…. my thanks giving ceremony!!!
chandra, kinjal, naina, riya, romaisah, shatakshi, shreya, sam, keerthana, crazy, ria, rashi, krystal, panchi, aastha, zikra, lama, fiona, sonali, Eli, hima, cutie pie, jaya, sayeeda and pearl
Eli: i m srsly sorry girl! but i deleted tht epi from telly updates only as many people were finding it too vulagar….. so sorry i cannot send u the link if it
Romaisah: its okay naa….. i m sorry….. now i will try to write most part in english only
nd yaa rashi i m not crazy i m ritzi…. hehe!
thanks pearl 4 answering ny que
Sayeeda: thanks yaar for writing such a big nd blushing cmnt
The episode starts………
kunj is still upon twinkle….. lost in her…..
T: kunj!
K:hmm.
T: utho na….. dard ho rha hai
kunj then cms into his senses
K: oh sorry sorry
nd he stands up
both composes themselves….. twinkle is still covering herslf wid tht shirt white blanket nd kunj is too wrapped in towel….. kunj was about to go jst then twinkle holds his wrist…… kunj was on cloud infinte…. his sadness changed into a 1000 watt smile….. he turned around to see twinkle but be4 he coukd even completely see her….. he had to close his eyes…..
no no guys twinkle ka blanket nhi gira hai…. dont think so much…. kunj closed his eyes due to havenly pleasure if twinkle’s soft lips…. which were inserted into his lips but twinkle….. kunj got happy nd he too participated in tht liplock…. both their lips were enjoying eo’s company….. their tounges were enjoying eo’s touch
both had a deeeeep intense liplock….. then twinkle broke it
T:(cupping his face….. nd ofcourse breathing heavily) k… kunj i m really very sorry….. pls forgive me… i over reacted…. i… i… i
kunj noticed thtbshe was very tensed nd puzzled
so he puts finger on her lips
K: shhhh!…….. u need not give any explaination
then they both had a bone crushing hug….. kunj’s hands were tightly wrapped over twinkle’s wet waist which was covered by thin blanket…. twinkle’s 1 hand was carassing kunj’s wet hair nd other hand was around his neck……. they both broke the hug aftr mins
K: so finally u forgave me……. but
T: but?
K: i want a gift frm u
twinkle blushes
T: wht do u want
kunj forwards his cheeks….. our twinkle understood it… she gave him a quick peck nd ran towards the cupboards took her cloths nd again ran for bathroom
everything was sooo sudden tht kunj was numb for a while then he also changed….. aftr smtym both went down in the hall where yuhi., bebe nd usha were already there….. twinkle quickly ran nd sat besides mahi
K thinks: kamaal hai
nd does his killinnnnng 1 eyebrow up wala look….. oh god he is too s*xy
kunj sits beside uv…. who was sitting opp. to twihi
T:(whispering) kya hua…… did u forgave him
M: (whispering) haan….. bechara itni begging kar rha tha…. mere per tak pad raha tha…… wht abt u
T: same as u
nd they both starts giggling
seeing them both giggling…..
K:(doing his breath taking wala 1 eyebrow up look) hamari tang khichi jaa rhi hai (our legs r getting pulled)
Uv: hmm
B: accha twinklebi hv heard u sing very well…..
T: no no bebe… its nothing like th….
K: arre kya no no…. bebe she doesnt even sings well…. but also knows to play guitar….. arre she also dances very well…. she can als….
nd he stops
B: ho gya….. maine toh ye sirf twinkle ko pucha tha (i asked it to twinkle only)
Uv: (giggling…. nd whispering)hehe… kunj tuje apna popat karne ka bahut shauk hai (u really have a habit of making fun of urself)
K:(giving him a killing look…. nd mimics him) haahaaahaa….. ho gya tera
uv stops laughing
M: vaise kunj….. twinkle ka ek talent hai… tht no one knows
All including twinkle: which???
M: twinkle also writes songs
Everyone was surprised by it
T: h.. ho.. how do.. u kn… ow…. ma.. mahi
K: twinkle….. u hided it frm mee!
M: arre kya kunj…. she didnt even told me…. voh toh by chance i read her song diary when i went in her room(in tanejas)
T: (a bit angry) mahi! why did u read tht???
M: calm down sista…… ur all songs r mindblowing yaar
T: bas bas no faking tareef uh
M: arre i m not at all kiddig na….. okay jst sing one song then all will tell me if i m wrongs
all: ya ya sing
T: no ways…… tht all r tym pass yaar
K: (buttering) twinkle…… plsss…. for me
M:(suddenly) for me!….. oh haan…. twinkle u sing tht song which u wrote for kunj…. the last song be4 yr marriage (guys she knows all this bcus twinkle also writes dates in her diary)
T: how do u know i wrote tht for kunj
bas fir kya tha….. twinkle realised tht she confessed she wrote it for kunj…. she took her tounge out a bit….. she was not at all in condition of looking at kunj….. she was really very shy
Kunj ka toh koi thikana hi nahi tha
K thinks: wow wow wow wow wow wowwwww……. she write songs…. nd tht too for meeee…. u wont believe twinkle…. but i alwyas wnated tht som1 writes songs for me…. oh god…. thanks twinkle
K: twinkle plssss sing na
T: but…..
be4 she could even complete…. mahi was there with twinkle’s royal blue guitar
M: no buts…. sista…. sing…. nd voh kunj vala hi okay..
twinkle unwillingly got up…. feeling hell shy….. she could hear her heart beats till her ears….. flying butterflies in her stomach
T: r u all sure!
All: damn sure
T: okay then…. bear wid my song
(hey guys…. abhi mai itni bhi intelligent nhi hu… tht i will make twinkle write her own songs…. so whichever songs she sings… jst read it whole nd imagine tht she has written every single line of it for kunj)
twinkle takes a longs breath….. nd… nd… nd
T: bas itni si tamnna hai… tere rang mej hi rang jau
rahu na mai zara mujhme…. teri hoke hi reh jau
kunj was srsly blushing…… bcus of her pretty voice….. nd the lines were dedcated to him…. oh god guys…. jst imagine it
T: kisise na kaha hai jo…. tumhi se baat voh kehdu
sabhi dete hai dil aksar mai tujho jaan bhi de doon
this line made kunjvs heart beat at 50 km/hr speed
T: ye hai sukoon….. ye junoon
ye tashan e ishq hai
kunj was by now cluthing his jeans with excitement
T: mujse na dur ja…. intajahan meri
mujhe pe haq hai tera… ye ejahein teri (twinkle was blushing by now)
listnenig this….. kunj was almost teary eyed
T: ab mera…. sab tera
khwaishein…… bas teri
kisise na kaha hai jo… tumhi se baat voh keh du
sabhi dete hai dil aksar…. mai tujhko jaan bhi de doon….. mai hoon teri…. tu hai mera…. yeh.. tashan e ishq hai
a tear drpped frm kunj’s eyes….. but he wipped it be4 anybody could notice it
T: bas itni si tamnna hai tere rang mei hi rang jaun
raston pe tere….. nigahein meri
bas tere vaastein….. duaein meri
be vajah….. har jagah…. har ghadi kehne lagi
all were pleased listening her voice….. kunj was all numb by now
T: kisise na kaha hai jo… tumhi se baat voh keh du
sabhi dete hai dil aksar….. mai tujko jaan bhi de doon
hai arzoon….. bas tu hi tu….. ye tashn e ishq hai
(guys i reqst u to listen a whole song while reading it…. srsly it will make u feel gopsebumps… which i m suffering frm ri8 now… nd if u will imagine tht this was srsly made by twinkle…. nd each nd every word was dedicated to kunj…. then srsly u will blush! )
Twinkle stops singing….. nd opens her big brown eyes…. her hairs were flying…. no one uttered a single word…. all were shocked
Twinkle took off her guitar……. she was hell tensed
T: bola tha…. u guys will not lyk it…. i m srsly very… sorr….
but be4 she could even say anything further….. she got a bone crushing hug frm kunj…… he was srsly not able to control himself…. he jst didnt wanted to leave twinkle…. twinkle was all shocked…. but she hugged him too
K: (wid a sobbing voice) thank u so much twinkle….. thank u so much for entering in my lyf…. thank u so much for making me undsrstand the true feelings of love…. thank u soo much for this song….. this is not only a song…. but more than it for me….. I love u yaar
jst then they heard claps….. nd they came back to senses….. poor they…… they almost forgot tht they were in hall
Twinj: shit!
nd they broke their hug
B: jindi re puttar…… kya gana likha hai… kya gana gaya hai… vah… dil khush kar ditta (live long daughter…… wht a song…… wht a voice… u made my heart happy! )
T: bebe! kya aap bhi
Usha: arre….. she is true…. wow yaar i m proud to have a dil like u
kunj pushes her shoulder wid his…. nd twinkle blushed
Uv: vaah yaar….. tujhe singer hona chahiye tha!
listening this mahi jst signed hin not to speak…. twinkle got teary eyed
(guys this will be revealed later tht why mahi stopped him…. bd y twinkle got teary eyed)
kunj noticed all this…
K thinks: isse kya ho gya….. singer banne ki baat sunke…. y so upset?….. accha i will ask her later
T:(wiping her tears) accha ma…wht do we hv to cook… for first rasoi
B: arre haan…. usha we totally forgot its their first rasoi….
Usha: yes bebe all bcus of twinkle
K: maa?
U: aur nhi toh kya… na ye itna accha gana gati…. aur nahi hum rasoi ke bare mei bhulte (if she wouldnt hv sung this much good… then we would hv not firgot abt her first rasoi)
T:(blushing) no worries maa….. i will cook gajar ka halwa
kunj widens his eyes…. nd gulps…. as it was his most fav. sweet
B: ohoo…. kunj ki fav. dish banai ja rhi hai… vah vah
T: bebe! (shyly)
Us: nd mahi wht abt u beta
M: aunty
Us: (faking anger) maa
M: okay sorry…. maa…. i will cook… umm…. basundi
now uv’s turn to gulp
Us: i think…. uv’s fav…. sweet…. gud…. both of u…. go.. to the kitchen i will show u were all the materials r….
twihi were about to say yes
Yunj: ok maa…. we will help them
nd they started to go towards the kitchen but…..
Yunj: aaaaaaaah!
Twihi: heheeehe
Nope guys…. they didnt felt down…. actually bebe was holding yunj’s ears…. kunj on ri8 nd uv on left
K: aah… bebe… chodo.. aah… dard… ho rha hai
Uv: bebe… ouch… chodo
B: twinkle….. mahi…. bhago tum dono…. i will also see how they will cm to kitchen
Twihi: hehe
nd they ran
Precap: a new twist
sorry guys i think i will not be able to post for 2-3 days…. so i will try to post 1 more epi today itself
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Awesome heart touching song
Such a super story
I loved it
Really it’s supervyaar
wow …fab..
waiting for the twist!!
nd yes i have that song..it was rakshita who sent it to mein…its my ring tone u knw
Super story. fab
Ritzy today only i have downloaded dat song n today only u wrote it
Really it’s amazing na n todays episode is simply superb
I think I downloaded dis song to read this episode only
Ssuch a great coincidence
it was really awesomeeeeeeeeee yar
post next soon
Ritzi yaar really amazing epi loved it n d song it osmmmmmmmm I too have itit….
Awww!! This was so cute?i was waiting for ur episode for every mins ❤i just came to check n u have posted love ur episodeepisode it was just mind blowing! Waiting for next one asap?
Ritzi di seriously sorry….I hadn’t read this one….osum…l luved it…ctd soon
Wow yrr so much love in one episode….. Dil khoosh Kar ditta…….. Love twins….. N Yeah love u too…….
I mean twinj srry……
Woooow Ritzi…..Awesomeness ki height
Ritzi yaar I was having goosebumps throughout…I really wish that kash tei me aasa koi scene hota…
Really Ritzi…u nailed it
I loved today’s episode till infinity…????
It was awmse yaar sooo cute u said ryt i was bkushing n remebring twinj scenes evn i was singing cool yaar loved it lov u ritzi
nice epi… eagerly waiting for the twist yaar… to be frank i was not able to understand the song… where can i find its translation???
Woooowwwww……sooo romantic…. too good yrrr; right now the feelings I have reading ur ff I can’t even express it…ur ff is out of world ….no no universe..
U said 1000000% right while reading nd simultaneously listening the song I was blushing very badly… yrr I got goosebumps reading it ……thank u for entertaining us …love u
Awsum Ritzi…
hey i loved dis episd so much…
n even i love tht title track of tei so much tht i hav it as my ringtone of my mobile….
Nice episode ritzi just loved it eagerly waiting for the nxt twist….
Awesome yaar ……. loved it…..
Loved it ritzi !!! Fab as always
Ritzi….yaar sorry I wrote crazy instead of ur name….mindblowing episode… Loved the song part….ab yeh singing wala kya twist hai….??? Pls jaldi bata do….an wait nahi hota….
Superrr se upppeerrr…..
I have that song….u reminded me of sid…..
Keep it up….?????????
Jaldi se suspense thodo!!!
This episode was amazing.. hope to see another one.
ritzi tune toh dil khush kar ditta kinna pyaara episode hai aur woh ganna menu bohot pasand hai par menu is gal da wadda bura lag raha hai ki 2-3 din tak tera ff padne waste nahi milega par koi gal nahi intezar kar lungi tere ff ka khush reh aur aise acche aur pyare episode hume deti reh . I also found yesterday’s episode boring without sid n dat Anita I feel like killing her I’m also eagerly waiting for jdj .
Ritzi yaar loved it …… u r one of d best ff writers ???
Excited to know wat is d new twist about
yaar u r d great. u always entertain us with such a mind blowing epi . I really
loved ur each & every epi……..I love ur ff specially for comedy .
Yaar Ritzi plzz don’t be mad at me plzz
Im sry i didn’t comment until now i read it earlier wen there wasn’t even any comments but now im getting a chance to comment since i hadn’t WiFi 🙁
But yaar u rele made me smile i was literally waitin to reach home so i cud praise ur amazing n epic writing skills!!!!!! Too emotional n happy at the same time ahh ???????????????
I love u n this ff way too much dammit!!!! ?????????
Hope u get timento post ur other episode ASAP!!!!!!!
Its a awesome episode
Can anybody give the link of full title song plsss.
I don’t get it