hiiiii guys i knw wht u all r thinking…… wht? when? how cm? why?… this r ur thoughts na….. srsly sorry guts but i dont hv any other option… my dad told me tht he is going to take away my tab in two days so tht i fully concentrate on my studies…. i dont hv any other option guys…. plssss dont discourage me nd support me na…. i knw i m too bad…. u wont believe i hv been writing this ff fr the 3rd tym each tym it got deleted as i forgot to save it….. but still i m nt loosing patience to entertain u all… for the last tyn perhaps
nd ya shatakshi yaar…. congrats…. 92. 5%…. cool… but may i knw in whch std u scored so….. if in 10th… wad it difficult u to score tht much…. m really sacred abt 10th thts y m asking… pls do answer na
hry guys dont get tooo much senti yaar… theres a surprise waiting for u at the end
so lets begin my last epiiiii!…..
Recap: family decides to go out 4 dinner… twinj romance in room…. kabir putting glyserine on stairs….. twinkle heard a sound
now lets strt….
twinkle ws numb for a while….. her heart beat increased…. her body shkaing….. but she was disturbed by mahi’s voice
M: twinkle…. cm down fast!
the only word which came out frm twinkle’s mouth was….
T:kunj!
saying dis she went out of the room nd at the top of the stairs she was shocked to see kunj….. his head was bleeding badly…. she quickly ran down… she ws about to slip on the glyserine containig stair but she managed not to do so
T thinks: y is the stair so slippy
but her thoughts were disturbed by usha
Us: kunj… kunj… utho na
twinkle quickly sat beside kunj…. took his head on her lap… nd stsrted rubbing his cheek inorder to make him conscious
T: kunj… wake kunj…… uv we need to take him to the hospital…. FAST!
uv nodded in tes
@hospital
kunj ws on stretcher…. twinkle nd yuhi were running along the stretcher
K: (almost unconsious) twi… twi… n.. kle
Twinkle quickly hold his hand
T: shhh….. donn worry kunj… m wid u
nd the stretcher disappeared into a room (its not OT guys… but a treatment room… cm on yaar ab mai apne kunj ko itna harm kaise kar sakti hu ?)
# aftr abt half n hour
yuhi were consoling bebe whereas leela nd twinkle were consoling usha… jst then doctor came out of the room
every1 rushed to him
T: hows kunj…. doctor
Dr: dont worry mrs. sarna he is completely fine… jst a little injury on his head… but he is good.
all gets relived
T: can we meet him
Dr: ya but only 1 person at a tym as he is likely to get infected… we hv shifted him to room
jst then nurse cms oit running frm kunj’s room
N: doc…. vo patient
T: wjt happened to him…. KUNJ!
saying dis she ran inside….. doc. stopped any1 else to enter
wen twinkle entered the room she was shocked…. no guys not the see kunj….. arre bcos kunj ws not seen only…. hey m confusing u ri8… the thing is kunjnws not on his bed… nd sm nurses nd wardboys (wb) were bent down nd were looking snthng inside the bed
T: wat is going on here!
a nurse stood up
N: ru patient’s wife
T: ya
N: pls tell him to cm out na!
T: wat!
saying dis she to went near bed and bent down…. she saw kunj hiding under bed
T: wht the hell in d world is wrong wid u kunj
K: twinkle!…. thank god u came…. now pls tell them not to give me… in.. jection
T: wat! (hayye…. twinkle bichari wat ke bahar hi nhi aa rhi… hehe)
Wb: mam… pls tell him to take injection…. its imp. 4 him
T: ya ofcourse it imp. kunj….. why the hell r u behing like a 4 yr kid
K: twinkle u too…. no plss no…. kehne ko toh mai sher se bhi nhi darta…. lekin injection se darta hu
T: oh stop ur dialogue baazi now…. cockroach se kon darta hai fir…. cocroach se bhi darte ho…. injection se bhi darte ho…. darpok kahike
K: who is scred of co.. ckroach…. i… m.. nnn.. not scred
T: oh is it.
K: yes it is
T: (scaringly) kkk… kunj!
K: w.. what!
T: cc… c.. COCOKRACH…. AAAAAH!
K: where!
T: jst… behind… u…. aaaaaaaaaaaah
K: aaaaaah
saying dis he quickly came out of the bed…. in no tym he realised how much good actress his wife was
K: t… twinkle… this is…. cheating
jst then he saw injection in 1 of the nurses hand
K:hehhey….. keep tht away frm me
saying this he started running all over room wid nurses nd wbs behind him
T: arre kunj!
nd she let out a faint laugh….. kunj strted moving towards the door in ordr to escape… but his lovely wofe came in betwn him nd his destinstion
kunj had no other option but to stop nd as soon as he stopped…. wbs hold him
kunj made a bechara wala puppy face to twinkle…. twinkle couldnt help to control her laugh
kunj ws made forcfully sleep on bed…. wid his back facing up…. but ussne bhi haar nhi maani thi…. he ws still struggling but all in vain as his hand nd lefs were hold by nurses nd wbs
twinkle came nd sat nxt to kunj on a stool
remeber guys his back ws facing up nd his head was towards twinkle’s side
K:(still stulruggling) leave me….. leave me i said… twinkle tu ruk… tujhe mai baad mei dekh lunga
nurse ws going to give him injection but twinkle signed her to wait fr smtym
Twinkle whispered to kunj
T: close ur eyes
kunj nodes in no
T:KUNJ
kunj had no there option but to close his eyes
T: thts like my boy…. accha do u remeber our first meet… hehe… in d mall… nd our official meeting during…..
a small curved apperad on his face
K: our accident
T: ohoo… u remeber…. then toh tumhe ye bhi yaad hoga…. how i banged a watermelon on yr head nd in return gift u throwed tomatoes on me
kunj became more relaxed on remebering tht….. his hands nd legs stopped moving
twinkle signed nurse to continue wod her wrk…. nurse pulled his pant piece a bit down…. this made kunj frown a bit
T:(making sure tht no 1 else listened) do u remeber our first ni8
dis ws jst enough fr kunj… the little frown too disappeared wid a big curve on his lips…. he didnt even got to know wen nurse had given him injection
T: kunj….
K: hmm
T:u can now conpose yrself
kunj came back to senses nd jumped back jst to sit on the bed
k:(side hugging her) i love u yaar
twinkle jst laughed
K: how did u managed to convience them tht nt to give me injection
twinkle broke the hug
T: wht!….. but u had ur injection jst now
K: wht! wen!
N: wen u were engrossed wid ur wife… must say mam…. u managed him soo well…. puri 15 min bigadi ek injection ke liye
twinkle passed a smile to her… kunj looked down in guilt
nurses nd wbs went nd family entered…. aftr sm questions…. nd talks….
Us: doc. has told any 1 can stay here
K: ya ya…. twinkle will stay
there ws an acute silence fr smtym… then all bursted into laughter…. making kunj again shy…. awww
T: ya ya…. i will only stay… bit be4 tht i hv to bring sm cloths for us frm home… sooo
B: arre dont worry twinkle… u go… we r here
twinkle smiled nd went
# in her car
T: kapde lana tph sirf ek bahana hai….. i jst wnt to find out tht wht happend wid kunj ws really any accident or…..
@ sarna mansion
#hall
twinkle went near the stair which was shining…. she touched it nd smelled it
T: it seems like glyserine….. but who will do this…. i m pretty sure it planned….. but who
A voice: ofcourse ur love…. baby
twinkle turned
T: kabir!
Kabir bowed down
K: yes!
T: u did this
K: ya baby…. for u…… but unfortunately kunj bach gaya…. koi baat nhi yaar…. better luck… nxt ty…
CHATAK!
ya guys…. how can u all be wrong…. twinkle slapped him
T:(breathing heavily) how dare u do tht wid my kunj
kabir ws out of patience now
he hold twinkle left side of the neck… nd pressed it… twinkle ws wincing in pain but didnt showed it
Ka: how dare me? how dare kunj…. to marry u…. love… u…. ur only mine twinkle…. cm now… give me a kiss
saying dis he started pulling her closer…. pressing her left neck more…. but twinkle bit his hand… so kabir loosed his grip
T: dont u dare!
saying this she went back to hospital
@ hospital
#kunj’s room
aftr sm talking…. all went leaving twinj alone… twinkle sat nxt to kunj on stool…. trying hard to hide her pain…. kabir had pressed it sooo hard tht his fingerpronts got keft on her neck….. but she was hiding it…. so tht kunj doent takes stress
T:(putting his left hand on his ri8 cheek) kaise ho!
K: ab tu aagyi hai na… . bilkul thik ho jayunga
but as twinkle lifted her left hand…. tht side of hair whch were hiding her wound moved back…. making her marks visible to kunj
kunj got helllll tensed luking it.
K: twinkle! how did this happen
twinkle’s smile fade away
T: did u had ur food kunj!
K: twinkle!
twinkle ws left wid no option… she told hm everything…. hearing how kabir treated her….. made him go crazy…. the fact tht he attepmted to kiss him didnt worried kunj but the thing tht kabir tried to touch her made his anger cross the sky….. his eyes went alll red…. his body shivering wid anger….. the bedsheet of his bed was almost torn becus of cluthing it hell tightly.
The only word came out ws
K: how dare he!
nd the very nxt moment kunj pulled his drip
T: KUNJ!
but kunj’s anger ws not in mood to calm…. he stood up…. wbs came hearing twinkle’s shout nd tried to make him sleep… but all in vain… kunj pushed all of them nd went out of the hospital…. twinkle ran behind him…
T: kunj wai…..
but be4 she could complete kunj left in his car…. all the family memeber had gone… but luckily uv didnt as he was attending an imp. call…. twinkle saw him nd quickly ran towards him…. seeing her… uv quickly cut the call
Uv: twinkle u here…. is everything alright… kunj!
T:sit in the car nd drive…. no more ques pls
boggled uv did so…. twinkle told the whole incident
Uv: oh god…. kunj nd his anger
luckily they caught kunj’s car nd followed him… both the car stopped at a house
T: oh shoot! it kabir’s house
Uv: oh no
kunj stormed in his house
NOTE: kabir lives alone
twiraj also went him… but they missed kunj… sobthey started searching for him everywhere in the house…. jst then twinkle heard a voice…. DHISHOOM DHISOOM frm a room nd so did uv…. they both went in tht room nd were shocked
kunj ws beating kabir like hell.
K:(while beating) how dare…. how dare u harm my twinkle…. how dare u even think to get physical wid her… HOW DARE U TOUH MY WIFE!
uv tried to stop him… but kunj ws like
de danadan de danadan
dil mera bole de danadan
It seemed tht 1 more punch to kabir nd he is all dead…. but luckily for kabir police came nd stopped kunj…. uv had called the police be4 entering the house…. police took kabir away
Ka: i will be back twinkle
police nd kabir left…. kunj came towards twinkle… they both shared an eyelock following a tight wala hug
uv ws left shocked…..
T:(still hugging) y did u do this kunj
K: i cannot afford if any1 touches u!
twinkle smiled nd they broke the hug
Kunj pushed her hair strands on the left neck nd saw the marks
K: is it hurting
twinkle noded in no… but still not statisfied kunj…. started kissing the marks on her neck
Uv thinks: shit! nd he closed his eyes
aftr smtym
Uv thinks: ab tak toh ho gaya hoga
Uv: guys can i open my eyes
twinj came back to senses…. nd quickly composed themselves
T: u.. ca.. n.. ope.. n.. uv
uv does so…. there ws a silence for smtime nd then they bursted into laughter…
……………………………………….. aftr 5years……………………………………………
@ sarna mansion
nothing ws changed….. everthing ws same there….. twinj nd yuhi’s bond….. yunj’s dirty talks… twihi’s gossips….. respect towards elders… but 1 thing ws changed…. their love…. twinj’s love… it had increased a lot……
yuhi nd twinj gathered in a hall
T: (whispering) r they still asleep
M: ya…. as always
K: chlo then…. as per routine we should wake them up
Uv: ya but slowly uh!
all three noded in yes…. nd they walked towards a room tip toed…. the room ws a big one… wid the darkest blue colur…. its ceiling had paintings of all planets nd stars it….. it semmed tht the room had a space theme
all four went near a king sized bed… nd they pulled down the blanket
All 4: good morning kiddos!
three cute cute kids woke up…. 2 girls nd 1 boy
Kids:(sleepily) good morning
T: oooo….. seems lile u alll r sleepy… but wht about the chocolates i brought for ull…. umm.. okay then i will eat all the choclates
Kids: no no… went want to eat
M: okay then… give ur parents a morning hug first
all the kids went to thier respective parents…. 1 boy nd 1 girl hugged yuhi…. yes they had twins…. rihaan… nd riya
nd a cute si…. pyari si… chotu si… girl (u can imagine ruhanika dhawan… pihu of yhm) hugged twinkle
G: momma!
twinkle lifts her… nd kissed her
T: aww my sia!
ya guys her name was sia kunj sarna
S: i love u!
T: i love u too baby
kunj pouts
K: all love to mumma…. wht abt daddy
nd he acts to cry
twinkle puts sia down… she ran nd hugged kunj…. kunj lifts her up
S: i love u too daddy!
then rihaan came running towards twinkle
(i forgot to tell u tht all r 5 yrs old)
R: maasi… maasi…. i want chocolate
Twinkle bends down
T: i’ll give but… but dont call me masi.. .. it doesnt suits me
R: then wat should i call u
be4 twinkle could speak
Uv: daayan
R: ok… daay….
T: no no rihann… dont listen to him… u can call me…. nd she whispered smthing in his ears
R: okay… i will call u tht
T: okay then i will bring chocolstes
twinkle brought chocolates nd gave it to kiddos
S: thank u mumma
R: thank u s*xy
kunj’s nd yuhi’s jaw dropped down
M: twinkle! mere bete ko ye sab mat sikha!
R: oh cm on mumma…. but masi is really very s*xy… hai na mausa
K:(not in senses) voh toh hai
Yuhi: kunj!
kunj came to his senses nd all shared a laughter followed by a family hug
…………………………………. end of 1st season………………………………………
so guys yr surprise is….. . this ff will be having a season 2!
as sm promises r yet to be fulfilled… if u remeber abt twinkle’s dream
but i m not promising u tht i wll be positing it ri8 now…. look let me first cover up my studies… then i will surely ri8 it… ab vaada kiya hai.. nibhana toh padega…. so till then bye bye… nd pls dont forget me uh!
1 reqst as its my last epu of this season i want all the silent readers to cmnt… pls
love u all yaar! wilk miss u all…
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Yaar du i will miss u…
but its important to study too…
n yeah if u can olzz come back with another such stories,….
now coming to the epi…
its just amaxing….
loved it…
eill miss ur ff n uvtoo…
love u loads….
n yeah uf u get time plzz visit tu for sometime….
Awesome as usual. Omg u r an amazing writer ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ I luv ur way of writing. Ill miss u nd ur ff definitely. Everyday I used to wait fr ur ff nd used to read each episode without fail.♥♥♥ Now as ur in 10th stnd studies r way too important so all the best nd my best wishes r with u nd u may achieve ur every goal in ur lyf. Lots of luv♥♥muah!!!!
Awsome as always
Lovedddddd the Epi ?
Gonna miss u Ritzi ???? …… i understand studies come first …… all the best ??☺?
Eagerly waiting for the second season ????❤??
omg ..ritzi it ws lyk i got a big shock b4 going to sleep …..i really liked ur ending bt m sad u ended it…bt no probs u ll bck wid ur secnd seasn…m luking fwd to it …studies cm frst….i wish u sucess in future….
amazayn
ritzi I lv u u r great writer thank u for making us feel so special with ur ff??????????????????????????
good episode i will miss you very much and best of luck for future
Don’t ever say byee Ritzi….we know u will again come up nd this time I won’t be forcing u to continue with ur ff as studies comes first nd without it we can’t achieve a good personality…… but I’m happy to see ur concern towards ur studies… and I know our Ritzi will surely achieve zenith in future as she had achieved in her ff….
But I will be waiting to see u back….. but this time come back when u have time……but I’m gonna miss u very hard …without ur presence tu page will not glow….love u and this episode was really fab ….itna accha episode r uske saath tumhare Jane ka dhamaka ……love u nd all the very best for ur future…. always remember we all love u nd always there to support u..
The season was fantastic and ur funny captions are just like cherry on d cake will b eager to read ur season 2….. And last but not d least. Uh r a mind blowing writer….. Ritzi?
Hey I’m a silent reader n I’m gonna brk my silence today. This is the first tym I’m commenting on TU. Coz the only thing u srsly stole my heart with ur ff. I daily w8 for ur ff. How u can balance everything yaar ? I mean srsly bt so sad plzz don’t leave it . it’s quite tooooo good. Hope u cme back soon .
Hii Ritzi…Awsome episode….u know what it was a great journey with u…i will never ever going to forget u….All the very best for ur studies dear….love u lots ????????❤❤❤❤
amazing episode ritzi will miss u come back soon with season 2 will wait for dat day n thanks for making me yuhis daughter n my sister sia as twinjs daughter good luck for ur future I’m sure u will return so waiting for dat day song for u
main tennu samjavan ki tere ff bina lagda jee
tu ki Jane pyar mera main kara intezar tere ff da . sorry I can’t say anything more I’m feeling bad dat u r ending ur ff . be happy good bless u love u my siyappa queen .
Awsome and i ll pray for your 10th exams and you also pray for my 12 th exam
Ritzi di I luved this ff to the moon, galaxy ….and back.
U r an osum writer di
All the best 4 ur studies
Like in ff , u r gonna surely excell in it too.
I will be waiting for u r next writing
Luv u di.
I will never forget u but plx don’t forget u r this fan ha….lol
Osum 1st season end
Luved it.
yaar ritzi . ur father is also like mine . i m also in 10 . so tv is out of home . yes i m unable to watch tv since 3 weeks . and i read ff by stealing mobiles . bcs by which mbl i used to read , the spebker got broken and my mom suggested my dad to not by that mbl though it is for home not for me . so according to the suggestion , my father transfered the sim to a mbl in which net connection is not possible . and our laptop is in almirah . koi mujhpe taras nehi khate . anyways no more sad story , can u tell me did u send me friend request in fb ? if yes than pls msg me from ur account . if no , then send me request and msg . i would love to get a friend as u . and dont worry u will do well . all the best . my account name is chayonika chakraborty . and nick name chandra . email acc [email protected] . and dont rply here . i wont be able to see it . it is my longest comment till now . will miss u and ur ff . it was outstanding , fav , marvellous , jhakas .
Amazing ???will miss ur ff a lot
Thank for entertaining us always
u r ending it made me sad but Season 2 ….
Made me happy….
Great looking forward…
All the best for ur exam Ritzi……
It’s an awesome. story….’ll miss it….
wow amazing update bt good thing that season 2 is coming till than will miss this ff actually this the tei ff ever i read comment the way u write n add funny thing so it’s really enjoyable to read…
come back soon n tc
Wil miss u ritzi
Love u
wowww it was awesome
aap ka hukam sir aankhon par
u said and we commented
love u dear
waiting for next season
ritzi sapne me bhi mai tumhe nahi bhool paogi
u are great ritzi
u are worthy of uncountable oscars???
tumne ham sabko bahut entertain karvaya tumhare ff se
ritzi please read it i know it doesn’t anything infront of you but i wrote this for you yesterday and i was waiting for your next epi to post this but see god want me to tell you this on your last episode of season 1
so no more bak bak go through it:-
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Ritzi, you are my hero,
infront of you I am zero
“you are the best”
I can say this without taking any test
you are brilliant
you’re smart
like akshay kumar have great skill in martial arts
you are my shakes spere
you are cute like baby bear
and you are also a true friend of me
“will you?”? ? ?
hey! I wrote this by my own
do u like this
if no
then sorry for wasting your time dear
will you read ffs and os of tei after stoping your ff
lots of love from me???
will miss you veryyyyyyyyyyy badly dear? ?? ? ?
please come back soon?? ? ? ❤
study hard and archieve everything in your life and your all dreams came true
one little request if your dad allow you to give tab
please write some os pleaseeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!
and congratulations for completing season 1? ? ? ? ? ? ?? ? ? ?
? ? jate jate sweets to bante hai? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
one coffee also at least in comments ? ?
bye!? ✋
not last bye dear
we will meet soon
and eagerly waiting for your reply
see your reply tommorow
Awesm epi…waitting 4 ur next season….
Awesome episode as usual!?i m really dishearten?will miss u n ur ff badly?eagerly!waiting for season 2
As u said us tht all silent reader should also comment so I m I use to read ur ff but was soo lazy to post a comment
Will miss ur ff ritzi..btw iam iam a silent reader of ur ff who is too lazy to comment..sorry for that…will wait for season 2..
Ritzi
Tujhe pata h…I was angry earlier… But I can understand ur situation… As studies are also very important…. But I m happy that u will b coming up with season 2…
N yeah thanks for ur wishes…n I’m in Maharashtra SSC board…so if u r in CBSE then u can easily score good grades becoz CBSE board have 70% internals mark n 30% written paper mark…unlike my board as it has 80% written paper mark n 20% internal…so u can chillax
N ya Maine pure life me sabse zyada maza 10th me kiya h…so tu bhi kar
N yeah hope that u will come up with season. 2 with in this month end…
N remembered I m there to supporting u in ur decision…
Stay Happy…Stay Blesses…
Achieve ur Dreams????????
Hey no senty wale comments today I know that it was last episode but I know you will again come back with a bang with season second today’s episode was like a very big shock and surprise but episode was awesome as always gonna miss you but studies are also imp I am in 10 std. I know the hectic schedule of this class but still I open tu and read your and other writers ffs I also want to write a ff but don’t know how to upload as it needs laptop or tab my dad has taken it due to some work so I only have my phone don’t know wt to do can somebody help me plzz thuosands of stories are running in my mind so enough of my bakabak do well in studies and stay blessed
awesome… will miss u yaar ritzi….n plz come asap with season 2….ur a great writer. .
It was amazing.. I loved it.. will be looking forward for your 2ns season.
And, yes one more thing which you asked is whether 10th is hard or not! Frankly speaking it’s quite easy. I was in 10th last year. And, if you’re in CBSE then don’t worry so much