Hi guys..This is Saanvi and my episode 12..
I am giving really very big episode update compared to other writers but response is less..
Please comment and encourage me
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Episode 10
Recap: Swalak romance and Ragsan fun moments
Scene 1
The party starts..Host says these chits have numbers and whoever gets these numbers same should dance together…
Swara doesn’t pick a chit saying she doesn’t know to dance but host forces her and she reluctantly agrees..
She gets number 8 and Laksh gets number 10…
Naren(one of the employee) walks up to Laksh and says can we please exchange our chits..
Laksh: Why?
Naren: My girlfriend got number 10..I want to dance with her but you got the same number..So if you can please help me..
Laksh gives a suspicious look..
While Swara unknown of what number is in Naren’s chit says
Swara: Laksh..He is saying truth…He and Arpitha are in love since 2years..Please help them..
Listening to Swara, Laksh exchanges the chit with Naren..
He opens the chit which Naren gave him and both SwaLak are shocked to see what is in it..
It was written number 8..
Swara also got that number..which means now Swalak are dance partners..
Swara’s POV:
I thought nothing should happen like this…My mind was like Thank god! Laksh didn’t get same number as me but somewhere my heart was feeling sad..Now that Laksh became my dance partner I’m afraid to dance with him.. I don’t know why my emotions are having a roller-coaster ride today..Hope nothing bad happens..
Laksh: Shall we?(by forwarding his hand)
They come to the dance floor..
It is actually paper dance..Laksh puts one hand on Swara’s waist and one in her right hand..While swara puts her left hand on Laksh’s shoulder..
She is looking down while Laksh is lovingly looking at Swara..
Music starts..
Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun
Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Laksh’s POV:
This song is exactly describing my feelings..I am going with the flow..Don’t know what will happen next..
While thinking like this he tightens his grip over Swara’s waist..
Swara immediately looks into his eyes..
Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
O ho…
Baadalon ki tarah hi toh
Tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
Baarishon ki tarah hi toh
Tune khushiyon se bhigaya hai
Aandhiyon ki tarah hi toh
Tune hosh ko udaaya hai
Mera muqaddar sanwara hai yoon
Naya savera jo laaya hai tu
Tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
Mere saare janam re
Sanam re, sanam re sanam re..
Tu mera sanam hua re
Swara too now starts feeling the lyrics in reality..They are sharing cute eyelock through out..
With every fold of the paper Swalak are coming closer..Swara‘s heart is beating so fast..
With the last fold of the paper..Laksh feels swara’s breath on his face..He feels like a current running down his spine..
Just then Swara moves back unable to bear the proximity..Laksh senses her feeling and doesn’t say anything..
Host says good job Swara and Laksh but winner is only one..They are Naren and Arpitha..
{Guys there is no rule that always protagonists should win in competitions 😛 }
Swara is still shivering..She quickly runs outside..
Laksh too follows her..
Laksh: Are you ok?
Swara: I’m fine..
I should leave now..
Laksh holds her hand and says I feel nothing is ok..shall I drop you home..
Swara strictly says No..
But Laksh was in no mood to listen to her..He says loudly you are coming and that’s final!!
Swara hesitates but gets into his car..
To divert her mood he says I’m hungry..
Swara: I’m sorry because of me you couldn’t eat anything at the party..
Laksh: Even you didn’t eat!!
Shall we have dinner at restaurant..
We didn’t eat anything at the party which may look suspicious to your parents..
Swara: Your are right..
Scene 2:
RagSan have laughed whole heartedly..
Sanskar: I wish this happiness stays forever..
Ragini: Obviously it will be..because we will stay together..
Sanskar (smiles): Ragini please promise me that you won’t leave me in any situation..It will become difficult for me to lead a life without you..
Ragini’s eyes are welled up but she soon composes herself and says..
Ragini: Promise..
Sanskar: Once bhai gets married then I will ask your parents for your hand..
Ragini: Really!! What will you say them(giving a curious look)
Sanskar: I will say them that Ragini is my life and will keep her happy throughout my life..
Ragini: If they ask how? If they ask what you earn..then?
Sanskar stays silent..
Ragini(comes closer to him) : I will convince my parents for our marriage even if you won’t work..
Sanskar gets happy..
Ragini: Acha..tell me what your dad does?
Sanskar: He used to do business but after bhai has taken over the business he is taking rest..
Ragini: You must be proud of your dad na..
Sanskar: (his eyes twinkle and proudly says) Yes!!
Ragini: Then what will our children say about you?
Sanskar is shell shocked and disappointed with her statement..
Ragini: I know Sanky..This will hurt you..But I want you to be a hero for our kids, a responsible son for your parents and a helping hand to your brother..
Sanskar still stays silent..
Ragini: I won’t force you to change yourself because I love you for the way you are..but this change would be good for our future..Once think about it..Anyways final decision would be yours..
Sanskar nods his head..
Ragini: Okay I’ll leave now..
Sanskar: I’ll drop you..
Ragini: It’s ok..My home is nearby..I can go by walk..
Sanskar: Call me after reaching..
Ragini: Sure..
Scene 3:
Swalak go to a restaurant..
Laksh looks at the menu card and says: What should I order?
Swara stays silent..
Laksh orders few dishes and then talks to Swara..
Laksh: I know it was little weird..and that type of feeling was even first time to me..But will you keep thinking about it only?(he means about the dance)
Swara: Even you felt like that..
Now Laksh stays silent..
Swara: Obviously you will also feel the same..It was my first party and you are also a fresher so it must be new to you too..
Swara’s POV:
I know this feeling is something nice and feels good to have it..but I don’t want to convey you wrong message Laksh..I can try controlling my emotions but even if you reciprocate the same..I can’t stop myself and later I can’t face mom and dad..
Laksh: Ya..You are right.. (makes a sad face)
While moving a dish towards Swara absent mindedly touches it whole..
Laksh says ahhh..
Swara: Laksh are you okay..she blows over his hand while Laksh is looking at her care..
Swara then composes herself and completes her meal..
They finish the dinner..
Laksh drops Swara home and reaches guesthouse..He sees Sanskar has already slept..So he also heads to bed..
While on bed Laksh remembers the his sensual moments of the day with Swara and smiles to himself..
Laksh POV:
I know Swara that you are also having the same feeling as me..but you don’t want to tell me fearing that our friendship bond may break..But trust me this feeling will be forever..Your childhood friend will be your husband soon..I will tell mom to forward this relation..
He then goes to sleep..
Precap: Swasan meet and Sanskar’s new side..
Credits : To all those reading and commenting on this ff
28 Comments
Nice
Thanks Sindhura 🙂
Amaznggg episodeee…??…bt plz gve lill more rasan part plzzz…?..n ragsan convo. Is awesome…ragini u rockss??
Thank you so much 🙂
nice
Thanks Pooja 🙂
superb
Thank you 🙂
awesome update, loved ragini todays update. the way she explained sansak about his responsibilities is really nice. i liked this side of ragini quite matured. but i want more ragsan part.
Thank you Akshata 🙂 Sure next episode more Ragsan part 😀
Hmmm u r giving more imp to swara lak plzz show some more ragsan scenes
Previous episode more Ragsan so this episode more Swalak..
From next epi onwards I assure equal scenes of both pairs 😀
Tnk u sissy plzz don’t feel I just told my point
It’s ok akka..for me your comment is a way to write better ff 🙂
Awesome
Thank you 🙂
Awesome Superb Fantastic
Lovely epi DEAR
Loved Swalak scenes and Ragini’s act towards Sanskar and made him understand
Waiting for the next one…………
Thank you so much 😀
U r welcome dear
Nice
Thank you 🙂
Awesome update loved it swalak dance and their dinner loved it and ragini telling sanskar to work gives a good message and di why 11 part is not showing in telly updates? do u know and loved the part
Thank you Radhu 🙂 This is link of 11th episode : https://www.tellyupdates.com/love-cannot-preplanned-episode-11/
please try to add more ragsan scenes
ok lovely 🙂
yaa its no rule that only they shuld win others to have right ;P
heheheh on a serious note its awesome 🙂
Thank you so much Ishu 😀
your comment means a lot to me 🙂