Character sketch:
Shaurya Kanna- Big hotelier.. Rich businessman
Mehak- Student of hotel management..
Nehal&Sonal- Mehak’s bestie + room mates..
Kanta- Mehak’s Chachi
Jeevan- Mehak’s chacha
Karuna- Shaurya’s mom
Plot:-
Mehak was getting ready for college.. It’s a great day.. Many great personalities are coming for inspiring the students..
Sonal- Mehak yrr.. why are you so much happy.. The college is planning for boring is and you enjoy all this..
Mehak- what wrong they are doing.. It’s so prosperous that we will meet with many people today.. It will enhance our knowledge.
Nehal- Do you know who are coming?
Mehak-No, I don’t
Nehal- Then why are you sure that they will enhance our knowledge.. Our college is good for nothing. They will only arrange stupid people
Mehak- Shut up.. I have full hour from my college.. My chacha sold our house for my studies, I should pay full attention.
Sonal- Ok ok.. now let’s go
Mehak, Sonal, Nehal and others are sitting in the hall and listening the speeches of the guests. Mehak received a call from Kanta Chachi and went outside to attend it. She was on call, when Shaurya entered. She didn’t noticed. Shaurya saw her there and stopped. He was surprised to see her there. He came near her.. And called her, Mehak felt the voice to be close to her. She turned to see won she was longing to see.. Yes it was him, Shaurya. Mehak was astonished to meet him again, she had lost hope but he is standing in front of her. There was complete silence for a while, then Shaurya spoke up..
Shaurya- Mehak you…you here..I was finding you everywhere..
He hugged her. She was so surprised.. Then she too hugged..
Mehak- Did you remember me??
Shaurya(breaking the hug) – Are you mad?? How could you even thought that I could ever forget you. You are my life.. You are my everything.. I am here only because of you and you are saying…
Mehak(with teary eyes)- What… you tell..I…I am what
Shaurya- You are my life.. I love you Mehek..I searched you everywhere… You always helped me, cared about me.. And I always wanted to say what you meant for me but could never in a fear to loose you..
Mehak- But….
They were interrupted by someone who called Shaurya for going on stage.. He went with him, saying her not to leave him again..
Mehak was in shock.. She could not believe her ears.. She went back to hall and sat with Nehal and Sonal.
Nehal- Hey girls.. Isn’t he Shaurya..
Sonal- Yes he is…Mehak see.. You used to tell na that he was your school senior..
Mehak didn’t respond.. She was still in her dreamland..
Nehal- Mehek why are you quite.. (She waved her hand in front of Mehak)
Mehak- Yes.. What?
Nehal- Where are you lost??
Mehak- Just focusing on the speech
Sonal- Not more yrr.. Let’s go plz… I can’t take it anymore..
Mehak- No Sonal plz wait na
Nehal- Plz Mehak… Let’s go.. It’s late now
Mehak- But…. (She remember Shaurya asking her to wait)
Sonal- What??
Mehak- Nothing
Nehal -Then let’s go
Both nehal and sonal dragged mehak home. Afterwards Shaurya looked for her but she was gone.. He was scared to loose her again. He could not take that again.. So he asked few of the people about Mehak and finally got success. He found a girl of Mehak’s batch who gave him her address.
Next day was Sunday..
Shaurya went to mehak’s resident.. He ranged the bell.. Sonal opened it.
Sonal- Oh Shaurya sir you!! Here!!
Shaurya- Do Mehek live here??
Sonal- Yes but she is in market now.. Why do you need her..
Shaurya- May I come in and wait for her??
Sonal- Oh yes I forgot to ask in excitement
Shaurya smiled a bit and entered..
Sonal- sir may I get you coffee or something else..
Shaurya- No I didn’t need anything.. Just Mehak
Sonal- Do you know her??
Shaurya- Yes she is my childhood friend
Sonal- Is she?? She never told us about that..
Shaurya- Really??
Sonal- She only said that you were her school senior but never said that you both know each other..
Shaurya- How much time will it take her to return??
Sonal- It has been one hour, she’ll return soon.
Soon Mehak and Nehal returned with shopping bags in hand. Mehak’s bag feel down when she saw Shaurya sitting there..
Mehak- Shaurya.. You here.. How do you know my address??
Shaurya- That’s not a big deal.. First you tell me why you didn’t wait for me yesterday
Mehak- Actually….
Shaurya- What
(Nehal and Sonal were standing confused)
Mehak- You should leave now..
Shaurya-Why should I?? I will not go without you.
Mehak- What you want Shaurya??
Shaurya- I want you.. I love you.. I wanna marry you
Mehak- This can’t happen..
Shaurya- But why.. What’s the problem.. Don’t tell you don’t love me.. Because I have seen love in your eyes for me.
Mehak- But aren’t a match. Have you seen the differences between our status
Shaurya- What rubbish… If you have so much problem then why you created the difference.. Why you helped me??
Mehak- Because I love you…..
Shaurya- If you love me then why not accepting me. You only used to tell na that love doesn’t see anything.
Mehak stands speechless unable to answer Shaurya.. Weeping
Shaurya- Why are you crying… See I don’t love you from today… It has been years I’m in love with you.. probably it’s a period of 11 years.. I love you from when I was in std 7… and if you reject me like this I could not live. If you need some time then it’s okay but plz don’t do this.
Mehak- But…
Shaurya- Now plz don’t say anything yrr… I’ll come later.
Saying so Shaurya left.. Mehak did like a stone but more than her, Nehal and Sonal were shocked. They came to her…
Nehal- What did he told..
Sonal- He loves you
Nehal- You both have some story na… you never told us about it..
Mehak- I never knew he loved me.. It ear only yesterday he confessed..
Sonal- Will you now plz tell about your past.. You were choose to him na..
Mehak-It was long ago, when I shifted to his locality when I was in std 3. I met him then for the first time. And soon we became friend. We used to go for cycle riding and picnics on regular basis. Slowly or friendship got stronger, I will not say that we were BFFs and I first felt love for him when I was in 5th grade. I don’t know why did I feel for him, maybe because of his love and care or maybe simmering else. He was in eight then. But I never knew he loved me too so I could never come up with confessing my feelings.
It was both of ours dream to run hotels.. and he used to help me a lot with it. O felt bad if we don’t met for much time. It was a awesome feeling when saw him after many days. Suddenly I felt more close to him… don’t know how this happened but we started to meet and talk almost daily our friendship got stronger and I stated to feel ashamed. I was ashamed as he was offering me his precious friendship and in return I’m not giving him that. I’m somewhere else, flying in my own dreams. I started to avoid my feelings and hold his hand as a friend. Time keeps on flying and he passed 12th. But he couldn’t get admission in any college because lack of money, he was broken and started living in home for most of the time. I could not see him like that and decided to have my saving(which was for my future studies) to him. I explained Kanta chachi and Jeevan chachu about it. I told them that Shaurya’s education is the first priority in my life. They understood what I meant. They are world’s best guardians. Then it took lot time to connive Karuna maa but I did. Shaurya for the first time hugged me. I was surprised. That was the best gift for me. He looked at me shyly for the first time. I was so happy.
But then… That was our last meet till yesterday. My chachi and chachu sold our house for getting money for my education. That day I left the area. Never get any news about him. Then I saw him on TV one day. I was really very happy with his success. It was like my success…
Sonal- It’s so touching yrr…Why are you not accepting his proposal?? If I’d be at your place then I would surly has accepted.
Mehak- Even I don’t know why I am reacting like this. It’s all like a dream. But I am somewhat not feeling too accept it. Don’t know why I’m feeling like this.
Nehal- There must be something rubbish going on your mind that’s stopping you. Think about it and get rid of it. Everyone isn’t as lucky to get a true love in his or her life.
Mehak- Exactly.. That’s the confusion.. I’m scared that he truly love me out is it just because of my help he’s feeling so.
Nehal- He just told that he loves you from std7.. you haven’t helped him then.
Sonal- Yes yrr… She’s right.
Mehak- Yes I hope… I’m trying my best to avoid my confusions… Anyways he gave me time na… I’ll surely overcome it in these days..
Nehal- Same is hoped by us..
After few days, Shaurya came to Mehak’s. Mehak still in confusions agreed to his proposal… Shaurya felt she’s not much happy and asked about it. She kept quite. So Sonal told everything.
Shaurya- It’s rubbish to even think that it’s fine and take. I don’t love you for your favor. I always loved you. I always feel special whenever you are near. I could feel my heartbeat, my breath… Everything becomes lifeless except you. I used to think it as just a infatuation which would face away but it wasn’t. Gradually the feeling increased. I felt strange even in hearing your name. I tried to confess many times but whenever you came in front of me.. I forgot what I was going to tell… I even have a great if you get angry and leave me… But you actually leave me. These few years where a nightmare, a deadly nightmare without you and now if you don’t want a relation just because of my success then it’s better to leave everything, right.
Mehak- No Shaurya I’m sorry. I’m very very very sorry. How could I even think you dinner love me. I love you more than anything else. I could not love without you.
She smiled with tears. Shaurya was happy than ever. He happily hugged her…
Mehrya informed their family about their love. Everyone happily accepted. And soon they got married.
THE END
Another dream… I think my brain works better when I’m sleeping. I know it’s not much good but it’s what I could write. The Dean was incomplete so the ending is designed by me and is much boring… Sorry if I wasted your time.
Sorry for grammatical and spelling mistakes.
12 Comments
It’s nice Aakriti….
I liked it…
Plz write more OS…. please please
I will be waiting for your post????
Post soon ??????
Thnq…will definitely write again if by any chance any idea strike me..
Nic one aakriti write more lik this one only in one os…see u soon
Thanks a lot…I hope that I could write more
nice one yaar!!!really it was short and sweet…
Thank you so so so so much
Thanks for writing again your awesome ff…. Love you..
Thanks for reading… Love you too
It is nice and amazing aakriti. Loved it. Keep posting this kind of OS . It was wonderful. I request you if you can write a FF also.
Thnq..I will try to keep your request. Actually writing my previous ff was very difficult for me because I’m not used to mobile keypads and had to spend hours on it… So this time I wrote an OS..
Wow so sweet and wonderful os aakriti. I just loved it. I am a silent reader but I could not resist this time from commenting. This is my first comment ever. I enjoyed it you are a great writter. Please write more please please
Beautifully penned, good job yrr