Hello!……….i am back with 11th part of my ff……..thanku all for commenting liking disliking reading nd a big thanks to Shivani nd Starlight thanku guys for breaking ur silence nd commenting…….nd a good news or a bad news it’s upon u……that today this chappy will be long from my other chapters so let’s move to the 11 chap:
Today’s chappy:
A week pass to the marriage
Gang except Kabir was in Veer’s cabin talking about random things as they were on break
Ria:so where u all r going for honeymoon
Isha:well Kabir’s b.day is in just 4 days so we were planing to go after his b.day
Pragya:yeah
Sanchi:so what r u planing for his b.day
Pragya:nothing……we want to do something special but can’t think what to do
Veer:Sanchi u r genius in these things u must have any idea
Sanchi:let me think
Ria (in mind):no………i have to do something so that i can impress Kailash uncle nd Kusum aunty
Sanchi:idea…….
She tells them the idea which is muted
Veer:that’s great
Pragya:yeah……
Isha:not just great it is superb
After that all went to their duties
Ria was in cafetaria as she didn’t got any shift today
Ria (in mind):yeah…….on his b.day i will tell him that i love him from the day i saw him
While on the other side
A girl was shown……..she was sitting in a car lost in some thoughts
Girl (in mind):just some time more Kabir baby nd then i will tell u how much i love u…..i am sorry baby i can’t come on ur b.day…..but when i will come i will make u forget everyone (she smiles evily)
At night:
Kabir was in his room lying on the bed continually thinking about Sanchi
Kabir:why i am thinking about her i never felt like this for any girl but Sanchi……..
Angel Kabir nd Devil Kabir appeared
Ak:dude u r thinking about her bcz u r in love with her
Dk:no bro………how can u love her……it’s just ur infatuation towards her nothing more
Ak:don’t listen to him….u love Sanchi nd that’s it
Kabir (in mind):i should listen to the Ak
Dk:idiot we came up from ur mind then we know everything what u think stupid
Kabir:shut up u go i will listen to Ak
Ak:thanks
They both disappeared
Kabir:yes yes yes i am in love yes
He starts jumping on bed
(LOVE ME THODA AUR) BG
On the other side
Sanchi was also thinking about Kabir
Sanchi (in mind):am i in love…….yes yes i am in love
She starts dancing
Later they both slept thinking about eachother
So 4 days passed nd today it was Kabir’s birthday
At night
It was 9 pm nd Kabir came from the hospital nd much to his surprise all the lights in his home were off…….nd when he turned on the light rose petals started to fall on him nd when he looked around all the home it was decorated
Nd on the walls Kabir’s childhood pics were hanging nd soon a white curtain came nd on it all the pics of him of turning from infant to a child nd then from a child to a teenager nd from a teenager to a adult
He became happy to see all this nd then everyone shouted
Everyone:HAPPY BIRTHDAY KABIR
all wishes him nd soon some main guests came
Priyanshi……Ariptakrish (Srishti di)……Trisha…..Mannat (Sana…….di)…….Dhruvi….Sakash…….Aayu…….Miya……..Samidha………Aafiya……..Vanu…….Amnaa…….Niya……Rishika……Jia……Niyati……Ruwani…….Anu……Anne……Annie……Samaira (Simran)……..Dhruti…….Riya……Khamoshi (Mitali) nd at last Sanjana (hmmm…….u guys must be wondering who is Sanjana arre…..it’s me…..how will i not come to his birthday ri8)
(So sorry if I forgot someone i just add the names of one of my fav writers nd my sweet regular commentors)
He met with them nd hugged all of them
Nd then he cutt the cake nd make everyone eat after that party started
Kabir:Veer…..whose idea was this
Veer:Sanchi
Kabir smiled to himself nd went towards Sanchi there Sanchi was with other guests
He went to her
Kabir:Sanchi……i have to talk to u
Sanchi:Kabir just 2 mins
Kabir:Sanchi plzz
Sanchi to guests:excuse me
She went with Kabir………Kabir take her to a corner nd hugged her tightly
Kabir:thanku thanku thanku so much Sanchi for this it was the best birthday ever
Sanchi smiles nd responded to the hug
Kabir:hey wait everyone gave me gift but u didn’t gave me any gift…….where is my gift
He said breaking the hug
Sanchi:actually when i was preparing for it i forget about ur gift
Kabir:what……. now i don’t want to talk with u
He turned nd went
Sanchi:Kabirrr
Sanchi became sad nd went to a swimming pool which was in kapoor mansion nd stood there being sad
Someone came nd offers her ice cream
She looked at the person nd it was Kabir
She turned to the other side nd smiled
Then Kabir went to that side nd offers her fav chocolates
She couldn’t resist them so she takes them nd starts eating
Kabir was admiring her while she was busy in eating
After finishing her chocolates she turned to Kabir nd gave him a box
He opened it nd inside it…..there was a simple yet beautiful watch
Kabir became happy
Kabir:thanku so much Sanchi…..but hey u said u haven’t bought any gift for me
Sanchi:i was just teasing u
Kabir:Sanchi i really thought u hadn’t bought any gift bcz organizing this wonderful birthday was the best gift ever
They both smiled
Later Satish announces for a dance
Kabir went towards Sanchi…….Sanchi thought he was coming to ask for a dance nd smiled…….but he went pass her smirking nd asked Sanjana for a dance (don’t look at me like this i will give all of u a chance to dance with Kabir )
Sanchi feels jealous nd go to dance with Sakash
Nd the couples were
Pragya nd Satish…….Vikrant nd Ria…….Veer nd Isha……..Sanchi nd Sakash…….nd Kabir nd Sanjana (sorry i haven’t thought so much names so dance with whomever u want???)
Beintehaa played
Then they twirl them nd now the couples were
Satish nd Priyanshi…….Veer nd Sanchi……..Sakash nd Ria…….Vikrant nd Aayu……nd Samaira nd Kabir (see Sammie i am so kind )
Sanchi was eyeing Kabir nd Samaira angrily
Veer noticed this
Veer:jealous
Sanchi glares at him so he shut his mouth
Then again they twirled the girls nd now the couples were
Aafiya with Satish……… Mannat (Sana di) with Veer………Dhruti with Vikrant…….Ariptakrish with Kabir
So one by one they twirled the girls nd all the girls dance with Kabir
Priyanshi……Ariptakrish (Srishti di)……Trisha…..Mannat (Sana…….di)…….Dhruvi….Sakash…….Aayu…….Miya……..Samidha………Aafiya……..Vanu…….Amnaa…….Niya……Rishika……Jia……Niyati……Ruwani…….Anu……Anne……Annie……Samaira (Simran)……..Dhruti…….Riya……Khamoshi (Mitali) nd Sanjana
Nd at last Kanchi came together they dance nd
both were lost in each other’s eyes nd as soon the song ended they both parted
(Oh u guys must be
so tired ri8 u guys must be tired by now by dancing continually)
So soon the party ended nd all went to their homes except Kabir Ria Sanchi Veer pragya Isha Satish nd Vikrant
Ria came to Kabir
Ria:Kabir i have to tell u something plz come
Kabir:sure come
Ria take him to garden nd holds his hand
Ria:Kabir i don’t know about u…….but i…..I love u from the day i saw u…….blah…..blah……blah….blah
Kabir was shocked to hear that
He holds her by her shoulders
Kabir:see…Ria…..i never felt anything like that about u…..i just take u as my friend nothing more…….i am sorry……
Ria was in tears listening this
Ria:Kabir plz just give me one chance
Kabir:Ria…..i can’t bcz i love someone else
Ria wiped her tears
Ria:that’s ok Kabir……that girl will must be very lucky………
Kabir:thanks Ria for understanding
Ria gave a weak smile Kabir smiles back
Kabir went away
Ria cried bitterly……..Vikrant was going home…..he saw her like this nd ran to her
Virkant:Ria what happened why r u crying
Ria hugged him
Ria:he rejected me he said he loves someone else
Vikrant was feeling bad for her but for now he has to console her
Vikrant:see Ria……it’s not compulsory na that if we love a person he will love us back……forget Kabir I am sure u will find a better guy than him……..
He said breaking the hug
Ria:but……but….i…..i love him (she said sobbing)
Vikrant:then what…….may be today u love him nd tomorrow u love someone else
After much trying finally he convinced her nd dropped her at her home
One by one everyone went to their home
Nd soon everyone dozed off to sleep
Huffff! Finally i completed it……. it took me 3 days to write……may be it was not so so long but hey it was at least for me……now i can’t write more my eyes r burning……but there is a request guys plz do comment nd let me know that if my 3 days of work went good or not…..whether it’s positive or negative nd if u r busy then do press the like or dislike button nd now at last:
A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY FAV VIKRAM SAKHALKAR??? MAY GOD BLESS HIM ND FILL HIS LIFE WITH HAPPINESS ND PEACE???
GOODBYE TO ALL
HAVE AN AMAZING DAY?
27 Comments
Awesome… Superb…
Mentioning your commentors name was amazing idea… Thank you..
Waiting for the next update..
Post it as soon as possible.
Take care..
Thanku so much sweety……nd no need to thank me……i can do this much for u all???……….nd i will try to post next chappy soon nd u too take care???
Amazing one and not only your favourite but VS IS MY FAVOURITE TOOOO….AND PKZ POST SOON..
Thanku so much dear?? i will try to post soon
It’s awesome, thanks for long update nd for mentioning all of the writers nd commenters name dear
You made me curious about the girl so please post next part asap
Thanks dear……nd about the girl i can only give u hint that as u know every love story is incomplete without a villain?? so she will be the villain
Nice one dear ??? and definitely paid off you hard work!! Thank you for including me in this too ???
Thanks di?
Amazing episode loved it !!
I was a silent reader?? till now but opened up??
Post soon dear
Thanku so much dear for appreciating nd breaking ur silence?
Heyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! Thanks for giving me to dance with MY VIKRAM(KABIR)…..And u know i so lost in my dreams while dancing with MY VIKRAM that i didnot notice Sanchi’s glare….but whatever The epi was great didnot knew that u love me so much that u mentioned me 3rd time in ur ff and sacrificed the dance u were doing with MY VIKRAM……Sorry to say but in this case i am a bit selfish …. I dont know if i would have any one chance to dance with MY VIKRAM…..seriouly SALUTE to ur selfless act…….
Thanks………nd urna band krr jab dekho MY VIKRAM laga rkha h?…..itne to humare country ki nominees vote bhi nh maangte???……..khair vo to 18 saal k baad diya jata h……..or tu Vikram k saath dance krte time pity si lage gi???………chal abhi bura mat maan nd i know i am very selfless????? just showing this in my ff otherwise…?????? m to tujhe Virkam ko haath bhi na lagane don??
Aaj main upar asman neeche aaj main aage zamana hai peeche….
Udi Udi jaye Udi Udu jaye dil ke patang dekho udi udi jaye
Dekh main kitna ud rahi hun kya kar legi tu???
Btw mujhe iss line ka matlab samajh nahi ayaa”Vikram ke sath dance karte time pity si lagegi”
Matlab bol mujhe samajh nahi ayaa..
U know i m so happy !!!After all Today is MY VIKRAM’s Birthday!!!MY VIKRAM……MY BABY …MY HOTTIE…MY JANNU….MY SWEEETU…MY SWEETHEART….MY LOVE…..MY LIFE…..MY VIKRAM…
beautiful
OMG OMG i danced with kabir
yaay
thanks
Thanks??
superb epi and thank you for mentioning all our writers and commenter name in this ff……………….post next one soon…………….tc……………love you…………….
Thnanku so much dear…….nd it’s mine pleasure??…..i will try to post soon…..luv u 2 nd u too take care?
It was an awesome episode dear…. I’m very sorry for not commenting as from past many days i don’t have my smartphone. N typing with keypad 1 it pains my finger a lot but i do read every updates n press like. Thankuu so much for inviting me in the party. As soon i get my phone i will be active n write ff too.. till then bbye n take care… lots of love n keep writing… do try to post soon. Though i not comment but i eagerly wait for ur n all writers updates..
Thanku so much di……nd no need to be sorry??…….nd i will be waiting for ur article nd u too take care……i will try to post soon??
Sorry for not commenting earlier as I was stuck up with my exams
The birthday twist was great dear
Now I am waiting for Kanchi to confess their love to each other
Please be soon
The entry of a new antagonist is quite exciting
Love you
Take care
Thanks…..nd no need to be sorry dear exams r more important…….nd as new antagonist has came so the confessing part will be late so sorry for that………nd i am eagerly waiting. for Mafia Devil if ur exams r over then plz do post it……take care luv u 2??
It’s just awsm
Thanks
So amazing….. Loved it very much
Thanks
elw….sry 4 nt cmntng jaana…i was stuck in my day to day life n tdy i toon a leave frm schooo n nw i read it…it was amazing n thnks 4 including me in dis chap… post nxt asap…lv uh bacha
Thanks di nd no need to say sorry ?? nd y r u not posting love across religions i am eagerly waiting for it plz do post it soon….take care luv u???