Hello…..thanks to all for commenting or liking disliking and a special thanks to Tanvi…thanks dear for breaking ur silence
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Celebration of Kabir’s birthday
Chap 12:
A week passed
Both the couples went to honeymoon
It was late night so Sanchi asked Kabir to drop her at hostel
Now they were in the car
But suddenly car stopped with a jerk
They came out of the car……and saw that it was bcz of service problem and no mechanic was available and also no taxi was there
So now they were walking
Kabir:Sanchi
Sanchi:hmmm
Kabir:do u know why no one is here
Sanchi:y
Kabir:bcz they want to give us some time alone
He starts to come closer to her
Sanchi:Kabir stop
He stopped
Sanchi:see Kabir…….if…if u did something na I will not leave u
Kabir:oh really and what will u do
He started to come closer and she starts to move backwards…….and soon she was attached to a wall and the gap between them was just 2 inches
He was about to decrease it but as soon a car stopped in their front he quickly moved backward
He turned and a girl in black jeans and black shirt……dark makeup high heels came out
Kabir:Aliya
(A small introduction of
Aliya:antagonist……loves Kabir…..can do anything to get Kabir……has evil mind)
Aliya smiled and came to him and hugged him…….he hugs her back
While Sanchi stood there giving death glares to Aliya
After breaking the hug when he looked toward Sanchi…….
Aliya:hey Kabir how r u…….and who is this girl????
Kabir:Aliya she is Sanchi……she is bhabhi’s sis and she is the best intern of hospital
Aliya:ohh……hello Sanchi nice to meet u……btw Kabir what r u guys doing here
Kabir:ummm……actually my car broke down so…..
Aliya:ohh….no problem come I’ll give u guys lift
Sanchi:no need of this……we’ll go
Aliya:are I am saying na come…..come with me
They sat in the car Kabir was in front with and Sanchi Aliya were in back seat
Aliya:driver move to Kapoor mansion (everyone know about Kapoor house bcz Kabir’s dad is richest businessman in India)
Driver:ok ma’am
After sometime car stopped in front of Kapoor mansion
The trio came out of the car
Aliya again hugged Kabir
Aliya (whispering):she is ur gf
Kabir:not now but soon
Aliya became angry she broke the hug with a fake smile
Aliya:ok Kabir bye
Kabir:come inside na maa and dad will must be happy to see u after a long time
Aliya:Kabir I’d have come but I have a important work so bye
She went looking angrily at Sanchi
Sanchi:so she was ur friend
Kabir:yeah
Sanchi (murmuring):well I don’t think she has the same feelings for u
Kabir:what
Sanchi:nothing………….now will u plz drop me at my home
Kabir:think again what if I stopped the car at middle and do something
Sanchi:ok u stay here I am going to uncle and I will tell him what u were talking about
She started to walk but he held her from her wrist
Kabir:are…..u became angry I was just joking u know…..and don’t u believe me
Sanchi turned
Sanchi:no I don’t believe u at all Dr.Kabir Kapoor
Kabir:u r just saying this but in reality………there is something else
Sanchi:huh now will u plz drop me or not……
Kabir:sure my majesty come
Kabir dropped her at her home and went to his home
Today I am stopping here sorry for short update and guys if u guys were not liking my fs u should have told me so that I can improve myself seeing the number of likes and comments I can say that but for now guys if u don’t like this then tell me my mistakes it will help me to improve my skills and if u like it well it’s super boring and I know u will not like it butif u r really liking it then don’t forget to press like button and commenting
TAKE CARE ALL??
23 Comments
Why do you think we don’t like your ff? We love it ???
Di I don’t think like that……..I was just angry today so wrote all this in anger and the reason behind my anger even I don’t remember??
Amazing episode dimple I had to break my silence cuz you write really beautifully not just you but all the authors I love reading all ff ????
Post soon dear??
Thanks for such a sweet comment dear……and same here I also love to read all the articles I’ll try to post soon dear?
Di I was not talking about my ff I was talking about my fs and I thought it after looking the number of likes and comments
It was superb… And it is not at all boring..
Post the next update as soon as possible..
Take care..
Thanks dear…….u too tc?
its superb and i loved ur fs so stop blabbering this Stupid!!!!!!!!
Thanks but yrr joothe dilase dena band krr jab mujhe khud ko pasand nh tha to dusron ko kese hoga???
Its amazing….. Its not boring
Thanks dear?
superb epi and you are amazing writer i hope you know it…………………that’s why i love you ffs………………tc…………..gn……………..sd……………….love you a lot……………………
That’s so sweet of u dear?? I was just angry today for some reason so I didn’t realize when I started to write all this rubbish…..and u too take care good night sweet dreams and love u more??
Amazing episode don’t call it boring, it’s interesting to see what will aliya do now nd how many hurdles are there in kanchi’s life, Post next part soon
Thanks dear…….I’ll try to post next part as soon as possible?
I pressed like button, but really dear nothing much happened in today’s episode. But gave hint for something interesting in the upcoming. And I liked it ☺
Thanks for pressing like button and dear I know nothing happened I just posted it to give the intro of antagonist??
Oiiii tune mujhe TU mei Private message diya tha kya??? Agar bheja toh bata kiya bheja mere mob mei problem aa gaya isliye dekh nahi sakhti
Nh m n koi msg nh bheja tha
Sorry for being late dear but I was stuck up with some work
The story will be amazing as now Aliya is here
Post soon
Love you
Take care
Thanks and it’s ok dear…….and when u r going to post Mafia Devil I am waiting for it impatiently as the story is just too much exciting….plz post soon dear……and I’ll also try to post soon…….love u…….and u too take care??
How dare you dimpy……..why you say that we don’t like this episode yaar………we love this episode so so much dear…….. it’s really superb and amazing yaar…….. Kabir ka andaz pura rock tha yaar or kanchi scene is superb yaar……..love u dear………post soon dear………….tc yaar………..
Thanks di but it happened just in anger nothing more?? love u and u too take care