Hello guys first of all thanku all for commenting……….Aafiya Lavanya Samaidha Anu di Ruwani di Pari Dhruti Amnaa nd Apsara
Back to the story:
Sanchi assist Kabir in the surgery Gang went for shopping nd Kanchi’s eyelock
Today’s chappy:
At night They all came back & quickly go to their bed nd slept:
At morning
let’s check the boys
Veer was in Kabir’s cabin convincing him for some thing let’s see for what
Veer:yrrr plz see in 3 months I will be married so before that we should go for a tour na
Kabir:see Veer there is alot of pressure of work we can’t go nd Suneel uncle nd Annad uncle will not give us leave
Veer:yrr plz only u can convince them plz go na plz plz plz plz……
Kabir: ok but on 1 condition
Veer:aree done done
Kabir: ok so come with me
Veer:where
Kabir:to talk with Anand uncle nd Suneel uncle
Veer:I am not going to talk with them
Kabir:hey……u told me urself that u r ok with my condition…….so now come
Veer (murmmering):cheater
Kabir: noutanki
They both go to Anand nd Sunil
Anand:yes Kabir,Veer
Kabir:actually uncle……wo…..wo
Anand:Kabir what…….wo wo beta tell na….we r getting late for meeting
Kabir:ummm…….uncle Veer wants to go on a tour
Suneel:Oh…….bs yhi……so what’s big problem in this……u all can go
Veer has a wide smile on his face while Kabir was shocked
Kabir:u agreed so easily…..I mean (before he could say anything Veer dragged him outside)
Veer:what were u doing…..do u want to cancel our plan…..now it’s time to enjoy
Kabir:point…..come (they both smiled nd went)
After 5 days:
Kabir to girls gang including Ria
Kabir:so guys after 2 days we all r going on a tour in Shimla except Dr.Ria
Ria stands up:but why Kabir why not me
Kabir:I think u r forgetting ur punishment
Ria: plz next time I will never do this
Veer:my dear sis next time u will never get the chance
Ria:plz plz Kabir,Veer plz I promise I will never do it again
Kabir:ok only this time……..so guys be ready sharp…..I don’t want any one to be late
Kabir nd Veer went
Ria Sanchi Isha Pragya:yes now more shopping…..yipeee
After 2 days: ( only gang nd Satish Kabir Ria were going)
In the bus Sanchi was finding seat to sit but couldn’t found it nd saw the seat beside Kabir (I know u guys must be thinking that how she can’t so let me tell u they go on a small bus bcz they were not so many I don’t know about India but in our country these types of small buses exists which we named ACB)
Sanchi (in mind):why I ask him……he is not saint that I ask him I will sit here
Kabir:I had said u earlier think slowly nd second u can sit her
Sanchi:Like every time……umm……can I sit at the window seat?
Kabir: no
Sanchi:huh….(she sat beside him Kabir smirks)
After a while Kabir was busy in his phone nd Sanchi was just staring it Kabir noticed this
Kabir (hiding his phone):why r u looking at my phone u have your na then use it
Sanchi (murmmering):saying like he is talking to his gf nd I caught him
Kabir hears this nd replied:whatever
After a while bus stopped at a point for eating
_____________________________________________i think it’s short so sorry for that nd i think its getting bore day by day so should i discontinue it????plz tell me so for now if u like it then press the like button nd if don’t then press the dislike button as well as comment so for now kuch sochne do aage ki story k liye
Till then
Byeeeee
Love u all
21 Comments
U SHOULD WRITE A LONG ONE WITH SOME INTERESTING THINGS,BECAUSE FOR US KANCHI POSIBLE ONLY VIA TU WRITTERS SO PLEASE DON’T DISCOUNTINUE IT
Ok dear thanks for ur view…..i’ll try to do it??
superb story and hey don’t stop your ff i loved it……………post next one soon…………….
Thanku Dhruti ur comment crept a smile on my face?? just made my day?
Nice… Post the next update a bit long.. Just a request..
Take care.. Baye..
Thanks dear…..nd I know it’s short…..sorry for that…..next chap will be a long one….hope so??
Lovely episode
Thanks dear??
hey bacha really sry 4 nt cmntng on d previous one…i read that 6:00 am n i thought to cmnt later as i wanted to revise my todays paper….bth were o7m…dnt dare to discntinue…ek hi to jagah hai meri kanchi k liye…post nxt one soon…lv uh bacha
Thanks di nd no need to say sorry…..exams r more important…..all the best for ur exams….tc luv u 2??
no problem for the short one..next time come with longer one dear
anyways awesome one and when veer dragging kabir in anand office hilarious
Thanku so much dear…u just made my day??
Firstly I’m so sorry for not commenting before. I just read all your parts and so I’m commenting on this one.
Nice story and please don’t discontinue it. Just add some more Kanchi scenes and longer updates.
Thanku dear nd I will try to add more Kanchi scenes nd also next time a long one…..nd dear plz post ur ff the Mafia Devil it become one of my fav nd sorry for not commenting on ur ff but my exams were going on??
I will post The Mafia Devil after 8th April as my JEE exam will get over dear
Pls don’t discontinue…coz TU is the only way where we get Kanchi and u r a awesome writer so keep posting
Thanks dear for such a sweet comment?….nd I will post today??
Ohh ho dimple dear it’s really pura rock bala and dhamaka dar tha yaar………. can’t wait for the next part yaar…………post soon dear……….love you dear………tc yaar……see you soon yaar
Thanku so such di…….i will post today…..luv u 2??
nice
post soon
Thanks dear?