Hi I actually had time now so I wrote this also….
Ppl plz excuse me for writing short posts because I am in my college n preparing for my exams once they are over I promise to write really really long once….
Plz pray that I should get really awesome result….. Plz……
DONT FORGET YOUR WORK I REQUESTED…….. THE COUPLE NAME JOB…….PLZ….
NEXT PART….
…………………………HAPPY READING………………….
FROM HERE ON TILL I FIND A COUPLE NAME PLZ REMEMBER THAT N & P AS NAREN
POOJA ..
They reach ranggalli
…….all students hug pooja n thank her for coming back…..they all enjoy happily…… Naren constantly keep staring only at pooja……
Later pooja confronts the pandit and apologized. For her liesm….Tue pandit compliments them saying that they still are a perfect couple… They both blush …..
After teaching sessions were done they all went to market…… While buying clothes some one suddenly caught pooja by her waist and hugged her….all were shocked by this act but he was tickling pooja and she was laughing like a lunatic…..naren here was fuming in anger.or I should say jealousy……….
She turned n hugged him saying idiot…..( guys. u can imaging yeh hai ashiquis mohit abrol )
He says chashmis has turned from alia bhutt to meenakumari……..wow…what a change……maan bhi hai, mandir bhi hai, kismat bhi hai , kaynat bhi hai, ladki bhi hai, murti bhi hai, pandit hai aur paisa bhi…….wah wah Vicky…..mangal sutra bhi hai aur varmala bhi….he FETs close to pooja n gets her close by her. Waist …..making everyone shocked n naren more jealous n angry……Chalo shaadi kar lete hai……..baby..m..pooja hits him playfully n says Chup kar idiot……he does all selection for pooja n buys them n ranggalli kiddi stuff also…….they look perfect……..
Precap…..
Naren’s anger..seeing their closness he gets more jealous….on reaching his room he breaks a glass in his hand….breaks all other things
10 Comments
Really nice…
I really hope to see something like this in the serial. Not now but after some episodes.
Seriously you are Writing a great story.. Hope to see sach scenes in future in piya albela.. Keep going
Nice one..
awesome….
Seriously saying that part of jealousy is good but the way it describe I didn’t like it first of all as we all know that Pooja know have feelings for naren than I don’t think he like anyone’s to close her with waist because she is modern no doubt but not much like your imagination.
So sorry I hart anyone but I don’t like this part….and its my personal opinion…..
Yeah I agree with Anne and pls that guys name to mayank… Bechare ko role milna chahiye na… Just a suggestion… Sry if I had hurt u…
Seriously yaar it’s a great job..but I can’t judge u because piya albela is a sensitive show with sensitive concept….so just be careful u don’t hurt the religion or faith…keep going
I’m sorry….I accept ur views shrilatha, romya and Anne but as I said in my ff its not actually piya albela based on original serial…its just my way of seeing sheen SAS and akshay mahtres chemistry as naren and pooja…
Sorry if it was not good
loved the part…
jealousy thing is awesome..
going great.. do cont. soon…