Hiii guys…..i m here with next part….reallly sorry for this late,,due to ramadan i m quite busy…so ,ets move on…
NEXT DAY
Everyone is very exciting for ZERMATT trip….
ZERMATT,a charming village (a top international resort..) at the foot of mighty peak MATTERHORN…
All girls get astonished to see the beauty of the place as they visited here for the frst time….
They all enjoyed horse-drawn carriage rides there…
Ani–shiv i m very hungry,,lets have something…
Ru–me too bhabhi..
Shivaay orderd some dish…..they had their lunch….
Rudra is staring the peak MATTERHORN……n says to himself…
Ru–its not that high…i can easily climb…
This is audible to everyone….
Om–really rudra…!!then do this….zra hm b dkhe tmhari bahaduri…
Ru–O,,,,i would have done this easily….bt not in the mood now…(trying to avoid the situation)
Somu–no rudra,.,we want u to see at the top….!!!come on rudra….
Everyone cheers him yaa rudra come on
Ru–ye log top bol bol kar,,,,hmko upar n phuncha de,…!!!
Shiv–what happened rudra…!!r u scared???
Ru–rudra singh oberoi ksi se ni drta bhaiya…just wait n watch,…
Saying this ,,he starts climbing the mountaion…mountain is completely covered with with snow…….enjoying the whole scenario is very beautiful from below…..bt climbing the mountain really need guts…as so many accidents had occurred here….
Ru–kaise bhai h mere,,aj mujhe maar k hi chorenge..(making cry baby face)….shivaay bhaiya has himself height phobia n see what he is doing with his sweet,,innocence brother…
He slightly see below where his bhaiya n bhabhi are cheering him bt there size has become as that of ant…
Seeing this,,,rudra holds his chest tightly….
Ru–girke marun ya na marun ,,mai heart attack se zrur mr jaunga….!!!
Suddenly qn idea popped up in his mind…..bt he fell down…..
Ru—aaaaaaaaaa
Everyone down their get shocked,,,rudra soo becomes invisible to them…!!!
Shiv—rudra…….
He runs towards mountain,,,feer of losing his brother can clearly be seen in his eyes…(yes he has phobia bt nothing is imp for him more than his brothers..)
Om runs behind shivaay….then hmari jhansi ki rani followed by everyone….
Soon they reach at the place where rudra was last scene…
ShivOm–rudra……where r u????
PriSomAniRi–rudda/rudra bhaiya
After a while shivaay’s eyes caught something…
Rudra was sittinh with tourist n enjoying their meal….
Shiv–rudra….(in angry tone)
Ru–hii bhaiya,,,,hi O,,,,come have meal….they r very sweeet….
Om–tu thik h,.??
Ru—hey,….mujhe kya hone wala h….mai to bas ap sbko yhn lane ke lye ye naatak kya th….(in cool attitude)
{What will happen to me….i did all this to bring u guys here,,,it was just drama}
Everyone run towards him n starts beating in fun way….(lafzon k ye rishta nahi….plays in BG)
Prinku–how can u do this ,,how much i get scared….!!!
Ru–bachaaaooooo……!!!!
When everyone gets sarisfied,,,thet stop him beating…
Ru–how cruel you are….u all beat me this much,….aahhhh…(starts doing drama)
Ani–stop it…dont be drama queen….u deserve more than this….we get soo scared….ok lets forget all this…if we have came here so lets go we’ll go at the top,….what say????
Everyone agrees….bt…
Shiv–nnn…nn..ooo(stammering)….i wont go…lets go back….
Gauri–why jiju…????lets go n it would be fun….
Om–gauri shivaay has height phobia
Ani–shivaay ,,you dont need to worry…i m here na….nothing will happen…(n she forwads her hand)
Shivaay holds her hand n they share an eyelock…
Everyone—-ahemmmm,,,,ahemmm,,
Shivaay–yaa lets go….(avoiding the situation)
Prinku–bhaiya lets make a team n lets see who reach their first….
Everyone….
So 1st team–AniRiOmRu
2nd team–SomShivPri
They starts climbing from two different points….(imagine climbing scene from yeh jwani h deewani)
Both team almost reach at the top,,they have to bury their flag their..the one who’ll do first will be winner….
Both tea, can see each other now….both run towards top…..now both are at same place,,they have to just bury their flag,…..
Anika n shivaay each other with fulll attitude…..n shivaay passes flying kiss to anika,,she stumbles and shivaay bury his flag….
Ani-‘this is cheating….shivaay u….
Shiv—what anika??what i did..???
Om–bhabhi we lost….
Ani–bt om….ur brother n….
Shiv–what anika…???(smiling)
Ani–chepde kahin k….
They all enjoy their victory,,take selfie….hoot,,they shout their name…n listen its echo….
They had a great time today….
Soon they reached hotel…and as they r very tired,,,soon they went into deep slumber,….!!
NEXT DAY
Rudra knocked at shivika’s room,,bt didn’t get any response…then he went to OmRi room…..knocked their too bt no response….he called them many times bt there wasn’t amy response….
Ru—all are sleeping like kumbhkaran….how to wake them….
An idea striked in his mind,,,he lits lighter near fire alarm n soon it starts ringing……
Anika after listening fire alarm
Ani–shivaaaaaaaayyyyy….aag lag gyi…wake up fast….i dont want to die…..shivaay….
Shiv–anika,…what happened???
Ani–ur ears are ok n?????fire alarm is ringing…
Shiv–what….
They soon rushe out of their room
Same happened with OmRi…..
Everyone was just running here n there in hotel….
An anmouncemnt is made..
Speaker–we r really sorry for this inconvenience…there is no fire in hotel..,,it was someone’s mischievios behaverior….
Everyone was relaxed now n moved to their respective room….
Ani–who did this 2rs cheap harkat…!!spoiled my dream…..
Gauri–xctly anika,,,,such a disgusting behaviour….
Rudra comes from backside
Ru–meri taarif horhi h..!!
AniRi–no rudra…we were cursing that stupid person who did all this….
Ru–i m saying same n….meri tareef ho rhi h…
ShivOm–you did all this????
Ru–yes….u all were sleeping like sun will never rise again….
ShibOm–shut up rudra
Ani–will u tell us why u did this???
Ru–yaaa…how can i forget…actually soumya n prinku are not in their room….i’ve checked all hotel….!!!
ShivOm–what???
Gauri–let me check their room…
Ru–bhabhi i’ve checked it completly…they were not there….!
Everyone get tensed….
ShivOm went outside n checked nearby places….!!there was not any clue of them…
AniRi searched whole hotel….Rudra was accompanying them….
Whole day passed bt they didnt come to know anything about them…
Shivaay has even informed police,,,,they have also started their work..,their phones are also switched off….!!!
Evrryone is very stressed….
Then someone is shown entering the hotel….their faces are blurred….!!!bt soon their faces become visible n they are none other than PriSom….
They are shocked to see sooo many police officials in the hotel with their bhaiya n bhabhi…
They run towards them…..
The convo is in hindi bt i m writing in english..
PriSom–what happened????everything fine n???
Shivaay instantly hugged them..PriSom were confused…
Om–where were u both????u know how much we get scared….
Pri–bhaiya…..(cutoff)
Ani–how can be u both so irresposible…!!u should have atleast inform us…
Som–bhabhi…(cutoff)
Gauri–xctly….whole day we were just finding you…
Ru–you know what was my condition….!!i’ve only one sister n only one somu….!!!i was soo worried…
PriSom–will u let us speak….
Shiv–what?.tell
Som–we had wake up early,,,,n as prinku had been to this place so we decided to go for shopping….
Ani–without informing…??
Pri–we haf came to inform you bt u all were sleeping so i’d written a lettee n kept it on my drssimg table….
Som–as our phone’s battery was dead ..so we didn’t carry it….haven’t u checked our room..??
Everyone’s eyes are on rudra….
Ru–what???there was no lettr there….u both lier….(making puppy face)
Officer–what happened Mr.Oberoi..??
As all convo was in hindi,,they didn’t understand anything….
Shiv–srry officer….i m really sorry for inconvenience…actually they had lost their path,,thats why…(giving an angry glare to rudra)
Officer–no problem Mr.Oberoi…we should leave then…..
Pri–bhaiya we aren’t saying lie.,,you can check our room…
Everyone reached SomPri room,…n they find a note kept on dressing table…
Shiv–whays this rudra????how can u be soo careless….!!(in anger)
Om–exctly rudra…we didn’t check that room on ur insistence….
Ru–sorry bhaiya…sorry O….(he was really guilty n sad for what he had done)
Anika whispers in shivaay’s ear…
Ani–dont be soo angry,..see he is really guilty…..
They all winked to each other n starts laughing on rudra’s serious face..
Shiv–serious look doesnt suit u rudra….it suits only on me…
Ru–u r not angry???
He runs towards ShivOm n hug them tightly…..they all have family hug….
N screen freezes on their smiling face….
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PRECAP–return to india…RuMya marriage….
Hey guys thnk u soooooo much for ur love n support n lots of positive commnts….it motivates me a lot…..lovee uuu soooo much…
I’ve wrttn an OS too..many of u’ve read it..bt who haven’t read yet…check it out….i recieved really an unxpcted reponse on my this OS…thnks to all of you…
There may be some mistakes as i haven’t recheck it…so srry for that….
*ishaana n pallavi*
My ff’s silent readers….i was really happy after seeing ur commnt….
All silent readers plzzz do commnt…
Lots of love
Kanfi
34 Comments
Awesome di. Please post next ASAP. ?
Thnx dwet…love uu
Awesome yaar… loved it… It was funny too… waiting for the next one .. post it soon
Thnx sagi..i’ll try to post soon:-)
So let me start from the first of the epi till the last.first the mount name n all u proved that u read lot of books n intelligent too then Rudra showed of big as usual that’s his style I love it too but all said to climb n he did that’s really cool but his dialogues were funny I loved it n that aaa I was like want happened to rudy but he was eating meal n enjoying ?????? n shivaay’s anger was true how can he do this but shivomru loves his brother a lot especially Shivaay in spite of he had height phobia he climbed n then team climbing before u could mention I imagined Teh jawani hai dewani that good your writing is n then SHIVAAY blowing kiss n bury his flag naughty shivaay??????????? n then all sleeping rudy lighter n fire alarm to wake 4 of them he spoiled the sleep of many that’s not good but it’s only an ff so it’s ok n then prisom vanishing I didn’t think they went for shopping?????? n all were worried oh poor thing but Rudy how much he loves them in nervous he didn’t check his room but Rudra is correct at his point n cool anika cooled shivaay’s anger like she pours water n cool shivaay n Trueee angry face only suit for shivaay not for Rudy n group hug Ohhh awesome n the whole epi was khidki tod in anika language n rumya marriage??????????? I am excited to read next n happy that u liked OS comment because after commenting I thought Rufina u talked more n dreaming more.actually I like commrnting long in ff but I know it will be boring n won’t do it but I guess I can do it in your ff because u r my Di wont u beat my long talk???????????? N will comment in all epi’s like this only ????? n love u??????
Rufi…rufi….rufi….
Thnk uuuu soooo much for such a long commnt,…it was not at all boring,..,i m smiling throught reading ur commnt….
I m really happy u like this tooooo much….
N ya i’ll love to read long commnts,,,,
Loveeee uuuuuuu sooooo muchhhh…
Take care
Actually I was enjoying the whole story really lovable……..post next soon kanfiii….Love u drrr
Awwwee..thnx sumi..
Lovvee u moorrreee;-) 😛
Hey Kanfi.
Its awesome. Full of masti !!
Rudra’s bechara but then his drama??
He was eating meal with foreigners.
Height phobia and Shivaay’s naughtiness, gosh?? whole episode was fun to read.
And then rudra’s stupidity but still he is a darling, everybody forgave him, that was the best part??
Excited for the precap, post soon❤
Thnk uuuuu jerry….
Yaa rudra is a quite funny character:-P 😛
I m too excited for precap….sooo mny xpctations r there so have to come up with khifkitod epi
Lovee uu
Maine ni krna kuch b comment..
Naaraz hu aapse dii…
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Arey meli pyali bena i was doing masti to grab ur attention now i ‘ll comment. . episode was sacchi mai a khidkitod rudra was toh ??
Uuuuuu nnnn…..
Thnk uuu
It is awesome dear… Ab thora comic likho I am feeling cry after reading your shivika os….
It was comic…!!!
U didnt find it funny???
In this ff….i think there would be not any tragic scenes
Amazing update.. loved it…
Rudy boy so cute… ??? Eagerly waiting for the next update.. plz post asap..
Thnx ankita..
I’ll try to post soon
Amazing update
Thnx dear,..
Amazingly fantastic episode awesome episode ??????????????? plzz do post the next update ASAP ? plzz
Thnk u soooo much dhar
Hey…remember me ??well my real name is wershah …
And this part is really amazing …post next one asap
Waiting for your ff ..?
Of course,,i rmmmbr u…
Thnk u wershah..
Hey…remember me ?? How are you?
And this part is really amazing …post next one asap
Waiting for your ff ..?
I m fine …thnk uu
Awesome kanfi….. Luv it…
Thnk ui bani….
It was just fabulous.Everything from mountain climbing challenge, to Rudra’s careless and mischievous act was superbbbbb. Thanks a lot kanfi for letting us have this beautiful imagination. Great work..keep going????
Thnk uu soooooo much rakveen…
Loveee uuu
Fantastic…..khidkitod part…. Loved it!
Thnk you visu..
Many funn..moments..Rudra..fire alarm…Then the conquest for the flag
Well, you had done your research well, I search for both the places that you have mentioned in the first line
They are totally amazing places..Wow, kabhi sath mein jate hai..and I am not scared of heights haha
Shivaay..wow..by cheating..But everything is fair in love and war..so chalta hai!
Som and Pri…well, girls are mad about itt..but I am not that much..haha
Now, RumYa marriage..like you add funn..I want fun..in it..
Fabulous update
Amazing and Awesome work
Loved it!
Love ya!
Firstly thnk u yr for such an appreciation….
Secondly ya i’ve searched a lot,.i’d to show n that its switzerland otherwise i’ve not gone out of my state..:-P 🙂 😛 😛
Ya ofcourse chalte h..i m also not scaree of heights…!!khoob masti krnge….
Next ff i’ll post today..
Love u toooo