Hiii everyone,,this is me kanfi here,,,i m not believing that i m going to write an ff,,this is my frst ff,,,
Firstly i m very thankful to shakaib,my TU bro,,neha,,sumitha,they encouraged me a lot,,n all lovely ff writers,,
archisha,ahaana,angela,saasha,jerry,jenny,vincy,astha,archiya,aana,sana,anu,janvi,manya,siddhi_t,anya,,,sorry if forgetting someone,,,ur ffs motivated me sooo much,,,,I know i cant write as you all,bt i’m trying my level best,,
So enough of my bakbak lets begin,,,,
Ignore any grammatical errors…?
***INTRO***
All characters r same as in serial….SHIVIKA n GAUKARA r married,,,RUMYA r engaged,,,
I’ll tell about other characters when i’ll introduce them,,,
I’ll mainly focus on SHIVIKA,,,,so sry RUMYA n GAUKARA fans,,,
My ff hasn’t any connection with serial
EPISODE__1
In OBEROI MANSION,,one of the most famous house in East Mumbai,,,
There is a sunny day…birds r chirping.winds r blowing..its 6:00 am….(i dont know how to describe the background environment,so deal with it??)
Alarm rings,,,listening alarm a man wakes up immediately n watch the clock,,,,”its 6 o’clock,again i’m late”
He goes to the bathroom,had a shower and rushes towards kitchen,,,,
He starts cooking n makes soooo many delicious food items,,,n arranged them on dining table,,,
N looked at the table n sighs n says perfect patted his shoulder,,,,
So guys he is Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…
Now he calls out everyone for breakfast.
Everyone,whole oberoi family, comes down n sit at dining table,,,(except ANIKA)
Pinky–oh my mata!!!!what happened to Shivaay,,he has cooked after 1 year,,,,I m seeing him so much happy after so many days…hope his smile never fades up…
Shivaay comes out of kitchen n wish everyone GOOD MORNING
Everyone is happy seeing happy,,,
Om—Shivaay r u fine??
Shiv—yaa Om,i’m absolutely fine,,don’t worry,,,,please everyone have breakfast,,
Saying this he goes back to kitchen
Rudra–I think shivaay bhai is just showing off happiness,,but at least he’s smiling,,i’m happy for this also,,
Om—u r right rudra,,,now we’ve to make sure he always stays like this n we should stop thinking negative things n have breakfast,,,,
All were really happy for shivaay n just then——
Shivaay entered with a trolley in which Indian breakfast was kept n he was heading towards his room,,,
Pinky–where r u going beta,,,have breakfast with us,,
Shivayy–no mom its not for me,,its for ÀNIKA..
Saying this he headed toward his room,,
Smile on everyone’s face get faded…
Pinky–we were expcting sooo much but nothing has changed n she get sad.
Shakti consoles her..
OmRu followed shivaay to his room..
At SHIVIKA room
Anika is sleeping on her bed peacefully n it seems she is in deep slumber,,
Shivaay goes towards her n sit besides her,,
Shiv–gd morning dear,,,,see I’ve brought breakfast for u,,,he caresses her face,,,,
Just then OmRu enters,,
Om–shivaay,,,,r u alright??
Shiv–yaa Om completely,,
Rudra–bhai why r u doing all this,,we cant see u like this,,
Om–yaa shivaay,,,it has been 1 year,,,n you–(cut off by shivaay)
Shiv–Om,,you know n how much i love her,,atleast u both try to understand n??
Rudra—bhai we r understanding,,but u r not,,,why don’t u do the same as doctor had said,,,,,
Shiv—Rudra(shouting),,,don’t u dare to say this,,,[by this time his eye is full of anger]….
Saying this he goes outside,,
Ru–O…i cant see bhai like this….u know n anika bhabhi is in COMA [yes ANIKA IS IN COMA] for last one year…doctor had also gave up n advice bhai to let her go..bt he isnt understanding….
Om–rudra,,u know n how much shivaay loved her….it all happened becoz of me…if that day,i didnt force annika then all this not happened…
Ru–O..its not ur mistake…now let us leave.
They both went from there…
AT NIGHT
At night,shivaay returned home n directly headed towards his room…
He sees anika n forget his all stress,,,he goes near her, sit beside her….He cupped his face n says
Shiv–ANIKA u dont need to worry ..I wont let anything happen to you…(he has tear in his eyes)
I know i couldnt save you that time..please forgive me..(tears rolled down his cheek n fall on anika’s cheek)
U rest now,i wont disturb you…
Saying this he goes towards pool side….
He sits in corner,there is darkness bt moonlight is enough to lighting that place..
He leaned against wall n stretched his leg on the floor,,his head is against wall n he is facing sky..
He starts sobbing n talking to himself.
Anika i m sorry i couldnt do anything to save you,,(tears start rolling from his eyes)
I knew ur life was in danger bt still i was so careless,,i love you very much i cant let you go,,,,plzz come back to senses..(he is crying badly,,his eyes become red,,still tears r not stopping,,,he is shedding his tears,,his sleeves are wet)
Then suddenly he wiped his tears n faces sky
*ye q kya khuda song from rocky handsome plays in background*
_KHUDA Q RUTH GYA MUJHSE_
_NAHI THA BAIR MERA TUJHSE_
_Q TUNE CHEEN LIYA MUJHSE MERA JHAN_
_AYE KHUDA_
_TU BATA_
Shiv—why god??why??why u did this to me,,,,,(yelling loudly,,,bt tears r rolling from his eyes)
Listening this OmRu rushes to his room as their rooms r just near shivika’s…so they can hear it…
Rudra was going to console shivaay bt Om stopped him n said let him cry his heart out,,he will be relieved,,,,n they went..
Shivaay is yelling again seeing sky
Shiv–you know I get my ANIKA after so many difficulties and u snatched her from me Why??
(there is a shiver in his voice of loosing his love,,pain is clearly seen on his face as well as in his voice…his tears r just rolling out..it seems he was hiding this emotion for so long)
_LE AYI HAI BEETE HUE_
_LAMHON KO PHIR HAAN YEH ZINDAGI_
_YOON BERAHAM SI HOGYI_
_LENE CHALI YE JAAN ZINDAGI_
_YE Q KYA KHUDA_
_YE Q KYA KHUDA_
_BTA MERE KHUDA_
_THI KYA MERI KHATA_
He continued….
She has so much faith on you,,she didnt anything wrong with anyone…,why did u do this to her….[here there is a movemnt in ANIKA’s body]
[His eyes has turned red as he was continously weeping]
U have done what u wanted…bt I wont let anything happen to her…i’ll get my love,my ANIKA back…
_UMMID HAI TUTI HUI_
_TANHAIYON KA DAUR HAI_
_HAI KHWAHISHEN BIKHRI HUI_
_KHAMOSHIYON KA SHOR HAI_
He slept there,,his eyes r num….n soon he went into deep slumber….
Its morning,,Shivaay’s deep slumber is disturbed by sun rays….he wakes up n rub his eyes n had a backache,,he thought….
I slept whole night over here…
He walks towards room,,,n…….he……is…..
SHOCKED…..
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Guys this is it for today….hope u all liked it…
I’ll try to post next part soon,,meanwhile u all keep guessing
*What happened to anika?
*How is Om responsible for this?
*N why was shivaay shocked??
Thnx for reading n plzzz do commnt so i get boost up..
Lots of love❤
Kanfi
116 Comments
hii kanfi..awsom start dear too gud feeling sad for shivika…eagerly waiting to know about shockness….post next part asap dear…love u
Thnx aysha..i needed this ..,i’ll try to post soon
nice
Thnx
Hi kanfi dear! ?
That was an awesome start ?.
You wrote it really well dear…
Eagerly waiting for the next part..
Post soon ?….
Thnk u soo much sofiya,,i m really glad u liked it…will try to post soon
Amazing…U write very nicely.Waiting for next.
Thnx mahek for the appreciation,,,i’ll try to post it soon
Thanks for mentioning me! You did a marvelous job writing out this. Well, a undiscovered talent. Nicely written for a first timer..Waiting for the next.Love ya dear..so muchh
U r worthy of mentioning dear o dont be thnx….i m really happy u like it..
Love u toooooo
Awesome start my dear friend..do send me links without fail…
Thnx dear..will surely send u
Pls post the next episodes today????
Awwweee tarini…i m working on this will try to post
Lovely update
Thnx dear
Lovely part
Superb epi
Waiting for the next part asap??????
Thnx dear.will try to post it soon
Loved it.. Awesome ??
Thnx arya
Kanfi I have nothing to talk with you..yaar kitna rulaya tumne mere Bhaiyya ko..lol. Thousands of hugs to Shivaay Singh Oberoi in his sorrow…Bhabhi aap wapas aajayiye hosh mein.
bhaiyya is sad sad with out you.
-Emotional Astha…
Awwwweee….i m glad that i passed to make everyone emotional,…
Yaaaa console ur bhaiya,,he has to go tough time ahead
Well Kanfi dii..
I dont know whether I will be able to comment on every chapter.. But I m liking this story..
Its an awesome start..
I think it’s going to be an emotional one..
Loved it..
Thnx manasvi,,,okk if u cant bt plzz read it,,,it is mixed emotional fun,,fun wil be in flashback
Do send me links..
Sure
Wow!!!!kanfi di…
Its amazing …sachme bohot ruladiya mere bhaiyaa ko…its ok…bhabhi ke liye toh roh bhi sakte hai…lekin mujhe bhi ruladiya…great dr loads of hugsss to u
Awwwwee thnx dear….i m so happy,,,that my emotional writing conveyed nicely…love u n lots og hugsss too
Kanfi,kAnfi, what was it??? Like seriously it’s marvellous!!! Historic!!! You have such a big hidden talent. It’s seriously awesome!!!!!I loved it!!???? And I love you ??? pls pls pls post next part today ASAP. And pls do send me the link.
Love you???
Your crazy sis,
Meher.?
Thnk u sisssssyyy…..n sooo many taariffff,,,,,hm khushi se phoook jaynge.,.,have submitted next part..willl send link when posted
Phool jao???
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Amazinggggggg!!
Fabolous!!
post soon
love u
take care
byee
Thnx ishu…i m glad u read it,,,,have submitted.will be posted soon
Amazing kanfi ..!! Honestly u did a great job..!! Nd i loved the suspense yar…keep up the great work !! Cant wait for the next one..!! Plsss post asap..!!
Thnx harsha,,i m halpy u liked it
Thnk u soooooo muchhh u read it……..i’ve posted next partt,,,,,love uuuuuu
I can feel tears on my cheeks . what an update plz do post it asap . loved it
Thnx dear….meant alot..will post today
WOW….Really good and it’s senti…..Keep on going
Thnk u sooo much dear
Kanfi dii ur writing skills are really Outstanding… i m really glad u are here wid ur ff….
as u mentioned at top that i m ur motivation but as a frnd i correct ur mistake ” U R MY MOTIVATION”.
luv uh dii…. keep writing… ?
Thnxxxx cutieee..love u….
U r also my motivation’….
Yaaaa,,,i’lll
Wow di it was amazing start feeling very sad for anika and waiting for next..Love u??
Lovee uu tooooo….glad u like it….hve sbmitted will be posted soon
Awesome start didu…continue it..i don’t know whether I’ll be able to comment in every chapter still I’ll try..loved it..
Love u dear,,,happy u liked it,,,okk wont commnt bt read it definately,,,cmmnt in alternate epi,,,
Amazing update with an interesting story. Keep it up. Update next part soon
Thnx muskan,,have submitted it’ll be posted soon
Superb start kanfi dear , lovely part ?? feeling sad for shivika , waiting for u to reveal the suspense, waiting for you to post ur next update
Thnx dhar,,,,i’ve submitted next part
Relly nice…please post soon
Thnx dear,….
I’ve submitted
nice one dear, keep on writing..
Thnx harsha,,i m halpy u liked it…
no thank u, will u read mine, its my 1 st attempt too, its titled i need u , few shots on kaira
Awesome…interesting waiting for next part post soon
Thnx dear for reading,,,,i hve submitted..
thats really awesome di!!!!!! i just loved it and its ur first ff and u wrote it sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo nicely ?????????????????
please post next as soon as possible
please post next as soon as possible
Awwwwwww nida…thnx dear….m sooo happy u liked it soooo much….i have submitted will be posted soon
no need of thanks di?
I want to comment first but I’m soo late sorry kanfi….I’m so happy to see ur ff……..story was really interesting. …..and for me also send the link plzzzz………post ur ff every day ……eagerly waiting for the next ❤❤❤❤❤??????????
Dont be sorry dear….u commnted it matters ,,,,ok i’ll send…
Have submitted next part
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb yaarrrrrrrrrrrr……………………………your ff is amazing.its not like your writing this for the first time…………ur ff made me think that ur the most experienced writer
Omg …thkn u nithu….ur commnt is overwhelming..
Thank u soo much for such beautiful words….
Loveee u
love you toooooo