Hiii everyone,,this is me kanfi here,,,i m not believing that i m going to write an ff,,this is my frst ff,,,
Firstly i m very thankful to shakaib,my TU bro,,neha,,sumitha,they encouraged me a lot,,n all lovely ff writers,,
archisha,ahaana,angela,saasha,jerry,jenny,vincy,astha,archiya,aana,sana,anu,janvi,manya,siddhi_t,anya,,,sorry if forgetting someone,,,ur ffs motivated me sooo much,,,,I know i cant write as you all,bt i’m trying my level best,,
So enough of my bakbak lets begin,,,,
Ignore any grammatical errors…?
***INTRO***
All characters r same as in serial….SHIVIKA n GAUKARA r married,,,RUMYA r engaged,,,
I’ll tell about other characters when i’ll introduce them,,,
I’ll mainly focus on SHIVIKA,,,,so sry RUMYA n GAUKARA fans,,,
My ff hasn’t any connection with serial
EPISODE__1
In OBEROI MANSION,,one of the most famous house in East Mumbai,,,
There is a sunny day…birds r chirping.winds r blowing..its 6:00 am….(i dont know how to describe the background environment,so deal with it??)
Alarm rings,,,listening alarm a man wakes up immediately n watch the clock,,,,”its 6 o’clock,again i’m late”
He goes to the bathroom,had a shower and rushes towards kitchen,,,,
He starts cooking n makes soooo many delicious food items,,,n arranged them on dining table,,,
N looked at the table n sighs n says perfect patted his shoulder,,,,
So guys he is Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi…
Now he calls out everyone for breakfast.
Everyone,whole oberoi family, comes down n sit at dining table,,,(except ANIKA)
Pinky–oh my mata!!!!what happened to Shivaay,,he has cooked after 1 year,,,,I m seeing him so much happy after so many days…hope his smile never fades up…
Shivaay comes out of kitchen n wish everyone GOOD MORNING
Everyone is happy seeing happy,,,
Om—Shivaay r u fine??
Shiv—yaa Om,i’m absolutely fine,,don’t worry,,,,please everyone have breakfast,,
Saying this he goes back to kitchen
Rudra–I think shivaay bhai is just showing off happiness,,but at least he’s smiling,,i’m happy for this also,,
Om—u r right rudra,,,now we’ve to make sure he always stays like this n we should stop thinking negative things n have breakfast,,,,
All were really happy for shivaay n just then——
Shivaay entered with a trolley in which Indian breakfast was kept n he was heading towards his room,,,
Pinky–where r u going beta,,,have breakfast with us,,
Shivayy–no mom its not for me,,its for ÀNIKA..
Saying this he headed toward his room,,
Smile on everyone’s face get faded…
Pinky–we were expcting sooo much but nothing has changed n she get sad.
Shakti consoles her..
OmRu followed shivaay to his room..
At SHIVIKA room
Anika is sleeping on her bed peacefully n it seems she is in deep slumber,,
Shivaay goes towards her n sit besides her,,
Shiv–gd morning dear,,,,see I’ve brought breakfast for u,,,he caresses her face,,,,
Just then OmRu enters,,
Om–shivaay,,,,r u alright??
Shiv–yaa Om completely,,
Rudra–bhai why r u doing all this,,we cant see u like this,,
Om–yaa shivaay,,,it has been 1 year,,,n you–(cut off by shivaay)
Shiv–Om,,you know n how much i love her,,atleast u both try to understand n??
Rudra—bhai we r understanding,,but u r not,,,why don’t u do the same as doctor had said,,,,,
Shiv—Rudra(shouting),,,don’t u dare to say this,,,[by this time his eye is full of anger]….
Saying this he goes outside,,
Ru–O…i cant see bhai like this….u know n anika bhabhi is in COMA [yes ANIKA IS IN COMA] for last one year…doctor had also gave up n advice bhai to let her go..bt he isnt understanding….
Om–rudra,,u know n how much shivaay loved her….it all happened becoz of me…if that day,i didnt force annika then all this not happened…
Ru–O..its not ur mistake…now let us leave.
They both went from there…
AT NIGHT
At night,shivaay returned home n directly headed towards his room…
He sees anika n forget his all stress,,,he goes near her, sit beside her….He cupped his face n says
Shiv–ANIKA u dont need to worry ..I wont let anything happen to you…(he has tear in his eyes)
I know i couldnt save you that time..please forgive me..(tears rolled down his cheek n fall on anika’s cheek)
U rest now,i wont disturb you…
Saying this he goes towards pool side….
He sits in corner,there is darkness bt moonlight is enough to lighting that place..
He leaned against wall n stretched his leg on the floor,,his head is against wall n he is facing sky..
He starts sobbing n talking to himself.
Anika i m sorry i couldnt do anything to save you,,(tears start rolling from his eyes)
I knew ur life was in danger bt still i was so careless,,i love you very much i cant let you go,,,,plzz come back to senses..(he is crying badly,,his eyes become red,,still tears r not stopping,,,he is shedding his tears,,his sleeves are wet)
Then suddenly he wiped his tears n faces sky
*ye q kya khuda song from rocky handsome plays in background*
_KHUDA Q RUTH GYA MUJHSE_
_NAHI THA BAIR MERA TUJHSE_
_Q TUNE CHEEN LIYA MUJHSE MERA JHAN_
_AYE KHUDA_
_TU BATA_
Shiv—why god??why??why u did this to me,,,,,(yelling loudly,,,bt tears r rolling from his eyes)
Listening this OmRu rushes to his room as their rooms r just near shivika’s…so they can hear it…
Rudra was going to console shivaay bt Om stopped him n said let him cry his heart out,,he will be relieved,,,,n they went..
Shivaay is yelling again seeing sky
Shiv–you know I get my ANIKA after so many difficulties and u snatched her from me Why??
(there is a shiver in his voice of loosing his love,,pain is clearly seen on his face as well as in his voice…his tears r just rolling out..it seems he was hiding this emotion for so long)
_LE AYI HAI BEETE HUE_
_LAMHON KO PHIR HAAN YEH ZINDAGI_
_YOON BERAHAM SI HOGYI_
_LENE CHALI YE JAAN ZINDAGI_
_YE Q KYA KHUDA_
_YE Q KYA KHUDA_
_BTA MERE KHUDA_
_THI KYA MERI KHATA_
He continued….
She has so much faith on you,,she didnt anything wrong with anyone…,why did u do this to her….[here there is a movemnt in ANIKA’s body]
[His eyes has turned red as he was continously weeping]
U have done what u wanted…bt I wont let anything happen to her…i’ll get my love,my ANIKA back…
_UMMID HAI TUTI HUI_
_TANHAIYON KA DAUR HAI_
_HAI KHWAHISHEN BIKHRI HUI_
_KHAMOSHIYON KA SHOR HAI_
He slept there,,his eyes r num….n soon he went into deep slumber….
Its morning,,Shivaay’s deep slumber is disturbed by sun rays….he wakes up n rub his eyes n had a backache,,he thought….
I slept whole night over here…
He walks towards room,,,n…….he……is…..
SHOCKED…..
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Guys this is it for today….hope u all liked it…
I’ll try to post next part soon,,meanwhile u all keep guessing
*What happened to anika?
*How is Om responsible for this?
*N why was shivaay shocked??
Thnx for reading n plzzz do commnt so i get boost up..
Lots of love❤
Kanfi
116 Comments
So sad of shivay!!!!! But superb start dr…..and do post soon oly then ll get all the answers I guess
Thnks arthi…
You have to wait for all the answers,,,i’ve submitted next partt,,will be posted soon
Wow.. Di I tnk I have read ur comments on TU page before .. But this ff naa thoda naaahi very emotional n I hope everything becomes alright .. Waiting 4 the next ..
Thnx dear,..yaaa it was,,,soon it will change into funny one…have submitteed nxt part,,will be post soon
It is awesome dear.. And wlcm in the world of tu ff writer….
I will be regular at the end of may… So please forgive me…
Thnxxx for welcming me dear….no problem…i’ll wait for h
No words to say just awesome fabulous spetaculous and everything
It’s really fantastic loved it a lot eagerly and enthusiastically waiting for next part
Thnk u soooo much dear ..,really meant alot…have submitted next part will be posted soon
U made my bhai cry too much?????? but it’s awesome di.keep writing
Love u dear..u read it meant alot….next parts will be not like that,,the flashback one
Awesome…
Such an emotional update…
waiting fr d nxt… 🙂
Thnx dear…i’ve already submitted
Superbbbbb just amazinggggg…………yaarrr
I m very happy u read it..loveeee uuuuu..ab pura prhna..,,chorna mt beech m,,,,wrna i’ll beat u
Okkk myyy dearest knfi…. How much interesting story, off course….. I will read all episode ??????
It was just awsm i loved it pls post nxt epi today plsss i am not able to wait
Thnx dear..i have sub,itted it..it-ll be posted soon
Its awesome dr..keep writing!!!! waiting for next one…love u loads dr..all d best!!!
Thnx dear,,,,it meant slot..
Superbb start kanfi
Thnx dear
Superb
Thnk u
Hey Kanfi !! Thank you for mentioning my name, I am glad you are inspired and coming to the chapter its amazing. Truly fantastic. Good work❤
Thnk u so much dear meant alot….
N u dont need to say thnx,,,ur piece of work deserves this appreciation
Asum part
Thnk u dear..
Hey kanfi it was fabulous I loved it waiting for ur next episode
Thnk you so much….next part is posted do read it
awesome i loved it really feeling sad for anika and this episode makes me emotional
Thnx angela..,i m glad it touched ur heart
Amazing n beautiful…
Thnx dear
Fabulous, sorry for late comment
Thnk u dearr..dont b sryy,,,happ u liked it
di sry for being late…awesome start…superb.waiting for next……love uuuuuu
Thnk u dear…,dnt be sryy
Hey kanfi this is the first Ib ff where i am commenting…lol…though u know that there tons of ffs in this forum…so i gets confused…Anywayzz….
Unique start…❤…Really the first episode was Emotional n too Gooood…Keep continuing…??
Thnk u sooo much dear,.means alot
I m happy u read it
kanfi this was so gud! Just loved this.Seeing shivaay like this is heart wrenching! But what was the cause for all this and why Om was telling that he was responsible for all this? Please do enlighten me with all this soon in the coming updates,Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Love yaa,
-Anya : )
Thnx anya,,,
U read it’,,it really meant alot,,,,
Thnk u soo much,,,
To know all the reasonss,,stay tunedd
just awesome!! loved it!!
Thnx dear…
Next parts r published do read..
https://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Wow!! Its Awesome Di!! Amazing part!! I guess Anika became well!!. Did you post the next chapter? If yes, do inform me Di…Love you Di!!
Thnx dear,,,,
Yaa i’ve posted,,,n send u the link too..
Great start…
Thnx dear,,,do read next parts,,i’ve posted
AOA Kanfi…its so Awesome.. I loved it dear. I have never read any ff on any other couple other than SwaSan.. This is the first one and its only for u….u wrote it so well..
May Allah bless you..
Thnk u sioo much ayesha…
I m ver happy,, u liked it….
Lovee u….
May allah bless u too–
I’ve posted next part too’,hope u’ll like it
https://www.tellyupdates.com/user/9956/?profiletab=posts
Really lovely first time to read another ff but yours really amazing ? keep it up ??