Hi GUYS THIS IS SUNANDA AND IAM BACK WITH MY FF
I LOVE YOU FOREVER….U R IN MY HEART….with episode 23
Tq for u r comments. …
RECAP-atharv dadi cames 2 palace…and said about rasam..vitharv wins…
——————-EPISODE 23——————-
(Atharv asks vivida for the 10 kisses…..vivida puts her hand around his shoulders and gives kisses on cheeks and forehead…..)
VIVIDA-happy…Mr.atharv
ATHARV-hahaha…y are you asking like that
VIVIDA-when a girl will give this much kisses 2 man..he will definitely happy….
ATHARV-if u give one kiss with more luv…it will me like 1000 kisses
VIVIDA-atharv……u r totally different
(They both smiles…..)
AFTER SOME TIME…..
(Every one are busy in selecting their costumes for marriage..atharv feels bores and an idea rools in his brain….)
(Suddenly light gets dim…every one shocks and shouts some one cheeks the light….)
(A music plays…light gets dark…atharv cames in a mass dress…of wearing printed flower shirt and tored jeans with rubbed hair…tieying aa Cloth 2 his hand…wearing colourful googoles)
GANDI BATT MUSIC PLAYS FROM BACKGROUND
(every one gets shocked seeing mass avtar of atharv….)
(He dances of GANDI BATT song….every one enjoying his dance..Later vivida also joins in his dance…..all are dancing happily….)
(Later vivida cames wearing a shirt and pant wearing lungi with black googoles and dances with LUNGI DANCE song……)
(Everyone dances and enjoying…..)
(Later one man call 2 vivida……..)
VIVIDA-hello….
MAN-hello…vivida (romantically )
VIVIDA-who’s This….
MAN-ohh nooo u did not recognise me…soo sad
VIVIDA-say who u r or else i will cut the phone…..
MAN-ohhh vivida….itna Gussa…..ok.i send you one video watch it bye…..
(Vivida checks the phone and gets shocked…)
VIVIDA-my dress changing video …..
(The man calls again..)
MAN -Hey vivida how is the video…if u marry atharv I will keep this video in youtube..u r atharv will watch it daily…..(he smiles…..)
VIVIDA-wt do you want…
MAN -ohhhh…vivida..i want 2 marry you..baby..
VIVIDA-the man who played with lady emotions and feeling and insulted her respect..i want 2 marry that guy…never and ever….i will only marry atharv…
MAN -think deeply baby…no speed byee
(Vivida cries..atharv cames behind her and asks why she is crying….)
VIVIDA-ntg atharv dust particle…fell in eye..now it’s fyn…
ATHARV-ok come have dinner….
IT’S NIGHT…..
(Vivida thinks how 2 say this matter 2 atharv…)
PRECAP-atharv asks vivida wt’s the matter….vivida narrates whole story….atharv calls 2 him and warns him….
————————–END——————–
SO GUYS THIS IS EPISODE 23
SRY FOR GRAMITICAL MISTAKES GUYS….
HAVE A NYC DAY GUYS….??
15 Comments
good keep writing dear Thoko!!!!! haa!!! thoko!!!
Tq sooooo much yar ??
what a twist!..
waiting to know the man’s identity…
really waiting for next episode..
keep writing…
fantastic job sunanda…
Tq sooooo much dear ??
Really nice di…gandi baat and lungi dance ??
Want to see atharv punching his face ???
Tq sooooo much dear ??
I loved the dance scenes… oh god if i could watch it in onscreen…. waiting for the next epi…yaar pls.. post it soon…
Yes..even i imagine while iam writing their dance performance…tq sooooo much dear ??
just amazing fabulous wow and many more it was so nice episode keep writing di and yes hope I would get a chance to see the whole ff onscreen
Tq sooooo much dear ??
Really NYC episode dear it’s becoming more interesting day by day keep writing ??????????
Tq sooooo much dear ??
Sunanda today u didn’t write ur ff deadly waiting for ur next episode dear ????????????
Sree iam surrounded by relatives..if i have tym I will write
Ok thank u dear???????