I just remember some of the characters in Serial world, I think I love them unlimited….
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“What is happening here??”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi asked his khidkitod beautiful wife Annika,” who are they all??”.
“Oh ho Shivaay shant ho jaiye”- Annika threatened her husband ,” They are all my friends”.
“Namaste Shivaayji”- A girl with red Anarkali dress, folded her hands with the most charming smile on her lips as well as eyes greeted him,”hum Khushi hai”.
“Shivaayji…”- Annika teased,”breaking news of the century…The great businessman of Mumbai Shivaay Singh Oberoi is now Shivaayji instead of Biluji…”
“Shut up Annika!”- Shivaay rolled his eyes.
“I am Zoya”- Another girl smiled showing her front row of beautiful white shinning teeth, clad in a pair of jeans and a loose top,” Mrs. Zoya Asad Ahmed Khan”.
“Oh..Miss Farooque to Mrs. Khan”- Annika eyed her husband,” Shivaay..She looks exactly like Mallika hey na”.
” I don’t know”- Shivaay flinched at mention of his happily married ex- gf in front of some unknown girl more over comparison, no…a big wala NO…..,” You should know Mallika better then me”.
“Now you shut up and be in hell”- Annika shouted and pushed him out of pool area where all the girls are present.
“I am in hell already as I am with you”- Shivaay muttered,” Damn women..here I am early home to spend some time and she…”.
“I heard that curse Shivaay”- Annika smiled at her friends, no one felt awkward as all are same type and dialed Rudra’s number,” Rudra..Go and call Gouri here”.
” Ok Annika bhabhi”- Rudra cut the call, and went in search of his Gouri Bhabhi,” Boom!!”.
“Bhabhi…”- Rudra hugged that girl ,” your Bhaujai is calling you to poolside”.
“Who the hell are you and what is this bhaujai??”- the girl almost screamed,” I am Aastha.. Aastha Shlok Agnihotri, I came here to meet Annika Shivaay Singh Oberoi”.
Rudra has nothing more to say so he pointed to the poolside door pouting as this is first time some one scolded him and went to call his Gouri bhabhi”.
” Chandni still didn’t came here”- Annika counted ,” Khushi, Aastha, Gouri, Zoya…”.
“Arnav, Shlok, Omkara, Asad “- Shivaay counted as he was standing at the glass door of pool side now with some other men ,all in same three piece suit looking handsome then always with their perfectly gelled hairs,” We will also make our angry young men club like their khidkitod raita club”.
“Wo bhi har harai ke”- Omkara supported his brother.
“We will start by praying Devi maiyya and then Jalebi prasad”- Arnav forgot he is atheist with diabetes.
“I will give pizza party today evening”-Asad promised,” you all can enjoy pizza carelessly on my bed”( just like miss Farooque!! wink wink).
“Bhaujai..”- Gouri chirped, ” here come our guest of honour Chandni!!”…
“Chandni..oh meri Chandni”- Khushi posed to dance step, all ready for some thumka,” come and sit here”.
Chandni sat all silent, then opened her mouth,” why did you all call me here so urgently Annika?”
“Allah Miyyan,What is wrong with you Chandni!!”- Zoya hit her forehead dramatically,” here we all are worried for a perfect audience loving love story for you and Advay but you are ergh!!!”.
“Dhanyabad Zoya”- Khushi prayed,” hey Devi maiyya..please help Advayji and Chandniji”.
“Let us plan some khidkitod tricks for a perfect love story”- Annika proposed,” all please listen here, Chandni you must listen this”.
“Rule no.1- you have to meet Advay in some Khidkitod way for your first meeting, spread some raita in his heart, I broke Car glass with my first meeting with Shivaay”.
“I broke his whole car with a bulldozer”- Gouri remembered,” Omkaraji was so shocked at my guts”.
“I was running away from my own marriage with Anwar and meet Mr. Khan on my way”- Zoya disclosed,” wow..That flower shower on us was just amazing”.
“I spoiled his fashion show in Sheeshmahal, Lucknow”-,Khushi smiled at that bitter sweet memory ,” you have to take this trend as audience love this more”.
“Ok..I will try this for sure”- Chandni nodded her head.
“Rule no.2 – You should be smart but your educational qualification should be less and very smart”.
” I am exception in that case”- Aastha opposed,” I think Zoya too is “.
“I am trying to make a rough diagram to super hit love story Here and you are putting logic”- Annika shut her mouth up,” Aastha, you have even parents which we don’t have”.
“Mrs. Oberoi just leave your that Name, blood, lineage formula behind”- Aastha tuck her hair behind ear,” effect of Shivaay Singh Oberoi”.
” Shlok is either not broad minded, he was against women education and equal right once upon a time”- Zoya sat cross legged now,” And Mr. Khan was always behind my lihaaz and tameez”.
“Arnavji aise nahi the..nahi ab bai”- Khushi supported her husband,” he is just like his name..Arnav..Ocean”.
“So pure and child like who doesn’t know to express himself”- Khushi praised enough.
“Rule no.3- Two more girl are needed to as your half southan that is girl friend of your hero”- Annika said,” Like Tia and Ragini”.
“Like Lavanyaji and Sheetalji”- Khushi too said.
“Swati and Gayathri”- Aastha agreed this time
“Riddhima, Ishana and Swetlana”- Gouri dreamed of her husband’s ex.
“Tanveer was a dangerous witch so..one was enough for half soutan role”- Zoya sighed.
“Rule no.4- you have to keep funny names for Advay”- Gouri gave the rule,” I named Omkaraji as jatadhari hippi and Nandi”.
“Shivaay is always the kanji ankhen wala bhagad Billa and Billuji for me”- Annika opened her known secret,” and Pati parmeswar”.
“I call Arnavji as Swami and Ladgoverner”- Khushi played with her pum pum ,” Rakshas too”.
“Mr. Akhod Ahmed Khan, Jahan panah six pack”- Zoya concluded,” and many more names”.
” Rule.5- you have to be prepare for his accusation, anger and misunderstanding”- Aastha whispered,” he will spit all the venum and anger on you and only you”.
“Arnavji accused me of a relation with his brother in law, Shyam Manohar Jha”- Khushi cried at this sad memory,” a middle class gold digger”.
” Shivaay did the same accusation with his friend”- Annika too cried at the thought of that particular thought,” Daksh Khurana”.
“Kaali Thakur”- Gouri too have tears on her doe like eyes.
“The horrible mistake of a love story”- Shivaay said, Arnav and Omkara lost their voice,” love with out trust is horrible!!”.
” This many rule for today is enough I think”- Annika ended her love class ,” Now happy break time, Chandni I hope you will apply all these rule”.
“I think, I will try them”- Chandni left her shy silent nature now,” I will talk with others about this “.
” Pinky Promise”- All the girls shouted.
“Pinky Promise”- Chandni inter wined her little finger with Annika.
“Don’t forget about the forced marriage part”- Khushi suggested,” be prepared for a forced marriage with Advayji”.
” Lets enjoy now”- Girls then started their ladies party.
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“Girls are helping her and you all are of no help”- Advay complained,” give some tips to me now”.
“There is no tips yaar”- Shivaay hugged him for a consolation.
“All you have to do is show your anger on her to hide your love and then shower her with your real love”- Arnav suggested.
“Just maintain the angry young man character”-Omkara looked nice with his opened hair,” baki sab Cvs sambhal lenge”.
” Should I trust the cvs??”- Advay doubted,” I trust myself and audience”.
” We know that ASR”- Shlok ruffled his hair for making more messy,” you are Advay..unique”.
“I am ASR”- Arnav show the copy right copy to all,”And ASR is one”.
“Saahil calls me SSO”- Shivaay muttered under his breath,” I don’t have any proof now except for Om”.
“We know that”- others shouted.
“As you said I am unique”- Advay gae result ,” I will try to make some other type of love story for me and Chandni”.
” You can’t do any thing”- Asad mocked,” better bribe the cvs from today”.
“Iss pyaar ko kya naam doon??”- Advay asked the million dollar question.
“Time, test or accusation”- Arnav suggested,” wait for an answer “.
“I have no other way”- Advay agreed,” I have to wait for the answer”.
“So many pair of look alike inside Oberoi Mansion- Rudra felt unconscious.
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Superb episode, plzz post the next update ASAP
Dhar… thank you dear but this is one shot clearly written on its title so no next part is there. Hope you will adjust with it.
First,welcome back di.I missed ur ff’s and os and u too.Kah chali gyi thi.And about this u r amazing di.What an idea di.Rules- what a coincidence bw all story.
Mehak…Rules for love. They can break it , even you can break yaar(wink wink). Thanks dear. I tried to use two more characters but space was limited…One more favourite couple of mine..”Maan and Geet”.
I will be back soon. Love you.
Wow Astha baby….this was amazing…..I loved this as well…..N the last line was a bang on……U make me feel short of words every time…..
Nita..aww..dear, I am super happy as I am your baby now, just the possession Arpita held while calling me “Baby”. It felt like being loved. Thanks, Love you too unlimited.
Oh….I didn’t know that….Hope Arpita won’t mind this…..
And so from now, u r officially my baby….
Official Baby..Haww..your personal deal with Arpita.
indeed an amazing one
Sairish…Glad meeting you here. Thank you dear.
thanks for the welcome di…
Amazing os
Thanks Alekhika dear.
Astha di….it was beyond awesome…. u have pointed out all the similarities between the shows…u r just fabulous… loved it…
Zaveesha dear…Thank
Welcome Back Astha….very nice and happy OS …read your work after a really long time and felt so very happy…awesome as usual…waiting for your next writing very eagerly….
I WAS SO EXCITED TO POST MY OPINION THAT I POSTED THIS OPINION ON SOMEOTHER OS…
so confusing of me !!!
Haarika… that much excitement!!! Aww… Thanks yaar. Awesome cute pretty dp.
off course all IB readers missed you and i am no exception and thank you dear for the compliments on DP…DP is of my daughter when she was one and a half year old.
Haarika… I know that she is your daughter…itna pretty jo hai(logic lol).
I too miss pkj like heaven because life with out my amazing pkj family is more dangerous then hell.
It is awesome dii… My lovely ashu dii.. Aap kaha chali gyi thi.. I miss you so much….
Nikku… I love you. I will be back soon.
Nice and diffrent
Preethi…Happy meeting you dear.
Thank you .
Astha dear ….tumne to phirse dil jeet liya??
Rane…Hawww..thank you. So..Tumhara Dil ab mera hai..lol.
@asthababy. …..am i dreaming. ……… peheli line se toh pata chalgayi thi that it was you….but kahan chalu gayi thi….pkj main kitna miss kiya maine tumhe….plz come back to pkj..
And this is awesome. …
Love you soooooo much. .loads of hug….
Arpita…Happy “Ratha Yatra”. I am always in your thought so…miss me never…. we are friends forever..Love you a lot . Hug you tight…
Awww astha is back with bang?
Welcome back astha
U know I found this was urs after I read the second line
It was amazing yaar
And I don’t know much about IPKkND2 but I enjoy ur Os today ?????
Nila…I too don’t know much about these serials except for ipkknd and Ishqbaaz. I just know small bit of their love stories. It was just my crazy thought to make you all relaxed. Hope you enjoy it.
WELCOME BACK diiiii! I don’t know anything about IPKKND 2, QH but I know lil about IPKKND. But I really enjoyed it di. Especially rule no. 1 &3….LOL! Plz update Alien feelings ff di.
How r u di?
Whole pkj missed u. Ur comment, SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI……I missed it very much!! Come back to our pkj di!! We are waiting for u…..
Gayathri…Will be back soon in my usual way “Shivaay Singh Oberoi” . Today only I saw episodes of this week and will try to watch it from Monday. I too Love my pkj family. Love you all…
Hey Sarah that was Khidkitod. Loved it.
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Sorry dear. It was Astha. However my mobile corrected it to Sarah. Sorry about it dear.
Where did you disappear Di??
But now you have come, and with a bang… This one was just amazing as it had two of my all time favorites-Shivika and Asad and Zoya…..Mere toh Kaan Taras Gaye the ‘Allah Miyan, what’s wrong with you’ sunne ke liye??? The rules were just WOW and almost true for all the serials….Two Shrenus and two Baruns would have been so cool…. I don’t know if IPKKND3 has started or not but if it starts, it’s going to follow the same rules , I am sure….coz it’s by Gul Khan….And I forgot…. Tanveer ?? she really was dangerous and what would happen if she met Kamini and both were against each other….so fun to watch their catfight…but only in imagination ?.
I’m waiting for Alien feelings Di….
Tanz…”Allah miyan what is wrong with you Mr. Khan” is my favourite dialogue too. Thank me Tanz. that Only Asad and Zoya came to Oberoi mansion from Qubool hai, if Haya too came along with them means Shivaay bhaiyya ki brain ki gangaram pakka..”Meri Annika gungi bhainrri hogayi!!”..lol
Sry aastha dear..i really dont have any idea abt ur new writing..sryy
Wow…all my dashing heroes and sweet heroines are all here(except zain and aaliyaa..i know these r all gul.khnas sweet bachas..but somewhere i felt like having them also..my zaaya) .
Awesome tips and yeah..must and shld rules are perfect.
Many look alikes…hahaha poor Rudy fainted .
Its just lovable and soo cute one aastha..loved it.
Navya…I too like Aaliya and Zain. I saw that show “Beintehaan” too as it has Visesh Vanshal( Aarav Arnav Singh Raizada from ipkknd) in it on the last episode. Well I saw it in rishtey channel as “Salam-e- Ishq” after watching the last episode on Colors.
I just mention about all similar story line of typical Gul Khan show even if ipkknd-2 is not a 4-lion production house show. Harshad Arora is a sweet heart. I watched Dahleez upto some episodes for him . So many looks alike , fainting is a must for us too like Rudra bhaiyya lol…
WOs aasthu gaaru! Very very unique..
I totally enjoyed reading it!
A superb write up on typical Gul serials!! 3 pcs suit men, khidkithod entries, nick names, forced maariages…
Haven’t watched QH or ipkknd2 so cudn relate to couple of pts..
I felt great getting reminded abt lad gavarner and Jilebi
Let’s see how ipkknd 3 turns out…
Awesome job gal!!
Anu…It seems I am promoting for “Ipkknd-3” in telly updates. First I wrote “The best Anniversary gift” and now this OS. I am turning out to be crazy for ASR.
Thanks Anu.
Nothing wrong! Stay crazy!! ?
Ohhh astha…
Again an epic OS…..
Alll gul’s chand in one frame….welcoming ipkknd3
Ammmmazing concept,….loved this…..
Saare nick names,,ajibo garib used words….purani mmry taaza hogyi….
Awwwwsmee
Thanks Kanfi. I was excited for Advayji and ipkknd so this crazy idea came to my insane brain.