Heyy guys, so i have been writing an os but its really long, i was going to just make it a ff but i want it to be an os. So what do u guys suggest would u mind reading a long os or shall i split it into two parts and also i am really upset becuase i am not getting as much comments as i used to. Appreciation is what keeps me going.
The party continues it gets crouded while everyone dance and play with the baby.
Krishna: maasi have u seen saiyam, idk where he went
Bhavnaa: nai, have u checked in his room
Krishna: i checked everywhere, i also tried to call him but he didnt answer
Bhavnaa: okay i will try look for him to and u go tell yuvraaj
Krishna: haan daidu might know
Krishna went round asking everyone but saiyam was no where to be seen
Baby was in disguise at the party and she to herslef: krishna oh krishna tumhe toh nahi milega tumahra pyaar. I have hidden him in a place so close to u but so far from ur brain. See now jub tum apne kamre mein jounge he will see u he will hear u but u wont be able to see him and u wont be able to hear him.
While the part was going on and baby was admiring her plan saiyam was being kidnapped. Goons had snatched him from the crowd. He was blinded by a cloth and tied with a rope put in a chair
Saiyam:who are all of u, untie me rite now
Goons:areyy yaar i think we should take his cloth if thats when he will get the real suprise
Goon2: haan take it of
The goons took of the cloth and quickly left and locked the door
Saiyam opened his eyes
Saiyam: where am i or yeh mera kamra.
Saiyam saw hi self sitting infront of a window that showed him his room
He looked around and saw the room he was in it was damp dirty and cold all brocken and abandoned
Saiyam: is this the mirror, i can see the bed the door the window the couch but i cant see the wall where the wardrobe is meaning i am behind this window
Saiyam was shocked thinking about how he never knew there was a room behind his window
Saiyam: bur who put me here who kidnapped me, everyone must be woried krishna would have definitely realised i am not there
Saying this the other scene is shown
Krishna: daisu i think that saiyam really is missing his phone was on the dining table and the gaurds didnt see anyone go out.
Yuvaaj:krishna dehko voh milgay ga, i think you need to send all the guest home
Suhani: i think to
They were now going round and sending the guest home
Baby in mind:oh god there sending all of them home i will i do the next part of my plan, nai i will hide in the store room for now.
Baby made her way to the store room and akl the guests went home
Krishna collapsed on the couch and started crying: yeh hamesha q hota hai q bagwaan mere saat bura karte hai
Suhani sat down and started to console krishna
Bhavnaa:yuvraaj i think this is all babys work
Yuvraaj: kasai i have hired guards who are very professional and they didnt see anything
Bhavnaa: toh per koi plan hoga na uska voh larki bohut chalak hai
Yuvraaj: muje be shaak hai uska
Yuvraaj: suhani krishna needs rest now all this tension isnt good for her
Suhani: haan i think i will put krishna to sleep
Both of them went to her room
Suhani sat down krishna ans gave her water
Suhani: krishna saiyam will come back we will all find him
Krishna: anutie the guards are saying he didnt go anywhere so where is he and maasi and daidu are saying that this all could be baby that means that she came in disguise and she left with disguise as well and she must have done something to baby
Saiyam heard this and was thinking: baby ka kaam hai yeh sab
Saiyam started screaming and shouting
Saiyam:maaa i am here maaa
Saiyam was thinking:i can hear them but they cant hear me i can see them but they cant see me of course
Suhani tried to lie down krishna but with fail krishna was much to worried to think about rest
Suhani:krishna please yeh tumhare liye acha nahi hai, ur baby needs rest to
Krishna sat down and suhani left after Being called by pratima
Krishna cried badly
A while later she calmed down
Krishna: ronne sai toh kuch nahi hoga, per mein or kya karoon saiyam plase come back
Saiyam: krishna mejn hoon yahan so close to u
Saiyam mept talking knowing she couldnt hear him
Krishna: saiyam please come back i cant live without u, mein tumhare bina nahi chalsakte zindagi meh, i will die without u
Tears came out of saiyams eyes hearing this
Krishna: how can i take care of ur child without u
Krishna was crying badly
Saiyam fekt help,ess all tied up behind this mirror
A few hours went by the police had come and baby started her next part of the plan
Baby: ab is plan ka be apna mazaa hai
Baby applied a mask making her look as if she is yuvaani
Baby was disguised and she went in
Baby: krishna kasi ho tum
Krishna: yuvaani how can i be fine, daidu ko pata chala hai
Baby: nahi papa ko nahi per muje kuch mila hai
Krishna: kya mila hai yuvaani
Baby: saiyam ran away its nothing to do with baby
Saiaym was shocked: yeh yuvaani ko kya hoga hai
Baby: acctualy i found this letter he wrote
Saiyam: what! I didnt write any letter
Krishna read it outloud
Krishna: when will u walk out my life i am so sick of acting like i love u and all this husband drama, I actually am so sick of u, ur fat ur annoying ur so possessive and i just have had enough of it, o cared fir u knly becayse u were carrying my child but i give up with that to u can keep ur child, just get married again ir something because i really cant u. I hope u find this letter where i hid it under where u were sitting, and never try to find me again.
Saiyam eyes were filled: meine nahi socha na lika us letter ko, and i know that yuvami would never show something like this to krishna and she would have come with karam to discuss something this bad, u kniw what this isnt yuvaani, meri behn asai kar hi nahi sakti, yeh baby hai, isne yuvaani ka mask pehna hua hai, agar yeh yuvaani thi toh meera bi hoigi
Krishna was crying so badly
Krishna: yeh kasai hosacta hai, agar saiyam mujse itni nafraat karta tha toh per yeh bacha yeh bacha kasai aya
baby: krishna do u think that what baby said to u in the hospital might be true
Krishna looked shocked: nahi yuvaani, muje mere saiyam ka pura barosa hai and i l know he could never think such he loves me so much yuvaani yeh letter koi guest nai chora hoga
baby: tumhara naam hai ispe
Baby then left and left krishna shocked
Both krishna and saiyam were crying both helpless
SAiaym: how can u believe that i dont like u Krishna please kepe ur trust forme
Krishna: how could i be believing something like that i trust saiyam a lot its like jab saiyam ko shaak hua tha bache ke upar jab unse fake report pari thi. Or voh galat tha