Hello guys….i am alekhya (alku) today I am posting my first os on account of international women’s day,guys this os is love story and this is my first trial,so tell your views frankly and give me suggestions to improve.i hope you all like my trial.so lets go to story::
A large room is shown,in one side of room, a craddle and different baby toys ,soft toys are arranged beautifully.on otherside a couch and dressing table is fitted.on one side of wall there are numerous photos of a boy and girl with different poses are hanged,in middle of these pics a large picture of that couple is placed making it more beautiful.in middle of room a king sized bed is there,on it a lady of md twenties is sitting with angry pout,she is holding her baby bump with one hand,she is talking with her baby…no no she is complaining abt her husband”you know baby your papa is always busy with his office work,today also he left early without even informimg me bcoz I am sleeping is that a reason ???(angry) let him come we won’t talk to him , sanskar be ready for trouble (she smirked angrily)
Yes she is our swara,she is six months pregnant baby responds to her talks by kicking,ouch swara let out a soft shout,you are on your papa’s side na,carassed her baby bump lovingly,you know he loves us lot,he never misses a chance to make us happy,he cares abt us lot but always gets busy with his office(pouts) and I am missing him now(sadly),baby do you wanna hear mumma,papa’s love story (excitedly)
Baby again responses with a kick,aaaah she scremed,ok let me tell you our beautiful love story,she begins to tell,her memories rewind to past
(guys I explain our swasan love story in third person pov)
Flashback
“swara and sanskar are studying in same schol,sanskar is rich,handsome guy and topper in studies.he is studious boy in school.whereas swara belongs to middle class family,with average looks,average in study with gud friends circle,she is shy,calm,sensitive girl with good heart she always help others.swara had crush on Sanskar from first she sees him but nobody knows this,sanskar never notices her as he is all busy himself burying in books.it is last few days in their schooling as they are going to appear 10th board exams after few weeks.sanskar always keeps himself busy by stuyding,his goal is to top in school,swara on other hand enjoys with her friends and also studies,she always keeps balancing between studies and other activities.one day she is playing truth or dare with her friends,while playing she opted for dare,her friends knowing abt her character thought to tease her,so they asked swara to propose a guy,swara doen’t accept but they adamant on their decision, finding no other way she agreed to do so and asked them to whom she have to propose,they point to sanskar who is sitting little away from them studying sincerely and peacefully. swara was shocked seeing him,she can’t deny her friends also, doesn’t want to lose her dare,seeing no options to escape,she proceeded to him. she thought to herselfshe will asksorry from him and explain everything to him later thinking so she went to him and stand near him, he did not even looked at her, gaining courage with shaking voice she called him,
Swara: ex..excuse…me
Sanskar lift his face and see her,he gave puzzled look like who r u?
He never notice her not only her but no other girls he is such a magnet to books.(how can somebody like this eat books,drink books,breathe books,sleep books uffff)
Swara with feeble voice says “I love you”
Sanskar looks horrified he got 1000 volts shock.he got very angry on her firstly for disturbing him and secondly for uttering nonsense.he shouted at her with top of his voice,insulted her about her studies,looks,and her economic status(though he is studious he is also proud about his looks and status).she felt very humilitated, she never thought that he think like this about her, also she didn’t expect this type of behavior from him. All students there are looking at them, she feels embarrassed and immediately run away from there crying.
Her friends who saw all this becomes angry on him,they thought to tease her but never hurt her,they went to sanskar and explained how they gave her dare,how she refused,how they provoked,also tells him that she is sensitive.they lashes at him,for his behavior and went away angrily.he felt very guilty for his behavior and thought to ask sorry but he does not find her.this goes on,he everyday looks for her but disappointed for not finding her.actually swara stayed in home and preparing for exams as they are no classes in school as only few days left for exams.she doesnot want to face anyone in school after that incident,she felt embarrassed and humiliated ,only her friends meet her and ask forgiveness from her,she forgave them as it is not their mistake, time flies finally exam days .swasan both are deeply engrossed in studies,they were writing their exams well,it was their final exam day sanskar decided to meet swara and say sorry to her at any cost,after exam he was searching for swara, but she already left ,he felt very bad as this was last chance to ask her forgiveness, he too left from there sadly. Swara on other hand sees sanskar secretly while he is writing exams, she knows today is last day she see him after that they can’t see each other, she felt sad as she going to miss Sanskar forever tears brimmed in her eyes she leaves from there hurriedly as it becomes difficult for her to control. though she was hurt by his words but she didn’t get angry on him as she loves him.
Both swasan parted their ways and went away following their respective goals and passions.time passes days to months months to years. now swasan was 23 years old. swara was no more shy and sensitive, she is bold and confident with breathtaking looks. as years passed everything changes in swara but her feeling for Sanskar remains same, her crush turns into a pure love, her love increases day by day, though she knows she never meet him, see him but still she want him to be happy wherever he is, deep inside heart she wants to see him once. (such a pure soul).she move to Kolkata from delhi to pursue her higher studies. on other hand Sanskar becomes soft and kind hearted guy, he learns to live life, he understands everything to be balanced in life.he becomes naughty and had big circle of friends. he is very handsome boy, girls drool over him, but he never let them come near him, also he never hurt any girl or behave harshly. he is happy guy with his life njoying.
Fate decided something,Sanskar also comes to study in same college as swara joined,both are in same class also.swara comes late to class on first day,she introduced herself to class and settles in empty bench first row, Sanskar who already present in class mesmerizes seeing her, he falls for her at that instant. Swara doesn’t notice him as he is sitting in back of her at last row. swara becomes friends with kavya and sakshi, soon morning session got completed, now it’s lunch time swara with her friends went to canteen, Sanskar stalked her to canteen, he sits near to swara table as like swara back is facing him.he sees her cute antics,naughty side enjoying with her new friends. soon after lunch, everyone comes back to classe .their classes begins, after end of afternoon session their professor announced that they have to do project in group of two members ,teams are divided and those team details are kept in notice board. after classes swara while going home came to check who is her partner, she is paired with Sanskar, seeing his name she at once remember Sanskar with smile, soon her smile fade away remembering his insult, she goes away thinking he is not that Sanskar, after a while Sanskar came to check his team details and see swara and he as partners, he literally jumped seeing that as already he had fallen to her and now got chance to become close to her .next day morning swara came early to classes as nobody arrived she started playing game in her mobile waiting for her friends, Sanskar who came there smiles seeing her ,approaches her and called
Sanskar: hello, swara
Swara lift her head, seeing him she got 100000 volt shock,she stood there numb trying to digest what she is seeing
Swara: y..you
Sanskar: hello,I am Sanskar maheswari, your partner in project (forwards his hand)
Swara: (with fake smile) helloo (they both shakes their hands)
Before he say something she lefts hurriedly from there excusing herself as it is difficult for her to control her emotions, Sanskar confused seeing her behavior but ignores it, swara on other hand comes to isolated place in college cries her heart out remembering that unfortunate day where she got registered as cheapo in her love eyes, yes she loves him, cares for him, prays for his well being, her feelings are still fresh for him, yes she wants to see him once before her last breath but she doesn’t want to come face to him , doesn’t want to talk to him….she doesn’t want his shadow near her, its hurting her much, she also felt hurt as he don’t remembered her, his words are saying he don’t know her she left from there sad and broken.
From next day swasan started doing project together,Sanskar tried so much to talk to her and befriend her, but she ignores him she talks only about project nothing more else.after one week of being together also she didn’t utter one more extra word other than project, Sanskar also never stopped trying, finally after submission of project she is relieved as she got freed from torture.TORTURE yes its hard for her to control her feelings being close to her love and ignore him irrespective of his continuous trials, she being self respected girl never let anybody hurt her but he insulted her, humiliated her. sanskar never stop disturbing her even after submission of project, yes he loves her truly, he is mad in her love that he leave no stone unturned to win her heart. swara even shouted on him being irritated because of his continuous disturbance but he never leaved her though he felt sad. one day there came notice of intercollege dance competation, swasan being interested gave their names, soon all participants are in pratice hall, it is a couple dance and ten pairs are present there out of these one pair have to be selected for final competation, swara is paired with rahul and Sanskar is paired with some girl kavitha, as all are practicing Sanskar eyes is on swara , he is burning with jealousy as she is close to other guy,if his eyes had power of buring that rahul turned into ashes by now, here swara also feels jealous seeing sanskar with kavitha but she chooses to ignore as it is much better like this than being close to him. unable to hold,Sanskar straightly went to dance master and asked for change of partner and also tricked him something to become pair with swara at last he succeeded and now swasan become pair ,they are dancing in full swing lost in each other eyes, Sanskar eyes showing full of love his pure love only for swara whereas Sanskar notices love and also fear for him in her eyes, they both came to senses after listening claps sound they danced wonderfully. finally swasan are selected to perform in final competation. All started congratulated them and praises their pair. Seeing all this and their closeness , irked ragini who is trying to gain Sanskar attention since start day but Sanskar never notices her as he is busy around his lady love swara. ragini is burning with red chillies in her eyes, she smirked thinking something muttering ‘swara ready to lose.’
Swasan starts practicing together, in these days her heart melts for him but still she can’t accept it.finally day of competation, swasan are looking stunning ,swara is wearing violet long frock with silver embroidery on it which makes her looking gorgeous while he was not less he dressed in violet trousers and silver shirt also he wore violet waist coat which was making him more dashing ….soon they started dancing sensuously, when suddenly her zip got opened as it is damaged, swara is numb tears flows her cheeks while dancing, she can’t back off as it is her responsibility to make her college win, she can’t keep dancing as it is her respect issue, she felt helpless suddenly she felt cold sensation on her bare back,she is stunned seeing Sanskar covering her back by keeping his hand as shield, she felt goosebumps ,both are losing their senses when their skin got contacted but they somehow completed their dance and goes back stage. soon results were out swasan got first prize. Here while changing swara is thinking about Sanskar how he saved her respect, her lips curve into smile. soon after changing swara is coming out of green room when accidently she is hearing conversation between ragini and her friend where ragini is furiously saying how she damaged swara zip to ruin her respect but her plan backfired as Sanskar save her hearing this swara boiled with anger before she could react they hear slap sound and sees Sanskar eyeing ragini with blood shot eyes, yup Sanskar slapped ragini for her mistake.
Sanskar: (with blood shot eyes)how did you do this thing ragini,I never thought u r this much cheap,listen if I ever sees u near swara I swear I will kil you.untill I am here nobody can do anything to her.never ever in ur dreams also think about me ,I am only for swara
Swara felt overwhelmed by his love towards her, she thought to herself
Swara (in mind) :how sweetly he saved me, how he teaches that ragini a lesson for trying to defame me I must thank him
Thinking so she called him and say thank you.he was surprised by her sweet gesture,he asked swara for dinner date as a party for winning their dance competation but swara refuses to go with him.after a while swara is returning home,suddenly a man from back came closing her mouth and lifting her in his hands make her sit in car forcedly while she was struggling in his grip,before she escape he entered in car and started driving.swara got angry on him and started shouting on him
Swara: (angrily) Sanskar,what the hell,where r u taking me
Yes that man is Sanskar 😛 😀
Sanskar said nothing ,just focuses on driving,seeing his silence she frustrated
Swara: (loudly)Sanskar,speak something
Sanskar still ignores her and on radio and started listening to songs, she stopped protesting as there is no use in scolding him and started looking outside after a long one hour journey he stopped car ,and asked swara to get down,it’s like forest area and also dark she got scared, sensing her scaredness he offers her his hand to hold, swara hesitantly hold askling him where they are
Swara: (scaringly) Sanskar where we are,why u bring me here,plz take me back let us go back
Sanskar: shh swara,don’t worry nothing is gonna happen,plz trust me
She nodded her head,he follows small way which headed them some deep into field,swara tightens her grip he assures her and finally they halted,leaving her hand he went aside,swara got frightened and calls Sanskar ,he lits bonfire which setup in middle of that place
seeing view there swara is awestruck
“it’s a beautiful lake side with lotus flowers inside water,rose petals are scattered all over ground,lantherns are hanged to branches of trees Sanskar soon lit all that lanterns making place bright,cold breeze makes them feel relax,wind chimes which hanged to trees are making music by movement of trees . the place is really like a heaven .”
While swara is busy in gazing her surroundings,Sanskar kneeled down before her and called her softly,she looks on confusedly then he forwards ring and
Sanskar: swara,I am coming straight to point,swara I love you will u marry me,will you live with me forever
Swara shocked hearing his confession, she steps backwards tears flowing down her cheeks,
Sanskar seeing her stands and cups her face
Sanskar: swara I know what you are thinking?i know you are unable to forgot my words (she looks shocked) yes swara I know ,I never forget you after that incident I know I overreacted, but at that time I don’t know value of love,I daily waited for you to say sorry but u didn’t show up,I tried many ways to meet you but all went vain,trust me swara I started missing you and finally fallen for you,I decided to confess my feelings at last day of our school but unfortunately we did’t meet,from that day I am waiting for you,I had hope my love will win and I seen in our college,I don’t know whether u loved me or not, your confession at that time may be dare,but by seeing in your eyes I know you love me but scared of getting broken again,swara I promise you I will keep you happy always,you are my life ,you are my breathe,being in love with you is my hope to live this days,I can’t live without you swara,tell me how to prove my love ,I will die if you want
All while she is hearing him with tears ,she overwhelmed with his sincere confession she immediately hugged him and cried her heart out which is hided in all these years,he hugged her back and patting her back soothing her pain.after sometime she stopped crying and frees from hug,
Swara: (cupping his face) Sanskar I LOVE YOU ,I never thought I could say these words to you,I love you from our school days only but I don’t know whether we meet again, all this days I lived in a hope of seeing you once before my death,
He closes her mouth with his hand not letting her to speak
Sanskar: I am sorry swara,will you forgive me ? will you give me a chance for MY LOVE TO HEAL YOUR BROKEN HEART??
Swara nods yes smilingly with tears and hugged him tightly saying I love you,he also hugged her back placing kiss on top of her head.
Present:
Swara is thinking all this smilingly with closing eyes ,her trances are broken by kiss on her forehead, she opens her eyes and finds Sanskar seeing her lovingly
Sanskar: (cupping her face) where you lost princess?
Swara: (smiles lovingly)about our beautiful love which gives us a hope to live,
Sanskar: haan swara,it is our love which gives us hope, I never forget that day when I first saw you
Swara: such a lame proposal by me na (pouts)
Sanskar: (pecking her pout) no dear it is one of best proposal, I got my life, my love with that your dare game (smiles and hugs her)
Baby kicks swara showing agreement to Sanskar words,swara again screamed (poor mother getting kicks from her baby) sanskar laughs seeing her and kisses on her bump lovingly.
Show ends here.
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