Heya people, this is Shreeyu here, I know you would be annoyed with me but believe I have tried a lot to update my stories but I could never succeed because of a number of things going on in my life…
Anyway I’m rewriting LHLH (few chapters) because initial chapters were a little off track and could not really suit the storyline
Note- please don’t skip these episodes thinking that you read them earlier because they are MANDATORY
Prologue
A girl was sitting on the floor with her head resting on the bed… Her eyes misty, she had cried herself to sleep last night… And now when the sun had started scattering its rays on earth she was sitting lost in thoughts
Her Point Of View
Imagining that something like this would happen seems like a nightmare but when it’s actually happening believe me Sanskar its worse than it
I loved you , I didn’t think for even once that it was needed to voice my thoughts, I believed it was understood but now I think I was living in an illusion… May be I’m exaggerating… You never told me that you loved me but I thought that you atleast had faith in me but I am proved wrong now.
How can you even think that I love someone else , that I could ever love someone else let alone I love someone else
But that’s what you think, you believed after concluding yourself and I will not tell you what I feel…
May be I will never forget you. I would always love you the way I had always done
Other side
A boy is lying on the bed his eyes are closed, if a person would see him he would believe that he is asleep because none knew what a turmoil of emotions was going in his head
Boy’s Point Of View
I never said it aloud but I loved you Swara, but he is better for you … He loves you a lot and would always keep you happy, and you would keep him happy as well…
If I haven’t noticed how well you were behaving with him from last few days I would have never done this… Probably you didn’t love me and over that he needs you more than I do… And now I think that we were uncertain of our feelings… Because we were best friends we fell in delusion that we feel something like love for each other
Time had hurt us and it would heal as well
We weren’t meant to be together, our story was just an infatuation
Now we both will follow our ways which would never cross
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Hey people… I’m rewriting the prologue… You know LHLH is my very first story so yes the prologue was not well written and it was mandatory to make a few changes for the plot..
All REWRITTEN chapters will be updated soon
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12 Comments
nice
waiting
superb
amazing
welcome back bacha
Thnkew diii …. HBD once again???
Thank u
awesome..tc..
you r writing it again… sorry for commenting late but I was busy…
Yes Adi, I’m writing it again… It’s okay yar no need of sorry…?
Very nice . after long time read your name in tu.
Nice