This is Pari and i am back with the next part….
PART-5
ISHWARI MANSION
SONA:you!(shocked)
DEV:hello(in a quite weird way)
ASHA:u both know each other
SONA:ma,this
ISHWARI:that’s great that u both know each,would be easy for u both to communicate ..right asha ji(as if trying to control the situation)
BEJOY:ya of course..i guess we should give them some space to talk.
ISHWARI:ya sure,why not..dev take Sonakshi to ur room.
DEV:(looking at sona)yes ma
meanwhile sona who is in complete shock was staring at dev without even blinking her eye lid,it was as if she had seen a ghost.
DEV:(looking at sona)this way please.
SONA:…..(no reply,still staring)
ASHA:sona(shaking her a bit)
SONA:(coming to her senses)ya..ya ,
DEV:(giving a smile)this way.
SONA:ya(follows dev)
ISHWARI:so how is all going (trying to divert asha and bejoy’s attention from sona as they looked a bit tensed after seeing sona’s reaction)
ASHA:all well..
DEV’S ROOM
DEV:(leading sona)here.
SONA:(enters the room and stands for 1-2 min staring at dev as if he is not a human and then she says,quite loudly)i can’t believe,i am meeting u once again!
DEV:(putting his hand over sona’s mouth)shhsh!can’t u talk softly..
SONA(moth covered with dev’s hand,gets shocked by this)…
DEV:come on tell
SONA:(with eyes tell him to remove his hand)
DEV:(understands and removes)sorry
SONA:i just cant believe that ma and baba thought that u were the best man for me…
DEV:(putting his hand in his trousers pocket,in a cool manner)well i am the best man for every girl but i don’t think u are the best girl for any man.
SONA:(getting angry and once again raising her voice)youuuu!
DEV:calm down,or else ma and ur parents will hear.
SONA:(calming down)ok..but wait why shall i ..let them know that we cant be with each other for even one second..
DEV:(turning his back towards sona)no you wont tell anything like that.
SONA:(walking in front of dev)and why so…don’t tell me u want to marry me ..i agree i am very beautiful but…
DEV:will u shut up and listen.
SONA:(saying like a first std child)okay
DEV:my ma wants to marry a girl and its her and fathers last wish …i have already rejected many girls..and if i reject u which i want to,it will hurt my ma which i don’t want so u go and say no and say that u are not ready for this marriage.
SONA:me…(thinking something)
DEV:r u listening?
SONA:(coming out of her thoughts)no!
DEV:what no..
SONA:i cant even reject u…
DEV:but why?
SONA:my ma and baba thinks that u are the perfect man for me and its their utmost desire that i marry u,if i say no it will hurt their emotions…
DEV:i understand.
SONA:now,what shall we do??
KICHU(knocking the door)maaji,is calling u both in the hall.
DEV:ok say her that we are coming
DEV(to sona)we should move now.
SONA:(nods her head and moves after dev)
they reach the hall
ISHWARI:dev,me and Sonakshi’s parents have discussed and we are waiting for ur s and sonakshi’s decision(sees dev and sona with eyes full of hope)
DEV(looks at sona,takes a breath)i am ready to marry her.
SONA:((after hearing what dev said looks at him and then to her parents and then to ishwari)
ASHA:what about u sona
BEJOY:do u want some time?
SONA:no baba,i have made my decision…i am ready to marry dev..
ISHWARI(getting super duper happy)wow!that’s great….kichu bring sweets.
ASHA:(hugging sona)i am so happy
everyone start celebrating,but both sona and dev stand in corner of the hall.They both looked sad but were wearing a plastic smile on their faces for the sake of their family.
SONA P.O.V.:oh no!now i am going to marry him..whom i cant stand one minute how will i stand him for the whole life..how??oh god please help me
DEVP.O.V.:so Mr.dev is finally going to marry but to whom Ms attitude..the worst day…why is this happening to me but my ma is very happy…and i will do anything for my ma..
so how was it??maybe it was small…plz do write ur comments and suggestions.
waiting for them?
36 Comments
It was very good ….Awesome …
Plzzz post soon …..waiting eagerly for next ???????
Thanks a lot by the way u are commenting first time,in my ff….am i right??…or maybe i am mistaken…just asking,don’t mind?…..keep reading and commenting
Yeah for the first time ….silent reader broke the silence ??
Wow!i am so happy that u commented…plz keep commenting??
Yes ….ur ff is so. amazing ….so had to comment?????
Awesome episode dear.But plzz write long episode i desperately wait for episode and when i see small episode it make me sad.plzz post next episode soon ….
Thanks?.i will post alonger on next time pakka?…..loved ur style of commenting?
Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️??????????????????????????????
Post soon❤️
Love love❣
Thanx??…sure i will post asap?
Soooo short.. try posting a large one pari…. otherwise I m super duper happy as Ishwari in your ff because of dev Sona,s marriage …. and this ff was a best one like Sonakshi but not tall as if long like dev??
Coming to the sense I added all the three leads in my emotions?
First of all loved ur comment?….thanx for commenting and i promise longer one next time?
AMAZING!!!!!’It was so nice???
Thanx a lot?
Awesome and superb one……?????❤?????❤?❤????………dev sona plan failed……??…..ishwari is So smart and intelligent in ur ff……????????……..nazar na lage ishwari ko ??
Thank u ……i wish in krpkab also ishwari was the same …it would be so much of fun to watch??
Yes…….even I wish the same…..??❤?……..
amazing it was terrific no words to say it was that amazing????
Thanx???
Wow Padi di…!! Amazing as always..!!!??loved it……..???????finally…..devakshi gonna marry…☺☺☺?☺( in ur ff …?)…..and waiting for their unique patch up to happen after marriage….????plzz post a longer one next time…!! Plzz plzz …onc again it was fantastic.. !!!???
Loads of love….!
Heshine..??
Sorry..!! for mistake Pari di!!?
Thank u so much ?….i will pakka try to post a longer one?…..and its okay,actually i didn’t even noticed that u spelt my name wrong untill u told it?…take care?
U rocked it Rockzzzzzz
Thank u ?
Thank u?
It was good but too short. Take more time if you need but write longer one next time. As I always say to the ff writers whose work I like, you should always include lots of details (which you have done). But this one is only one scene basically. Please write longer. You have a very good imagination. You don’t need to post every day or every other day. Gather your thoughts for few days and then write. It will help you. Sorry, if this sounds too preachy or critical but me being a teacher forces me to analyze. Thank you.
Thank u so much for commenting and i truly didn’t mind it…i will surely try to follow ur advice…i will try my best not to disappoint u the next time?
Hey Pari di!
First if all, soooooooooooooooooo sorry for my terribly late comment! Had been out all day!
And, now that I’ve gotten school again, please don’t mind if I comment really late! However, I’ll definitely try my best to comment on all episodes!
Now, doing to the episode, it was AWESOMEEEEEEEEE!
Man, I loved it like HELLLLLL!
DevAkshi ki shaadi! Yaaaaaaaaaay!
Honestly, I don’t really care much whether they’re happy with it or not, atleast hum to khush hain!????
And, Ishwari is soooooo nice over here! I mean uski vajah se (partly) humare DevAkshi ki shaadi hogi!
One more thing: Now that the awesomeness of your FF has increased a hell lot, I can’t help but say post really really soon and a longer one!
Loads and tons of love!??????????
Thank u so much???….its okay i understand,but plz try to comment…..?….tons of love to u???
Awsmmmmm
Thanx?
Rockzzzzzzzz di! U r really awsmmmmm.
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Tanq fr ur advice, bcz,i really did it well & all faculties appreciated me ??????……
Thanq fr was all bcz of ur encouragement & support……i hv no words to explain ur writing bcz u make me as ur “Fan, sis, frnd”etc…..
Sorry!!!!!!! Bcz I made u bored ????……
SORRY?! SORRY?!
Thanq di!
BYE!!!!!
Oh really…glad that it worked……???..keep enjoying,reading and enjoying ???
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi update asap
and also excited to read ahead pl. update asap pl.pl.pl.pl.pl. humble request update asap very eager to read next one ………..
I will try my best post asap
Thnx?