Part-11
ISHWARI MANSION
Nikki:sona bhabhi,could u help me in science.
SONA:ya ya why not?
Like this they were discussing until Neha started speaking
NEHA(to everyone)why are we talking in groups?why don’t we utilise this time to create a sweet memory
NIKKI:but how di?
NEHA:by playing a game umm..dharmsarts!
NIIKKI:ya nice idea.
SONAhmm ,lets play
DEV:i wont(going towards his room)
ISHWARI:stop dev u will have to play and why can’t u play..if i at this age can play then why can’t u?u will have to play.
DEV:ok ma.
SONA:ok then lets start playing.so who is going to be the team captains
NIKKI:obviously u and dev bhai,lets see whose team wins
SONA:ok.
DEV:hmm ok.
SONA:(they do a coin toss and sona choosing heads wins the toss,so she starts selections)i choose ishwari aunty.
ASHA:aww sona u forgot me
DEV:don’t worry aunty i am there na,i choose Asha.
SONA:ok i choose nikki
DEV:i i choose neha
Like this they select their teams and finally the teams are
Sona(captain)ishwari,Nikki and bejoy.
Dev(captain) Neha,Asha and dev’s mama(no mami in my ff).
MAMA:so lets start ,first guess will be done by sonakshi’s team as Sonakshi won the toss.
SONA(discussing with her team)ok so u will act
NIIKKI:di di oops bhabhi i will go plz.
SONA:ok ok u go,all the best do well.
dev’s team tell her the movie which now Nikki have to act in front of Sonakshi and her team(u all also guess the movie)
Nikki through actions tell that its a new,latest movie and is a Hindi film.then she pushes a table and then she pulls it back and asks her team of what did she do?
BEJOY:push and pull …is that the movie name
Nikki shakes her head indicating wrong answer
SONApush and pull..that means force..nikki force 2
NIKKI:right answer
Now its turn of dev’s team and Neha acts and they even guess hence now both the teams have equal points.The next chance to act is given to sona from her team.
Sona starts acting,firstly by action she indicates that it is a Hindi and new movie.Next she acts as if she is a cat…
NIKKI:is it the movie of Aishwariya roy?
Sona nods her head in yes…then she acts as if she is running.
NIKKI:running …Aishwariya roy ..what movie.
ISHWARI:hey its jazbaa!
SONA:right answer aunty.
ASHA:Great job samdhanji….
ISHWARI:thanks ,its one of my favourite movie.
now its dev’s chance to act(dev is bad in acting??)but as no one was ready he had to come.
Dev now starts acting indicating the flim is Hindi and is in the medium category(not old and not even the latest)then he starts acting…but suddenly there was a power cut.(the movie given to dev was yeh jawani hai dewaani)
Power came after 10min and then
ISHWARI:its too late,now lets sleep.
NEHA:but am bhai has to act.
DEV:leave it i cant act,its a very difficult movie.
NIKKI:so that means we win and u lose…
DEV:ha ha..now go and sleep.
everyone goes and sleep ….the next day,the day from which devakshi start their job of making a bad impression.
THAT MORNING
Dev and sona meet at the breakfast table
DEV:ready for implementing the plan
SONA:yes and u?
DEV:yes.
SONA:all the best !
DEV:same to u.
Ishwari comes to the hall and moves towards the kitchen.
SONA:(stops ishwari) Goood morning aunty,going to the kitchen?
ISHWARI:good morning,yes to check the breakfast preparations.
SONA:oh shall i also help u(after saying this looks at dev and dev gives a smile back)
ISHWARI:oh yes why not come.
Sona follows her and ishwari gives her the job to prepare tea(sona knows how to prepare tea but acts in front of ishwari as if she doesn’t.
SONA:tea…(keeping a vessel on stove,puts sugar,water,milk and then tea leaves and then she on’s rthe gas)aunty done,it just needs to heated.
ISHWARI:(looks in the vessel)what is this?what kind of tea are u preparing.
SONA:oh sorry aunty i don’t know how to..i know its very bad,i am of no..
ISHWARI(smilingly)its very good that u don’t know how to prepare tea…it was my dream to teach my bahu to prepare it,so happy(then she teaches sona to prepare tea
SONA P.O.V:oh no i thought aunty will scold me ..that i don’t even know how to prepare tea but she is happy for that..first attempt fail hope dev succeeds.
ON THE OTHER HAND
DEV P.O.V.:for he first time i am going to do a thing which will just give me scoldings but what to do i am forced to do so…
DEV(to Asha and bejoy sitting in the hall)good morning aunty and uncle..
ASHA&BEJOY:good morning.
DEV:hope u are able to adjust.
ASHA:oh yes we are very comfortable.
BEJOY:dev i wanted ur help…actually i am going wrong again and again in my calculations..can u pls help(bejoy is the secretary of his colony and is doing some calculations related to the event which was recently held in his society)
DEV:oh sure i would love to.
DRV P.O.V.:i will somehow spoil this work and due to this he will get angry as sona said that he is a very short tempered man in case of his work…
DEV(sitting down besides bejoy and taking over the book in which he was doing calculations)kichu bhaiya bring orange juice for me…aunty uncle do u want anything
ASHA&BEJOY:no nothing.
DEV:ok (acts as if he is checking the calculations.
Kichu comes with a glass of juice and dev grabs the glass in such a way that the juice spills on the book and ….(u know)
but plan failed because from all of a sudden ishwari comes and pulls off the book and the juice simply spills on dev’s pant.
DEV:aaa…(looks at ishwari and shuts his mouth)
ISHWARI(glares at dev with anger)how many times have i told u that u should do only one job at a time….
ASHA:its okay,sometimes happen no probs..ddv u go and change.
DRV:sorry..really very sorry,i will change and come.
ISHWARI(to Asha and bejoy)dev is very responsible,don’t know what happened today.
BEJOY:we know he is very responsible or else how would he establish such a vast businesses empire
ISHWARI:come lets have breakfast.
ISHWARI P.O.V.:i will be at the back of dev will not let him create a bad impression in front of Asha ji and bejoy ji.
DEV’S ROOM
DEV(talking to himself)what the hell ,i was about to succeed but don’t know how ma came in between
SONA:so u too failed.(coming in)
DEV(turning towards her)ya..u too that means u also
SONA:(sadly)yes,ishwari aunty instead of getting angry on me patted me.
DEV:oh!starange.
NIKKI(coming in)oops wrong timing.sorry
SONA(turning towards Nikki and even dev does the same i.e.looks towards Nikki)
NIKKI:i just came here to call u both for breakfast but u both seem s busy then…i will come
SONA:no we are not busy i am coming
DEV:i will,just come in 2 min i need to change
Nikki goes followed by sona
Everyone are sitting and the breakfast table and each and every one is just talking about their marriage (devakshi’s marriage)sona feeling lonely is completely looking down that is on her plate until dev comes..he sits beside sona as only that chair was empty
SONA(whispers to dev)we will have to give it an another try.
DEV(whispering)hmmm
NIKKI:oh someone is whispering
Everyone starts staring at dev and sona
DEV AND SONA:not us
Eveyone starts laughing
ISHWARI:ok ok jokes apart,dev and sona ‘s engagement is just day after tomorrow..we all will have to the work so that we complete it on time.
SONA:(gives a tensed look to dev)
DDV(too gives but then through his eyes ask sona to calm down)
After sometime they get up with everyone ….everyone start getting busy in their things but only dev and sona are left…they are deciding what to do next.
DEV’S ROOM
DEV(talking to himself)what the hell ,i was about to succeed but don’t know how ma came in between
SONA:so u too failed.(coming in)
DEV(turning towards her)ya..u too that means u also
SONA:(sadly)yes,ishwari aunty instead of getting angry on me patted me.
DEV:oh!starange.
NIKKI(coming in)oops wrong timing.sorry
SONA(turning towards Nikki and even dev does the same i.e.looks towards Nikki)
NIKKI:i just came here to call u both for breakfast but u both seem s busy then…i will come
SONA:no we are not busy i am coming
DEV:i will,just come in 2 min i need to change
Nikki goes followed by sona
Everyone are sitting and the breakfast table and each and every one is just talking about their marriage (devakshi’s marriage)sona feeling lonely is completely looking down that is on her plate until dev comes..he sits beside sona as only that chair was empty
SONA(whispers to dev)we will have to give it an another try.
DEV(whispering)hmmm
NIKKI:oh someone is whispering
Everyone starts staring at dev and sona
DEV AND SONA:not us
Eveyone starts laughing
ISHWARI:ok ok jokes apart,dev and sona ‘s engagement is just day after tomorrow..we all will have to the work so that we complete it on time.
SONA:(gives a tensed look to dev)
DDV(too gives but then through his eyes ask sona to calm down)
After sometime they get up everyone start getting busy in their things but only dev and sona are left…they are deciding what to do next.
SONA:hey do ur mother loves girls wearing western clothes??
DEV:don’t know ..she allows Nikki to wear so maybe she does.
SONA:but still can give it a try..most mother in laws have a different behaviour towards their daughters and daughter in laws.
DEV:what are u speaking?
SONA:i have an idea and i am going to implement it now,u think something for urself soon
sona goes while dev keeps thinking.
Sona heads towards nikki’s room where Nikki is sitting and doing online shopping through her laptop.
NIKKI:hey bhabhi!(sees sona)
SONA:hi what u doing?
NIKKI:buying stuffs,pls help me out.
SONA:oh ya why not?
NIKKI:this one..or this one
SONA:that one…that too is good
She helps Nikki and then she sees ishwari talking to someone on phone that side
SONA(talks loudly so that ishwari could hear)u know what Nikki,i love wearing western clothes and those churidar,and other indian wear just makes me uncomfortable…i will even wear western clothes after marriage
NIKKI:but ma
ISHWARI(hears sona and enters)what ma,sona is like u for me and if u can wear such clothes then why cant she
SONA P.O.V.:what ?she does not problem if i wear western clothes after marriage ..she is really an ideal saasu ma.
ISHWARI P.O.V.:i know Sonakshi u are doing this on purpose,u are just trying to make me angry and nothing else but dear i am not letting u win
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So guys how was it…was it long enough?sorry for the delay….
Plz post ur comments ?
Pari.
29 Comments
Awesome one dear .. Yup its in good length but for my bad luck duplicate paragraph was their by mistake ???but anyways I’m happy to c u nd try ur best to post soon dear till then take care..!…
Thanks a lot and i will surealy try my best to post soon?
Woooooowwwww wat a fab episode …. Ishwari to unite devakshi n thank god mami ji is not here thank u ….plz post soon …?????
thanks ….i hate that mami ji so did not included her in my ff
i will try my best to post soon
Awesome..i loved it.. Gr8 job.
I mean ur adding lil. Details to it.. Waiting for the part to c how these two starts to feel for eachother…too engaging…?????❤?
Thanks varsha…i will surely try to post soon,but let me tell u love is not going to blossom soon..u will have to wait for it
Ohhhh?.. But ok.. Until everything s goin ok btw these two. I’m fine with it.
Awesome!!!!!!!
Thanks
Fantastic♥♡
Thank you?
Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Post soon
Love love
thanks i wll surely try do so
lots and tons of love
Amazing!!
thanks maria
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi and fantastic and hoping that devakshi get engaged smoothly so eagerly waiting for the next epi so update asap
thanks….i will surely post soon
and yes there are no upcoming problems in the engagement until devakshi themselves create ! so wait and read what happens.
Awesome episode dear
thanks
Pari….!!! U r giving me shock after shock….. Ishwari inni changi aur radha rani hai hi nhi….. mamaji ki zindagi sukon main ho gi……??
Ok coming to the Episode…..as always it was really superb…..????????????……and yes it was quite long…..itni length ok hai…..????…..ishwari kamal…..pe kamal….kar rahi hai…..awesome???
❤❤❤
thanks
radha rani.i just hate her…just cant tolerate and ishwari looks god only in positive role and i understood this by reading ur ff,in ur ff too ishwari was positive na…
ishwari will be doing some more kamal in the upcoming episodes…..
keep reading and commenting
lots of love
pari
Hey! Pari thank u so much for such positive ff
Aajkal show me itni negativity dekhne ko mil rahi h…..in that case ur ff is a bliss to read.
Tumhare ff me ishwari to itni acchi hai ?hi….Ur ab tumne aur bhi good news de di
There is no gkb☺☺☺
Now coming to episode…..it was as usual awesom???
Please update next part…..waiting?????
thank u so much..after reading ur comment i am feeling at the top of the world..truly
and i agree the show is now full of much negative vibes but still i cant leave it u know i am just addicted to it
but cant tolerate that stupid garib ki beti and thats the only reason why i did not included her in my ff
i will try my level best to upload the next part however i dont think i will be able to upload today or tommorow as i am busy with piles of projects…still i will try making it as quick as possible
Amazing!!!
thanks
Hey Pari di….!!I knw I’m late again…..sorry …..!!!!and well the episode was juz fabulous.. ..!!!I really loved it…
and also….!!!devakshi’s plan floped….oh..I’m very happy….????its really amazing…..!!!??and GKB is not in ur ff…thanks to u ……!!!bcas u r making the ff juz in a positive note….!!!amazing di….!!???and yeah…tea…, western dress….scenes ..!!.I loved them…ahh…I juz can’t wait….!!!and yeah ishwari ji is so cool….here….hope she will also be like this in the real show in future….!!!oh yeah u kept ur promise and posted the epi asap….!!so I’m returning ur advance sorry….???and hope u will also update the next epi wit the same speed….
Loads of love…..???
Heshine…????
Thanks for returning the “sorry” but i guess i will to say u that again because i am going to be late and this time pakka because i have tons of project to complete…still i will try my best to update
Thanks a lot and its okay?