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Next day)
(Breakfast time)
R: bhabhi breakfast is superb
A: yes gauri it is very tasty
(Swethalana came and sat on table )
Swe: where is breakfast for me servants where is breakfast for me
M: Mam today everything gauri mam did
Swe: gauri where is my breakfast
G: its over
Swe: what .
G: yes it’s over
Swe: what do you mean it’s over you don’t know how many members are their in house
G: sultana I did breakfast for my family members and some beggers also there but what to do I did not get time to cook for them also so I thought that beggars will eat yesterdays night food
R: waw bhabhi what a dialouge
Swe: just shut up what do you think of your self gauri . according to you I am begger
G: I think so
Swe: gauri (shouted)
G: even I know how to shout
Khanna: excuse me mam
G: yes
Khanna: thank you mam today you cooked breakfast for all servants and it is very tasty behalf of our servants thank you so much mam
G: its ok you are not a servants here you are working in this house then you are also the family members of this house
Khanna: thank you mam and continue your class mam
Swe: you cooked for them you didnot have time to cook for me
G: If you want to eat then made by your self
(Gauri went room)
O: thank you ..
G: for what
O: for everything
G: everything means
O: because of you today all are happy.
G: no need say thanks .
O: why you are taking risk it is my family matter I will take care of it
G: dont worry I took so many risks in my life it is not new one
O: I dont want others to take risk because of my family
G: just stop it. I dont want your advice
and I know what to do.
O:( angry )I said I dont want your help please get out of this house .. ( He pushed her, she fell down on the floor her hand broken )
G: maa ( shouted. and started crying )
O: gauri I am sorry. actually I didnot mean hurt you
G: my hand is paining omkaraji
( Om called doctor)
O: gauri sit on bed doctor is coming dont worry please stop crying I cant see tears in your eyes please stop crying ( he wiped her tears then they had eyelock )
( Doctor came there and all family members also came there )
S: gauri what happened
O: actually shivaya
G: I slipped bhayya
(Doctor started bandaging )
G: aah
O: doctor slowly she is so sensitive
Doc: ok Mr Oberoi and Mrs Oberoi you are so lucky to get husband like this .
(Gauri looked at om they had eyelock )
Doc: Mr Oberoi please give this medicine to her Mrs Oberoi you should not do any work from that hand
O: ok doctor I will take care of her
(Doctor and went from there)
B: omg shrenu two digit filled
(Gauri started to laugh)
B: (eyes filled with water) shut up are you mad shrenu I cant see you in pain this is 10th times that you got hurted accident fellow down everything you know I pappa and Neil cant live with out you please because of us be careful ya
G: (eyes filled with water) you know 10 times or 100 times If I met with accident or whatever I will not die
O: stop it gauri one more word about dying then I will kill you. to save you I married you dammid
Sathiya plays
G: sorry I will not talk about it
D: we are also your family gauri we also cant see you in pain
G: I know it dadi
A: gauri take rest
( all went from there)
O: sorry
G: its ok
O:ok sleep now
G: here I will sleep on floor
O: you sleep here gauri
G: no
O: just listen to me I will sleep on recliner you sleep here only
G: ok
( She slept after some om waken up gauri was not there)
O: where she went
(He went to search her she was In terroise )
O: gauri what are you doing here
G: no simply came here
O: you know what is time now night 1clock
G: so what
O: go and sleep
G: no I want to sit here for some time
O: ok what are you thinking
G: see that bright stars one is my pappa and one is my mama whenever I will get time I am talking with them I. Share everything with them
O: so you love your parents so much
G: more you know when I was small I lost my family everything
then pappa mama adopted me they given all love to me but now I lost pappa and mama (she started crying )
O: gauri please be calm down( he wiped her tears)
G: leave it ok tell me when you are sad what you will do ..
O: actually when I was sad I am painting but now I lost my Inspiration. so I am listening music
G: waw great you like romantic or emotional songs
O: both
G: but I like dj songs
O: different who is your favourite singer ya
G: I did not have any favourite singers
Who is yours
O: I love shrenu
G: what
( Who is shrenu now )
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