Episode 29
Continue episode start with a bright smile ? let’s start……..
Twinj room @
Twinj and Ansh were sleeping peacefully.
Ansh is sleeping on Kunj fully.
Soon Twinkle stretch her arms and open her eye and rubbing eyes too.
Just then Kunj too wake up and feel heavy look at twinkle. Kunj see Ansh he was sleeping on him twinj look at each other face. Twinkle smile Kunj feeling pain in his back. Twinkle get up and sit Kunj to want to get up but he can’t because of Ansh.
While in sleep Ansh moving his hands hit slightly Kunj. Kunj slightly murmured apni Maa ka badla ne khal raha Kya mere baap
Twinkle heard this give to Kunj annoying looks.kunj placed Ansh on bed and sit
K: haye Meri kamar
T: what happened to you now
K: my back is paining
T: OH really .
Twinkle about to get up she feels little bit sore. She avoided this and went in washroom. While Kunj all already get ready his cloth and others things even Ansh cloth to . He knows she was ill. Soon Twinkle come outside and see Kunj did and she gets happy at lest he feels . After twinkle Kunj to went in washroom and get ready. Twinkle make ready to Ansh after this they went downstairs for breakfast.
At dinning area
All family members sitting twinj comes there Kunj and Ansh sit with all. Twinkle went in kitchen maya already in kitchen making breakfast twinkle do others things soon they make breakfast and went toward dinning table placed the breakfast on table while they both didn’t look at each other and quite.Kunj sign to Usha about maya and twinkle All understand what’s the matter. While standing twinkle feel not good.
U: come you both have your breakfast na
Maya : hmm mummy ji
Maya sit quietly had her breakfast
Twinkle still standing
U: twinkle you too sit na
T: no mummy ji I will have my breakfast afterwards not feel like eating now
Bebe: why are you ok na
T: hmm I m fine Bebe
After breakfast twinkle take ansh and went in garden
Outside
T: ok Ansh now go and sit in car bye and kissed on his forehead went inside
Went in her room.
Twinj room @
Twinkle started doing her works just then Kunj came inside the room look at twinkle she was doing works . He went to twinkle and hold her hand . Twinkle turned and look at him to and asked him what .
K: why you doing this
T: why you not go office till now
K: hm just going bas don’t do work take rest twinkle.
T:don’t think about me Kunj to much
K: and why you not had your breakfast twinkle.
T: leave this Kunj you tell me that you talk to with mummy ji
K: yaar closed this topic na if I m ready to get separate with my family you are not ready after this tell me . You just telling me this you want to separate but you can’t twinkle toh please first get yourself ready fully then tell me. one more thing I will not separate with my family and Bhai you better understand this.
T: then ok you do whatever you want to do I will do I what I want Kunj
Kunj goes near her and hold her from shoulders
K: listen twinkle I don’t want to anything with you now it’s better you don’t make me angry on you good for you. One more thing if I m good with you na don’t cross your limits or talk to me properly twinkle
Right now you are not well it’s better take rest and eat something.
Twinkle started crying tears coming
T: I m idiot Kunj think that you are good with me but not you can’t with me Kunj.
You have family what about my family Kunj ha
K: tujhe chahiye Kya hai twinkle
T: time you don’t have for me Kunj
K: what time I m not sit with you in home all the time Twinkle
T: really Kunj remember perfectly Kunj that you have time for me Kunj not you already do what you want just ignore me I m only your wife for namesake Kunj that I m twinkle kunj Sarna but in really I m not Kunj in this room different reality of our life
You never asked me in this year what I want not care for me Kunj when I saw other couples I feel like babaji what I did wrong that you make my life like this.
Atlest you see yuvi and Mahi.
K: toh me kya karu me toh aesha hi hu
T: heartless ❣ person you are Kunj
K: ok fine I m
Twinkle tell something to Kunj it’s hurt his
Kunj cupped twinkle jawline and hold her hands while holding twinkle hands Kunj broke her bangles it’s hurt twinkle lot but she didn’t say anything to him just looking in her eyes
K: mind your tongue twinkle you poke me.
T: then what will you do kar bhi Kya shakte Ho tum bas ek hi cheez bas na
Kunj control his anger and jerk her take his
Bag and left for office
Twinkle closed the room sit in her room
Twinkle started crying bitterly loudly throwing things here and there.
Downstairs maya was busy in kitchen she to sad and think that she did wrong with twinkle. The way she talks to her it’s totally wrong she was angry with Anant not with her but her all over anger comes on twinkle without any mistakes of her even she was ill I m not asked her for one time also today also she didn’t eat her breakfast. I m standing here maya feel guilty and food for twinkle and went in her room just then twinkle to come downstairs both look at each other face with pain and guilt
Maya : twinkle
T: hmm Bhabhi what
Maya hold twinkle hand take her in lobi both sit twinkle just quiet
Maya : look twinkle I m sorry for that day I really feel bad
Twinkle look at maya please bhabhi don’t say sorry to me you are elder than me how can
Maya : no twinkle tell me this because I did mistake
T: it’s ok bhabhi
Maya : tum ne mujhe maf kiya na
T: smiled yes ?
Both hugged each other
Maya: ok now eat something twinkle
T: I will eat afterwards
Maya : no afterwards just now I feel like you forgive me twinkle
Maya feed twinkle with her hands
T: bhabhi can I asked you one thing please don’t feel bad I just
Maya : yeah twinkle sure
T: kal apne aayat kahana khiyala ansh ko nhi
While she look down
Maya : no twinkle I didn’t even aayat also not eat I toh sleeping without having something after Anant feed aayat I don’t know about this . If I feed aayat as well ansh to for me they both are same for me twinkle I never saw them with different eyes. like aayat like Ansh same for me twinkle how can you think this
T: sorry Bhabhi
Maya : it’s ok now leave this
Both patch up with each other happily
Went in kitchen busy in their works
Maya asked twinkle how she get this cut
Twinkle tell her wrong story
On the other side in office
Kunj was in his cabin and sitting in anger remembering twinkle words he threw the file in anger
Kunj POV
What she thinks of herself she doesn’t deserve my good behaviour with her
Now I try to be nice with her but not she can’t like me this she wants this I will do forcefully with her something which I don’t want it this Kunj try to concentrate on his work but he can’t Kunj get up in anger went in Alisha cabin .
Alisha cabin @
She was sitting and applying nail paint on her nails listening music ?
Kunj entered inside her cabin look at her think she can’t change its office not her home leave it. He went toward her Alisha see Kunj quickly get up off the music
Alisha : Baby you
K: yes me why are you so shocked Alisha ha
Alisha : I m not baby
Kunj held Alisha hands tightly both looking at each other
K: what you said her Alisha yesterday Alisha how can you abused my wife
You know the meaning of words you tell her ha its to bad
Alisha : she to tell me your mistress
What about this
K: really loud first you abused her then she and you pushed her Alisha she gets hit badly on her belly ha if something happened to her na I will not leave you Alisha.
it’s good she didn’t get any internal injuries.
Alisha : ok for this I will sorry to her
K : what sorry Alisha ha tumhare sorry se uska Pain kam hojaye ga Kya hai
If you see her that moment then you realised what you did
Toh from next time you better stay away from twinkle and if i m not answering your calls that doesn’t mean you call her ok
Alisha : hmm ?
K : what hu go and say sorry to twinkle now
Alisha: I will not say sorry to her Kunj
She was b*t*h now this time Kunj can’t hear any abused words for twinkle quickly Kunj slap Alisha tightly Alisha lips bleed due to slap she was shocked ? and freeze for a second
K: how dare you Alisha still you abuse her
Alisha: you slap me Kunj how dare you kunj
K: because you deserve this slap Alisha next time thing for while to open you mouth ok now I m sorry to you
Yuvi see this and get happy make the video of this scene and send to twinkle.
Kunj look at Alisha lip and ignore her
And come out of the cabin went in his cabin soon all went for meeting and discussing about project
Neil all present there give their advice for project benefit how can we expand with new ideas.
Kunj and yuvi
Y: how’s twinkle now Kunj
K: hmm fine pagal hogi hai alag hona
Hai usko
Y: what
K: ha are koi alag nhi hogi bas bolti hai abhi boluga na chal alag hojate hai ek dam se chup jab mene bola ta usko twinkle alag hojate hai tab uski hi zidh ti nhi hone ki ab bhi bas bolne ko bol rhi hai
Y:hmmmm
After some time later Kunj went in anger early
In Sarna mansion………
Kunj entered in home directly went in his room
Twinj room
Kunj went inside the room and goes toward wardrobe and open the wardrobe and finding something but can’t he called twinkle many times but didn’t come now his anger increased more he to went downstairs to check her where she was
Twinkle and others went for mandir servant tell his Kunj
Kunj sit in hall waiting for her after sometime later all comes twinj see each other. Kunj get up and tell twinkle come in room she went with him in their room.kunj shut the door loudly twinkle get fear with his behaviour in morning they both fight with each other and she knows he was hell angry on her what she told him
T:what you want Kunj slightly
K: where are you I m waiting for you from past 1 hour can’t you see your phone that I m calling you then why take this phone Kunj take her phone throw her phone twinkle was shocked to see this
K: give to my bag
T: which bag Kunj
K: you don’t know which bag when I m going Romania that time Sara comes and give you one briefcase now you remember.twinkle thing and remember yes she gave me one briefcase
K: then give me
T: ok
Twinkle went toward wardrobe and see the wardrobe Kunj messed the all clothes
She was angry on him . Twinkle take out bag and give back to him
T: ok fine
K: hmm
Twinkle went downstairs again
In hall Leela and Asha comes to meet twinkle they get to know that twinkle meet with accident Mahi told them about twinkle they come there to see her how she was. Twinkle sit with everyone just then Mahi And anita too come all sit and talk to each other
On the other side Kunj open the bag and check the money ? he went downstairs
K : twinkle one minute
T: hmm
Twinkle went toward him both went in side
T: what now
K: twinkle bag me pure paise nhi hai
Twinkle get shocked ? to hear this
T: what Kunj I don’t know about this and money
K: bag tere pass ta na twinkle how can you don’t know this
Kunj get hell angry on yuvi and Sara more on Twinkle..twinkle started coming slightly
Kunj call yuvi and Sara soon they come in Saran mansion.
Sara and yuvi entered bebe saw yuvi and asked him
Bebe : Yuvi puttar tu
Y:yes Bebe I will talk to you later where is kunj
Kunj comes there and tell him come in their room
Twinj and yuvi went in twinj room along with sara to
They go in room Yuvi asked Kunj
What happen why he calls them here in argent
K:because Yuvi is bag me pure paise nhi hai
Yuvi : what ?get shocked are you serious Kunj
K: yes
Kunj just look at twinkle she was standing in fear
K: Sara you gave this bag to twinkle na
Sara : yes sir I gave this bag only to twinkle mam that day
T: yes you gave me Sara but
K: loudly what but ha
T: Kunj atlest listen to me for a while
K: Sara you checked this bag
Sara : not at all sir Yuvi sir gave me this bag I will give to twinkle mam quickly sir
K: hm ok you can go now
Sara left………….
Kunj went near to twinkle
K: now will you tell me
T: what will I tell you kunj I don’t know anything about this bag and money to
K: how can twinkle bag tere pass ta na twinkle
T: Kunj but mene bag ko dekha bhi nhi hai
Ek baar bhi open nhi kiya why would I kunj she give me I kept in wardrobe that time only you can ask anyone
K: why to anyone this our room you only know about this room these things where is or not twinkle only you have wardrobe keys even I don’t have another keys
Twinkle started crying…
K: now don’t crying twinkle .
Yuvi try to stop him but he was not
K: call and asked to The manager
Iss me kitne paise te pure
Y: hmm ? Yuvi call manager
Just then Asha Mahi come in twinj room
They see they all standing both to went them both see twinkle crying
Mahi : di why are you crying
Kuvi looks at twinkle Kunj now to angry
T: nothing Mahi
Yuvi cut the call
K: what he tells you Yuvi
Y: bag me pure 20lakh te Kunj
Kunj please check this bag again na
K: uhhhhh ok
Both count the all money ? now Yuvi get to shocked ?
Y: Kunj 5lakh nhi hai pure Iss bag me
K: dekha na bas I told you this
T: Kunj truth me I really didn’t know about your money
Y: twinkle ok fine
K: what fine Yuvi if she don’t then who know
Asha : Kunj calm down please it’s a way to talk to your wife twinkle slightly hold Asha hand and sign her not say anything.
Y: Mahi go from here
Mahi : hmm Asha and Mahi both went downstairs.
K: now tell me twinkle fast you are getting on my nerves now
T: you don’t trust me
K: see twinkle will ask you nicely tell me if you take or used the money you need then tell me honestly
T: no Kunj why I will take your money I don’t need this amount of money
K: phir kaha gay twinkle loudly
Everyone is heard Kunj voice downstairs also and get shocked Kunj voice
U: why he shouted loudly I will go and check them Usha went in room
U: what is this Kunj why you scream loudly
K: nothing
U: what nothing Kunj haa Leela ji is here and you behaved like this
K:maa please go from here
U: twinkle you tell me what happened to him twinkle tell everything to Usha
Usha was to shocked after listen this…..
U: Kunj if she tells you she doesn’t know about your money then why you not trust her ha
K: it’s not trust I m telling her one simple thing if she didn’t know then who will know only she knows about bag
T: what you mean I take your money you i m thief it’s mean Kunj
U: twinkle beta what are you saying its nothing like this he was gone and talking rubbish things
Y: yup
Kunj look at them in anger eyes
Usha left out of room
Kunj hold twinkle hand twinkle don’t make scene here twinkle jerk him what I make scene and you kunj things what you speak if I want money I will directly asked you na 5 lakhs it’s not a small amount if you want to check you can check me and things go and the whole wardrobe if you find your money then tell me kunj atlest don’t blame me
Y: Kunj leave these na
K: she always behaved dramatically without reason Yuvi now also same what’s the need of crying I m hitting you twinkle
Twinkle went toward wardrobe and take out here all things and throw in floor here and there kuvi just seeing her what she was doing . Yuvi closed the door
While leela and asha went along with Mahi and Anita already.
Twinkle take out Kunj credit card went near him
T: take your credit card that day you give me for riya I forgot to give you back and give him to bill shilipe as well
Kunj looking at her..
T: atlest check your bill that I don’t used your card .Kunj closed his fist
K: what are you try to show haa that I didn’t give you anything
T: i m not Kunj you show everyone that I m Thief Kunj how can you kunj you didn’t think for a while.
K: because you are to careless about everything in Ansh matter you are twinkle and now as well.no one come in our room and take the money from wardrobe how can it’s possible twinkle you have keys only na
T: it’s doesn’t mean I know each and everything even I m not here also that time
I can’t say anything about this now no need of anything you already blamed me Kunj. Kunj walked out of the room in anger
Yuvi to went behind him …………………………
Kuvi went in office Kunj was fuming badly
And try to control his anger
Y: Kunj please leave this
K: Yuvi 5 lakhs I didn’t care about this but who can do this ……
After this kuvi went out both goes in bar cafe sit and started drinking Kunj asked Yuvi to give his phone Yuvi give him
Kunj see some mails by mistakenly photo gallery open to Kunj . Kunj started seeing Yuvi pics just then his eyes went in one picture its twinkle and Neil standing together ( if you all know that Yuvi click there pics when they go for dinner)
He sees all pics Neil and twinkle together in all pics he was hell angry to see this pics and get jealous of Neil Kunj asked Yuvi about pice when they click Yuvi under in alcohol effects ? he tells about everything….Kunj don’t know that day twinkle went for dinner more over Neil to with them this thing he didn’t like in anger he started drinking tooo much completely drank
On the other side
Twinkle was sitting in her room whole room was dark lights were off
She was crying badly and remembering Kunj words and hating herself …………….
What she did why this happening with her
She screamed why Kunj why you can’t understand me
It’s almost 1clock twinkle still crying ……
Kunj entered in sarna mansion he was remembering twinkle and Neil pics …
he went in his room see it’s dark he
Twinkle heard his footsteps and stand look at him twinkle sense that he was drank it’s better don’t talk to him . Kunj looked at twinkle and boiling in anger …..
Twinkle about to going kunj held her hand
Pin her toward door. Twinkle was scared of him
T: Kunj leave my hand
K: where are you in that day Twinkle
Twinkle look at him
T: where I m tell me clearly
K: really you don’t haa punched his hand on door twinkle closed her eyes
Ok fine I will show you something ok
Kunj open his phone showed twinkle her and Neil pics . Twinkle look at Kunj with fear
K: now I understand Twinkle where you are you were busy with that Neil na
T: I m not going alone everyone is going
K: laugh what why you go I tell you na this
That day only stay away from Neil but you enjoy with him only haaaaa
T: ha toh now I will do what I want ok now leave me you to stay away with me now don’t come near me
K: what did you say haa twinkle I stay away with you haa
T: yes
Kunj hold her shoulders
K: really I will not me and Neil is different
I m your husband and he is nothing
How can he come near you
T: Kyu why you have any problem with him
Now I will also go and meet with him
Twinkle increased his anger more
Kunj eyes become red blood
Kunj cupped her jawline you can’t twinkle you are only mine I will not let you go anywhere if you try to go near Neil I will destroy him
T: I don’t care yeh damki mujhe mat dena ok
K: it’s not a damki twinkle
You hide from me also you don’t go with him why answered me
T: why I will not Kunj
K: you have to twinkle I will not leave you
Because of you that my son suffered lot you were enjoying na now you will suffer
Twinkle look at him get nervous try to come out from his grip Kunj not let her go
Kunj take out her duppta and throw in side
Both looking at each other eyes ……..
Twinkle : Kunj please leave me
K: you make me angry twinkle now I can’t
Twinkle started crying shivering in fear
Kunj slightly tore her kurti sleeves twinkle get shocked Kunj try to force twinkle but twinkle stop him and protesting for herself
Kunj hold twinkle hands and started kissing on her neck twinkle just closed her eyes and moving her hands . Kunj look at twinkle face
T: mat karo mere saath please she was sobbing ?
K: you wake my devil side
Kunj cupped her face and connected his lips on her lips and kissing her wildly after this twinkle push him and went in balcony
Kunj to go in balcony twinkle stand in side
Kunj went near her while twinkle going backwards blocked to wall
Kunj blocked her way just then drench rain heavily started both get drenched and there clothes to wet in rain twinkle body seeing now because her dress transparent now this make Kunj lust more increase to see her like this …
t: Kunj don’t force with me
K: then cooperate with me na twinkle
T: no Kunj please I beg you fold her hands in front of him kunj eyes get wet due to see her
K: don’t do this twinkle you and your tears can’t melt me tum shirf Meri Ho
Kunj lift her forcefully twinkle moving her legs in air and hitting on his chest stop this Kunj went in room and placed twinkle on bed look at her and take out his shirt and bend down come on twinkle . While she about to get up and Kunj hold her
And bend down and nuzzled his face in twinkle neck started kissing and giving her
Love bite while just try to stop him
T: Kunj no kunjjjjjjjjjjjj please
Kunj look up Kunj look at twinkle lips
Grab her lips kissing her wildly twinkle hit on his black twinkle didn’t open her mouth Kunj slightly pinched her in pain she open her mouth Kunj take the advantage and entered his tongue in her mouth
T: ahhhhhhhhhhh
Kunj bite twinkle lips Kunj prick his teeth in her lips after due to oxygen Kunj broke the kiss twinkle take breath gaps
T: chodo mujhe mene Kya kiya hai jo tum mere saath aesha kar rahe Ho
He didn’t answer her slightly open twinkle kurti zip twinkle hold Kunj hands no Kunj
Kunj jerk her hands take out her upper clothes twinkle felt bad .kunj bite her collarbone badly twinkle screamed dragging her nails on his back
Kunj was totally lost in his anger he didn’t care what he was doing with her
Kunj about to open twinkle down cloth he stopped and look at in her eyes her eyes become red and swollen to he to felt bad
T: please mat nhi na crying
Kunj Tumhe tumhare bacho ki kasam Kunj mat karo Kunj stops at that moment and get up on twinkle in anger went in balcony
Twinkle still lay on bed crying cuddle herself take blanket and about get up she didn’t have strength after she went in washroom and lock the door stand under in shower throwing all things in washroom look at her mangalsutra feel disgusting…….
Twinkle wiped her tears
T: now no more tears twinkle bas Kunj Sarna
Kunj change his clothes and went out
He went in farm house goes inside the house he went in one room
Kunj look at the whole room and touch the all things slightly crying ? Kunj take out his phon call someone and talk for sometime and felt good
Twinkle come out of the washroom and see door was open she think kunj went out
Twinkle sit ……
At morning
Twinkle wake up where is kunj he was not come still Ansh come in room went toward her
Ansh: mamma
T: hmm
Soon Twinkle get up and freshen up
Went downstairs and sit with everyone and have their breakfast
Twinkle sit in lobi and crying Ansh see her
Hugged her immediately twinkle shocked first after she too hug him tightly both cuddled each other now twinkle cried more in Ansh arms her emotional comes out While hugging mamma why you crying
Please don’t cry na tell me na I did something wrong you can punished me na but don’t cry I don’t like this when you crying
T: no Ansh why I will punished you
Ansh: Papa scold you na
Just then Kunj and coming in room Ansh saw him instantly give voice to him papaaaa Kunj turned quickly went to them
K: what happened to you why you screamed haa get worried
Ansh:come here na
Kunj goes near them and sit down
K: hm
Ansh: loudly why you scold my mamma haa twinj look at each other and started crying Kunj about hold him
Ansh : no Papa because of you mamma crying see her na
K: Ansh why you crying now you don’t cry
Ansh: because my mumma is cry then I will also cry . No one is crying why only my mamma twinj shocked to listen his words
Tears coming from kunj eyes
K: Anshhhhhh ??
Ansh : yes everyone is happy but why not my mamma
T: Ansh stop
Ansh : aapne meri mamma ko daatha na Iss liye woh rohi hai say sorry to her
K: ok now you stop ok
Kunj wiped ansh tears
Ansh: now you to wiped my mamma tears also Papa twinkle looking at Kunj
T: no Ansh see mamma wiped tears
Ansh : do naa
K: hm Kunj hands shivered he wiped twinkle tears and give her his handkerchief.
K: ok Ansh happy
Ansh : not
K: ab
Ansh : say sorry to my mamma
T: Ansh no need of this
Ansh : teacher told us if we hurt someone
Then we should say sorry to them now you to Papa
K: sorry twinkle
Ansh : not like this Papa hold you ears then say sorry to my mumma
Twinj just quiet
Kunj holding his ears and say sorry to twinkle I M SORRY TWINKLE
Ansh : happy you both shake your hands na again become friends na
They both did whatever Ansh told them for him Kunj kissed Ansh forehead and Ansh hugged both of them twinj to both look at each other with pain
Scene freezes on twinj hugging Ansh tears in their eyes
Precap: twinkle slap Kunj tightly
????????????
In everywhere only a girl suffered
because she is a girl it’s her problem being a girl in our society mostly people give respect to her so many husbands like this only…
they know only one wife of meaning it’s a physical thing they can used when they want
If a husband force his wife to get physical with her it’s also called a rape
Rape don’t means strangers did without a girls permission to touch her
Its a rape men’s only take advantage of girls silence
if they silent it’s good for them it doesn’t mean they are weak there silence it’s there strength not weakness
They have guts to bear pain …
Let’s see what will happen now twinkle fight for herself or not …..
Sorry if I hurt anyone feelings but it’s damn truth of life ???????
I hope you all like it my episode if it’s not good then sorry to you all
Soon Kunj get ready for his punishment ???you all just wait for this only na now no more wait
Bye
25 Comments
Kiya it’s my bday plzzzzzz post one more I beggg u u might be not knowing me I love ur epi plzzzzz post one more
Happy birthday dear!
It was very emotional kiya you are an amazing writer pls post soon…
It was very nice
N too much emotional …I was literally crying n marital rape is more serious issue in our country. I really hate Kunj fir this …hate is the only word
Twinkle has to fight for her self respect
Plz post asap
Waiting
KII ♥
god fingers crossed hope m d 1st one to comment today ♥
srsly it was too emotional too cute ansh was voh apne papa se pyaar krta hai par dat doesn’t mean he will let him do anything thank god it was osm yrrr ansh ne kya vaat lagayi bas twinkle ko yehi chaiye tha apne bache ka support thank god atleast he supported her………♥
kunj really behaved as a watever we can say yrrrrrr its really true rape if husband also widout wives permission forces her den its called rape not some love making session…..
how can a prsn how culd he actually think twinkle stealing d money n iss neil ke or twinkle ke pics ne god twinkle ke haath par bhi toh chottt lagi thii huhhh……
thank god maya or twinkle ke beech mein sab theek ho gaya yrrr maya ko help krne ko karo na twinkle ki kisi ko pata nahi hai kya kunj ne kya kia twinkle ke sath kisi ko sunayi nahi dete kya uska rona 🙁
bhott hogaya n ab yeh slap kun god i can’t wait areeeee KII ♥ abhii intezaar khatam kahan shuru hua hai kunj ko punishment milne ka 🙁
i dont have anger emoji on my key boad bt m sooo hell angry ryt now……..
ladko ko kadar nahi hoti hai how can dey kisi ko haq nahi hota hai ek ladki ke sath zor zabardasti krne ka unko force krne ka unke sath kuch bura krne ka or jhab kunj ne itna maara toh twinkle ke thode bruises to honge naa huhhh 🙁
bas i hope ansh supports twinkle humesha ♥
god kii ♥ plss do post nxt one soon possible ♥
loved it ♥
portrayed everything beautifully ♥
lods of love sissiieeeee ♥
Yar bas kro ab limit hi cross ho rhi ha..according to me twinkle ko kunj ko divorce dena chaiye being a girl aapne liye stand lena chaiye kunj ko chod kr aapni life m kisi aur ke sath settle down hona chaiye…kunj deserve nhi krta usko ek slap nhi bht slap padne chaiye
Really yaar it’s sooo hurtful yaar sachiii …hate kunj to the core u know I am crying now ..how can he even do that he is an animal …sachiii chi chi …hate him ..
First he blamed twinkle for the theft …he lives with her day n night then also he is not able to judge her …???????????…sabke samne usne aisa behave Kiya …
And then how can he …he had again forced her yaar …when this bastard can go with Alisha for holidays …then how can he punished twinkle for the mistake she hasn’t done ..I am.seriously hating him like hell …
Ab basss yar plzzz don’t make twinkle abla naari plzzz …can’t wait to see her slapping kunj coz he deserves more than that …??
Plzzzz make him suffer like hell …my request
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And ANSH loveddddddd him ..the way he took stand for his mother now kunj will again blame twinkle for filling her ears stupid moron …
Plzz one request post soon can’t wait ??????????…
All I want to say that the Episode was “OUTSTANDING “YOU HAD DESCRIBED EACH N EVERY THING VERY AMAZINGGGGG ….HATS OFF …????????????????
Hiii Kiya
mind blowing update yaar
Felt so bad for Twinkle .. pehle toh kunj ne uspe paise gayab hone ka ilzaam lagaya … I m 100% sure ki vo ruppey Riya ne liye honge just to create misunderstandings between Twinj
phirr Kunj forces himself upon Twinkle .. this is so disgusting
kuch scenes acche bhi the .. lyk Kunj Slapping Alisha & Ansh taking side of his Mumma …that was great
Precap is amazing
aisa hi hona chahiy kunj k saath
waiting for ur nxt update
Stay happy ❤
Woww amazing. Plzzz post soon????can u post one more episode bcz its my bday and u r my fav writer. Plzzzz??????????????????
Wowww amazing. Its my bday can u post one more episode for me plzzz. I am ur biggest fan??????.
Plzzzzz. A long one?????
i hate this kunj yrrr koi itna kaise gir sakta man Kr jakar pehle kunj ko bahut maru
Feeling bad for twinkle yrr kab tak sahegi ye sab twinkle usko ek slap nhi usko to kunj ko itna marna chahiye ki uska face hi badal jaye?????????
yrrr sachi kunj se better to neil hota twinkle ke liye
u r amazing fantastic fabulous mindblowing writer yrrrr
episode was mindblowing
kiya tune sahi bola ye hi h apni society ki soch ki sub kuch girls hi suffered kre ??
kunj ki punishment ke liye wait nhi hone ka dear
plzzzzz post soon dear
luv u soo much
Hope soon kunj will get his punishment too and only ansh can control kunj and felt bad for twinkle. How can he do with her and andha words make me cry ?? hope soon MrandMrsSarna will be happy like other couple and post soon if possible
amazing marvelous epi………..
Amazing fab girl
U killed it
Feeling bad for twi
Post soon dear
Yar u r amazing writer
N episode was too emotional
I cried while reading
How he can blame twinkle
He deserves more num of tight slap not only one
Dis is high time twinkle should stand for her self respect , I hate kunj to d core 5 lakh is more to him Dan twinkle I just hate kunj ,twinkle should divorce him
Post soon plz dear eagerly waiting for it..
Love u
its enough now.. atleast now twinkle should stand fr herself.. she had enough of kunj’s tortures physically as well as mentally..
atleast now kunj should get punished and the best wl be if twinkle leave him then obly he’ll realize his mistakes.. plz kiya make him understand twinkle’s importance and make him realize his mistakes..
the epi was too good and plzz plzz post the next one soon plz..
It’s a superb
Plz plz post next update soon eagerly waiting…..
Superb episode… At the same time very emotional… Plz post soon… Wanna c kunj getting punished also please reveal who’s the thief (niki/riya)… Waiting for ur another update plz
Awesome…
Loved it
Sooo emotional episode yaar
made me cry too…
How can kunj blame twinkle for that she have not done.How can he forcefully take advantage of her?Now it’s enough yaar.Now twinkle should take stand for herself.And kunj deserves more slap not just one.He deserves getting hit from belt.Hate kunj to the core….
And now coming to ur writing skills…hats off to u
U just nailed it….
Plzzzz dear post next part asap
I can’t wait to read next part.Plzzzz post soon.I request u
God kiya itna ke motional tha ki I am stil un shock u r right now twinkle has to do something or else itna pain s ke baad to any one would die and ansh saved her
Yr kiya kya bolun pta tune aaj society ki reality btai h because mostly husband apni wife ko sirf ek cheez smjhte h jb mn kiya use kr liya otherwise rude rhte h unke sath !uhne ye smjh aata hi woh aurat unke liye kitna krti h unhe sirf khud ki pdi hoti h !I mean dekho jb kunj ka mn hua ache se behave kr liya otherwise torcher kr liya or uske bad sorry bol diya !aise sorry ka kya faida?
or jb ek husband ko hi apni wife pr trust ni h toh baki ke log uspr trust kyn krenge jb kunj alisha ko apna credit card deta h shopping ke liye usse toh kbhi ni puchta kj tumne kha spend kiye or twinkle ko itna kj bol diya jb ki usko is bare me pta bhi ni h kj !
I think paise ko lekr jo kj bhi hua h woh ya toh neel ya Fir cheery ya riya ka kam hoga !
because I have feeling ki shayad neel bhi kj plan kr rha h !
epi was hilarious superb marvellous
luv u
post soon as you know can’t wait
Yo sistu just Amazing episode Love it,??? ??and shocking also??? but romance cmplt hojata to bat hi kuch or hoti?? but is twinkle ko to always protest karna hai?? post next soon kamini???
Amazing…………?
Ansh stood my his mummy dat was cute. N many more elements were explosive.
Moreover waiting 4d next episode
Precap?
Plz post soon I can’t wait
Awesome Amazing
Har ek emotion dil tak pahunchti hai tumhari ff ki.
I’m seriously in love with your ff
Ansh loves his mom alot.
I really love it.
And the note you gave at last. I completely agree with you
Amazing dear.
You are Star