Guys l am very bad….u all should beat me with ur chappals..coz l always give some promises and everytime,l breaks it.so here is my 19th chapter..so here we goes….
Naina :karan… Pls slow down yaar.
Karan :come fast.. I need to go back soon.
Naina :but why? there is no classes and you are absolutely free today.
Karan :whatever,l don’t like to stay long out of my courtesy..(especially with u)
He said under his breath…
Naina : kuch kaha?
Karan :nope.
Suddenly naina stopped seeing something.
Naina :hey,Karan.. Look at that.. It’s so beautiful…
he turns and sees a waterfall and a mist glacing valley… The scene was indeed beautiful.
Naina :Karan,can we stay here sometime?
Karan :no… I am not interested. Do u want to go to temple? then go and finish of these things… naina’s smile fades…
Karan :what! l am not going to melt by this fake sadness..
Naina makes a pouted look.
Naina :Karan.. Why are u so rude to me?! friends are not like this…
Karan :agar pasanth nahi hei,toh todlo tumhare dosthi,chod dho mujhe aur chale jao kahi…
Naina smiles…
Naina :Karan,do u know one thing?
Karan :what?
Naina :u looks very cute when u are angry…
Karan looks at her and fists his hand to reduce the boiling anger. They reached the temple.
Karan :gowri.. U can go in.. I will be ok here.
Naina :but why??
Karan :because…. Nothing.
Naina :again lie!.
Karan :ah.. No… Nothing,you pls go..
Naina :KABHI NA JAONGA TUMHE CHODKAR.
her words echoed his ears. He looks into her eyes..
Naina :haan.. Tell me Karan,otherwise l won’t leave and will eat ur ears with my talks..
Karan :because.. Mera unse jagda hei..
Naina :kisse?
Karan :bhagvan se..
She literally laughed her heart out when she was answered like that.
Naina :seriously?
Karan :hm..
Naina :why??
Karan :secret hei..
Naina :won’t u share it even with ur friend?
Karan :tumhe friend manega tabhi na..
Naina’s smile fades again and she walks into the temple.
Karan: gowri…
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The noise made karan wake from his thoughts.he was sitting on the steps. People were running here and there. He wasn’t able to figure out. So he made a man stop.
Karan: what happened bhaiyya ?why are u all running like this?.
Man:arey the boat sank in the middle of the river.and the people present in it is also drowning..
He couldn’t understand anything.river boat… what was the connection?Even though he was there for years,he never visited the temple which was only a little far ffrom the hospital. Suddenly his conversation with naina came into his mind.
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Naina: karan..get ready..we have to go to the temple.
Karan:what?l am not coming….
Naina: no way karan.. From today l will decide ur dos and don’ts..so get ready ..quick,its an order…
Karan: kya khaas hei us mandir mandir mei ,job tum mujhe lekar jaana chaahthi hu.
Naina: special.. Aisa kuch nahi hei..par ha…There is a belief, yes there is a river fflowing through the back of the temple. And across the river there is a flower growing known as vaishaki.People believe that if one places that flower at the idol’s feet and asks for a wish..it will be granted.. Even l also want to do it..
He gasped it in a moment but the next sec his breath stopped “GOWRI”.. He spelled it and ran to the back and saw people crying, some rescuing others,but he nowhere found his gowri in the bank of the river and assured that she was also in the boat. He looks for a sight of her and finally spots her drowning the water .he signs rescuers to look in that direction but they were so busy in rescuing others so his tries went in vain. At last he himself decided to go for his gowri.nothing else he did,he took off his t-shirt and was ready to dive into the cold water ,but” how could l take her in my hands”His thought never let him go.he looked around and found a store with chunnars he ran to the store,took one chunnar and jumped into the water. He reached near her ,covered her with the chunnar.she was almost unconscious, somehow he was able to swim with her and reach the bank even in the great flow of river.he laid her down and pressed her stomach so that the water she drank could get out.slowly she started spitting the water.Naina opened her eyes…
Karan: gowri….are you ok?..
He rubbed her hands together.
Naina: karan. karan.. I am fine..
She tries tov stand up.but her leg had been injured while falling from the boat. He who saw her trying hard to get up,once more covers her with the chunnar and takes her in his arms..(oh piya plays)
Naina: karan..
He was leading back to the hospital.
Karan: now what?
Naina signs him to look into her hand .he looks and finds that she still had her clutch on that flower.
Karan: oh…no..
He turns back and steps into the temple. He helps her place the flower at the idol’s feet.and actually both places it together.
Pandit ji: Sadha sukhi raho.tum donom ki jodi ,is maa ki aahirvad she atoot rahega.
Karan: pandit ji, aap galat samach rage hei.
He tried to clear the confusion.
Pandit ji: nahi beta..dhekho,is maa ki darbaar mei aakar tum isko chunnar she sajaya hei,aur padma vaishaki ko is maa ki charnom me arpit bhi kiya ..yeh yaha sirf pati patni hi kartha.apne shadi shudhe zindagi mei koi dikkat nahi aane ka muraat lekar saath mei donom vaishaki ko maa ke charnom mei rakhti hei..ek jodi yeh karliya toh socho voh had janam keliye judh gayi..jai maa Parvathy…
Both looks into each others eyes. And their beautiful eyes gets locked.(oh piya..plays)
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Nairan were walking slowly to the hospital. He applied some ointment and her pain reduced.
Karan: do u want to stay here.
He asked her when they reached near the waterfalls. She smiles and they sits under a tree.Both admires the view.
Naina: can l ask u something.. Why did u saved me.?
Karan gives a death glare.
Naina: what?? this is not gonna boil me ok…answer me…
Karan (smiles a little):kyunki tum mere DOSTH hu….
Naina: really…. but u said that l am not ur friend..
Karan: me…l never said that.
Karan decides to prank with her.
Naina: oh..shayad tumhare bhoot ne kaha hoga…hena?
Karan: haan.
Naina: chal jhoote…
She slightly punches on his arm and tightens her grip on the chunnar. Maybe of cold which was covering the atmosphere or because…. Neither she removed that chunnar nor he asked her to,even after that conversation with pandit ji.. But why?only nairan knows…..??
To be continued…
How was it..hope u all like it…thanks for all who reads my work….l am not regular but l will try my best…thanks a lot..
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Hi.Today’s update was very good. I loved it and I loved Karan saved her even he said she wasn’t his friend which then revealed his hidden feelings. Also, who told you that you deserve chappals, you don’t cause everytime you make a promise and can’t deliver when you do deliver it’s really good. Sorry for writing so much and please update soon. ?
Hi sofia… Thanks for ur comment.. Yeah… Karan saved her even he said tht she is not his friend…l m so happy that u loved the episode… Hey why are u saying sry.. I love reading all the comments.. Do expect such long comments??
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It was amazing Seyal!! NaiRan’s conversation , the way Karan saved Naina , and the Pandit’s words all were just superb!! Karan has accepted Naina as her friend!!!! I loved this part. Waiting for ur next. Update soon. Loads of love!!❤❤❤
Hai jiya…. Thanks a lot and lot and lot for ur constant support… Hey just love ur ff and ofcourse u.???So so much happy that u loved the episode…next will be up soon…
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Y is Karan calling Naina gowri plzzz help me I’m confused
Hai varsha… Thanks for asking ur doubt… Nairan first met in the middle of the road and he lied to her that his name is dev and she who understands that he is lying decides to play with him and introduces herself as gowri…but Karan got caught soon.. But not naina.. That’s why he is calling her gowri…
Hope that after this ur confusion will be over…
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww…… sooo cute.. I just loved this Karan and Gowri Jodi! It’s just Amazing Chechi! I loved it !!??❤️️
From where do you get such ideas.. leave that.. the way you presented the whole episode was marvellous!!! I’m in LOVE with this! Yay! Married couple already!
You are amazing! Love you loads!!!?❤️️??
Sorry that I didn’t comment for the earlier one.. I hadn’t noticed it because I was in Kerala and internet comes in like a lightning! So couldn’t read and comment that time.. but I went through the previous one before reading this! I loved the earlier one too! Introducing families to each other… Naina understanding Karan and NK’s relationship.. that was nice.. and they way she jumped into Dev’s cabin to ask about Karan was very very cute!
I can’t anything more the emojis will…
???❤️❤️❤️???????????????? love you loads!
I can’t say…
Hello resh… Ingane pokkalle… Nyan pongipokum.. Thank a lot for commenting even in ur busy schedule… I know that u r in kerala for ur holidays… So u need to enjoy… onam vacations are almost finished for me…
Love u a lot-seyal ???
I didn’t have holidays at all Chechi.. I chumma bunked college! ? Btw I came back from Kerala and found time to read through all the ffs recently!
You should be encouraged! Appol pokkiye pattu! ? Korachu paranno.. no problem! That feeling is amazing when we are appreciated for good work! Which boosts up our confidence! ?❤️️??
Yeah.. You are right.. Resh.. Ok… Where are u studying resh?. If u could then tell me..So what to say? enjoy ur best… And love u a lot