Hai everyone…I will give u all a good news.. My ff only have a few episodes to become complete…Few means only 8 EPISODES…YES I WILL COMPLETE MY FF WITH IT’S 30TH EPI…but l will miss u all…And u all were awesome.. Today l will like to ask something.. Could u all including my silent readers comment on my upcoming episodes…If u are too busy then,at least on my last epi…Well only if u could then l am not forcing all…Now also am getting good responses…Thanks to jiya,sofia,resh and pooja who are like my sister..,jis chechi,tami di my inspiration..,amelia,nakur&sayyani who commented for the first time,everyone…Sorry if l left anyone’s name…Today l am dedicating this episode to all who supported me including the silent readers and especially to my inspiration TAMI DI…love u all….??
Chapter –23
Karan and naina shifted to Naina’s house. Meghna and Karan became very close friends and Karan started to call her “obbo”a nick name which was by Karan himself. Shardha got a good son and Nairan’s love was intensifying day by day. All of them were waiting for that day.. The most beautiful day in there life. Three months passed by. Karan treatment was over and dev assured that he is free from the disease but Karan wanted to check it,so decided to have some tests…
A night-
The next day,results will come,so that night was special for Nairan…Dr. Dev informed Nk that Karan got rid of his allergy. He was shocked firstly and as he was in a trip he assured to send sandhya to bring Karan home. Karan was so excited and also naina but she was a bit nervous too…As she is going to meet someone from her inlaws and Karan will take her to his home…She was just walking here and there..
Karan :what happened to u?
Naina :oh karan, l am going to meet my inlaws tomorrow..
Karan (smiling ):so.. Mrs. Badthameez is feeling nervous?!!
Naina :nervous aur mei???
Karan stares at her.. At last she gives up.
Naina :ah.. A little.. Actually l am thinking whether ur family will accept me…
Karan :gowri.. It’s not important whether they all like u or not.. It’s more important to know how much l love u…aur KARAN SINGH CHAUHAN KE ZINDAGI MEI KOI LADKI HEI TOH VOH TUM HU,SIRF TUM AUR HAMESHA TUM HI RAHEGA…IT’S MY PROMISE.. TO MYSELF..
Naina :AGAR MEI ISS DUNIYA MEI HI NAHI TOH..
He puts his hand over her mouth..
Karan :aisa kabhi math kehna.. MERA ZINDAGI HI TUM HO,AGAR TUM NAHI HO TOH MEI HOGA KYA..
This time Naina puts her hand over his mouth..
Naina :Karan…No..
Karan :u felt the pain then think about mine…
Naina :l am sorry….
Karan :I LOVE U GOWRI..
Naina :l LOVE U TOO.. KARAN..
Nairan came down for having dinner and returned to their room. Naina was making the bed when she felt Karan’s hand around her waist.
Naina :do u want something?
Karan :yes..
Naina :what is it Karan?
Naina :l want to kiss u.!!!
Naina’s eyes were projected outward…But the next sec she mischievously said “Then do it!”..
This time Karan’s eyes were about to fall down.. He said it only to tease her but…Oh god..
Karan :not now…I will kiss u after my results came. Just wanted to assure it..
Naina :sorry Mr. Kal toh pehle mei tumhe kiss kardega..
Karan :no way Mrs. I will do it first.
Naina :let’s see.
Karan :yeah.. Let’s see..
Both turned and went to the bed…Controlling their laughter was really impossible. But both limited it in small giggles.. They were waiting for the fat next day,unable to sleep woth wide smiles..
Next day-
Meghna as usual went t office,assuring that she will come early home. Shardha decided to go to temple for praying to give positive results. Now only the two were left in the house. Naina also needed to go somewhere based on some charitable work. Karan was so sad that she couldn’t stay with him at least that day. So she decided to go after the results came. Karan was passing a to and fro motion while Naina was gazing at her phone. At last her phone rang. Naina instantly answered it as it was from Dr. Dev. Karan’s heart beat was increasing. She cuts the call and waits for a message,which had Karan’s results. The message came and she examines the results.. Suddenly her smile fades.. Karan’s heart was almost dropped…
Karan :gowri.Kya… Kya hua.. Results positive hi hena..
Naina looks into his eyes and nodded NO..
Tears started to roll out from his eyes.. He was broken.. All his hopes were lost..
Karan :chale jao gowri. I can’t ever become a husband.. I can’t ever get rid of this disease.. Go away and find a better future for u…
Naina slowly removed her gloves,stepped towards him. She touched his face and.” SHE KISSED HIM ON HIS CHEEK”Karan was shocked. He pulled himself away.
Karan :what are doing gowri?!! You…Touched me…You…Kissed me..
She slowly went near him and whispered in his ears.”l told u…That l will kiss u first.. I won”.
Karan :what are u sayig gowri.. U and ur game.. Wait a minute.. Means u…Means my results are..
Naina :positive Karan…now u are free from that disease.. U can leave this umbrella and fly to see this world..
Karan :is it true..
Naina :check urself..
And she shows the phone. He saw the results and gets happy.
His happiness had no borders.. Suddenly he eminde of something.
Karan :waise gowri.. u won.. I asked for a kiss but not on the cheek. M
Naina :chi.. Besharam..
Karan :anythig for u..
Naina :ok.. Then bye Karan..
He suddenly remembers that she had to go..
Karan :mat jaona..
Naina :Karan.. Don’t act like kids..
She was about to leave just then he holds her hand…(OH PIYA Plays). Her whole body got shivered…Fir the first time he touched her without any gloves.. Slowly he hugged her from the back. They stayed like that for sometime.. And then Naina broke that back hug,turned to him and hugged him tightly.. Tears were olling down each others cheeks. But their eyes had a sparkle of their upcoming bright future.. They releases each other from the hug,wipes the tears. Karan kissed her on her lips and she reciprocated…Their first passionate kiss.. Then both parted away…Naina holds Karan’s hand and interwinned her fingers with his.. And walked to the doorstep.
Karan :jaldi aajana.. aaj masimaa aaraha hei aur bohut kuch baaki hei….
Naina :chupkar…Idiot.. I will come soon..
And slowly her jand slid away from his..Naina took Karan’s car for going..
It’s about 7pm. Karan was waiting for Naina. He was trying to talk to her but she wasn’t responding to his phone calls.. Karan was getting tensed. Meghna tried to calm him down.
Meghna:Karan.. Voh aajayega.. She is not a kid..after all..
Karan :ok,but why is she not answering my calls?
Meghna :oh god…How could l calm u down…!
Karan :u won’t understand obbo.. For that u should have loved someone.. Lekin tum aur tumhari bahan sif books se pyaar kiya hei hena?
Meghna :what?? U are saying that we sisters are not romantic!!
Karan :of course.. Look at ur sister,romance ki naam sunte hi bhaag jaata hei vaha se..
He realizes what he said. Shardha and Meghna laughs and he blushes..
Meghna :mumma,ur son-in-law is complaining.
Shardha rolls her eyes at meghna and goes to the kitchen..
Karan :shut up obbo..
Sudenly meghna’s phone rimgs and it dislays”Mr. Wrong no.”
Karan :lo.. Apna deewana bularaha hei.. Udao udao..
Meghna :shut up Karan..
And she cuts the call.
Karan :kya obbo.. Kamse kam attend toh kar saktha dha..
Meghna stares at him..
Karan :l know that u have feelings for him and u are hiding it well. Now don’t try to lie..
Meghna looks at him.
Karan :l know about ur Mr. Wrong no…But l wanted to know something more.
Meghna :what??
Karan :haven’t u ever loved someone…I mean not even a crush other than this wrong no.??
Meghna :to be frank.. I haven’t yet loved.. But had some feelings.. Like.. yeah.. l have for Mr. Wrong no.
Karan :tell me who is he?
Meghna :it’s a long story…And u will get bored..
Karan :at least l will be distracted in something till Naina comes…
Meghna :ok…”The story starts in my college…My first day at my college -…….
To be continued….
How was it guys?? Keep reading..
Precap:meghna proposes kunal….
Next update will be on Thursday..sorry for the typos.
Loads of love-seyal ??????
19 Comments
Hey Seyal how can you even say that it’s a good news that you are leaving us.Before reading the episode only I am commenting.I don’t want you to end the ff.I am really sad about it actually I was busy with my exams that’s why I was not commenting I was just..What to say ?I feel so sorry that I haven’t commented on a couple of your episode.I am literally so sad I don’t know when you will go what I will do of course others are here too but everyone has made a space in my life.Just want to say you that will miss you alot and alot.I will read the ff and surely comment about that also as of now I need to sleep so that my tomorrow’s exam goes well.Do you know I start my day by reading one ff of nairan from anywhere whether it be wattpad or here.Or even the episode.Ok will surely comment tomorrow by night that’s for sure now I will not leave any chance to comment till you are here I know you will be comments there I will talk to you hopefully.Loads of love.
Read the episode seyal it was a bang on.Karan cured and the way he was teasing Naina and the way Naina revealed the truth that he is fine so nice rather cute I could say.Meghna and his wrong number i loved it.Mr Wrong number is so cute from the day I started watching the episodes of swabhiman.I could just sense the twist what you are gonna give us so I hope my guess must’ve wrong but wait this a flash back so all ok then.See you then on Thursday do post.And try to write something new I mean any another ff or os on nairan.Loads of love
Sorry sorry… Sorry.. I am having tears in my eyes to see this much love from all of u… It’s just making me think whether l deserve this love!! amelia,it’s not coz l am getting low comments l announced that l will end it soon… I know all are busy.. And it’s a pretty good reason… I am so happy that u all read and like my small peice of work.. It means a lot for me.. U also have a space in my heart… I won’t forget my friends whom l never met but even loving me and ofcourse loved by me.. Exams are very important in life… So it’s very good to care about them… Will miss u too dear… I really wish to stay connected with my friends like u.. if l could then…l am repeating to everyone that l will surely write another ff or the second part of this ff.. Thanks for ur complement…. and the support… Let’s hope for the best,whether ur guess will become true or not… But a large twist is awaiting in my next two -three updates..
Lovable -seyal????
Its not a good news Seyal!! It can never be.. Why u r ending it so soon.. The thought is making me cry!! I will miss this one of the best ff and of course I will miss u my friend and sissy. I would like to say please don’t end this. Or please start writing new ff and os. Now coming to the episodeepisode , yay!! Karan is totally cured. Aww Karan and Naina’s romance was just so good. Naina won the challenge haha!! Meghna is in love with Mr wrong no… Nk shocked and Nairan rocked!!! Don’t know but Naina not answering the calls r giving me a little tension. Hope nothing bad happen with Naina as Sandhya can’t be trusted anytime. Meghna is gonna propose Kunal!! Overall I loved today’s episode but the one thought was making me upset. Will be waiting for Thursday!! Love ur ff and u a lot!!!!
Hai jiya.. It’s not a goodnews for me also… But it’s already written.. Of course l too miss u.. I will write another ff after this march.. I am happy to know that u loved the episode.. Yeah,meghna is in love but for whom she had the feelings,u all know as it is our wrong no. Love meghnal a lot.. A lot of twistes are awaiting..
Love u a lot and lot-seyal????
Awesome fan fictions my dear friend thank u so much for sharing the precious moments of nairan. When ever I read fan fictions na i m really feeling presence of my favourite samridhankitta as well as karanaina are always super duper jodi in whole global.
Hai angelina,thanks u for sharing that u like my ff. So glad that u like it.. You are right,nairan is the most beautiful pair l have ever seen… And also andridh.. Once again thank u for ur complement..
Love u -seyal???
Good evening my dear friend I read fan fictions of you. I like it so much.
Hello monica… Thanks for commenting.. and keep reading…
Loads of love -seyal ???
Seyal, how can you say this is good news? Why are you ending this and by ending this are you planning to leave TU? Yaar, its nearly my bday and this is what you have given me as an early bday present. Thank you very much. ? Coming to the episode I loved Nairans romance. Please keep writing and sorry for writing so much.
Lots and lots of love,
Sofia ?❤?
Poooiiii Chechi. Sry muthe njan kore aayi ee kadha vayichattu. Njn ee pagil vannatenne kore kaalayi. Enikku swabhiman Te current track kandattu pranthu pidikindu. Ippo latest upadatesinte avide kandappo eduthu vayichatha. Ippola ellam vayiche. U just nailed it chunke.
Plss ithrem pettanu nirthale ee story plss. We really love ur story Chechi. Plsss.
Ningalde okke stories aanu eka aashwasam. Pattucha ithinte season 2 ezhuthu. Allel evare kurichu Vere kadha ezhudu. Pakshe ezhuthu nirtharuthu. Plsss plss plsss.
Loved nairan bond. It’s just superb Chechi. Parayan vakukal illa. Avarde marriagum,first meetingum,frindshipum okke pori aayirunnu.
Kadha polichu kalakki thimirthu?
❤ love u Chechi ?
By ? Pooja ❤??
Pooja!!,seeing ur comment after a long time… But it’s ok….orupad santhosham poojakk ith ishtapettallo. And about swabhimaans’ current track.. Satyayittum ippo written updates polum vayikkarilla.. So don’t know about it.. But it was really annoying when l stopped reading it.. Pooja,nyan nerathe ezhuthi vachathayirunnu ithinte climax,athukond.. It won’t be easy to change the story line.. Really sorry… Pakshe urapayum nyan ithinte second part allengil oru puthiya story ezhuthum.. Plus two alle,athukond march examinu shesham… I am not going to stop writing… As it’s my breath???Pinne why are u not writting dear?…come up with a new story or the last one…if you are busy with the studies then ok.. No problem.
Lovingly -SREELAKSHMI ?????
Enikku ee kadhede track karanam interest poyi Chechi. Enthayalum eni njan ezhuthan poova nammade chunk paranjatu ketillanu Venda. ? Ethrem pettanu post cheyyan nokkam. Pinne ipolthe spoilers vayicho athil avar onnikan poovanna Kande. I’m so excited for it.
Hai sofia.. I am sorry.. But the ending of this ff was even decided bfor l started writing this.. And l had already wrote all the upcoming episodes.. Now just need to type and submit it… It’s not like l am going to leave TU… But won’t be active… No don’t think that it’s ur early bday gift.. Don’t be upset dear… You are my friend and l won’t give a gift which will upset u… When is ur birthday?? and my heartly bday wishes in advance..????.. I will be back after march,l believe… I have told u bfor l luv reading long comments…
Loads of love -seyal ???
Hi, sorry for not replying. My birthday is 26th September. 🙂 Sorry for being a pain could you please update on 26th, if possible, it would really make my day if you did.
Lots of love,
Sofia
I always said that I love you but I take it back.. how can you ever say that it is a good news? Huh?
Too bad yaar! It’s ending too early! ???
Please do try on an os!
Btw I loved the Nairan scenes! Just amazing and damn cute!
❤️️?☺️
But now I’m a bit scared that something wrong is going to happen to Naina..
I hope it’s not Sandhya!
waiting for the next one..please post it soon!
I was just kidding.. I don’t take my words back!
Still love you for your amazing work! ?❤️️
Hey,forgive me resh… I was also kidding yaar.. But l have to resh… I wrote it before l started to write this.. To say,the climax came into my mind first and after that only the story… Yes l will surely try an os… Happy? l belive so… Thank you… Nairan is always amazing duo.. And l love them sooooo much.. I know that u too.. I love meghnal also… They are also very cute.. So l added up a meghnal for the next update.. As per the precap u know na!?.. Let’s hope nothing will happen to naina and if so then sandhya won’t be the culprit..
Love u too-T. S????
Loved the epi.??
?? naughty naina??
Thank u.. Sry for being late..
Loads of love-seyal??