suman was sleeping when she heard the voice of door opening
she woke up
an aangel was aleeping beside her
suman kisses her on hr forhead
suman;mania i think papa is here so,,,, u sleep i will be back
she leaves the oor and comes down stairs
someone enters the hsll
suman face exhibits a huge smile
suman goes and takes bag from his hand
suman;water????
man:yup plzzzz
suman brings water for him
man;sit suman and tell me y were u wakng???
suman;for u shr obviously
yes the msn was shr
shr;oh go how many times i have told u not to waake for me
suman;then for whom i should wake???
shr;fpr none
suman;wellthats impossible
shr;impossible but y???
suman;cuz ur angel doesnot let me sleep
shr smiles;dont u dre to complain me about my angel
suman;then whom should i complain???? ur angel says the same thing when i complain her about u
shr;u complinnher about me???
suman;yes u father and daughter have finishes my personal life
shr;hahahaha thats y i told u not to mrry me i m a difficult man to deal wiith
suman;oh really dnt u think i m able to handle u
shr;ammmm noooo
suman;then how i m spending my life with u
shr;hahaha as a difficult respondibity
suman hits him playfully;dont u daare to say that
shr;ku???
suman;kunke tjh pe mar ke hi to mjhe jeena aya h
shr;atif aslam
suman;shrrrrr
shr;haaha ohk sorry
suman;u r the best thing ever happened to me
shr;dont expect me to say same to u
suman;hhaaaaaa
shr;cuz for me first my angel than u
suman;ya ya whatever
suman makes face
shr gets up and hugs her tightly
shr;u know naw i love u
suman;no u dont
shr;i swear it on my soul
suman;still
shr;like seriously yaar ohk fine tmhare qasam
suman;han ab mjhe mar den
shr;hahaha nae ohk fine angel ki kasam now plzzz smile
auman smiles
shr;gud girl
suman;khana laga dun
shr;ahm bhook nae h chalo tm kha lo main tmhein dekhon ga
suman; g nae m kha chuki hun
shr;what without me???
siuman laughs;no me too not hungry
shr;ohk i m very tired todaay
suman;y???
shr forwards his hand
suman gives her hand
shr;cuz i didnt work in office i was free
he pulls sumu closer
suman;so u must not bbe tired
shr;but i m what to o
suman;ammm sleep
shr;no lets dance
he plays the music
ho karam khudaya h……..
tjhe mjh se milya h…….
they start dancing
tjh pe mar ke hi to ……
mjhe jena aya h……
he spins her
oh tere sand yara khush rand bahara
tu raat ewani main zard sitara
he again pulls her closer
o tere san yara khush rng baahara
main tera hi jaoun jo to kr de ishara………
he gets closer to her more closer more closer just about to kiss her
hen his angel cries
shr;oh god angel now u r behaving like papa enemy
suman smiles;tata mr malhotra
shr makes face
suman goes and picks up the baby and make her not to cry more
ahr enters room
shr;y dont u sing a song she will sleep
siuman;i nt know how to sing lori
shr;ohk u sing for me she will listen it
suman;reaally???
shr;ya plz
suman starts singing
tu ata h sene main
jb jb sansen bharti hun
tere il ki galiyoun se
main har roz guzarti hun
kaun tjhe yun payar kare ga jese main krti hun
mere nazar ka safar tjh pe hi aaake ruke
kehne ko baaqi haai kya
kehna tha jo keh chuke
mere nigahen hain tere nigahon pr
tjhe khabar kia bekhabar
main tjh se he chup chup kr
tere ankhen parhti hun
kun tjhe yun payar kare ga jese main krti hun
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
she stops and looks at baby
she slept
suman;mania slept
she looks at shr
shr was eyeing him lovingly
suman;waht???
shr;nothing niice sung
suman;smiles
shr;seriously koi mjhe ese pyar nae kr skta jese tm krti ho
he hugs her tightly
shr;i really love u
suman; i love u too
scene splits on shrman face
the end
heloooooooooooooooo my dears whats up???
big sorry for not posting my ff
i guess i cant post it now
sunday i broke my bro mobile accidently
he took my tab now i cant write epi or post or laptop to sbka h so cant post from it
so i guess that was the last epi of my ff
i think this is lat update from my side sfter ths no updates from my sidde
so im leaving telly updates forever
but only updates if u will send me private msg i will surely reply u guys if u guys miss me
u r the excellent family very friendly i m gonna miss u guys
maria
marie
beas
prettypreeti my puni
fatima guk e sarfraz
ariana
niyati
anamika
affa api
aishani purkyastha
aishana
rukhsar di
neeti
nandu
niki
anju
riya
anushika
sorry if i missed anyone
i will surely miss u guys
remember me in ur prayers and plzzz dont bash me
love u guys
take care
i will surely reply to all comments on this update
take cre
29 Comments
ff was awesome
no yaar I cant live without reading ur ff ufi
hope u get ur tab back frm ur bro
love u
thank u sooooo much
awwww thaats soo sweet of u
that sounds like impossible cuz he went to hostel
love u too
What?? You are leaving this site? Like seriously??!! Are you can use laptop sometimes Na… Aisa Na karo!!! Please!! Tussi jaa rahe ho? Tussi Na jao… ????
Please try to come, not write at least be here only… Coming to the Os… It was awesome!! So cute??
But please please please don’t leave I’ll miss you a lot… Please don’t go…??
yup i m leaving
yup but my bro always stucks with me when i use lappy
yup u can msg me i will reply my dear
thaank u sooooooo much
i will miss u too
i will try to be back f possible otherwise tata
take care mario
u have been an excellent friend
Excuse me!!! U wrote u r leaving!!! Have u gone mad di!!!!! I will nt let u leave!
Di, u knw na I hate this wrd leaving nd ending then y did u wrote that!??? Ok u r leaving bt y forever??!!! I mean u can come back again na, 1 mnth 2 mnth, 3mnths, 1yr, 2yr, 3yr or anytime!!! U hv whole life to cm back! R u thinking we will leave smeday, then u r thinking wrong I dont knw abt others bt I am nt gonna leave this site ever, ok!! Just come back! I am crying!!! At least fr me cme back, fr us!! U knw my B’day is cming so I wanted every1 to give me a gift! Bt u r leaving!! Di, u can come back anytime! I swear I will always b available! I wrote this fr Pari di also that I shall always b available, she came back also nd nw if u dont come back, I will think u dont care fr me or any1!!!
Di plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz come back!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nd os ws really beautiful.
Kav alvida na kehna, phir milenge chalte chalte! Come back soon, I am waiting fr u- Neeti
excused my dear
yup i m leaving my sweetu
haaaaaaa u said me mad gandi neeti
acha g????????
i didnt know u hate it
sweetu yearsssss can u wait for me for years??????
yup i do have but tme prob u know
no i m not thinking like that cutie
neeti dnt cry u know naw i cant c my sisi crying
awwwww ur bdwhen????? plzzzzz telll me
awwwwww so sweet of u
i will give gift to my deardnt say that i care for u all yar plzzz dnt say it u guys r like my life
i will try to be back when i will gwt time but only try no promise
thank u sooooooo much
hum hain rahi pyar ke phir milen ge chalte chalte
love u lots
tc
You can’t do this to us at all. You can’t leave like this. We’ll miss you a lot more than your ff. You can come here once or twice a week on your laptop but please don’t say bye forever. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. ??
so sorrrryyyyyy zainab i forgot to wrte ur name in the list i m very sorry for that
oh i m sorry swetu but ye to hona hi tha naww when new r coming old have to leave
i will miss u too
awwwwww week passes like wind yar
i will try
dnt cry plzzzz
take care yar
love u
It doesn’t matter at all whether you forgot to write my name or anything like that. What matters is you can’t leave like this. Please don’t ?
Take care..ufaaq..
Nice ..OS
Its a pleasant one?
ohhhhh sorrrrrrrryyyyyy i forgot ur name in the list but u live in my heart u know i m really sorrrrryyyyy diiiii
thank u sooooo much
will miss u
take care
Ufaaq…
I don’t want to talk to u..
U do whatever u want..
Coz u don’t care for d ppl here..
If u did..then u would hve told that u will manage to come here at least once a week..
But no..
So goodbye..
Everyone is just obsessed wid leaving this site..god knows what has happened…so yaah fine…go..!
haaaaaaaaa ws u turned my heart into ashes koile koile kr dia
yarrrrr try to undderstand naw
i will talk with u through pm
i care for all of u
i m sad to know that u thiink like this about me
i will try to be back in some months probsbly six
so u r saaying me gud bye ok sweetu gud bye
nothing has happened time problem yar
ok fine take cre
u r an excelllent compnion
will miss u
take care
and plzzzzz gussa kam karlo apna
Hey uffi..
U know that I didn’t mean that…
But u made me so upset nd agey that I had to say that..
U better be back…
Otherwise….!!????
Love u loads!!
Take care..???
Ufaq dear … I can understand ur situation .. gonna miss u n ur ff’s hell a looooooottt ..
Take care ..
awwwwwww thats sooooo sweet of u fati u r the best
u can miss my ff not me cuz we will talk naw
take care
Ufad di noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo u can’t do
Like that
Plzzzzzbe back
I willll reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy miss u plzzzz edkv chala gaya ab SAP mat jao
Ur is was fab di
u know what smile i like ur ufad di typo error i guess
i m really sorry
i will miss u too my dears
thank u sooooo much
love u
tc
Di ur ff is just amazing. Will miss u ? a lot. Plz keep informing me about ur cat ? in private msg. Love ❤ u and take care ?. Bye ?
thank u sooooooooo much
will miss u too
yeah sure gowtham is fine andd urs???/
love u too
take care
bye
API that’s was the amazing is written by a writer ufaq that’s all ????
I m not in a state to say much
So bs take care
thank u sooooooo much MARIE
i never expected thhat marie will give me such a good bye
i expected a sad but better gud byen
i made u my love thinking u will understand my situation
u made me a writer instead of api good job marie
liked the way u let go our relation
yahan m maama se keh rae the k agli bar hm chutiyoun m karaachi jaen ge r tm……….
bs u made me go cry
now i dnt anna say anything
tacke CARE
API I understand ur situation but I can’t also afford to lose u yr I I Just can’t when I saw all the matter stuff that u write I was getting mad angry sad I didn’t know wat happened n forever no yr I can’t I know I m not a good sister but I….can’t lost u API I can’t and I m angry that I can’t stop u…..but wat to do m angry on my self….
I know ur hurt trust me I never aver want to let go out pure realation which is as clear as crystal…….
Waooooooo yes yes Plzzz do come yr u r leaving us here atleast visit once so I can meet u there are thousand things I want to say to u right now but….I can’t
API I love u it a ke no one could ever imagine !!!
I wish I can stop u I m still sad angry mad
But I hope that one day we will meet n yeah Plzzz stay connected on msg!!
Uffu tera dimaag theek hai yeh tu kya keh rhi hai I m just accepting this as os on an bye letter why ur puni ur bhangra girl will not able to live without her uffu……
Ufii sisso no say its a lie u r joking.
I can’t accept any member leaving the family.
No I can’t.
Ur os was marvellous
Nooo plz come.
I m not happy with decision.
HAHAHAHA MERA dimagh k fuse urr gaya h koi repaaairer nae mil raha my bhangra wali will u help me?????
ohooooooooo i will also die but u dnt die how i will do bhngra on ur marriage if u will die
nope not a joke not aa lie
sorrrrrrrryyyyyyyyy
thankk u soooo much
ohk fine i will be back when i will get time 6 months may be
love u
tc
Now sorry for a llllllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeee comment but did I read it all right? I mean R U SERIOUS? Ufaaq di u just can’t leave us. No way!!! I can understand the situation but still my heart won’t get it. Y!!!! I really don’t know what to say
coming to the OS then it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good. I have been admiring u work ever since I read it for the 1st time. U r a brilliant writer. May ur future b bright nd filled with happiness nd success. I won’t miss u coz I’ll b pming u to keep in touch. Stay blessed forever nd be under my love’s territory
I’ll miss ur wonderful writings
pls try to manage a way to come back somehow
bye bye
itsok my dear no orries
yup i m serious
no i m just leaving writing not u guys
sorry but try to understand
thank u sooooo much
thanks
thanks for that my sweety
thnk u sooooo much for ur wishes
i will be
me too
i will try
love u
tc
bye
Chul bulli… I know ur joking… Please don’t say that ur leaving … Ya Allah please say that I’m dreaming… Yaar chul bulli u don’t know what ur saying… Ur saying that ur going to leaves… No way….I’ll not leave… Don’t dare to think about… OK can say that… U will come after come week or month.. OK year… But don’t say that ur leaving us…. I don’t know what I’m for you… But ur a cute sis.. Seriously I can’t explain… What ur for me… When I talk to… I feel as I’m talking to my own sis… Chul bulli… My eyes tearing.. For u it’s very easy to say goodbye… If now I saw I may huged u and cried… In less time u own my hear… My jaan my baby my chul bulli… My sweetuuu… Kashh… Please say once u’ll come back…
I don’t want to say goodbye to my sis my jaan… I know for u I’m just tu api that’s… We both don’t know each other… But I feel special connection with u… In tu someone called me api it’s u my jaan… I really love…
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Ur fabulous, outstanding, mind blowing, marvelous… I’m speechless… Ur personality is amazing… Never dare to change… I love you… I love you… I love you soo much… Stay happy always… What ever difficulty come on ur life… Face it with a simle… If Allah asked me I have any wish I’ll say to meet my chul bulli… I hope you will don’t forget… Please come back Dea… My dua is always with u… Study well….be a good daughter… Ur the best my chul bulli…
With lots of love
Affa api…
nope api i m not joking
apiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ur comment made me cry
api i m just leaviing writingnot u i m always with u
do u think a shadow cn leave a person??????
i m ur shadow u know naw
ohk i will be back asap i get new tab and will be back with a bash thats a promise to my api
u r my life so u should know ht u r for me me soul u body me body u r soul
me too feel like tht there is sth between us
api ask ur mom if she had someother daughter????
no api dnt u daare to cry biddai k liye sanbhalo warna log kahen ge besharam dulahn h hahahaha sorry for joke
nope itsnot easy
iwill be back i promise
no u r my sisi not just tu api
know u very well
i love u too api i love u alot
thank u api
u urself is the best ap ko pta h mjhe apki sb se achi cheez ap ka naam laga tha thats y i told u not to change ur name cuz affa is best
thank u apilove u too api
love u lots
with love
chulbuli