Hi guys I am back though the comments did not reach 20 I thought I should post this episode now and the next one next year ?
But if I get 20 comments I would post soon
Okay now thank you for commenting on my previous episode I feel so bad that I can not reply to your comments but the problem is if I reply I won’t be able to read your wonderful ff’s and I can’t afford to miss them
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Let’s start
Kunj’s POV
The next day when I woke up I found my queen in my arms but her face …. her face did not have the shine the brightness which it once had I smiled looking at her and kissed her forehead and slowly loosened my grip on her body and left to freshen up
“ Good morning Twinkle “ I said applying jam on the toast She did not reply she took a bottle from the fridge and left for her room ignoring me “How could she ignore me ?” My brain questioned “She is angry with you “ My heart replied “ But isn’t it too much “ My brain urged “No she has the right to do so you have hurt her a lot and broken her completely “ My heart replied supporting my decision to make up to her
“Gur gur “ My stomach growled “I am damm hungry Twinkle Ko khush karne se pehele apne papi peth ko Khush karlu ( Before making Twinkle happy I should make my stomach happy ) “ I Thought grabbing a plate After finishing breakfast Twinkle had still not come out of the room
“ Its all because of me “ I thought while trying to open the door As I turned the knob “dham “ I fell down as twinkle had opened the door she was sad her face was even more pale tear marks could be seen My Twinkle was so sad I had never seen her so sad “Twinkle “ I called out to her but she did not reply it was as if I am invisible she went to kitchen and grabbed some cookies and again left for her room
“ I understand she needs time “ I thought and left for completing some of my office work The door bell rang and I opened it there was a middle aged lady there “ App khon “ I asked her “ Sir I am Kamla I work here “ she said’ Oh then come in and start your work “ I said moving in resuming my work “ Voh Sir I am leaving the job “ she said “Why ?” I said turning towards her “Sir Voh my husband cannot see me working in this condition “ she said pointing towards her belly and I understood what she meant to say “ Achha Okay “ I said handing her some money “Thank you sir “ she said and left Twinkle was also pregnant and she also had to work in that condition all because of me …
*****************************A leep of 7 days *****************************
7 days have passed since that incident I still have to hug her and sleep so that she does not cry She hasn’t reacted to any of my questions her gynaecologist Mr. Shikhavat and her Mom Mrs. Shikhavat have tried meeting her but she does not speak at all she hasn’t smiled a bit nor has she cried a bit infant of others She only cries during the night stuffing her mouth so that I don’t come to know she is crying she does not know that our hearts are connected and I do not need words to know what she is feeling like
Mr. Shikhavat has asked me to make Twinkle speak but how do I do that she does not say a word Twinkle came out of the room and walked past me I could not take it anymore I held her wrist and pulled her close to me her front touching mine I closed her mouth with one hand so that she does not speak “ Twinkle I know you are sad, angry frustrated and what not knowing that we lost her child “ she stopped protesting looked into my eyes her eyes were teary and mine too she broke the eye lock and looked here and there “ I am sorry Twinkle please comeback to me “ I said pulling her close to me
She tried jerking my hand but she was too week to do so I tightened my grip around her “Ouch “ I screamed Twinkle had bitten my hand “Ouch Ouch Ouch “ I said blowing my hand This Siyappa Queen na “ Twinkle “ I shouted s she went inside the bathroom “ Twinkle its so cold in the morning take bath when the sun is shining bright “ I said but I guess she ignored it.
I opened the door brought the milk in and kept it to boil it has been my daily routine After around half an hour Twinkle came out of the room and sat down on the couch she was a bit different today “ Twinkle coffee” I asked “No I am not hungry “ she replied finally she is reeling I thought to myself while she was busy surfing the channels “How to take care of your baby “ A show was about to start when I switched the channel to Twinkle’s favourite Tom and jerry
Twinkle did not smile for once she did not even drink the coffee around 15 minutes after I was laughing like hell on the not so funny parts ,Twinkle was still sitting there without an expression my Siyappa queen was now a Silent Queen “Kunj when are you leaving “ she said standing up leaving the room “Never “ I said pulling her towards me with such a great force that she sat on my lap “I will never leave you Twinkle “ I said moving my face close to her ears “ Kunj Please leave I don’t want to stay with you “ she said emotionlessly “ But I want to “ I said with puppy eyes that always work on her but this time it did not “ Fine I will leave “ she said standing up “ Then even I will leave “ I said standing up “Urgh” she said and left “Twinkle I loved you Love you and will always love you “ I thought to myself
Around 10 when the sun was shining bright I took amy clothes and moved towards the room when Twinkle locked the door “Twinkle open the door “ I said banging the door “ You wanted to stay na so suffer “ she said “ Urgh why are you so stubborn Twinkle “ I said trying to break the door “It wont break so easily “ she said “ If you are stubborn I am even more “ I sad and walked out of the house
Kunj’s POV ends
Twinkle’s POV
“Thank God he left ” I thought to myself and looked out of the window “Kunj” I said to myself looking at Kunj who was standing in the centre of the garden without his shirt with a bucket full of water taking bath in the middle of the garden All the girls were staring at him “Idiot ” I muttered to myself and opened the room of my room and then the main door this mad person had also stated the radio which was playing the song Kukard kamal ka He was putting buckets of water on his body showing off his perfectly toned body to everyone “Kunj ” I shouted and could see him smirk I stopped the music “You all may leave is some show going on here that you all standing and seeing ” I shouted at the girls standing there
“Wait Girls India is a free country and you have the right to stand anywhere you wish too and watch anything you like you don’t need her permission ” he said pointing towards me “and I have no problem in you all watching me ” he continued moving his hands through his hairs
Twinkle’s POV ends
To be continued …..
Love you all take care ?❤
51 Comments
Muahh love itttttt awesome last scene esp amd pls nxt yr nahi abhi I need it plssss
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Good episode
Thank you 🙂
Mili I loved it. Please try to post soon.
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Hey Shruti (di),
I loved it like hell! To be honest this FF of yours is my favorite! You are damn good when it comes to writing 🙂 Keep up the great work! Love u ♡♡
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Thank you so much 🙂 I am glad you like the story 🙂
Love you 🙂 Take care 🙂
Mili di…. Awwww…that was lovely…
I love it soooo much….
Post the next one asap…..
Love u
Thank you 🙂 Will try posting soon 🙂
Love you too 🙂
Awwwww its was sad as well as cute but there is something that tw had done in those 7 days that she become so dull and pale Hume nhi pata ki kunj ke us months leap se pehle kya kiya ciz u directly showed the leap I excited like hell to read it ..ur this few shot is my fav I just low to readbit so plz post soon forme plz
Thank you Vanu 🙂 Its just that Twinkle had cried so much in this 7 days that she looks pale And before the leep Kunj had made out with Twinkle which made her pregnant so she had to leave her family and all and settle in Mount Abu 🙂
I will try posting soon 🙂
Love you 🙂
Superb
Twinkle ke luya bura lag raha hsi but kunj is kunj loved it
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Awesome
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Hey chilli ?
Woaaaah ???????I seriously loved this episode. Oh lalaaaaaaallaaaaa???????it was damn funny man. Just loved it
Dont do nainsaafi and ppost it in this year only ok.
?????post soon
Love u?
Thank you 🙂
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Fabulous sidmin I’m in love with this ff and the last scene was superb and plzzzz post the next ASAP
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Hey mili api epi was awesome….
Emotional…last part was superb…i cant wait for nxt….plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i want nxt today itself plzzzzzz post nxt soon i am sooooooo much excited for nxt…….plzzzzzzzzzz dear post nxt soon…..luv u for such a nice ff….
Thank you so much 🙂
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Hi sidmin m first time cmnting ur ff…and b4 i cmnt ur os…. I love ur all ff very much…its suparb….
u know when i saw ur this epi i start to read it and i thought that why kunj s behavior is so calm,cool and positive..then i read the title clearly and saw that its not that ff what i thought…u know i thought this ff my revenge made me meet my love sily me…sry if the title i said wrong…and after i read the epi clearly…and last scene i luv it very much…
Ok i know m bak baking to much…sryyyy…now u see my cmnt regular in ur ff……..post ur revenge made me meet wala ff because its my fav ff of urs….
And Post next epi soon… Luv u….
Thank you so very much 🙂
Love you 🙂
Will try posting the other ff soon Its just that I feel The episode is small so just adding a few more scenes 🙂
Love you 🙂
This episode was just amazing
Please post next epi this year only or in this week
please please please
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Hey Mili
Its just amazingly amazing epi… Last part tho???????? Mill plz post my revenge fplzzzzzzzzzzz ????? if u r reading my comment do Tell me when will u Post my revenge ff? Just can’t wait for it…
Thank you di 🙂
I have written the episode but I feel its small so just extending it a bit 🙂
Will try posting on Thursday 🙂
Hehehe kunj was awesome feeling sad for twinkle don’t make twinkle forgive so easily the episode was good do continue and post soon before the year end
Hehehe kunj was awesome feeling sad for twinkle don’t make twinkle forgive so easily the episode was good and funny ? do cogntinue and post soon before the year end and post your another ff too
Thank you Twinkle won’t forgive Kunj so easily 🙂 Will try posting soon the other ff too 🙂
so cute epi yaar.. loved it
love you
Thank you 🙂 Love you too 🙂
Hey it was awesome
Thank you 🙂
Hi mili di …aashiya here. ..commenting 1st time here. ……di ur ff z just soo owsm. …I love d way u write…..ur too good ……Acha jaldi se pls twinkle or kunj ke beech me sab this kar do….plshhhh……or eak baat or puchni thi meko……would u like 2 b my frnd☺☺ if u want den…I won’t force…….and one more thing …happy belated birthday. …….I’m wishing too late …I no …so sorry …..
Buhbye ….Love u ……poSt soon. ….take care…nd don’t forget ur chotu sissy ..??
Hww so cute 🙂 Will try posting soon 🙂
Love you girl 🙂
I would make everything fine between Twinj soon 🙂
And I would love to be your friend 🙂
Love you too
Love u 2…3…4…di ….u no I was waiting so eagerly for ur reply .
Nd thanks for being my frnd???
Amazing episode.. soo good
Thank you 🙂
Hey mili…..lovely epi…..and funny too???
Nd pls post d nxt one this yr only
Loads of love?
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Hi my white mailer mili, todays episode was superrrrrrrrb n funny too n last part toh amazing twinkle feeling jealousy wow…. waiting for next episode….so pls post next asap n your second ff too….
Love you♥♥
“Shalini/Neha”
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Hey Mili,
Cant be commenting long but this epiosde was fab! Loved the end! ? post soon!
Lovess! xx
Thank you for commenting all the best for your coming papers 🙂
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hayeeee hey bhagwaan mili……. 😀
kya yr last part ki vajah se jo bhi sadness emotional episode tha vagera vagera voh sab aise bhaag gya hahahahahahahaaaa bas hassi aa rhi hai hey bhagwaan kunj bhi naa matlab kuch bhi hahahaaaaa loved it yr sooooo much uffffff………….soooooooo cute
buckets lekar kukad da malada ganna chala kar garden mein bathe krna n saari girls staring him hahahahaa epic ohhhhhh lord……and den above all twinkle being jelous n also telling girls to run away den kunj’s counter part to stop dem alll was perfect loed it………..♥♥♥♥
love u lods mili u nailed it♥♥♥♥
Thank you so much ?
Love you too ?
All the 16 parts were fabulous dekho Maine saara ek hi din main pad liya kaise tumhare my revenge……..love ko pada that air comment bhi kr diya
Bye
Lotsvof love and do continue soon
Thank you so much
You really read all the 16 parts
Thabk you so much love you
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