Hi Guys Its SidMin here with a brand new ss The story line is quite unique because none of the previous and ongoing ff’s have introduced this concept of Twinkle being a TOMBOY so we hope you like it
(I wish it gets posted on the 21st of September )
HAPPY BIRTHDAY RASHI
I Had written this post a long time back but wanted to post it on a special day so what more special than your birthday Rashi So here is a small gift from my side for you 🙂 Hope you like it 🙂
Lets begin :
Daam. He was there yet again .This time with the hot chick of our college Mahi.I don’t understand why he does not see me Do I look ugly ?
I am Twinkle Taneja rich and tomboyish.I am 5’5 and 55 kgs and I am a ……………….women yes I am I have I have b**bs I were a ripped jeans with a crop top or a sometimes a shorts and a long top I tie my hair in a bun and I hate those lipsticks which these hot chicks in our college keeping applying on their lips I were hoops in my ears and wrist bands .I am quite popular in college me along with UV, Randhir, Sanyukta,Suman,Shravan, Dev and Sonakshi together our group is called the back benchers I am very looked up in college and Scary too.
Me and UV were friends since we were in school.
UV is a player He changes his girlfriends faster than he changes his moods.It is such a pain t remember the names of his new girlfriends.But this time its Mahi Kaur whom all the boys move around sticking out their tongues and wagging their tales about I hate her.And here she is just wanting to join our group. We will see that …
“So Mahi our college has 3 types of girls the first who are Nerds By nerds I mean those who help everyone out during exams and project submissions The second one are those girls who only come here to show out their body who these boys(pointing to the boys in our group) Love hanging around with” I paused “And the third one” she asked curiously “Well the Third one is Me Twinkle the only girl to be of this type wearing ripped jeans and hoops and writs bands “”and bit type of gangster “ He added to it Mahi smiled I kicked him on his ass and he winced in pain Dramebaz I know he is Mahi stared at me in disbelief and I stared at her giving her a what’s your problem vala look to which she preferred changing the topic “Are you all right she asked Uv” “I am fine Miss It just that this Girl Twinkle my baby doll Is my childhood friend we have kissed each other may a times when she had a flat chest and I had a……..”He shut up abruptly seeing my face “You are so funny I like you “Said Mahi with an artificial accent that I knew was not her own .My blood boiled as I saw UV lost in her eyes I left the place.
In the corridor as I walked in my thoughts thinking of what UV and Mahi would be doing I was about to slip and I closed My eyes in fear but then a pair of strong hands Held me tight I did not see his face nor did I thank him just left the place abruptly.
“This evening we have a party” announced my mom as I entered the hall “Mom pls no I am not in a mood to attend one” I replied “Twinkle you have too as a special client is coming to meet you “ Dad requested me “Fine” I replied “Twinkle your clothes are ready and the parlour girl is also there Just choose the dress you wish to were “ My mom said and I nodded .
As I reached my room I could see it full of traditional dresses Mom says that the beauty of an Indian women gets glorified when she were’s a traditional dress I choose a A pink a golden and Baby Pink colour lehenga accompanied with a silver long ear ring which had a peacock design “Neck piece” asked one of the parlour “ I don’t ware them coz I get rashes” I replied politely
In the evening the party began and as I descended down the stairs I saw people staring at me Am I looking like a fool I thought But Mom and Dad said I look beautiful … Oh God for a parent their child is always the most beautiful Hope someone could tell me how I am really looking like sighed Thank god UV isn’t here otherwise He would burst into laughter seeing me in this dress He never attends such parties for him these are boring He would never like to attend them I am always left out alone in such parties as all the oldies are present here complimenting me on my looks I always had to reply back with a smile “Thank you so much” These were the only words I could speak in these types of parties I was walking thinking about these things when I suddenly slipped I closed my eyes in fear When I felt two strong hand holding my waist preventing me from falling down When I opened my eyes I saw Two chocolate brown deep eyes seeing me I felt as if I would get lost in them I was just about to when our eye lock was broken by my Mother’s voice “Twinkle beta are you fine” He immediately helped me stand up I wanted to know his name but the only words that came out of my mouth were “Thank you “ I kept staring at him He was Hot Se*y and what not he was well dressed His fashion sense was awesome he was dressed in in a blue three piece suite
(Kunj’s dress:https://encrypted-tbn2.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSLjEGbG5R7SyODT0EyH-UALO0G2IApC9gWkiPgTVoySQ80WfB4)
Looking Hot Twinkle stop thinking about him you don’t even know him I reminded my self
“Kunj beta “ My father said and hugged him “Twinkle beta he is Kunj Manohar Uncle’s son” My father tried reminding me about him “Yes I remember Saddu right “ I said with a grin on my face “Saiyappa Queen right ?”He said with a similar grin
TO BE CONTINUED
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Guys I hope you aren’t confused regarding the ss The characters would be introduced as and when required and yes This part was in Twinkle’s POV and so will the next be Vey soon I will introduce Kunj’s voice and then you would get a clear view of all the things and the missing links too
Hope you like it please do comment A long comment is not required a short one will also do 🙂 So please do comment The number of comments will decide the fate of this SS and the next update will be on 27th-28th(Hopefully) 🙂
50 Comments
It was amazing! I loved the start! It really is a different concept. Write soon as I am waiting for more of this. Love you ?
Thank you So much Monica and Love you too 🙂
Milli….thank u so much for this special birthday gift….luv u loads….???
And this ff is very unique….loved it to the core….
Thanks for ur lovely wishes…..?????
Thank you so much Rashi and Love you too
Happy Birthday once again 🙂
Hi sidmin
Nice one
Thank you Ramya 🙂
Omggggg…..mili….what a start yar…..d way twinkle described herself being a women was toh???
Amazing start……hoping to get d best out of this ss
Love u ??
Thank you so much Kruti and Twinkle’s description of being a girl is what you liked the most so stay tuned because you are going to get many such dialogues from this ff 🙂 Hope you like them too 🙂
Superb ss.. Loved it…
Thank you Sidhanshi 🙂
Amazing concept its quite diffrent❤ I lovr tomboy twinkle??? eagerly waiting for the next one! Do continue asap❤
Thank you Anam 🙂
Sooo sweet! I loved it sooo much!!! It was amazing! N that uv-mahi-twinki part was just ???
Thank you so much Ayu 🙂
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Kamaaaaaaal kar diya.
Wowwwwwwwwww?
Awesome blossom
I wana read agaagien ka
Jaldi upload karna
Love u❤️
Thank you so much Chiku Love you too 🙂
mili….loved tw new look…
n twinj know eo…loved it?❤??
n post nxt asap .
n ur prev ff also i miss them
love u?
Thank you Sujina Love you too 🙂
Awesome
No confusion
Just mind blowing?????
Thank you Angita 🙂
Wow amazing concept.. really loved it.. and awesome start.. and the grins on their faces calling each other names was??.. I loved this tomboy concept.. do cont soon ?
Thank you SidVee 🙂
Nice episode sidmin post asap
Thank you Sushmitha 🙂
Kamaal
Dhamaal
Rumaal???
This is what I can say…
Mazaa aayegi?
???
Bye bye…love u?
Thank you Laddoo Love you too 🙂
Hey sidmin
New concept twinkle as tomboy
Quite interesting
Waiting for next epic
love you
bye
Thank you so much Payal 🙂
awesome one…I really liked it but just want to ask u that is uv n tw hv kissed each other or uv was just kidding…anyways plz do post asap…
Thank you so much Tamanna and about Twiraj kiss UV is talking about their childhood when they were quite young and immature So they had a friendly kiss Like one gives to his or her Best friend 🙂
O god kya tareef karun main uski jisne apke hath banaye wow di i know that you uploaded it today only but I can’t wait for next chapter plz update soon or else I’ll go mad
Thank you so much Subhangi 🙂 I would update soon and will not let you go mad 🙂
It was amazyn….luvd twinkles new look?
…… It was very different and unique …..
Thank you so much Maggi 🙂
Amammmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaazzzziiiiinnnnggggggg
Jayada nhi likha Sakti bbye
Love u
Thank you so much Bulbul 🙂 Love you too 🙂
Shruti sorry for late comment actually I was hell busy…I loved the start…unique concept…loved twinkle’s new look…waiting eagerly for next episode…
Thank you 🙂 Its fine if you comment late you need not be sorry for it 🙂 Because friendship meh no sorry 🙂
Hey ! Mili sorry for the late comment….
Yrrr what a amazing story line…. superb….
it’s so different….. it’s so good to imagine Twinkle with tomboyish look’s ….hat’s off to you for ur so unique idea……
Waiting for the upcoming episodes…..
love you???
Thank you so much Sayeeda di 🙂 Love you too 🙂 and your words are making me blush 🙂 Love you 🙂
Amazing fabulous Shruti……
Amazing fabulous Shruti……:*:*:*:*:*:*:)
Thank you Sana 🙂
Hey Sidmin,
It’s a really new concept. The starting was great. Looking forward to more. Do continue soon.
Loads of love.?
Thank you Ria 🙂
hey shruti tu muje marna cha rhi hai marle bt yr
srsly so sry dekh me pagal hun tune bataya bhi fir bhi cmnt nhi kia so sry yr
bt its amazing….fabulous…n luving it soo mch c u soon……….luv u lods……..
Thank you Baby 🙂 Love you too 🙂
Hey Sidmin! Im super sorry for commenting late ..
But damn this story it sooo good di! And yes the last part was shocking also quite sweet ?✌??
Love you dear and hope i get to read the other part soon 🙂
Thank you Romaisha its fine if you comment late what maters is that you commented 🙂 Love you too 🙂