Thank u friends for give ur support…. First I think to stop this ff… But I read all of ur comments and also replied all of u…. Let’s get into the story…
Rudy and Ansh and Gauri becomes a friend…
Gauri’s mother called her… So she tells bye to them and leaves to her house… Rudy and Ansh also leaved to their house….
In evening,
Gauri buys some vegetables in market…… At the time they heard some big sound… Hearing this all gets panic…. Gauri goes to that place where she heard the sound………. Its like some bomb blast…. Gauri goes to help them…. At the same Om heard about this news…… This news gives him a shock…. Because he think if Rudy and Ansh are goes there and he quickly phoned him but Rudy don’t attended it….. This is makes him to loose his hope more worried……. Then he drives his car very rashly to that place where accident takes place….. Almost all the peoples are send to the hospital…. She prays the god to save them…. Her prayer get disturbed by the sound of baby’s crying….. She saw that baby who is inside the little burning house…. She rushed there but she can’t go inside due to burning flame..
Then she jumped inside the house through the window…. At the same time Om also reached that place and sees the scene of Gauri’s jumping inside the burning house…. He also rushed that place to help Gauri…. Gauri saves the baby and gives that baby to one lady… That lady thanks her… Before she tries to come outside one wooden stick attack her leg…… Om reached there and sees that….. Gauri fainted due to suffocated… Om take one blanket and rushed inside she takes her outside…
He takes her to the hospital… Rudy calls him… Om asked are u safe na…. Pls don’t leave the house…. Take care of Ansh……
rudy: ok bhai…. When u will come…. Where are u…
Om: I am in hospital rudy….
Rudy: what happened bhai…
Om: don’t take tension rudy… I am alright… Actually I at mitted one girl at hospital… Yesterday we see one girl in temple na that girl only…
Rudy: what that girl is Gauri,
Om: did you know her…
Rudy: today only we are meet her and we become a friends… And how is she bhai…
Om: doctor checks her rudy…then did u know her house…
Rudy: ya bhai I know her family…
Om: that’s good…pls inform them Rudy…
Rudy: ok bhai I will inform them and I will come with them…
Om: no you stay with Ansh… Don’t leave him alone..you inform them only..
Saying this he cut the phone…
Doctor comes outside…
Om goes to him and asked how is she doctor…
Doctor: don’t worry… Now she is alright… Due to fear only she fainted… And her leg get hurt because of wooden stick attack her leg severely..
In the mean time Rudy informed about her to her family.. … sarala got more worried but Arjun specifies her.. And they say tanks to Rudy move to the hospital….
That the time her family also reached hospital…
They asked receptionist and reached the room where Gauri is atmitted… Om sees her family.. Sarala sees her daughter through the class and started crying…. Om goes there and says aunty don’t worry now she is alright… And explained her what doctor says… Sarala says to Om…
Thank u bata for save my daughter…
Om: don’t say thanks aunty… Because of ur daughter many peoples are saved… She don’t think about herself… She jumped inside the burning house and saves one little baby’s life…her goodness only saves her…
Sarala: smilies very proudly at her daughter’s boldness and helping mind…. She says now u can go to ur house bata I will take care…
Om: its ok ma I will wait…
Sarala: but ur family is waiting for u na.. Pls go you stay here for more time na…
Om: thinks why I can’t leave her like this… When I see her like that I can’t see what is happened me around…but my heart are saying me not to leave her… What happened to me… His thought is disturbed by Arjun..
Arjun: thank u so much bhai… We will take care, u go and see Ansh and Rudy bhai.. He leaved from their with heavy heartedly…
I will stop here guys… Because of ur comments I am writing this story again… I give my best guys… U can give ur suggestion… Now I think I was wrong because of one girl I think to stop it na…. But ur support made me write…. Thank u friends keep reading… I will satisfy ur all demands…. Pls give ur valuable comments… Ur comments only my strength….
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B.K.Maha….
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Nice
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good one
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super maha continue. like this
super maha continue like this
Thank u dove…. Sure I will do it…
It’s awsm ka I loved it so much ka.. N v all r so happy that u r continuing.. All the best just keep going ka …
Thank u Haridhra….. Keep reading….
Beautiful and simple…..dear……Can u pls send links of ur ff’s previous episodes……pls…….i really want 2 read all in one go……I don’t know whether u know me or not…..Well am renima….and everyone calls as renu and reni here…..U can call me by name or di…ur wish…
And i want 2 say…..don’t think about 2 stop ff…..this is a platform 2 show ur creativity…..When one writes that means he\she ‘s feelings are somehow portrayed in unique way only…..When one tells it is nice that means he\she has understood what u actually wnat 2 convey …..Think that here so many people are able 2 understand u as well as ur creativity…..So dear……Just write as much as u can……And keep continue 2 entertain readers with wonderful work……All the best ……
Thank u so much di…. I should call u as di because I don’t have sisters….. Keep reading…..
Thank u so much di….. I will call u as do because I don’t have sisters…. Keep reading…
If possible read my rumya four shots and comment dear…..
Sure di….. I will read it…
remeber me! i am eva!and hi to everybody who bashed me very badly.and for those who told i have been rude i was just giving my opinion and i didnot thought it will hurt so many people. actually i was in a bad mood that day becoz my bf and i had fight and he slapped me and i took out my full anger on u maha actually without reading the whole episode i found some spelling mistakes and then i wrote some rubbish but now realised my mistake. sorry maha and all donot misunderstand me.sorry maha big hug
I am really sry Eva… Because of me all are scold at u… But I don’t want to do this to hurt uu but I think to share my feelings to my friends…. But they are loved me that much that’s why they are scold me…. I said sry towards them….. But its ok but pls try to avoid this much of rude to others… You can said ur opinion I will correct my mistake next time…. I am really happy you realized ur mistake… I again I said sry…. Pls don’t get at them because of me they said like that….
its ok maha dear and i am not rude always that day my mood was not good thats it and why are u saying sorry mistake is mine. i didnot want to hurt and i am not bad yaar!i am also good person like everybody else and everybody has bad mood and if i am in bad mood then i will talk something rubbish like pinky otherwise i am a sweet person. sorry with puppy face like rudra
I can understand it dr…. Its ok don’t say sorry….
It is nice one dear..
Thank u Nikitajai….. Keep reading….