Friends I think u are didn’t liked this ff… If Its so pls say it guys or give ur suggestion…. I will try my best… I hope I can full fill ur suggestion….. I write Today episode is to know about ur suggestion…. Thank u guys for who commented me…
Let’s get into the story…
In oberoi mansion,
Rudy comes with suitcase which is placed in his hand to Om room and says, bhai I am ready now we can go…
At the same time before Om could react, Ansh come with little suitcase like Rudy, and says I am also ready….
Om confusingly looked at them? and asked.
Where u two are going…
Rudy: not two bhai we three are going to Delhi…
Ansh: yes chachu….
Om: I am going for official work not picnic…
Rudy: u do ur official work and we two are enjoy our holidays…?
Ansh: ya chachu now my exams also finished so I to come with u pls take with me…
Om: goes to her and says Ansh, Sivani is there na you know Ansh how she will cry without u… So u stay here I will return soon…
Ansh: mamma is there na to take care of her… And i will tell sivani she too accepted…
Jhanvi comes and says, beta pls they also accompanied u…
Om: mom I booked the ticket only for me … How they will come….
Rudy: don’t worry bhai… I booked the tickets for us….
Om: you planned well.. Then what next come we can leave now… Saying this they come downstairs…
They said bye to all then move to airport…✈
Next day,
Om Rudy and Ansh reached Delhi….. They go to the room where they booked and after freshen up they moves to their guest house…?.( they have one guest house in Delhi this house near to Gauri’s house?)
Gauri and Arjun get ready to go temple…?
Om and Rudy and Ansh comes with car… Suddenly car breakdown near the temple…
Rudy: this atmosphere is cool… I loved it…
Ansh: yes chachu I am also loved it…
Om: called the manager and says to arrange the another car…?
Om: in ten minutes another car is come after that we can move….?
Rudy and Ansh gives hi-fi??
Gauri and Arjun comes temple…
Om feel something different at the same time Gauri also get this feel…
After finished her prayer they comes and she seen pani poori she goes and buy it and she throws in air and catches in her mouth ( just like dbo in dhaba incident)
Om: sees this and smiles…
Rudy noticed this and asked what bhai..
Om: nothing car is came we can go now saying this they went to the car..
They are reached the house… This house is little bit big and also lot of workers are there to keep this house neat and clean….
They are finished their launch and Om leaves to office…
On the way to office he again she this girl Gauri… She is playing with children in roadside… He smilies at her childishness…
Rudy and Ansh feels bored they come outside to roaming…
Ansh sees Gauri and says chachi look there ? we see na one girl at temple…
Rudy: sees this and says come we go…
Rudy goes to Gauri and says,
I am Rudy….
Gauri: my name is Gauri…
Ansh: I am ansh..
Gauri Neal’s down before her and says sweet name laddoo…
Ansh: I looking like laddoo…. Saying this with pout…
Gauri: I like laddoo and also I like u…. U didn’t like this name don’t worry I will not call u by that name..
Ansh: its ok sweetu…
Gauri says thank u laddoo…
Rudy: u two finished ur naming ceremony…
Gauri: no in one name is remind to give one person..
Rudy: who’s this…
Gauri: you only… I will give u a sweet name…. Thinking sometimes after one minutes ur name is duffer….
Ansh laughed at him and gives hi-fi?
Ansh: sweetu u give a super name…. ?
Rudy: pouted and after sometimes he too smiles… And asked let be friends….
Ansh and Gauri Shout’s friends….
I will stop here guys…. Ur comments only made me wright this ff further…. If u did’d liked it I will not wright this ff further… Waiting for ur reply…
By,
B.K.Maha…
28 Comments
oh god! do you even know english?if cannot write correct english then donot insult the language. and coming to the story it was too boring. i hated it. will you discontinue your crap becoz u are wasting yours aswell as others time. so plz stop wasting your time and learn good english and writing skills as you are not capable to write a ff learn those from shama di or renima or kavya or sat or srinidhi read their ffs once u will get to know what are writing skills!
hey eva be cool don’t be so rude if you don’t like this ff mean why are you reading this just get lost and one more thing we should encourage them to improve they skills not discourage them like you first try to commant in good manner otherwise get lost….
Thank u for saying it directly…. Sorry for wasting ur time….
Its ok for me Eva…. But don’t do this to others….. Because they all are feel bad…. U couldn’t understand how they are feeling….
Thank u so much for ur comments…. Pls don’t do this again to other…. It will hurt their more…. Its my humble request…. And one more thing I am not wright the ff to wastwast ur time or others…. If u guys thinking the same pls forgiveforgive????…. I will not post it… Thank u for ur response guys….
Its ok for me Eva…. But don’t do this to others….. Because they all are feel bad…. U couldn’t understand how they are feeling….
Thank u so much for ur comments…. Pls don’t do this again to other…. It will hurt their more…. Its my humble request…. And one more thing I am not wright the ff to wastwast ur time or others…. If u guys thinking the same pls forgiveforgive????…. Don’t worry again I will not post this ff and also don’t think to wright this ff….. Thank u for ur response guys….
Hai Eva if u don’t like then don’t read it pls don’t give ur negative comments friend
Yaar..Eva it’s true that maha’s language is difficult to understand…But that doesn’t mean her work is just rubbish…
I’m none to say this to you… Anyways…Don’t be so rude to anyone….Plz….
And Maha you should just continue your ff…
Language is just a medium for communication…And you can communicate your ideas well…So don’t be sad….
And full support from my side… Keep writing.. 🙂
வணக்கம் தமிழச்சி super maha keep on going
Thank u dove…
maha u r doing wrong pls continue your ff many people like and read u r ff for that single idiot. u r going to stop ur ff this is not good we are all waiting for your next ff updates bye takecake good luck god gives you beautifull thing in ur hand pls don’t waste it
Thank u dove… I will post it dr…. Only for u guys…
Pls continue this ff pls
Pls continue this ff
Thank u Rasika…. I will continue it…
Inum konjam irundha nalla irundhurukum.. ivlo seekrama story ah cut panna epdi ma mahaaa ipdi panringale ma
Inum konjam irundha nalla irundhurukum.. ivlo seekrama story ah cut panna epdi ma mahaaa ipdi panringale ma..
I enjoyed it
Thank u Sri….I will give it next time….
Hey cmon yaar yaaruney theriyaathavanga thitturaanganunlaam kochikavo kova padavo kudaathu paa….Eva wat ever u said was really wrong yaar….if u don’t like then just get the hell out,but u have no rights to throw ur words like this….and maha it’s nice yaar u continue dude and post it in ishqbaaz telly update yaar plzzz. …
Thank u mithrabrindha…. Ithu kobam illa dr… Ennaku varutham mattum than Eva sonnala naan unga ellaroda nerathum vinakkurenu athan konjam kastama irunthuchu….. Ippa naan santhosama irukken neenga ellarum irukkingala….
proud to be Tamilan me too from Tamil nadu frnd I am New to this serial I like ur ff so pls don’t quite
Tamilan eppavum padhila edaium Vida Maattan ok friend
Hai update little bit more it’s too short ma
Thank u Priya….. Next time I will give my best…
Don’t take her words seriously…don’t worry and continue ur ff….we are waiting for it…so plz post it soon
Thank u Gowsi…. I will give it…
Haan maha ka .. yaaro sonnaganurathu kaaga neenga varuthapadatinga .. I tnk he/she is not just worth reading ur ff .. u plz continue writing ka .. v luv u n ur ff so much ka ..
Thank u Haridhra… I will continue…
Hi Maha…i was a silent reader of ur ff till yesterday…But today after reading your comment on “After marriage life is colorful” i thought to reply you..Dear dont mind on someone’s words or deeds if they are not respecting you and your work…just switchon ignore mode..there are many who admire and encourage ur work….think about them…we love ur ff…if u have a hater Eva then think about me i am ur fan EVA…???
And about the other Eva….Hey Eva…..
Dear..please dont be rude to anyone like this….because hurting someone through insulting will make u characterless dear…so use words wisely…..and please dont waste ur precious time, moving ur precious fingers while scrolling for reading and ofcourse using ur precious eyes for reading something which u dont like..go and do something u like…
And allow Maha to do what she like….she is doing her work perfectly for us …her ff fans…
So kindly jeeyo aur jeenedho…
Sorry if my words hurt anyone ….couldn’t stop from saying this much…still i kept decency as much as can..
Thank you..eagerly waiting for ur next update Maha….
Thank u Eva…. Keep reading….