Thank u friends for commented me….and also silent readers for read it…. Now also I get less comments only…. I will try my best to keep ur attention towards this ff…. I replied all of ur comments pls check it…. Sry for didn’t Post it… Happy reading….. Let’s get into the story…
The screen starts with HSP…
Om lifelessly come outside of the HSP and take his car to leave…. He sit inside the car and tries to start the car at the time he received a call from Sivaye….. Om attend the call…
Sivaye: Om what happened y u didn’t pick up the call…
Om: Sivaye I am in HSP that’s why I couldn’t take the call… Sivaye panicked and asked all are fine na….
Om: no don’t worry all are fine and he explained him everything…..
Sivaye: now she is fine na that’s gud….pls be careful if any problem pls call me..
Om: sure and cut the phone…. Then he leaves to his home….
On the other side,
Sivaye thinks why Om is this much of tension… I clearly understand he is feared of loosing something…. Is that so…
In car,
Om is not in his sense he can see only Gauri’s face…. He stops his car suddenly and gets down from the car and closed the car forcefully and hit his leg in the car tyre…. And says.. Why I cannot concentrated anything… Why I couldn’t come out of this…. Why I can’t leave her like that…. Why I can’t see anything rather than…. I don’t know her name also but why I think she is my everything…. Yesterday only I meet her but why I can feel she is not new to me….. Then he says no om u are overreacting nothing like that….. And says she is nothing to me then y I get this much pain…. I try to forgot it…. I can’t share my life to anyone…. Girls are always give me a pain only…. Then he starts his car to home…. Om reached the room but he never look at anyone he goes his room….
In morning Rudy comes to Om’s room with coffee…
Rudy: bhai wake up… And have this…
Om: gets up and says gud mng and asked about Ansh….
Rudy: he goes to Gauri’s home….
Om: did she discharged this much earlier…
Rudy: bhai u know what is the time now…. Afternoon 1’o clock….
Om split the coffee from his mouth and asked what…. Then y u didn’t wake me up…
Rudy: bhai today is Sunday only na that’s why I didn’t wake u….
Om: ok pls give me a towel I will go and take a bath….
Rudy: ok suniyil…. U goto take a bath in the !ran time I will prepared ur launch ok suniye….( he speack like girls voice )
Om: are u mad what u are talking…
Rudy:then what bhai i think u forgot it I am ur bro not a wife…. Saying this he goes….
Om: I asked anything wrong after all one towel he behaved so strangely…. He is such a drama king…
In evening Omkara’s home,
Gauri comes with small box in her hand… ( her left hand and her head is covered with white cloth)
She press the bell…. Rudy and Ansh are gone to a market only our Om is there…. Om hered the bells sound but he think Rudy is there so he didn’t come down…. She again repeated to press the bell again…. That time she sees one wren’s egg is going to fall down from their nest…. She sees that rushees to help it she catches it then sees one laser is there she take it and placed on the tree…. In the meantime Om gets irritated because of that bell’s sound so he comes down…. Gauri placed the birds egg in the nest then she tries to comes down but her hand get hurt so she losses her balance…..
She going to fall she closed her eyes tightly….. But she never feel any pain then she can understand she not falling down…. She opened one eyes lightly and looks down one arms saved her falling down then she looks up to see the person……
He is Om….. Gauri sees him first time…. They gets deep eyelock…. At the time our Rudy and Ansh comes there and sees that….
Ansh called sweetu…. They comeback their senses and Om dropped her down slowly…. And om says, u think herself as a mother Theresa or spiderman to help others… Yesterday u itself go to that place and save that child u jumped that burning house then u braked ur hand now u goto save the bird…… I will not come correct time u will fall down…. He shouted at her….. Rudy looking at surprisingly…..
Gauri: hello Mr. I will not help the bird it will be get hurt…. I know I don’t fall down…
Om: why u have any supper man power….
Ansh and Rudy laughs at her….
Gauri angrily looks at him and says, because when we help others god will help their….
Om: then y ur god didn’t come to help u at yesterday and today also….
Gauri: who says god will never help me yesterday one human help me today Animal help me….
Rudy and Ansh laughs at them…
Om: what did u call me….
Gauri: golden words are not repeated….
Om: I did a mistake to help u…..
Gauri: did I asked u to come and help me…..
Om: u don’t any senses when one person help them we should tell thanks to them but u insulting the person….
Gauri: u only don’t have senses that’s why u don’t how to respect a girl…..
Om: what girl where is she saying this he looked around…
Gauri: why u can’t see me I am a girl only….
Om laughed loudly and asked u are a girl big joke….. Again he laughed….
Ansh and Rudy looks surprised because they Om’s laughing sound after a long time….. Rudy happily looks at them….
Gauri: I think u lost a eyesight that’s why u can’t see a beautiful girl…..
Om: what beautiful girl and he laughed and says u are looking like devil don’t say to others because beautiful girls will be feel bad….. He laughed again…
Gauri: what u said I am devil wait you can see now what devil will do saying this she chased him…
Om runs around Rudy and Ansh….. They looks at Om surprisingly because after a long they see old Om…. At the time her hand get hurt she sit there…. Om stops running and goes to her and says always like that only u try to catch me with this broken hand saying this he laughed….. Gauri twists his ear and says I will do anything Mr. Don’t dare to cross ur limit then she leaves his ear and goes to take the box which is placed on the table and give it to Rudy she goes….. Om laughed at her…..Rudy and Ansh looks shockingly at them….
I will stop here guys… How is it pls give ur opinion…. Bye take care….
By,
B.K.Maha….