Hey guys, I was bit busy with office work that’s why came damn late, sorry for that…..Happy makar sankrathi to all in advance… Links for previous one is here
Kindly read all parts and drop your views…..Thanks a lot for reading….
Continuation from last part
A disheartened gauri started thinking what she could do to sort out things…..But before that all her focus was to find Omkara as he was been missing from room for hours….Gauri rushed towards the reception and enquired the same……She got an invalid answer and hence she decided to go in search for Omkara…..
Scene shifts to Streets
Gauri starts walking and running through streets screaming ..”.Omkaraji ” only…..Her eyes noticed a person’s image from back and gauri understood it was Omkara…..At a rush to reach him her leg slips , but soon a hand hold her and she got saved…..
Gauri looked at his sparkling eyes and said…. “Omkaraji ”
Omkara : Gauri, you are here ??
Gauri : Why you left me alone ??
Om released gauri from his hold and turned his face from her eyes….
Gauri : Omkaraji, have you started hating me ??
Omkara : What ? How can you say like this ?? Om turns and stares gauri
Gauri : Then why you left me like that way ? Whatever feelings you have, this is not the way to deal with them..
Omkara : So what you wants to say that I should stayed there and burst out anger on you , is that right ?? I am out of control and I don’t know which way I am going to behave right now….Pls give me some time and leave me alone…..I will come back……
Gauri : I can’t stay alone whole night at that room without my husband…..It’s really painful …….
Omkara : Gauri, pls…….See, I am sorry for whatever happened, but at that mood I was feeling everything as hazardous and I doesn’t tried to find your effort for pacifying me…..I am sorry for hurting you, I am sorry……[Om holds gauri’s hand]
Gauri : I am also sorry, Omkaraji……I didn’t realized what was happening to you after that unexpected incident and the way I took to console you, perhaps it came at the wrong time……
Omkara : I think we should stop saying about that, right ?
Gauri : Yeah [gauri nods her head] We need to find solution…..
Omkara :It’s not easy, gauri….You have seen how professor got disappointed with me……He is not ready to listen me ..
Gauri : I know, Omkaraji……But I think we should try once more……..
Omkara : Nothing is gonna happen, gauri I think we should go back home……
Gauri : What ?? But Omkaraji, what we will tell our family ??
Omkara : I really don’t know….But this place is reminding me that I am big failure, I can’t stay here any more……
Gauri : If we start running from failures, then we will never get a chance to win Omkaraji…….
Omkara : Pls gauri, try to understand……My hands are trembling now, I am not able to touch brush as colors are mocking me, the empty canvas is showing that everything is finished and whenever I finds nature, soil, sky, stars……I can’t find any muse in them, everything has become so dark……And when I look to your eyes, it hurts me more that I have again given pain to you and I am not able to keep the promise, At this guilt I am getting burned per minute……..What will I answer to my brothers who said me to treat you like queen throughout this chance? Shivaay says you as his choti behan and I promised him that now I will never make his behan to cry….But I have broken all promises and finally my heart is also breaking……..
Gauri : Pls Omkaraji, Be calm……Nothing has broken and trust me I am not hurt….
Omkara: Your tears can’t lie to me , gauri……
Gauri : Okay, I admit that I felt pain, but you know what if my husband will fail without trying any more that will literally hurt me to the core…… Last but not least, just we need to make a try , pls Omkaraji for me you need to meet professor…… We will meet him together and will try to convince him…..
Omkara : And again If he says to leave , then….
Gauri : Then we will leave this city by tomorrow itself…….It’s my promise…..Pls come with me…..
Scene shifts to room
Rikara takes their seats and gauri brings food for Omkara……
Gauri : You must take this, don’t refuse it…Omkara..
Om smiles…Rikara feed each other….. “Saathiya” instrumental plays….
Gauri brings Om near his canvas and looks at him….
Gauri : Omkaraji, Some times we need to peep our heart as it carries so many pages of life….Just took the brush and close your eyes…….You will find your inspiration and pour it on canvas…… [Om nods his head]
Om closes his eyes for a while and quickly opened his eyes…..
Gauri : Did you find anything ?
Omkara ; I find two deep eyes which is conveying me to carve it as they want to speak in my colors……
Gauri : Then you need to do it, Omkaraji……I am sure these eyes will be most beautiful one that the blame on your work will get vanish forever……
Omkara : You think so ?
Gauri : I believe so, pls do it, Omkaraji…..Pls….
Omkara started painting on canvas and gauri starts praying her sankarji for making everything as good ….As soon as painting was finished, Omkara took it from the canvas and folded it..
Gauri : Omkaraji, Hope you have done good……I know why you are no showing me because I am not a critic to evaluvate anything, for me it’s always the best only……This time I won’t say anything which will make guruji to feel anger……
Omkara : Shall we leave ?
Gauri : Yeah…..
Scene shifts to Professor’s home…
Professor : Why both of you reached over night , when I said everything is finished ?
Gauri : Guruji, I am sorry for speaking like that…….Before coming to any conclusion will you pls take a look on this painting ?
Professor : What you wants to prove now ? Your husband makes master piece and his master is not right ,won’t you ?
Omkara : Sir, this is my last painting…….I swear if you will reject this then I will leave the world of art forever……Gauri my bags…..
Rikara keeps some bags at professor’s feet……
Gauri : Guruji, these are color brushes, pencils, papers , sketches and some paintings which is my husband’s treasure……He said you have rejected him from the right to stay as his disciple….. And…….[gauri gets emotional]
Omkara : And if this rejection is a curse then trust me, your disciple Omkara will never touch any of these things which is been surrendered at your feet………I was leaving already, but my wife said without fighting if one is accepting failure, then he will never get a chance to win…….Her words enriched the courage in me to portray this painting over a mid-night …..I don’t know whether this small painting is upto your expectation, whatever I had poured here…….. it’s the reflection which I saw in my heart……..Now the decision is upto you…… Whether this disciple has failed or whether he will get a chance to win ??
Professor : Once you were my pride and I always felt no one can replace you , but whatever you done today……Any ways reconsidering you and your work If i find it is not worthy, then…..
Rikara : We respect you much and we are ready to accept your decision……
Professor : That means Omkara will no more remain as Artist Omkara if I denied this painting…….
Omkara : Yes, sir…..[gauri and om hold each other’s hands]
Professor : Let me see…..
Professor goes inside with the painting……After some time he comes with two boys and stares Rikara….
Professor : Omkara and Gauri, so are you ready ?
Rikara nods their heads….
Professor : Meet these guys, Paul and Danny…..
They greets rikara ……Rikara gets confused…..
Professor : So Omkara, Paul is an expert in Epigraphy and Danny is specialized in Mural paintings…….Both know basics but they are not able to break the nut shell…..
Omkara : About what sir, I didn’t get you ……
Paul : Sir is talking about abstract sculpture art…..We are shrinked ourselves to our field of specialization…..
Danny : We are not complete, but Om you are complete….
Omkara : Not at all…..An artist can never become a complete artist, everytime he finds some thing new, he discovers things , he explores world and every day shades will get change and he need to find the rarest things also…..
Professor gives a big round of applause and smiles…. Professor : This is what I was missing , your inner enthusiasm and your passion ,it was there…But something was slipped and trust me now those eyes are speaking very well…….You have made it realistic, it was just a painting….but you give your full dedication to it and it’s not less than that of any sculpture or any master piece……..I am glad that I got my best disciple back……
Omkara : Sir…That means you have forgiven me……..Gauri, see sir has forgiven me…… I am able to learn abstract art now…..
Gauri : Haan Omkaraji…….You have won…..
Omkara : It’s you who made this dream as true, If I would have left without listening you, then never ever I can get this chance to rectify my mistake…….Thank you gauri
Gauri : Omkaraji, Your passion, your talent and your colorful world can never leave you……
Omkara : I realized it because your presence is filled in all these things and I am not able to live with out you…….gauri……..
Gauri ; I am also not able to live without you, Omkaraji…….
Rikara hugs each other…
Bgm….. “Heere moti mein naa chahun, mein toh chahun sangam tera……Saiyaan….Saiyaan….
Tujhe aise mein niharun, teri aarti utaroon, mein ban jawun ek jogan …….Saiyaan…saiyaan…” plays…..
PRECAP : SORROWS WILL FLOW LIKE UNENDING WAVES , BUT AMONG THEM SOME TIMES YOU WILL FIND PEBBLE STONES ALSO……KEEP THEM WITH YOU AS THE WEAPON TO FIGHT WITH THEM AND START CRYING …..THOSE STONES WILL HOLD YOU AND AT ALL TEARS ALSO YOU WILL STOOD UP AND STARTS SWIMMING THROUGH OCEAN
AN : NEXT WILL BE THE LAST PART OF LOVE ME AS MUCH AS YOU CAN……THANKS FOR ALL YOUR LOVE AND SORRY THIS OS BECAME SO LONG …….
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today I was thinking of your ffs n surprisingly you updated.gauri running screaming in search of om…om saving her from falling was nice.om hinting that he left from there as he didn’t want to hurt her more bcz of anger n apologizing was emotional. gauri’s dialogue sometimes we need to peep. …canvas was beautiful. om seeing gauri’s eyes was lovely.gauri bringing om near the canvas n the edit of rikara you put there was awesome. om is right.an artist can never be complete.he keeps learning New n explores it…shades will change ….they need to find rare things too.his professor accepting his work was nice.the last rikara scene was emotional n beautiful. mindblowing pics
I was busy with work, finally got some wards free from office and tmrw will update the climax shot of this one….. I am glad u liked this one also……Thanks a lot and luckily got some pics which I felt as catchy and I inserted here, that’s all…Thanks a lot
the dialogues of rikara in the last scene were mindblowing
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It is lovely update dii…
Amazingly awesome update akka..loved the way how gauri made omkie to agree for trying on last time..that’s a great one..will be waiting for the next..till then take care..and happy Makar Sankranti advance main hi bol rhi hoon..