Hey guys ….it’s dolly , riya and alia back again …
Thanks for the wonderful responses u all gave us ….
So u all have accepted us ….that’s a great going …plz do keep supporting ….
So here is the story ,
The character description
Swara malhotra : the main lead ….she is bubbly , chirpy , beautiful and very brave ….loves her parents more ….especially her father ….she us very much pampered by her parents …..the only heir to the malhotra ….all boys are crazy behind her …..
Sanskar maheshwarI : the main lead ….a big Don , a gangster of kolkata ….a ruthless , hard breaking man ….he is always the handsome and hotty of the whole world ….but is very dangerous …has immense wealth …loves his brother ..has no parents …a very attiduous person
Sahil maheshwari : brother of Sanskar ….loves him like he’ll …will do anything for him …Sanskar is his only mom and dad …doesn’t like being gangster …so is studying in collage …..
Ragini malhotra : second lead …..adopted daughter of the malhotra’s ….knows the tRuth but love’s them to he’ll …loves her sister also …she is elder to Swara …..a very traditional girl …a calm one too
Shekar malhotra : the commissioner of kolkata ….heartless and rude for his duty …but a caring and loving father for his daughters ….very attached with Swara but treas both of them equally …
Mishti malhotra : mother of Swara and step mother of ragini ….very attached with ragini …both loves them equally pampers them a lot
A fashion designer by profession ….
Dadi & dida : both loves them all ……..can do anything for their angels …..
Now story ,
Swara goes into flashback ..her life taking 360° turn …..
@malhotra mansion
Mishti : come shona have breakfast
Swara comes down wearing jeans and top ..looking like an angel
Swara goes and kisses shekar
Swara : good morning dad …
Shekar ; good morning ….saying his he makes her wear his police cap
Swara : MA when is ragini dadi and dida coming
Mishti ; they will come tomorrow dear ..ur sis has some work so (ragini is in mumbai)
Swara : any way I am late bye …..
Mishti : ur breakfast ..
Swara ; in canteen ….
Saying this she runs and leaves …
Mishti and shekar smiles
@ collage
It was new start for all ….seniors were waiting for the freshers to come …
They were like they will eat them alive by ragging .
As the gate open’s students comes in ….
Nikhil : Sahil see na freshers are coming let’s rag them …..
Sahil smiles evilly
Kavitha : what about that one (pointing a boy)
Sahil : he is looking like a idiot …let’s wait for some girls ..
Nikhil : yo bro ….see there hotties are entering ….
Sahil looks toward’s the gate …….
Swara enters ….who was wearing a short pant and top ….with speakers on her ears …..
Looking like a diva with free hairs ….Sahil and all boys were spellbounded with her beauty …
Nikhil : see is looking hot yaar ….she will be mine .
Sahil gets really angry ND slaps him hard ….
Kavitha and nikhil were shocked
Sahil : she is mine …do u get that ….
Nikhil and Kavitha nods and leaves from there …
Swara comes towards Sahil ….his heart starts beating fast ….
Swara : excuse me …
Sahil : yes
Swara : can u plz tell me where is principal office
Sahil : sure I will take u there …if u come
Swara smiles and nods …
Sahil and Swara walks together to the principal room …
Sahil was continuously staring Swara
Swara : thanks for the help
Saying this she goes in
Sahil smiles : what a beauty she is ….dammm need to say this to brother …he would be so happy .
A godown is shown …it’s dark ..
A man was tied to the chair ….he was pleading to leave him
A man enters who was smoking hot …..he was dashing , he was young and more more handsome …no words to describe him (yes it’s sanskar)
Boy tied to chair : plz plz ….sanskar leave me . Plz …..
Sanskar (smirking) : u said u won’t sign the land to my brother name ….then it’s ur punishment ….
Boy : sanskar that’s my only one property and it’s my mom’s land …plz …sanskar leave
Sanskar (smirking) : even I am sad …..but what to do ….my bro wants that land for his new gym closure …so ..it’s better u give or else
Saying this he takes kerosene and pours OK the boy
Boy : plz plz …..plz …..
Sanskar takes lighter
Boy : OK OK ….I will sign … (he says crying)
Sanskar stops …and smiles evilly
Sanskar (evil smile) : u know what u never ask anyone more than one time ….but u made me to ask twice …so
Saying this he throws lighter …..the boy burns alive …
Sanskar wears his glasses and goes out
Outside the godown ,
Sanskar : listen clear the ashe’s …..OK
The men’s nods ..one opens door for sanskar ….sanskar sits in his Mercedes and goes
@car
Sanskar phone rings …..he smiles and picks it
Sanskar : haan bro say …
Sahil (happy) : bhai …u know what u met a girl who is not less than a angel
Sanskar : oh that’s y this much happiness in voice huh .
Sahil blushe’s
Sanskar : oh oh …I never saw my bhai blushing ….then what happened to ur ex gf kavya
Sahil : that stupid …she is not even equal to this girl…..
Sanskar : hmm…hm…OK OK ….bring her pic ..I will say
Sahil ; OK bye ….
Sanskar (smiling) : bye
Sahil hangs up
Sanskar : love is just waste of time
@police office
Constable : sir Sanskar matter is not so easy to deal sir …u r new here
Shekar : listen shankar that’s I am interested in it ….he will do whatever …he will break the laws but we should sit idle ..then what’s the use of wearing police uniform
Shankar : sir …u have two daughters …it’s better
Shekar : what if a father has daughters it means he should always worry about them not come in police job …my daughters are more brave …and God is always with good people not with that evil Sanskar
Shankar nods ….
Shekar : I want to re open all his files …he should deserve punishment
Shankar nods and leaves …..
Shekar : sanskar now u can’t escape from me .
He takes his gun
@collage
It was evening ….Swara was loaded with friend’s …all made her friend due to her bubbliness and friendship styles …moreover commissioner daughter too
Swara : OK yaar bye …car will come
All her friends waves bye and leaves ….collage also closed
Swara was sitting in the park waiting for the car …..
Sahil comes …..
Sahil in mind : this is the right chance
Sahil : hey
Swara (smiles) : hi …..
Sahil ; what are u doing here ….it’s late
Swara : hmm …I am waiting for the car ….
Sahil : oh ….no one there .
Suddenly some drunken boys comes ….in a gang
Boy 1 : hey look there is a hotty
Boy 2 : bhaI ….she is very s*xy na ….
Boy 3 : hey baby ….wanna sleep with us ..
Swara felt disgusted ……Sahil looks at them with blood shot eyes …he was going to eat them
Sahil goes forward but swara stops him ….
She gives her bag to him and goes forward …Sahil was confused
Swara : thanks for the compliments dudes ….
Boys all laughs
Boy 1 : madam ji ….u know na what we will do
Swara laughs
Swara ; oh really come let’s see what u will do to me …come na
The boys looked shocked ……
Swara : u know u all cowards. ..no job always drinking that’s y …no girl being with u …
All boys looks at her
Swara ; stop drinking …God has given u two hands and two legs ..u all are physically fit …so don’t waste it ..because there are more ..who don’t have …..
Better use them or better die ….
Saying this she turns ….
All boys come’s to her
Boy 1 : sister u have opened our eyes …thanks a lot
Sahil open’s his mouth widely …
Swara smiles ….
Swara : brothers …don’t waste the life because it’s so short ….OK
All boys gets happy and gets tears seeing her
All waves her bye and leaves
Swara goes to sahil who is In shock ….
Sahil ; u have some magic
Swara smiles …
Sahil ; u wanted to ask ..can I know ur beautiful name
Swara : my name is swara ….yours ?
Sahil ; sahil …Sahil maheshwari ….
Swara ; oh we have same letter starting S&S
Sahil blushe’s ….
Sahil ; can u give me ur number
Swara looks at him teasingly
Sahil : hmm …friend na …are u my friend ?
Swara smiles ……
Swara shakes her hands with him …Sahil gets current ….
Swara : here is my number ************, your number
Sahil ; I will text u ….
Swara smiles …
Car comes
Swara ; ok bye …..saying this she hugs him and leaves …
Sahil was standing there admiring her ….
After that night
@maheshwari palace
(It was a grand mansion …which is inside the forest ..so that no one could trace them nor find them )
@dining hall
Sahil : so any news bhai
Sanskar : hmm ya ..new commissioner came ..and he re opened all our files ..
Sahil looked shocked …
Sahil : that means …
Sanskar ; no no ….no need to worry …..we will threaten them ….he will run away …like the last commissioner
Sahil laughs ….
Sahil : yep even I heard …he has two daughter …brave enough huh … (swara didn’t say her as commissioner daughter)
Sanskar : ya ..and he is very attached with his second daughter …..so tomorrow I have planned to kidnap ..then finish he will run off …
Sahil ; ya ya sure …
Sanskar : OK now go and take good rest my champ
Sahil smiles and leaves to his room …Sanskar plans something ….
@malhotra mansion
Shekar was reading the files of Sanskar ….swara hugs him back
Swara : hey dad …what r u doing ……
Shekar ; hey my shona nothing just reading a criminal case …
Swara ; oh give me I will also read …
Shekar : u never listen to me huh ….always reading my files ….
Swara smiles and takes the file and sees the photo …
Swara was stunned seeing him …he was so dashing …
Swara ; not bad dad …he is very handsome …
Shekar playfully slaps her head …
Shekar ; he is a criminal …I will get more dashing boy in this whole world …
Swara ; no no ..I will marry only this criminal …
Shekar : oh is it …challenge ….
Swara ; challenge accepted …..
Saying this she runs to room
Shekar : pagal …he laughs …….
Present ,
Swara wakes up …she finds sanskar looking at her
Sanskar ; good evening …my sleeping princess …so exhusted haan ….
Swara (shokced) : evening ….seriously …
Sanskar : it’s OK come …u didn’t had anything ..let’s have …
Swara : I hate u …u left me and went na ….
Sanskar : sorry darling ….had some work
Swara : oh is it so important than ur wife .
Sanskar smiles …
Sanskar : you are my “MY LOVE , MERI JAAN”
Swara smiles
Precap : some flashback …….some present .
Hope u all like it ..plz yaar gives us what we deserve …it’s not easy to write in three always fighting for each scenes …
Plz comment don’t be silent …break the silence …
This is alia posting ….
Bresh I am in no mood to continue old ones ..sorry
Thanks for reading
18 Comments
Wow it ws awesome alia…
Excellent dear
Awesome
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Hope sahil doesnt come in between swasan
Amazing dear
Awesome
Awesome alia….
Nice. When u will update my love story stages i am waiting.
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Wat is this, but nyc
superb………….
nice..continue soon..
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Ahhhhh,this sahil na,always kabab mein haddi???..Chappy is amazing….sanky, the don,aww,looking so hot….But I hope he doesn’t hurt swara… Keep it up guys… Waiting for nxt..
Take care
Keep smiling?
Nice
Nice dear… Continue soon
goosshhh sanskar soo cruel.. how can he killed someine