Hey guys …thanks for the encouragement u all gave ….
Love u all loads ………
From now on we will dedicate the episodes to the ones who give long comments ….
And to additional ….they will also get whatever ff they ask from down ffs ..
1.my love story stages by dolly
2.meri aashique season 3 by dolly (re newed a new one)
3.new story to love story by riya
4.first love is always first by dolly
5.will u be mine forever by dolly
6. Alia brand new ff ….a terror love story
So whoever gives the long comments can demand us any ff …from the above list .
So gear up guys ….
Here is the story ,
Flashback ,
The next day ….
Swara wakes up …she sees sahil sleeping in her shoulder …she smiles ….
The her eyes get struck on sanskar…..who was repairing a old truck near by …..
He removed his shirt …..he was bare body ….he was hot that any girl would fall for him ….
Swara makes sahil sleep on the stone side and goes to sanskar ….wearing his jacket ..
Swara (smiling) : good morning
Sanskar looks at her dazed …..her morning beauty ….she was a beautiful girl .
Sanskar (smiling) : good morning ….
Swara : so u know repairing also ….
Sanskar : I am sanskar ….there is noting I don’t know ….
Swara : do u know your mother’s love ?
Sanskar stopped working ….he looks at Swara
Swara goes closer to him
Swara : answer me sanskar …..do u know that .
Sanskar turns to go …Swara catches his hand .sanskar felt current passing through his body ..a caring hand
He turns to her ….
Swara : sahil said me …..
Sanskar looks at sahil who was sleeping
Swara : why do u want to hide your tears sanskar …cry out loud …because once u cry na …the burden will come out ……
Sanskar couldn’t hold …..he breaks down
Sanskar (cries) : what mistake I did Swara ….I just wanted my mother’s love. ….but I didn’t get
Then at least I wanted my dad …but God took him away …
My own mom cheated ….she only wanted our property swara ….
What could be more worse than this ……….
You know I reason of my existence is only sahil …only he …without him sanskar is no more ….
He cries a lot …swara get’s tears and hugs him tightly ….sanskar also hugs her back
Swara (tears) : let it heart out sanskar …now don’t cry ….come on ….
Sanskar breaks the hug and looks at her ….swara wipes his tears
Swara ; u want the motherly love na ….don’t worry I will be there for u forever …just one call for me …when ever u feel u need it …..don’t worry
God has given u such a wonderful brother sanskar …he loves u more than anything …
Sanskar looks at sahil ……
Sanskar smiles looking at swara …..
Sanskar : promise …u won’t leave me na
Swara smiles…
Swara : promise ..
After a while ..the truck was ready and sahil also got up ..
Sahil : shall we leave ….
Sanskar and swara nodes and all leaves .
Police station
Shankar : we got the track of them ..
Shekar (relief sign) : now I know how to save my daughter …..
Shekar : tell me where are they …
Shankar : they are going towards it home sir (tensed)
Shekar (shocked) : what ??????
Shankar : yes sir …
Shekar : hurry up …let’s leave …
Shekar leave’s with some support ….
@malhotra mansion …back gate
Swara (smiling) : thanks for the ride ….for a adventurous journey ….
Sanskar and sahil smile seeing her innocence
Sanskar : take her …it’s late if we stay her for a minute na ….ur idiot father will knock us down
Swara gets angry ….sanskar and sahil hifi
Swara : get lost u both …
Saying this she climbs the wall
Sahil : take care ….swara …..
Swara makes faces and jumps inside …
Sanskar and sahil leaves …
Swara silently goes inside the main door ….
Mishti who was crying ..becomes happy seeing her …
She runs to her and hug’s her ……dadi and dida also ..
Mishti ; shona shona …how are you ….r u fine . (She kisees her forhead)
Swara : haan MA ….they didn’t do anything to me ….the dropped me and went …
Mishti (shocked) : they dropped u ….what r u saying
Swara : haan ..MA ….(suddenly she sees dadI and dida …..
She hugs them tightly
Swara : dida , dadi when u both came
Dida : yesterday …we were waiting for u bUT
Dadi : leave all that ….now she is safe that’s it …it’s all because of God .
Swara smiles …
Swara : mom I am he’ll hungry right now …plz
Mishti smiles
Mishti : sure dear ….freshen up a ND come …dadi plz inform shekar na …he must be tensed
Dadi nods .
Swara goes to room …..
Before she goes to washroom …she stands in front of the mirror ..
She sees sanskar jacket ……
She smiles
Swara : sanskar u r making me crazy …..
She smiles and kisses the jacket …….
After that she leave’s to washroom .
Downstairs …
Ragini comes
Mishti : why u came so late laddoo
Ragini (lies) : oh …MA….I was in sheeLA house so …
Mishti : anyways ur sister came …
Ragini (happy) : really …
Saying this she runs upstairs …..mishti smiles
Ragini opens the door …..swara without turning back was busy tieing her frock knot
Swara : haan MA say ….
Ragini smiles ND closes swara eyes ..
Swara : MA .. (then suddenly) : di…
She shouts ragini di. …….
Ragini (happy) : how are u mera Baccha …
Swara (smiling) : I am all fine di …how are u …
Ragini : I am fine …I mean now u r OK …I was shocked after knowing that u were lost …
Swara remembers sanskar and blushes ….ragini notices it but says nothing
Ragini ; anyways I missed u so much ….come let me show u my friend’s
Swara : OK di …one sec .
Ragini ; take ur time ….
Ragini leaves .
Swara : why I am not forgetting sanskar …..
Her phone rings ….
Swara : who the he’ll is this …
Swara picks the call
Swara : hello who is this
Person : this is the great gangster (he chuckles)
Swara froze ….
Swara ; sanskar …. (smiling)
Sanskar (smiling) : so u found me huh …anyways are u OK …
Swara : haan sanskar
Sanskar : so what did ur family say
Swara : they didn’t say anything …..but was asking my well beings …
Sanskar smiles ….
Swara : u are smiling …
Sanskar (shocked) : how do u know …don’t tell me u kept cameras here …
Swara (smiles) : no cameras …but that’s called heart connection ….u may be in any part of the world ….but our hearts are always connected .
Sanskar was speechless …..he cut’s the call.
Swara smiles ND blushes ….
Present ,
Sanskar was packing his stuffs in a bag and swara was helping him
Swara (tensed) : do u really have to go sanskar
Sanskar looks at her and pulls her closer
Sanskar : I know I shouldn’t leave u at this time …but it’s necessary swara ….the truth should come out we need justice …
Swara looks at hI’m
Swara (tensed) : I don’t feel good sanskar …I feel bad …something bad …..
Sanskar hugs her ……
Sanskar : when I am there…..I won’t let anything happen to u …I will back in 2 days
Swara smiles with tensed face
When he is with her …nothing will happen …but if he is not ?
Stay tuned
Screen freezes …
Comments are welcomed …..the best comments will be dedicated the nest episoDE and will have the chance to ask ffs …
It’s upto u all …thanks for reading
Dolly posting .
15 Comments
Excellent dear
Hey have a jealousy track yaar it will be amazing
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Plz frnds i want 1 2 3 5 6 no ffs….
Mostly We be Forever…..
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All of u 3 r Amazing writter…..
Love ur ffs ……..
Plz continue all the ffs……
Nd post quickly…..
Take care…..
nd Best of luck for nxt part nd ffs……….
superb part dear……..
post asap…….
Swara in danger 😮
great ff
nice and sorry for always one comment u don’t believe but it’s true i am very poor in giving comments. or u can say I don’t know how to give comment.
But i am a very big fan of your all story.Thats why i am committing.
Awesome loved it
Excellent dear
huh! i can’t beat Chanu or Kakali in long comment… :3
i just want to say.. love it soo much, update soon.. pls..ty
superb….will laksh do something to swara in sanskar’s absence? No….nothing bad should happen. Poor sahil…he ll get hurt when he ll come to know abt swasan
Awesome…
Nyc
Awesome dr
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nice