Hii everyone I m writing story on kanchi vs sanveer first time…..i had written story on sanveer but it was combined with meharya…..but now it will be only kanchi vss sanveer….itzz a sanveer on kanchi u will get to know by reading only but I hope both kanchi and sanveer lovers will like it…as they both will be given importance here….and the final pair will be revealed latter…….so I am starting with a hope u will like it…..
So here it begins….from the last track of show….kabir and veer are competing against each other in elections….both thinks sanchi is supporting them….veer thinks to win sanchi’s heart by winning the election….otherside kabir thinks sanchi trust him a lot so he should not break her trust and win the elction….
The election result day comes….sanchi is with veer….
Veer-let’s see sanchi who will win ur confidence your kabir sir or me…..
Sanchi-veer …don’t say like this..i have full trust on u more than myself…I knw u are best…but kabir sir is senior and more experienced …so…
Veer-its ok miss golgappa….now listen to result…..
Adarsh announces the result….and veer’s name is announced….veer is super happy….kabir is somehow disappointed as he could not keep sanchi’s trust….where else sanchi don’t even knw…that kabir….thinks she wish him to win the election….as sanchi prayed for veer to win…..
Everyone claps for veer….veer excitedly hugs sanchi….sanchi becomes happy seeing veer happy….all congratulate veer….kabir also comes and congrats him…veer asks everyone to come to canteen for party…..they all go and enjoy the party….where otherside veer pulls sanchi and takes her to record room…..and locks it….
Sanchi-what are u doing veer what happen????
Veer comes near sanchi….and comes close to her….he pulls sanchi by her waist….sanchi keeps her hand on veer s chest….
Sanchi-what are u doing veer???? Leave me…
Veer- thank you sanchi….thank u for changing me….thank you for bringing my mom back in my life….thank you for teaching me….thank you for bring me in right path….thank you for coming in my life…thanks for all…today I win the election just becoz of u….u only made me win…..thanks sanchi u mean me a lot…..
Sanchi looks on emotionally..…veer and sanchi share a eye lock….
Pia ore piya…..piya re piya re piya………
Veer-sanchi….now everything is fine between us…..now can u become again my sanchi….i love u sanchi…..i love u….
Sanchi-but…ve…
Veer-don’t say anything I don’t want ur answer….
Saying this veer leaves from there..sanchi looks on sadly….
Sanchi thinks-no …I cant come close to veer …I should keep distance from him….or else again I will hurt him….i cant see him hurted…no sanchi u have to be away from him…..i m sorry veer I m sorry….we have no future…so its better to part away….saying this sanchi becomes teary eyes….
All interns assembles in the hall…..for anoucment…adarsh announces that there will be a party at tomorrow evening so everyone get prepare and the theme is fairy land….so I hope u all are excited so lets meet at tomorrow evening….
@ night…..
Isha is selecting dresses and jewelries what to wear….pragya is iirited seeing her,….sanchi is lost in thought….suddenly sanchi gets a message from kabir to come in his cabin its an emergency case….sanchi runs hurridly to hospital….she searches for dr kabir in his cabin….but its all dark….
Sanchi-dr kabir…where are u….r u there..
Suudenly lights are on….she sees whole room decorates with love shaped ballons…and sanchi s pics….and written on wall I LOVE U SANCHI….sanchi gets confuse…and shockes,….kabir comes from behind…..he pulls sanchi towards him…and then kneels down….and takes sanchi hand…
Kabir-sanchi….i m grateful that u come in my life…I m lucky that I fall for…u ….i will be more lucky if u accept my proposal and stay with me for my whole life….will u marry me sanchi..??????
Sanchi is still confused…..and unable to react….kabir stand up….
Sanchi-but sir….kabir puts his finger on sanchi ;s lips…and says
Kabir-no…u don’t have to answer right now …u take ur time sanchi…
They share an eyelock….
Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon… Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyaa hai….
Yunhi nahi mein tum pe jaan detha hoon…. Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyaar hai…
Chalo ji aaj saaf saaf kehta hoon… Itni si baat hai mujhe tumse pyaar hai …
Mujhe tumse pyar hai…..
Kabir leaves from there…..and sanchi looks on sadly….
Sanchi sits down and starts crying….why why this happen to me….neither veer nor dr kabir…gives me chance to speak they don’t want to knw what I want….why god…why u made me face such a dilemma….one side veer….who loves me so much….whom I cant hurt….but I cant even accept him as he is my enemy s son…..and other side dr kabir whom I respect so much….i don’t want to hurt him….whom to choose god…whom????
Next day @ party…
Kabir is in white tuxedo and veer n black tuxedo…..both are lokking dashing….cool…handsome….both eyes are searching for sanchi….suddenly sanchi comes…..in blue knee length sleeveless gown or u can say frock…. She had made high pony and wearing hill sandles….in one hand she had wear her watch and in other silver bracelet…with silver earrings…and light makeup….she was looking gorgeous…..kabir and veer both were mesmerized my her…..all other were also shocked to see sanchi in such a attire…she is looking beautiful preety even hot…..
Now the party began…..all interns are said to dance..and to choose their partners….veer was coming to sanchi to ask her for dance…but before he can reach…kabir comes and offers her to dance and sanchi agrees….veer gets dis heartened and even angry,…..
The dance begins…sanchi with kabir….garv with pragya….veer with isha…and more….
Tere sang yara….. Khush rang baharaaaa….
Kabir holds sanchi aroud her waist and holds her other hand in hers…..sanchi keeps her hand on his shoulder….and starts dancing….kabir lovingly stares sanchi…..sanchi blushes and looks down…..unable to meet his eyes…
O karam khudaya hai ….Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh… Mujhe jeena aaya hai
Kabir twirls sanchi…..and then holds her from backside….and sanchi rests her head on kabir s sholulder…..both closes their eyes feeling each other…
O tere sang yaara….. Khushrang bahara…. Tu raat deewani …Main zard sitara
O tere sang yaara Khushrang bahara…everone twirls their partner and the partners are exchanged…..
Now veer is with sanchi isha is with garv and pragya is with kabir….
Veer holds sanchis hand andmoves her hand around her waist and Saanchi gets nervous. He pulls her close ….they share an eyelock….
Main tera ho jaun Jo tu karde ishara
Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main Teri khushbu se takraun main Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..
Veer lifts Saanchi up. She r
ests her head on his chest…veer lifts her down…while sanchi has her arms around veers neck….
Tera mera milna dastoor hai Tere hone se mujhme noor hai Main hoon soona sa
ek aasmaan Mehtaab tu..
veer and sanchi dances…while kabir feels jealous….sanchi doesn’t look into veer s eyes…while veer lovingly gazes her…
Tujhpe marke hi toh Mujhe jeena aaya hai..
O tere sang yaara Khush rang bahara Tu raat deewani Main zard sitara
O tere sang yara Khush rang bahara Tere bin ab toh Na jeena ganvara…
Now the dance is over….sanchi is standing with isha and pragya….veer is with garv…and riya is with kabir trying to get his attention….but kabir is starinng sanchi…and lost in her….
Kabir-she is looking so beautiful….i should propose her infront of everyone…..today we can make our relationship public…I knw she also cares for me…yes she loves..me….
Kabir goes to sanchi….and pulls her along with him …and goes to stage….sanchi is confused….
Kabir hello everyone…plzz give ur attention…today in this happy occasion I want to say something to someone infront of all…..
Kabir kneels down infront of sanchi…and forward his hand….
Kabir-dr sanchi…will I have a pleasure to be ur better half….will u marry me dr sanchi….will u fill my world with ur colours….
Veer isha and pragya are shocked….riya is super angry….
Sanchi forwards her hand and kabir takes it…..
Sanchi-I also have a pleasure to be ur better half…
Kabir stands up saysI LOVE YOU SANCHI…sanchi blushes…..and hugs her tightly and says I LOVE YOU TOO DR KABIR….
Veer is broken seeing his love with someone other….riya is angry…like she will burst…but madhu and bala controls her….pragya is sad…and shocked….isha is shocked…but little happy…as she thinks kabir to be better for sanchi….than veer……..veer fumes in anger…and goes from .there…..kabir looks sanchi lovingly…while sanchi notices veer leaving and feels sad….but then again smiles seeing kabir..and holds his hand…..
Kabir- so we will be marrying next week….so all of u are invited…..sanchi looks on…and smiles…..
@in room
Pragya-why sanchi why did u do this…u break that nalayak heart….for kabir..
Sanchi – no pragya..i really love dr kabir…he is better choice than veer as we have no future…and how did I break his heart I never said him that I love him…and love cant happen forcefully …..veer was just a crush like thing….i realize that dr kabir is perfect for me…
Isha-yes sanchi is right …kabir sir is better than veer…sanchi will be happy with dr kabir…..i agree with her….and I knw jaya aunty will also agree…
Sanchi- maa had already agreed I had informed her already….all ritual will be followed….
after sometime….isha pragya sleeps….sanchi Is still sitting on her bed and lost in her thought…otherside…kabir is thinking about sanchi….how they work together ..how she helped his mom in treatment…..how she agreed for marriage and their dance….
Kaise tumhe roka… karu Meri taraf aata…
Har gham phisal jaaye ..Ankhon mein tumko bharun… Bin bole baatein tumse karoon …
Agar tum saath ho Agar tum saath ho…
Otherside veer is crying and thinks how they met…how he propsed sanchi how she helped him and teach him….their lift moments…their walk…..and then gets angry…thinking how sanchi agreed to kabir and hugged him infront of all….
Teri nazron me hai.. tere sapne Tere sapno me hai naraazi ..
Mujhe lagta hain ke baatein dil ki… Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi..
Tum saath ho ya na ho.. Kya fark hai..
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai …Agar tum saath ho Agar tum saath ho
Otherside sanchi also thinks about dr kabir and smiles thinking how dr kabir saved her from falling ….how they both gave surpeise test..how he propsed her in cabin….and their dance….suddenly she thinks about veer…how he saved her from goons…and their dance and moment….her eyes become teary….
Bethi bethi bhaagi phiroon ..
Meri taraf aata. Har gham phisal jaaye…
Aankhon mein tumko bharun …Bin bole baatein tumse karoon..
Agar tum saath ho Agar tum saath ho…
They trio sleeps….
After a week @ marriage day…
Mehendi ceremony is going on….sanchi is sitting….one girl is putting mehendi …..she writes KABIR on her hand…..(itzz written in hindi)
Girls-sanchi…lets see ur husband can find his name in ur hand or not……
Sanchi-hmmm…..she is lost in her thought…she is sad….
Suddenly her phone rings…itzz veer calling her….she take away her hand.with jerk…her mehendigets spread …and picks her phone…..and runs aways to her room and picks the call
Veer- I knw u r very happy today ri8….u r getting married be happy sanchi…always be happy….my happiness lies in u…if u r happy I m also happy…by the way sanchi do u realyy never loved me????
Sanchi-no …I never loved u veer….y don’t u understand I love dr kabir….
Before sanchi could say something he cuts the call…sanchi….gets sad….and hugs the phone and cries….
She again gets a call she thinks itzz veer….but itzzz someone else….
Sanchi-veer listen plz….
Voice-hello miss sanchi…if u want proof against dr malhotra than come to pahari….area…come in one hour….or else…
Call cuts..before sanchi can ask…she gets into thinking…but runs out..to go…as her mission come first….she reaches pahari…
@ after 2 hours at sanchi home…
Jaya-where is sanchi ???? isha pragya did u see her….
Isha-she had gone out…she told she will come in a while..but…
Jaya-why did u allow her to go…u knw na itzz her marriage….
Pragya-aunty don’t get tensed she will come….i m calling her..
Isha –see there is sanchi…
Sanchi comes in…she sees jaya and becomes teary eyes..and hugs her….
Jaya-what happen beta….why r u sad….???? U r not going away dear…u will be here only….we will remain in contact….
Sanchi-yes maa from now…we will live together…always…
Jaya- why are u talking like we were living together only…
Sanchi-nothing nothing….
Jaya-isha pragya take her to her room….make her ready…
Sanchi catches isha and pragya s hand and says lets go…they feel weird as sanchi don’t behave like this….jaya also gets in thought from words of sanchi…. In room sanchi speaks to someone in phone….
sanchi- u have to keep eyes on her till I get married….lock her up properly so that she could not get free….
Isha and pragya comes and asks with whom she taking …she says…I m taking to kabir….
Pragya suspect that…sanchi do not call kabir as kabir she call dr kabir..
Pragya- sanchi….from when do u started calling kabir sir only kabir…
sanchi gets nervous…..
sanchi -why why….. he is going to be my husband….i can call him kabir now…do u both have any problem…
isha-no…pragya leave it yar….lets make her ready …
sanchi – yes do fast itzz a best day of my life
pragya gets into thinking….that how can sanchi behave like this….she was sad till morning but now…..dal me kuch kala hai(something is fishy)…
pragya-yar isha I forgot my sandals in hostel…what to do…
isha-only veer is in hostel becoz everyone is in dr kabir s house for wedding
pragya –okey I will call him….
Isha-will he come I don’t think
Pragya-lets try…
Pragya calls veer…after convicing him for half an hour he agrees but…he sayd he will not enter the house…pragya agrees…
Otherside….one girl is seen tide with rope ….itzzz sanchi……itzzz real sanchi….
Flashback
(when sanchi was a child…..she also had a twin sister her name was chandni…..sanchi and chandni loved each other a lot….they went to a fair with sunil and jaya….in crowd chandni got separated from them……..from then they didn’t got her…..
Now chandni thinks that sanchi snatched everything from her….thats why she came to take revenge from sanchi and snatch everything from her…she kidnapped her …and went to her house to maary dr kabir …and want to make sanchis love hers…lets see will she be able to marry kabir….will sanchi and kabir part away…
Chandni was the one who called sanchi to pahari..when sanchi reached their goons cathed her and tied her….while chandni wear same dress as sanchi and went to marry dr kabir….)
Sanchi- plzzz god save me….what I did…I forget veer and tried to move on with dr kabir…but now what game u r playing with me…she cries….she looks her mehendi…she is shocked to see….istead of KABIR VEER IS WRITTEN(as it was written in hindi)
Flashback(when sanchi got veers call she jerked her hand away that time KA from kabir got rubbed…and veer is left(in hindi)….
Sanchi cries more seeing her mehndi…she sees a broken glass..she tries to take it….with lot of difficulty she is able to cut the rope….her hand also gets cut….but she some how escapes from there….
Otherside…..chandni is ready as bride…kabir and family had already came…isha makes chandni sit with dr kabir for marriage…..their marriage starts….veer is also their….pragya had convinced him to come inside….veer is sad..and tears comes out of his eyes…..pragya notices sanchi s diary in veer hand….she takes it from him….she reads the diary and super shocked..
Pragya- veer that means u got to knw sanchi truth….
Veer- yes but I will not stop her…she right in her place…she is doing right..let her marry DR kabir and be happy…
Pragya-but veer u love her na…
Veer-I can do this much for her…
Kabir and chandni are taking pheras…than kabir takes pinch of sindoor (vermillon) to fill her hairline ..
Suddenly sanchi comes inside running and shouts STOP IT….all gets shocked seeing two sanchi…. real sanchi s body had got bruised….blood oozing out of her hand..veer and kabir is shoked and confused who is realy sanchi….
Sanchi- I m sanchi…this is chandni…my twin sister..she kidnapped me…and came here to replace me….she want to take revenge….and want to snatch everything from me becoz she thinks I snatched everything from her….
Chandni-stop it…I m sanchi…y r u lying….maa…I m ur sanchi…
Sanchi- chandni …u r misunderstanding…I never snatched ur happiness….we all missed u…we all love u…I can give everything to u..plzz stop this act for god sake….
Chandni-no u r acting…I m sanchi…
All are confused .and unable to understand who is real sanchi….jaya also gets confused….
Veer-enough….i will ask u rapid fire question u have to answer them to prove u r sanchi…
Sanchi and chandni-okey…
Veer-what is ur name?
Sanchi-sanchi aggarwal…………chandni-sanchi agarwal
Veer-what are ur best frnds full name?
Sanchi-isha negi…and pragya yadav…………chandni-pragya yadav and isha negi…
Veer-who is ur inspiration in hospital?
Sanchi-dr kabir……….chandni-kabir….
Veer-whom do u love kabir or veer?
Sanchi-veer……..chandni-kabir….(as it was rapid fire sanchi spoke the truth)
All are shocked….veer points toward real sanchi and says she is my sanchi……
Chandni-ohooo she took ur name in love so u call her realy sanchi…my maaraige is fixed with kabir so I will love kabir only….
Veer-noshe is sanchi….u can get all information about her frnds, inspiration, past, relatives and all….but u cant get to knw about anyone heart..u got every information about her…but unfortunately not what she realy feels…she had sacrificed her love because for her her family mission come first her mom come first not like u..….she loves me….and here is proof….he shows everyone sanchi s diary….kabir immediately remember how sanchi keeps her diary in her bag….he comes and takes it from veer….kabir is shocked reading it….jaya also reads…
(in diary…
Today I took a big decision of my life…I sacrificed my love veer…. And agreed to marry dr kabir…..i have to do this for my mom… to complete my mission….i cant keep relationship with my enemy son….i knw I will not be able to forget veer ever in my life…neither love someone else…….i will not be able to love dr kabir as veer is my love……but I cant share this truth with anyone…I have to live without veer……I have to….)
Jaya is teary eyes….she comes to sanchi
Jaya-beta…u don’t have to sacrifice ur happiness for this mission beta….u come first to me….not mission….
Sanchi- but maa…
Jaya-stop it sanchi….
Jaya sees chandni standing there and goes and slap her angrily…all are shocked….chandni gets angry…
Chandni-maa….
Jaya-don’t dare to call me maa from ur bad mouth….i am ashamed that u r my daughter…see sanchi…and u…only thinks about ur self…….so mean…so greedy……..u think she snatched ur happiness…no…from the day..we lost u….she cries daily….go and see her cupboard…she had kept every small memories of urs…. And u…
Pragya and isha hugs sanchi….jaya also comes and hugs her….otherside…kabir is shattered….chandni is also teary eyes seeing all this….she decided to leave silently….sanchi goes and stops her by pulling her hand…she takes her to dr kabir…
Kabir-I m sorry sanchi…I never give u chance to reply…I m soryy..
Sanchi- no sir…u r my inspiration….n becoz of u only I got my lost sister back….
Kabir- soryy sanchi sorry….kabir turns to leave….sanchi holds his hand….
Sanchi-sir …I never asked u something today I m asking u something will u keep it…..
Kabir- what…tell me sanchi….i m always there for u…
Sanchi takes chandni hand and keep it on kabir …
Sanchi-plzzz don’t leave her sir…make her daughter in law of ur house…plzzz sir…give her one chance..to prove herself as ur wife….you will keep my request na sir..
Kabir-but sanchi….
Sanchi-plzzzz sir..
Kabir nods….chandni looks on with teary eyes…she hugs sanchi and says sorry…to her…
Kabir and chandni gets married…..meanwhile veer starts leaving…..sanchi sees..snd shouts…
Sanchi-veer….now u r leaving me…so mean…..how can u leave ur miss golgappa…
Veer turns…and says-how can I come back…if u don’t call me…
Tere bin jee na paunga Sach much mar hi jaunga
Hasna rona tujhse hi Mera hona tujhse hi …
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai….
Sanchi runs to veer and hugs him tightly…..veer also hugs her…they part away veer kisses sanchi forehead…and again hugs her…
Maujood hai har saans mein Tu har dafa….
ye tay hai… Tu hai dawa ya dard hai Par hai mera…
ye tay hai ..
Tere bin jee na paunga ….Sach much mar hi jaunga…
Yeh tay hai, yeh tay hai
..all claps for them….veer and sanchi also gets married …
@after 1 year….in hospital…
Kabir is outside OT ….he is roaming here and their tensed….kusum is also their….
Sanchi and veer comes out…
Kabir- what happen sanchi ….is chandni all ri8..
Veer- yes dr kabir….she is also all ri8 and baby girl is also all ri8….nurse comes and hands dr kabir his baby..kabir is very happy…
@after few hours…
Chandni and kabir are playing with their baby….sanchi and veer sees them and gets happy…
Sanchi- oh…they looking so cute…their family is completed.now..
Veer hits sanchi with his elbow…and says
Veer-so lets complete our family too….
Sanchi-veer…u na…
They hug each other….
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So it was sanveer and kancha story instead of kanchi…..as sanchi and chandni are twins…so they same…I hope bith sanveer and kanchi fan would have liked it…….sorry…if I had hurt u…..bye…
10 Comments
Great Priyanka ,update soon
awwww so. cute os lovely sanveer moment awesome thanks for such lovely os love you prinku
It’s good Priyanka ???
It was mind blowing…loved sanveer moments ..
Great dear
nice attempt……
Really nice dear!!
Nice dear
Priyanka dear it was a really good story…i am a kanchi though but I really liked it…keep writing more….
Priyanka it was fabulous… Mind blowing… Superb… Loved it… Thank you for writing this…