Hiii every one .i knw many of u dnt knw me.infact almost all of u……..but I knw all of u …I am one among the silent readers..soryy for not commenting on all of yours ff and os..but I read them all..and realy enjoy them.and actually.i eagerly wait for next part of every os……..i m again sorry for not commenting….i realy like all of u..i m ur small sister plz..maf krdo mujhe…..plzz forgive me…..and give ur pyar bhari suggestions in my this os……..lots of love to riyarocks(Priyanka),Aafiya, Anu, Vrushti, Dhruvi, Priyanshi, Swetha, Kajal, Anuradha, Ishi, Rishu, Dhruti, Rushi, Tania, Sanyukta, Divya, Niyaa, Amnaa, Ishku, Ruwani, Reni, Sana, Niyati, Abhilasha, Tumpamoni, Mitali,ashnita,miss golgappa,anee…and all others sorry if I forgot someone’s name…….plzz forgive this little jaan….love u all….ummmaaahhh…..
So my story starts….i have one last request to all of u..while reading my os…plzzz imagine the plot also…I wish u will enjoy it….
A boy is seen sitting on the roof of the car…drinking and crying….almost lost in someone’s memories….
Flashback
A girl is seen standing in front of school’s canteen area….she is wearing white shirt with red check knee length skirt and had made high pony tail….looking very cute and beautiful….((like yami gautam in sanam re))…a boy is also there…he is sitting on his knees…in a proposing pose…in fact yes he is proposing the girl….he is also in school dress…they are in class 12….last year of the school…
Boy-sanchi…I love u…I tried to express my feelings before but I was not able to….due to fear of loosing u….before my love u r my best frnd…so I didn’t wanna loose u……but I really love u sanchi…will u marry me…will u be mine????
Sanchi-veer….i love u too…I always loved u…and will love u only…all lifelong…I also not expressed my feeling….because I didn’t want to loose u…I love u veer…
Yes the boy is veer…and the girl is sanchi….((many twists are upcoming just wait and watch…age age hota h kya….))….
After that day..they both start spending more and more time with each other…their love grew more and more….they both went to taj mahal…and clicked ppics…to make it a remark of their love…and more and more….((bg song-sanam re))….
The last day of school comes…sanchi was going to delhi..as she wants to become a doctor…she promised veer that their love will never die…she will still love him…and they will live together..after they both settle up…veer asked her to call him daily..she promised him the same..and she left…veer started missing.her….days and days passed by…but she didn’t contact him…he was broken fully broken……then a girl isha…came to give symapathy to veer she was psycatrist….2 years passed…by….veer was owing a business now…isha was his doctor and frnd with whom he shares all his emotions…veer looks isha as his best friend…as he still loves sanchi and waits for her..that she will comeback….isha has feeling for veer.but didn’t expressed …as she knew that veer and sanchi loved each other madly…
Flashback ends
Veer is crying….
Veer(shouts looking up at sky)-why why sanchi…why u left me….did u really betrayed me…all say u betrayed me……but I still have a strong feeling that u will come…u will come someday….dnt know when that day will come…
Isha comes their….she pats veer’s shoulder…
Isha-veer we have our flight in 1 hour for delhi….get freshen up fast…
Veer-yes….wait we are going to delhi right….itxxx sanchi’s home …I have her dadaji’s address …we will go their I m sure we will get to know whereabouts of sanchi…. This time….
Isha-okey as u say…freshen up fast…
Otherside in delhi…
A girl is shown…selecting bridal dresses….and jewelries…she is very happy….yes itzz her marriage with delhi’s best doctor dr kabir kappor….and the girl is ofcourse archi or sanchi’s lookalike.. dr archi mishra….her phone rings up…she takes the call…
archi-so u got the time to call me…day after tomorrow is our marriage and u r still working and busy…itzzz not fair kabir….
Kabir-archi my jaan…my baby…u knw na …patient ‘s life is important for me…..
archi-hmmm I understand…but I m also important for u…right…
Kabir-right …that’s why I came to see u…
archi-what u r here….where…
Kabir-look wih ur heart u will find me…
archi searches here and there…and suddenly someone pulls her in trial room…yes itzz none other than kabir….archi hugs kabir….they part aways…kabir is about to kiss archi…archi closes her eyes….but she gets some blur flashes of a boy proposing a girl…and hugging…she opens her eyes and pushes kabir…she is confused….but kabir is in full romantic mood.he comes and hugs her from back..archi also smiles…and says..
archi-wait my majnu…wait till day after toomorow…
Kabir-yah then u will regret…and the night..and that night u will regret more…
archi (blushes and breaks his hold)kabir u na….okey bye…
archi runs out…kabir comes after her…..
Otherside veer and isha reaches sanchi’s daddaji’s house…they are welcomed…veer asks for sanchi’s where abouts….but is shocked to know that …..sanchi’s family also dnt knw anything about her after the last day of school…….they thaught she was with veer……as she told them about their relationship…..but they didn’t agreed…so she left the house that day…to return to veer…..after that they know nothing about her….jaya gets ill knowing that sanchi is not with veer….than where is she….is she dead…
Jaya looses her conscious and falls down..she is taken to hospital….veer is confused with his thought where sanchi can be….isha consoles him…the doctor comes out and says she had heart attack and due to which she had gone to coma.…she should be kept far aways from stress and tension ….all other family members cries ….veer walks away…sadly..and stand infront of god’s idol…veer sits on his knees infront of god…and cries….
Veer-why why god…why u took my last hope also…where is sanchi…did she really betrayed…me…but why I get a feeling she is there she is near me….is she alive…or she died……no no…she cant leave me …please..god…keep her safe wherever she is….please…
Suddenly wind starts blowing…..archi and kabir comes to hospital for archi’s various health test as from last few days she was not feeling well….archi asks kabir to go …and she will come after checking some patients…veer listens her voice and turns around…but is unable to see…he searches here and there but archi(sanchi) is already gone…he comes to kabir and pats his shoulder…kabir turns around…
Veer-kabir…
Kabir-veer….what are u doing here…
Veer narrates all…
Kabir-oh…m sory…but I wish u will get ur sanchi back….
Veer- I also wish so…so mr kabir kappor congratulation….now u r the head of such a big hospital…u knw my sanchi’s dream was also to become a doctor…
Kabir-oh ..but u have to come to congrats me again tomorrow….
Veer-means…
Kabir-tommorrow is my marriage…with dr archi mishra…so u have to come…
Veer- tomorrow is ur marriage and u r still in hospital…kabir u didn’t changed at all…same workwholic…and when u r going to make me meet ur archi..
Kabir-come at evening….give ur phone no. I will send u the address…
Veer- okey…
Otherside archi(sanchi) is checking her patients…she passes by the jaya’s ward….she feels something uneasy type…and she enters jaya’s ward…she walks slowly inside…..((bg song-ram ram jay raja ram…ram ram jay sita ram…))…she comes to jaya…she sits beside her….and cares her face…jaya slowly opens her eyes…and shocked to see sanchi…she starts breathing fast…sanchi gets worried…and checks her….she calls doctor… doctor comes and checks jaya..jaya tries to speak…but is unabe to speak…archi(sanchi) gets kabir’s call..so she leaves…jaya’s condition starts worsening…seeing sanchi leaving…archi(sanchi) also feels something strange….but she goes…the same time jaya shouts SANCHI…SANCHI….she comes out of coma….veer and isha also reaches there…veer comes inside while archi(sanchi)is going out..their hands collide…but veer is not able to see her face…as isha pulls veer to come fast..archi(sanchi)leaves…both feels strange…both looks at their hands…((bg song-piya ore piya….piya re piya re piya……))….
At evening….kabir’s house
Veer and isha reaches their….kabir welcomes them….veer asks kabir to bring archi….kabir says here is archi…he moves aside ..archi is behind kabir…veer and isha is shocked to see sanchi…veer becomes emotional and says SANCHI…MY SANCHI…..he is about to hug her….but isha holds veer ‘s hand…and signals her to wait…not now…kabir asks sanchi to talk with them…as he has a important work at hospital…so he leaves…after kabir leaves…veer looks at sanchi…tear skips from his eyes…archi is confused…veer comes and hugs archi(sanchi)….archi is confused…but is unable to react..
Veer(still hugging)-sanchi…I knew u r their…u cant leave…me….this was ur plan…right…you wanted to give me surprise right..that’s why aksed kabir to invite me…sanchi I love u…I missed u every day evryminute and every second…in this 2 years….where were you sanchi ….
Veer cares sanchi’s face..sanchi is still confused….veer was about to hug sanchi again…but sanchi pushes him…
Sanchii-are u mad or something…I m archi…kabir told me about you and your sanchi…but I m not your sanchi…and dr archi mishra…and will become mrs archi kabir kappor tomorrow…tomorrow is my marriage with kabir…I know you love her a lot…but why are u joking with me…
Veer-what…sanchi have you gone mad…u r my sanchi…only mine you promised me that whatever happens our love will not die…than why are you doing this…
Sanchi-because I m archi…not ur sanchi…
Veer comes to hug sanchi again…but this time sanchi gets furious and slaps him…veer is shocked…isha hold him…
Sanchi-don’t u understand I m archi…I love kabir…only kabir…and don’t love anyone else…n I m not ur sanchi..so please….
Veer-everyonne was right u betrayed me…but I was mad…that I believed that…you didn’t betrayed me u will come one day…but u betrayed me sanchi…and nnow not even recognizing me….u r so cheap sanchi..that for marrying a wealthy rich man…u had forgot ur own family also…ur mom also…u didn’t even contact them…… I hate u sanchi….i hate u…..u r cheap….i regret to fall for u sanchi…I hate u…
archi slaps him again…and leaves from their….isha takes veer with him….
At night…
archi thinks about veer’s words…and feels bad..and thinks why she is feeling bad…what connection she have with him….otherside veer is drinking wine..and crying…and burns all his pictures with sanchi ..and all her memories….isha feels bad seeing his condition….otherside kabir is happy for his marriage with archi(sanchi)….and reminses his memories with archi…
((bg song-Kaise tumhe roka karu ..
Meri taraf aata Har gham phisal jaaye…
Ankhon mein tumko bharun…
Bin bole baatein tumse karoon…
Agar tum saath ho Agar tum saath ho…
Behti rehti.. Nehar nadiya si ..
Teri duniya mein meri duniya hai ..
Teri chahaton mein ..main dhal jaati hun Teri aadaton mein…
Agar tum saath ho …
Teri nazron me hai ..tere sapne Tere sapno…
me hai naraazi Mujhe lagta hain ke baatein dil ki Hoti lafzon ki dhokebaazi…
Tum saath ho ya na ho… Kya fark hai ..
Bedard thi zindagi bedard hai …..Agar tum saath ho…. Agar tum saath ho))…
Kabir thinks about his memories with sanchi….how he met sanchi…
Flashback
Kabir was going to hospital by his car…he sees a crowd…he gets down to see what is happening…he finds a girl blooding heavily…she has met an accident…she sanchi…but kabir’s archi…kabir takes her to hospital…and operates her….she looses her memory due to head injury so kabir takes her to his home…all family member pampers sanchi..and gives her a new life a a new name archi…day by day….kabir starts falling for her…and finaly propses her…sanchi eccepts his proposal….they decides to marry after sanchi becomes a doctor…))
Flashback ends
Kabir-who know from where god sent her to me…where is her family…but I love her a lot…if I loose her I will die..but her hapiiness is my happiness..
Next day((marriage day of kanchi))…..
All rituals are taking place….isha comes to sanchi and ask her to forgive veer for last day….sanchi says its okey…..sanchi goes to washroom to freshen up….isha takes out a photo album of veer and sanchi’s childhood pics..their picc at tajmahal…and all…and keeps it on the bed ….
Isha-this is the last way…to make sanchi realize her love for veer…god itzzz in ur hand…plzz bring sanchi’s memory back…please god…i cant see veer like this although I love veer…but I want him to be happy .and I knw sanchi loves him…but is not reconising him.due to memory loss…please god help me…
Flashback
Isha goes to kabir’s hospital and gets detail of sanchi from a nurse…the nurse told her about how kabir got sanchi at road…and sanchi lost her memory in that accident….
Flashback ends
Sanchi is freshing up suddenly she notices a blurred tattoo on her back…she gets confused…that how that tattoo came as she never made a tattoo….it was written veer….((author’s note-sanchi made veer’s name tattoo before leaving for delhi))….she gets blur flashes…and starts panincking.she comes out of washroom…and starts breathing fastly….she notices the album…and opens it..and shocked to see veer’s and her pictures…she gets flashes…she finds one pic where veer is touching sanchi’s tattoo….sanchi…remembers the same tattoo on her back…she gets her memory…she shouts ..VEER….she gets all her memories…and starts breathing fast…kabir comes to her room…hearing her,,,,,
Kabir-what happen archi…are u ill????
sanchi –I m not archi I m sanchi veer’s sanchi..i got my memory back kabir…I m sorry I cant marry u….i love veer…I promised veer….i cant break the promise….please kabir…I m soryy
kabir gets shattered….but don’t show it…and still supports sanchi
kabir-archi….i means sanchi…go..go to ur love…go sanchi go..
sanchi runs out…she runs on road barefoot and thinks veer I m coming..she reaches the bunglow where isha and veer is leaving at delhi..she runs inside..and asks servants where is veer….they tells he is in his room…sanchi runs up..and sees veer drinking in his room…sanchi was about to step inside…but she coughs…blood comes out of her mouth she is shocked to see…she understand…..what is it….she starts steping back…tears skips from her eyes….she steps backward and goes from their….
((bg song-Paas aaye.. Dooriyaan phir bhi kam Na huyi…..
Ek adhuri Si humari kahaani rahi….
Aasmaan ko zameen Yeh zaroori nahi Jaan le.. jaan le…..
Ishq saccha wahi Jisko milti nahi Manzilein manzilein…..
Sanchi walks sadly out of veer’s bunglow…she walks sadly on road and reminces her memories with veer….how veer proposed her…how they went to tajmahal…..how veer feed her..when she was having fever due to tattoo….how veer cared for her……how veer kissed her tatooo….
Rang thhe noor tha Jab kareeb tu tha Ek jannat sa tha Yeh jahaan…..
Waqt ke reet pe Kuch mere naam sa Likh ke chhod gaya Tu kahaan.. ….
Hamari adhuri kahani Hamari adhuri kahani…….
Sanchi is lost and cries and sits down on road…and cries hardly…..and says I love u veer….god always take my happiness….i got u back after 2 years…and now god brought such a big shocking truth of my life..i cant betray u…If I come back to u…than this happiness will be short lived..its better to be away from u…I don’t want to hurt u again….veer…I love u…I cant hurt u…this was in our destiny…..sanchi cries…. And breaks down…
Otherside kabir gets sanchi report….and is shocked to see the reports….he is shattered knowing that sanchi has cancer….veer comes to kabir.
Veer-kabir….what happen u should be happy u r marrying sanchi…oh sorry for u archi…don’t know how many more names she had….cheap…lier….betrayell….she only loves money…not u..she betrayed me…….and now betraying u…such a cheap girl she is……….
Kabir gets furious…and holds veer’s collar
Kabir-she is not cheap…not cheater….destiny cheated her….kabir narrates whole matter..how he got sanchi…about her memory loss…and then shows him sanchi’s report…
Veer is also shocked to know that sanchi is having cancer…..veer asks where is sanchi…kabir says she went to tell him truth…..veer says she didn’t came,….where is she…I have so much to tell her….my sanchi…is back I love her a lot….i m sorry sanchi…I m coming…veer runs out in search of sanchi…kabir is happy seeing their love for each other.but is hurted also.as he loosed her archi(sanchi)…..
After 5 hours…
Veer comes back tired and drunk to kabir’s house..kabir and isha is waiting for SANVEER to come…but is shocked to see veer like that…isha holds veer…kabir asks veer about sanchi…
Veer- she left ….i lossed her again….why god do this to me.dont know…why…
Veer passes a letter to kabir…
Kabir reads it and gets teary eyed..
Letter
‘’’’ my dear veer….i m sorry to hurt u…but I have to go…destiny has not choosen me for u…I loved u love u and will love u forever…I will be with u like air….i will be the air u will breathe….i m sorry veer…have a happy life…bye veer….bye…and please don’t search me…..bye
Ur sanchi’’’’’’
After 1 month…
Kabir asked isha to help her in his work…as he needed a psycatrist in his hospital…veer….is still lost in sanchi’s memory..kabir also still misses sanchi…but didn’t expressed his feelings….veer…was not well..as he drinks everyday…inspite kabir and isha tried to console him….
One day veer was walking sadly on the road…he didn’t noticed a truck coming from other side…the truck was about to hit him…but someone pulls him and saves…him veer is shocked to see her…yes she was his sanchi…but wearing a cap..as she was bald…now…veers hugs her..sanchi also gets emotional seeing veer’s condition…..veer Is still hugging her….sanchi faints on his shoulder…veer. Gets worried he takes her to hospital….kabir and isha operates her…..outside veer is praying for sanchi…sanchi’s family ,jaya also comes…pragya and satish sanveer’s school frnds also comes their((author’s note-sorry I didn’t mention them earlier…but they are needed for further story))……..evryone cries and prays for sanchi…kabir ans isha is shown doing sanchi’s surgery…….
((bg song plays-Kho gaya, gum ho gaya Waqt se churaya tha jo,…
Apna banaya tha ….
Ho tera, woh mera Saath nibhaya tha jo,… Apna banaya tha…
Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni… Chadariya, jeeni re jeeni ….
Aankhein, bheeni ye, bheeni ye, bheen…
i Yaadein, jheeni re, jheeni re, jheeni..
Chadariya jeeni re jeeni Chadariya jeeni re jeeni..
Hai aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni… Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni…))
Veer cries and remisnses….moments spend with sanchi…his proposal….and sanchi leaving for delhi….and how he met sanchi again….how he treated sanchi badly…and all….
Kabir and sanchi comes outside…veer runs to them and ask is sanchi out of danger or not…kabir and isha doesn’t answer….jaya comes to kabir and shakes his hand and ask how is her daughter….kabir doesn’t answer and start crying…and says….i lost my archi…I mean we all lost our sanchi…she can die any moment….she has no time….just few hours….veer gets shattered listing to kabir…he slowly goes inside….and sees sanchi lying on bed….he goes to her…sanchi also cries silently…but wipes her tears seeing veer…and smiles and opens her arms and signals veer to hug her…..veer starts crying and hugs her….and then kisses her bald head……veer cares sanchi’s face…..
Sanchi-don’t cry veer…I m always with u ….i told u na I m the air u will breathe….
Veer-yes that’s y if u will be not there …..than this veer will also die….u told na…we will live together and die together…..our love will never die sanchi…never,,,,
Sanchi-I love u veer,,,
veer-I love u too sanchi….
Sanchi hugs veer and dies in veer’s arm….from outside…all sees them…kabir cries seeing sanchi…he remisnses the moments spend with her….and cries more…
After sometime veer also dies with sanchi…still in hugging position….he had heart attack…..due to consuming of alchol…
((bg song-aye khuda….aye khuda….jab bana uska hi bana……))
After one year….isha and kabir are married and names their son veer…and pragya and satish name their daughter sanchi….and their love story starts again…….as they said….their love will never die…….
Truly love never die….but one reality about love if u realy love someone….u will surely get hurted,…..as where love lies….pain also lies their…..so guys…my dear request to all…never betray someone…who realy loves…u as…after that u will regret and really get hurt….thanx bye….
9 Comments
AWWW so cute story and i can understand u even i mgoong through same hv no time to comment i jst fet tome to check activity and some times to comment on intros due to so much time scarcity nd luv u 2 dear bye tc gud ni8
First of all sweety, I can never forget u coz we share the same name…hehe…& dear ur meherya & sdch sangam was osm, I enjoyed it a lot…now, coming to this plot, this was really heart touching…even though I’m a die hard kanchi fan but still, I loved the way u portrayed sanveer’s love…sachii…luv u a lot sweetie…gud nt…tc
Soo cute story dear? it made me feel sad and happy at the same time?
im a kanchi fan but i liked it also
you narrated it well
Such a beautiful ND emotional story I just loved it ❤️ superb one Yaar
Dear,it is awesome ….plot is interesting……I am Kanchi fan but loved the way how u described love between Sanveer here….so beautifully….lots of love.
awwwww what a emotional story dear loved it sanveer moment sanveer proposal sooo cute isha support for veer was lovely kaan chi moment is also cute i love sanveer more than kaanchi but your ff was superrrrrrrrrrr love you keep writing stay happy ????????????????????????????????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Nyc
Hi priyanka… sorry for late commnt.. totally disappointed to the current track of sdch so ab yahan bhi man nhi krta.. i m a diehard crazy fan o fkanchi.. just watch th8s crap show only forkanchi.. ok enough… lets move to ur os… i loved theway u portray the story..feel badfor my kabir.. kya karun aadat se maj oor… amaz so emotional os..bye tc.. gud ni8 dearie