Hello friends……long time no see….so sorry for that….i told you all that I am having my exams ….today only gave my first exam …..seriously it was strange!!
All punishments accepted !
Now another sorry for not replying ur beautiful sweet comments and for not commentung on some of stories but I am reading and now will comment on every story!!all stories are marvelous!!
Then a big wala abhilasha style welcome to all my lovely new authors ….welcome to our sweer kanchi family and I am glad as well as happy that our kanchi family is increasing!!!
Now lets don’t waste time of you people and comeback to story!!
Recap- kanchi told their siblings about their first meet… circumstances that led to their marriage and then divorce. Story is now in present where two new characters dev and neha are added! Kabir’s dadi came home and kanchi decided to do drama of happy couple and not to disclose about their divorce to dadi as she is heart patient!!
Lets start!
In morning-
At 3:00 am
Dadi came in kanchi’s room
Sanchi wakes up and saw kabir lying beside him …his hand was on her waist ….she keeps his hand aside and looks at him!
Sanchi- how innocent he looks while sleeping….devil is sleeping!!
Dadi- sanchi bahu have your sargi today is karva chauth!kusum will have chance to give you further but I have once!
Sanchi- ok dadiji!(lag gyi lanka)
Sanchi takes sargi and have it!!
She goes to fresh and wear a royal blue saree with golden embroidery!!
Kabir wakes up and was mesmerized to see her ….she was looking breathtaking!
Sanchi looks at him!
Sanchi- wanna say something?
Kabir- no….actually…ya….dont get used to of this!
Sanchi- oh really why on earth do you think that I will become used to of this….joke of the day!!
Kabir- whatever!
Sanchi- but this suits on you…don’t get used to of seeing me in early morning!
Kabir- not that much bad days have come for me.
Sanchi- whatever!
Sanchi goes down to kitchen.
Kabir too comes down after getting fresh!!
On dining table-
Dadiji- u had ur sargi?
Sanchi- ji dadiji I had!!
Dadi- ohk and today come soon or take a off.
Sanchi- I wll come soon!
Kabir saw this all!
Kabir- sanchi lets go fast surgery time is 7:00 am!
Kusum- had ur bf atleast!
Kabir- I am getting late maa….will do in hospital!
Both were on way!
Kabir- no need of that fast and all.
Sanchi-(I m keeping it from last 3 yrs)
Fast for you….come on!
Kabir- good!
Both did surgery !
Sanchi- had ur breakfast now!
Kabir- no need of being like my wife ……I will have when I will be hungry and after tomorrow I have to do care myself alone!
Sanchi leaves!
Their busy schedule goes on!
At cafeteria!
All girls were sitting while neha was eating!
Neha- hey why you all are sitting? Fast is of pragya and sanchi and isha you?
Sanchi- I m keeping it for dadi …don’t want to hurt her sentiments!
Isha- from past 3 yrs you are giving lame excuses but this one is better!
Sanchi- leave …btw why arent you eating?
Isha- wo I have kept it for…..getting good husband!
Pragya- really isha…something…something!!
Isha- shut up guys!
At kabir’s cabin-
Kabir- veer please stop roaming now…my head is roaming now seeing like this…this isnt red carpet for your moon walk!
Veer- dr kabir I m feeling like I will go to heaven for sure due to this hunger! And if I eat anything pragya will eat me!
Garv- eating apple ….bhai are you sure you will get seat in heaven!
Veer glares!
Dev- kabir why you are not eating?
Kabir- wo I had my bf and right now I m not feeling hungry!
Trio- really????
Kabir- dev ji even you r not eating;
Dev- wo I have kept fast for is……I mean for just experimenting that how ladies remain hungry all day!
Kabir- isha is also fasting I think!! Maybe for his bf!
Dev- hey she hasnt any !
All giggles!
Time skips to night!
In kapoor mansion!
Whole terrace is beautifully decorated!
All ladies listen story of karva chauth goddess and exchange their plates!
All are in bridal look wearing lehenga-chunri with jwellery especially nose ring and hair line ornament!
Sanchi wear a red lehenga with golden and orangish thread desighning with a red net chunri with golden heavy border.
Pragya wear a blue lehenga with pink chunri with golden embroidery.
Isha too wearing saree of red colour with golden sleevless blouse !
Pragya- yipee moon had come!
All took their plates and do pooja of moon and their husbands. They look at moon and then look at their husbands through sieve and rotate pooja plate infront of them ……..then they give water to moon with their husbands .
All husbands make their wives drink water and feeds them with sweet.
Sanchi bents to touch kabir’s feet(it’s a ritual) kabir holds her …..
Kabir- no need of this.
All looks at him.
Kabir- you are my wife and I m not god ….you and I share equal rights…so if you will touch my feet then I will too.
Sanchi’s eyes get moisten .
Dadi- I pray to god that your pairing remains forever.
All smiles.
Pragya feeds veer sweets but he was just asking for more.
Pragya- if you ask for even one more ….i will break your head.
Veer makes puppy face .
Isha did pooja infront of all of moon only.
Isha in mind- I kept fast….did pooja but godji plz send my prince charming…….i love dev but I am not sure he loves me or not.
Dev comes from behind amd taps on her shoulder.
Dev- btw I am really hungry……I kept fast for experimenting .
Isha- even I kept fast.
dev- for whom?
He moves forward while she moves backwards.
Isha- my love!
Dev- who is that person.
Isha- you really don’t know
He take out a diamond ring and bent on his knees – isha my this karva chauth fast and all other for every birth are for you!will you give me this right?
Isha- I had given it when I first meet you……I love you!
Dev- I love you too.
Both break each other’s fast!
They heard sounds of claps from behind.
Sanchi- so ishu got her that good husband .
Kabir- dev …so this was your experiment.
Both blushes.
Veer- I m thinking to set one more mandap beside ours …right pragya!
Pragya- actually three….she points towards neha and garv who were lost in their world .
All laughs!
All went downstairs leaving kanchi.
Kabir felt unconscious.
Sanchi- kabir!!!…what happened?
Sanchi checks him.
Sanchi- you havent eat anything?
She make him drink water and gives sweet to him.
He felt better.
Sanchi- what was need of this!
Kabir- why you kept?
Sanchi- for dadi.
Kabir- I kept for me…..i don’t that someone is hungry due to me and I eat.
Sanchi- but you are not habitual.
Kabir- even you are not ….???
Sanchi- lets go down all are waiting for us.
All had dinner with jokes and laughter.
At night-
In kanchi room!
Sanchi was removing her jwellery but was not able to remove her necklace.
Kabir saw that and goes near her. He kept her hair in front and remove her necklace…sanchi shivers due to his touch . she turned and both shared an eyelock.
Sanchi goes from there.
Next day-
At dining hall-
Kusum and dadi were sitting on chairs waiting from one hr for breakfast.
Sanchi came down in pink and cream saree and was looking so adorable.
Sanchi- whats going on here?
Kusum- beta kabir is cooking something for us.
Sanchi- whhhattttt??? Oh my god ….you will remain hungry whereas kitchen will blast.
They heard a blast.
Sanchi prevent kusum and dadi from going inside and run inside.
Sanchi- kabir are you ok?
Kabir coughing ya I am ok!
The smoke gets clear and sanchi looked at kabir who has turned black from white…..sanchi couldn’t control an laughed wholeheartedly.
Kabir glares …sanchi- sorry ….shw again laughs.
Kabir was just admiring her.
Sanchi- tumse na ho payega!
Kabir- I was making vegetable pizza but…
Sanchi- please go now and clean urselfor your patients will get scared!
Sanchi cleans all and make breakfast for everyone!
Dadi- wo I m thinking to visit sdch!
Kabir and sanchi cough!
Dadi- ok lets go.
Both were helpless and agreed.
Trio reached sdch.
Dadi- very good my children…keep doing like this.
Kanchi went to their appointments while dadi saw whole hospital.
At lunch
Dadi to neha and isha- beta wear some clothes that cover ur body …look at my sanchi.
Ishaha- dadi…pouts.
Dadi- just kidding …..i m cool dadi not like ur hitler dr.
Kabir- dadi!!
dadi- achcha kabir now get me a grandchild fast.
Kabir- dadi now……hws that possible!
Dadi- donkey I m saying Soon I to see a little child in my house.
Kanchi looks at each other.
Veer- right dadi ..mwhy not send them at honeymoon today ….urgrandchild will be ready by 9 months.
Dadi hold his ear- besharam!
Alll laughs.
(Sorry for wrapping it fast but no role of dadi now)
Next day
At airport-
Dadi gives gifts to all and then came to sanchi-
Dadi- sanchi bahu this is laddoo gopal and I want that when I come next time ….i will see the baby.
Sanchi and kabir touches her feet!
Dadi- bhagwan tumhara rishta hamesha banaye rkhe wur ye rishta har pal ur mzboot ho!
Kanchi looks at each other.
Dadi leaves!
Kusum- I dnt know what to say but just be happy (I know ur happiness of both of you lies in each other)
kabir- maa when you will come?
Kusum- beta I m only going to ur masi’s house in delhi.
Kanchi were on way ….
Kabir- you are free now.
Sanchi- even you!
Both go to their apartments!!
Both were looking at each other…..bg plays hamari adhuri khani!
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precap- shimla trip on….kabir to get sanchi’s personal diary!!
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Done with it guys….hope you all like it…please comment if you all like it!!
Many silent readers have break their silence ……riya is now riya rocks….congo riya I hope you will write something soon and my dear new authors keep rocking… guys you all are amazing!!!
20 Comments
Hey abhilasha this amaz outstanding so adorable specially fast breaking scene of all of them so cute…. Precap is interesting cant wait anymore post nxt fast asap dear..
Hi Abhi.I didn’t read from starting but ur episode – 11 is amazing and cool.U showed all couples at a time that too with amazing moments.Really superb dear just like u.
Keep writing dear…
thnx Abhilasha dear, wow…amazing….splendid……osm……epic…..historic….khidki-tod…..soch rahi hoon, iss baar kya naya kahoon???????? astounding, terrific………..u know what, kuch bhi kehloon, woh kam hi padega for u………u r such a great writer…….tc & dear, luv u a lot…………
& ya, sorry, I didn’t ask abt ur exams..it just skipped out of my mind, how was ur paper???????? hope u r doing well in ur exams just like the way u r excelling as an amazing writer…….
Awesome Abhilasha lovely I think now kabir will get to know about the truth . Now beta Riya mazha ayega ???????
Awesome episode. ???
Now can’t wait anymore for next episode.
Kasam se keh rahe h jldi se next wala episode update krna wrna muh tod denge tmhara.
Sorry I was just kidding sis
Hope you won’t mind.
Nd pls try to update next one as soon as possible.
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Nice episode loved it very much ….. And best of luck for ur remaining pprz
abhilasha you nailed it love the way you wrote your all ff please update next one soon… keep writing…
abhilasha ye this dp is from which episode??? please reply when free…
Wowwww it’s amazing mindblowing outstanding awesome superb fantastic and many more waiting for next part
I am really enjoyed it pls update next soon I am Waiting I know ur exams going BT make it fast if u have time…and all the best for ur studies my friend…
Abhi dear…good to know you are back…how was your exam…hope you did well….coming to the epi it was cool, amazing, mind blowing…these words are nothing in front your amazing epi…love you and take care…post your next part ASAP
It was really fantastic … Hope kaanchi reunite soon
Awesome abhilasha this one is gr8
Loved it to three core keep it up dear
Waiting for nxt one eagerly
Plzzput soon.
Awesomeness abhilasha I am super excited for your next update that will be rocking nd this one u just nailed it sweetie luv uh loads
Awesome chapter!!! Can’t wait to see what Kabir finds in her diary
Abhilasha…. ur article is awsm as always. No words can describe how much happy i am now after reading this cute and hilarious article by u. Plz keep updating whenever u gets free. And all the best for your Studies and exams. Good luck
OMG OMG!!! That was just fantabulous.. No words. Just loved it. It was so cute to see all the couples happily spend their fasting session and dadi+veer combination for sending. them to honeymoon was very creative. The episode was really sweet and the precap is very tempting. But no pressure. Hope u had fantastic exams and best of luck for upcoming ones.. Love u loads..?? a big hug from me for such an amazing episode..
Loved it to the core.. I mean it was awesome and mindblowing …
OMG it’s amazing…sorry for commenting late..I am down with heavy fever…please post the next part soon