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Now lets start !!
Scene – at party!
Riya- welcome ladies and gentleman and enjoy the party …music!
Music plays-
Sanchi- kabir can we dance
Kabir- yes sure!(may be this would be last dance)
Both reached on dance floor-
Song plays- mere haath me tera haath ho!
Kanchi were lost in each other but two pair of eyes were glaring them ….riya and veer!
Veer to himself- how dare this kabir to touch my sanchi…I wont spare him!
Kanchi unawre of this were dancing an smelling the fragrance of each other……..suddenly someone puncges kabir!
Sanchi- kabir!!!!…hey you
Veer- how dare you touch my sanchi….dont you have any shame.
Kabir- veer atleast listen me!
Veer starts beating…..
Sanchi after seeing him panics …r head starts revolving!
Sanchi- who r u …why are you beating my husband…
Listening this veer felt a major shock…
Veer- sanchi I m veer …we were going to married but at the end my accident happened..
Veer – what u did to my sanchi?
He again raises his hand but this time kabir come in form and punches veer back ….both got indulge in big fight!
Sanchi’s flashes were getting cleared …she starts regaining her memory!
She shouted- veer!!!!
All were dazed!
She goes an hugs him!
Veer- u recall everything!
Kabir was broken!
Sanchi- where were you ……..
Veer- I have came for you ….i love you so much!
Sanchi- now you will be with me …don’t go anywhere…..
Kabir goes from there!
Sanchi faints!!!
Veer- sanchi….sanchi…what happened!
He takes her to room !
On the other hand kabir was drinking and drinking…….he came on road!
Noone was there!
Kabir’s pov- now you must be happy god……what you always get by breaking my heart ….whats my fault….what u want ………she never loved me and even I didn’t expect that then why……..!
Enough kabir its over now …..i wont fall in love again …..i will forget you sanchi now live you life happily with ur veer…..
Saying this he drink whole bottle and throws it!
On other hand- sanchi’s condition was better she was recalling what happened after her memory loss!
Veer- sanchi you should rest now…wilk in morning!
Riya to herself- veer has done now I have to do my work …….kabir’s brokem heart needs remedy…I m coming kabir
Riya leaves for hotel !
Here kabir too reaches hotel but he was not in his senses….
Riya comes there….
Kabir- you…what are you doing ……have you came here …….
Riya keeps finger on his lips- ssshhh!
Today its our time….
Kabir was half fainted……
Riya opens his clothes and make him lie on bed….she too lay beside him and makes it look like they get intimate…..
Next morning
Sanchi shouts-kabir!!!
Sanchi’s pov- I got everything…….where is he……..yaa I loved veer but kabir taught me actual love ……I have to go to him!
She goes to veer!
Veer was decorating his room…he identity her sound of coming!
Veer- I know you will come here first….see god listen me……first he saved me even after falling from cliff and then he send you here!
Sanchi- veer I want to say something…
Veer- I know you want to say those 3 magical words which you left incomplete!
Sanchi- no veer….i loved you even I ot sure that was really love or not but you know when whole world was blaming me who hold my hand…..he was kabir…he cares me …..but never took advantage……..he is my real love ……sorry veer I have to go !!!
Saying this she leaved!
Veer throws everything- damn she left me….no I wont let it happen!
He calls riya-
Riya picks – ha veer !
Veer- sanchi left me ….she is coming to kabir!
Riya- don’t worry now she will hate him!
Sanchi reaches hotel!
Riya hugs kabir while sleeping and keeps his hand on her and starts her drama!
Riya- I know all you did for sanchi was just ur sympathy …..u told me that you never loved her!!!
Kabir who was sleeping didn’t know anything!
Sanchi listen that and she opens the door slightly…the scene of inside makes land slide under her feet …..
She wasn’t able to believe on her eyes!
Main taan jiya na maraa..
Haaye ve das main ki karaa..
She ran from there! She was just running to road …all wwre staring her!!
dill jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne..
Baar baar rond akhiyan
Tainu jo na vekh sakiyaan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne..
Katta main ki ve din teri sonh tere bin
Main taan jiya na maraa..
there kabir was coming in senses …. Riya wakes up and make place like nothing has happened and goes from there!
Kabir wakes up and felt strange but didn’t pay any heed and start packing his luggage! He too was very sad!
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona
Hai to.. yeh kyon hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak-sisak ke hawayein
Jag soona lage
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona re..
Soona laage re…
Sanchi goes to temple and sits there!
Roothi roothi saari raatein
Feeke feeke saare din
Veerani si veerani hai
Tanhayi si tanhayi hai
Aur ek hum hain pyaar ke bin
Har palchin
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona re..
Kabir left for mumbai!
Pattharon ki is nagri mein
Patthar chehre patthar dil
Phirta hai mara mara
Kyun raahon mein tu aawara
Yahan na hoga.. kuchh haasil mere dil
Sanchi goes to hotel to face off !
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona re..
Hai to.. yeh kyon hota hai [kyon hota hai]
Jab yeh dil rota hai [dil rota hai]
Roye sisak-sisak ke hawayein
Jag soona lage
Chhan se jo toote koi sapna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona lage
Koi rahe na jab apna
Jag soona soona lage
Jag soona soona re..
Soona lage re mohe…
Sanchi reaches hotel but found noone … too packed her luggage and left for mumbai!
Scene shifted to mumbai!
Sanchi reaches her home …
Jaya- sanchi what happened…kusum ji told me that kabir came alone there…what happen beta …tell me!…
Sanchi hugs her and cried and tells her everything ….ishagya too reaches there and get to know about what happened?
Isha- but sanchi u should talk to him…maybe its misunderstanding…..atleast
Sanchi- isha everything is over now I don’t wamt to see his face….i don’t want to talk about this ….maa even u wont talk to him or kusum ma!
Jaya- but sanchi!
On other hand-
Kusum- kabir atleast you should wait there and talk with sanchi !
Kabir- maa plz …and we are soon going us soon after my divorce!
Kusum- what?
Next day sanchi received a courier..she was shocked in agony!
Jaya- whats tha?
Sanchi- divorce papers!
Sanchi sighned it!kabir had already sighed it!
Jaya- beta atleast talk him once a single misunderstanding can ruin ur life.
Sanchi- its already ruined!
Papers were submitted to the court !
In malhotra mansion-
We heard sound of slaps which were falling on veer and riya!
(Veer told everything to savitri as he could lie to him)
Savitri- cant believe u r my children…..riya maybe I adopted you but I tthoughti gave you my principles and you stoop so low!
Veer l didn’t expect this from you ….love is not snatched forcefully! Now go both of u I dnt want to see your face!
Riya goes from there.
Veer- sorry maa ….i understand my mistake and I will tell sanchi everything!
He goes to sanchi!
Sanchi- what happened veer?
Veer told him everything!
Veer- sorry sanchi but I became blind and didn’t think abkut anything else.plz!
Sanchi- its not time for this…I have to go and stop kabir!
She leaves for airport but the plabe had left till then.
Sanchi cries!
Riya- ye to hona hi tha!
Sanchi- you…..she slept her hard!
I know you did this all and trapped veer too in ur dirty game!
Riya- sanchi kabir never loved you….ya I did wrong but still you cant change the fact that he sympathize with you………poor yoi!
Sanchi cries and leaves!
Sanchi’s pov- yaa she is right ……he don’t loves me …..why the hell he showed me that sympathy….how fool I was ..mi thought his sympathy as love!
————flashback ends————-
Present
Laksh- bhai u didn’t even bother to know about her feelings and she didmt marry veer then also you !
kabir- laksh she didn’t loved me ……and rest is her life .
Laksh- what about you?
Kabir- I don’t know!
In sanchi’s cabin-
Ragini- di why u believe that riya…..
Sanchi- I don’t believe her but what she said cant be neglected! You know I hate sympathy!
Ragini- u still love him?
Sanchi- I don’t have time for this!
She leaves !
Laksh came!
Ragini- condition is not easy as we thought….jts really herculean task to reunite them!
Laksh- yaa misunderstanding level is really high…………..!
Ishagya and veer and garv came!
Raglak glares veer!
Veer- I m not that foolish veer now …..lets start mission!
All joins hands!
Mission love….phir se! starts!!
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I don’t know what I write but I m really tired …..now my fingers and wyes are paining….my dear frnds please do comment if u like it!
Keep smiling…loads of love to you!
57 Comments
Woooow!!!!! Soo good!!
Waiting for next one:)
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and I will update tomorrow morning!!
Very very nice story……..
Thank you soooo muchhh dear
Wow this was so awesome epi
The background music was perfect for the scene.You know I was so lost in this flashback track that it seems it would take time recalling present.I will manage it soon dear.
Excited about the love phir se mission.
Thank you soooo muchhh dear an even I was lost in flash back part really much but then I recalled the title… Hehe… And stay tuned!!
Wow awesome meri friend now pls update soon as always I say pls do I can’t wait….
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and I m typing the episode an will submit it soon.
Aswesome…… superb??????…… beyond words …now mission kaanchi?patch up will start……dying to read nxt episode plz post it soon as possible…..eagerly waiting……lots of hugs and kisses…….????
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and will submit next part soon and lots of hugs an kisses to u too!!
Amazing awesome faboulous a perfect past u have written it perfectly I was waiting that u would complete ur flashbacks and I will comment all ur epi are amazing
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and glad u liked it…. Really means alot for me!!
Awesome superb too good abhilasha now patch up will start wow ! ??
Thank you soooo muchhh dear trishu and really happy u liked it!!
OMG wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww outstandinggggggggggggggggg I am speechless can’t describe because it’s beyond everything it has tears emotions wow romance trill it has everything it’s very very unique fantastic i loved it to core of my heart dnt know wat i wrote i told u iam speechless if anything wrong sorry pliz forgive me i just couldn’t control iam so excited can’t wait for next part And luv u sweety
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and this is one of my fav even I got filled with tears of joy… This is so overwhelming and I m really happy u liked it and no words to express my feelings!! Love you soooo!! A teddy hug for u!
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abhilasha dear……..hats off to ur amazing ideas & storyline……….. I’m in love with ur incredible writing skills…………words will fall short for praising u……& my fav part in ur plot is the way u choose the song which would so correctly fit in that situation…… tussi bade kamaal ke writer ho………. just luv u yaar………………
Thank you soooo muchhh dear Riya ur comment always remain in my most awaited comments and Luv uh dher Sara and tussi bade kamal k reader ho…. And thank u once again!!
thnx for the compliment dear……….luv u a lot……….
superb …..amazing…..please update next one soon…..
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and will update asap!!
Omg abhilasha this was just awesome I m still in shock bt ur writing is too good plzz post the nxt one soon dear plzzzzzzzzzzzzz soon very soon can’t wait for more time now plzzz plzzz plzz…..
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me and will update asap and glad you like it!
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode this Riya huh! I want to kill this girl and let’s see their love phir se
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot and really happy u liked it!!
OMG………………WAHT A DRASTIC CHANGE IN THE STORY……………SO NOW WE WILL SEE THERE CUTE FIGHTS AND THEM COMING TOGETHER…………….
WOW……….INDEED IT WAS AN AMAZING PLOT………..U ROCKED THE EPISODE………ITS INCREDIBLE………..NO FABULOUS………..NO FANTASTIC……………DUNNO HV WORDS TO DESCRIBE UR STORY…………I AM KINDA AMAZED THE WAY SOME PEOPLE HAVE A WAY TOO CREATIVE MINDS IN LITERATURE…………… I CANT EVEN IMAGINE TO WRITE ONE STORY…………… HAPPY WITH SCIENCE AND MATHS……….
SO SORRY GOT DIVERTED………..I LIKE TALKING TO FRIENDS…………..BECAUSE I HAVE LESS FRIENDS IN REAL LIFE…………….PEOPLE TAKE ME A THE NERD OF THE CLASS ALWAYS SITTING IN THE LIBRARY AND MUGGING THINGS UP……….THAT IS WHY I GET CARRIED AWAY
ANYWAY BACK TO UR FF………………WHAT TO SAY?…………..NOTHINGS LEFT……….I JUST LOVED THE WAY YOU CHANGED THE STORY……….I THINK THE NEW CHARACTERS AND CHANGED VEER WILL BRING THEM TOGETHER……………ONLY AFTER THEIR BITTERSWEET FIGHTS AND ARGUMENTS…………WAIT WONT IT BE HARD FOR THEM TO RESIST THE URGE TO GET TEMPTED BY EACH OTHER WHILE WORKING TOGETHER………….I DONT KNOW……….I JUST A THOUGHT THAT CAME IN MY MIND…………….ANYWAY U HAVE A LOT MORE CREATIVE MIND THAN ME…………AND A NATURAL ABILITY TO MELD THE WORDS TOGETHER SO PERFECTLY……….
THAT’S IT FOR TODAY…………WONT BORE YOU WITH MY SILLY NONSENSE TALKS…………BUT AS I SAID………….I THINK I HAVE A LOTS OF FRIENDS [ at least i think like that ] HERE………..NOT IN MY REAL LIFE………..
WITH LOTS OF LOVE
UR SILENT READER [DON’T THINK I M SILENT ANYMORE WITH MY LONG SPEECH THAT I GAVE]
SIYA
LITERALLY SORRY FOR THE LONG………….NO EXTRA LONG COMMENT…………YOU KNOW I JUST GOT CARRIED AWAY
Hey siya same here about friends…same pinch to u…!
No problem in fact happy that got someone like me as I like to talk with my friends and friendship ka rule no sorry no thank you!!
I really got emotional seeing ur beautiful sweet comment yr….. And this is best comment in my whole writings till now and really can’t express my feelings…. I m just flying and Luv uh so much!
Coming to frnds don’t worry I m here and iits sometimes good to have less but true friends and feel free to talk me as I m a big chatterbox and can’t remain silent… Know what my friends and some of my elders call me chatter box but even some people say that I am reserve type girl and don’t like to talk but when I get start people can’t find my stop button and u can talk me and being nerdy is also cool so let people think what they want and be what you are because those who matters won’t care and everyone has their own capability u will soon find that and this is not nonsense as we are really similar in a kind and love uh… Keep smiling and keep talking!!
LONG ONE SIYA ??
But really abhilasha .It was awosme ????
AND SIYA WE ALL ARE YOUR FRIENDS
THANKS A LOT GUYS…………..THIS FANDOM IS REALLY VERY SPECIAL TO ME
Abhilasha dear, it was so good that I am having a big smile on my face ,,,It was awesome than awesome…..great yaar…hope their mission works…..love you ??
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me and even I am smiling seeing ur comment filled with sweetness… Luv uh too!!
Too gd yr….amazing…just loved it…post soon…
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and will update soon!
Nice episode.
Good work
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me!!!
Sooooooooo amazzzzzzzingggggg abhilasha n eagerly waitting for love phir se patchup mission post nxt soonnnnnn…..
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me!!! Will update soon!
Wow Abhi so awesome yaar ??? now that the past story ended, I can’t wait to see mission love phir se ??? giddy with excitement
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and really happy u liked it… I hope I meet u all expectations!
This was superb!!! You’re such an amazing author!!! Hopefully this stupid Riya won’t be too much of a problem ?
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and this means alot as I really like ur way of writing!!
Hi abhi dear Jussssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst amazing Suberbb mindlowing.
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me!!
Aai shappat!!! Kai zabaardast lihite yaar tu….ek dum faaduuu!! Ye to salim anarkali ke pyar jitna pyara aur shakesphare jitna creative tha….sorry its marathi hindi complement mix but this was what I felt reading ur fs….loved it soooo much dear and if u didnt understood u can ask me dear…as I dont know u kbow it or not. …such a great fs dear….
Oh god my eyes are filled with tears of joy….. Thank you soooo muchhh dear and I can understand Hindi.. Marathi and Punjabi little bit but hindi aur English me him ustad h and really like ur compliment… Ek dum apnepan wali feeling
Super duper amazing epi abhilasha
You jzt nailed it
But now i think that the end is near
As the epi going so fast
But it was superb and jzt luved it from the core of my heart
Thank you soooo muchhh and not gonna to end it fast as the actual story starts now and I run the flashback part soon for that reason only.
Ohh so nycc abhilasha
Ur thoughts r start from there where my thoughts end
So nycc to hear that it ll not end earlier
Sorry abhilasha, I am late to comment as I was busy in the celebration of teacher’s day…. Whatever u r writing it is awesome year what to say… Now I have no words to describe your writing skills… Shabd hi nahi hai mere pass…. Lots of love yaar????
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and yaa teachers day celebrations are going on…… And seriously ur comment makes me genuinely smile…. Lots of love to u too!!
Oh God!! This is too good. I skipped a beat when saanchi said that she can recognize Veer. But it’s good that at least she understood that there was nothing between Riya & Kabir. This is mind-blowing.
Thank you soooo muchhh dear and it means alot for me and glad u liked it!
Amazing…. Plz post next episode asap
Thank you soooo muchhh dear!!