Hi everyone this is my first ff.so bare my mistakes and command me
Here the story is
A train shown.that train is going to kolkata from Mumbai.
In that train a cute romantic couple is sitting with lots of dreams. She looks like married.She rested in his shoulder
Boy : I love u .I promise I will never leave u at any circumstances
Girl : I love u too
That boy cupped his face and his her in her fore head
Again a train is shown .this not the same train .suddenly these two train hit each other.
That couple lie down by holding their hands.
They are sepparated and taken to the hospital.They are sepparated by fate
Boy get conious and put his hand in his head felt like dizziness
Doctor : r u ok
Boy : no doctor
Doctor : don’t worry u r alwrite
Boy : but doctor where I am ? Who I am ?
Seen shifted to girl
Girl : where I am ? Where is my husband?
Scene ends with confused face of boy and crying face of girl
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I hope u like it. Please command
19 Comments
Plzz ragsan
Nice
Tq .s I wrote ff of ragsan
suspense….i like it…..nice start…?
Plz ragsan
nyc start is it Ragsan?
hope it is ragsan
Nyc ragsan plzzz
Awesome
I think it’s gonna be Ragsan.. BTW nice start dea..!♥
Ragsan r raglak
Nyc strt..plzz ragsan
nice so she remembers her husband but he forgot who he is…..interesting concept. looking forward to it
Nice….make ragsan…..
Nice….make ragsan….
Nice
Nice start.hope it’s ragsan
raglak/ràgßàn
Ragsan