Chapter 1: Intro of the girl
I’m back my lovely Twistinians. I hope you guys enjoy this part, if you don’t then my name queen of twists and twist ki dukaan will be taken away from me????
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Unknown person’s pov
“Ragu what’s this yaar?” Saumya(played by Neha Lakshmi Iyer) asked. What Somu?” “This mess you have created in your room!” “I didn’t know, what to wear!” She said, after she pouted. “Are you crazy miss. Ragini Shrivastav?” My mother shouted. “Sorry momsy!” “Paagal ladki(Crazy girl).” “Mona darling, don’t call my daughter crazy!” “Then what should I call her Raj!” “Call her miss. Clumsy Shrivastav!” Dad said, while he winked at me. “That’s not fair dad!” “Everything is fair in law and justice!” Somu said. “That was a good one!” Dad said, before he went down. “Girls breakfast is ready!” “Ok, we are coming mum!” I said, then Saumya and I went downstairs.
End of her pov
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Saumya’s pov
“What will you eat Saumya beta?” “Paratha!” “Saumya, you are so boring and Paratha is so unhealthy!” Ragu said, while she was eating cornflakes. “So what I love my Paratha!” “I wish that your boyfriend hates Parathas and that he won’t allow you to eat them!” “If he does that, then I will tell him, that I won’t eat them anymore.” “Really?” “Yes!” “Wow!” “Saumya are you alright?” Mona aunty asked me.
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Mrs. Mona Shrivastav’s pov
“Saumya are you alright?” I asked her. “Yeah, I’m fine aunty!” “How’s Maya?” “Mom is fine, she is busy with her restaurant and taking care of my dad.” “What happened to Rahul?” “Dad had an accident and now he can’t walk properly!” “Beta never hesitate to ask us for help, we will happily help you and your parents.” Raj said. “Thanks uncle!” “No need to thank us, you are like our daughter Saumya!” I said.
End of her pov
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Mr. Raj Shrivastav’s pov
“Yeah, I’m always there for you too!” Ragini said after she hugged a teary eyed Saumya. “Thanks Rags!” “No thanks in friendship!” “You guys should be going to university!” Mona said to the girls. “Bye uncle and aunty!” Saumya said. “By momma and dad!” “Bye girls!” “Saumya is such a sweetheart, she tries to be strong for her parents!” Mona said and I agreed with her.
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76 Comments
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
Thanks a lot dear???
Awesome episode
Thank you so much???
Awesome
Thank you very much???
Loved it???its super awesome my jaan??Sumo-Ragss are so adorable and I guess lucky-rudy will also be soo fun to read for??? I am in love with this …aww my sumo will leave her parathas for Rudy ??choo cute..I am super excited for this one?
Thanks a lot Jaana❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Superb part
Thank you very much???
NiCe one
Good variations
Thanks a lot dear???
Thanks for raglak a rumya I really miss both the couple’s. Wish rudi’s sumo waps ajaye show me. And I really love our RAGLAK. Thank you so much.
Thanks a lot dear, no need to thank me, I miss Rumya too, I personally love RagSan a lot and I like RagLak???
awesome didi….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr didi…
Thanks a lot Asra darling?????????
Nice
Thank you?
Awesome dii ???? Loved it. Waiting for next part
Thanks a lot Cutiepie????
Loved it.
Impressed with your writing yrr.
Can’t wait for next.
Thanks a lot bhaiyu and thank you for the compliment???
meri jaan…. fantabulous update ???❤❤❤❤❤❤… bas ek chota sa confusion…last update had ishkara… if I remember correctly ????
next update soon????????????
Thanks Sweety Jaan???❤️❤️❤️❤️ and yeah the last one was IshKara????and I decided to make two versions of it??????
Very nice but it was chotusa update
Thanks a lot??The next one will be longer
Nice
Thanks a lot dear???
Raglak and rumya????????????????????????????/
Ok for rumya but raglak?????????????
i hope u understand
I understand Polly, that’s why I made two versions of it one with RagSan and one with RagLak
sam di this episode was simply fab
totally loved
somu is choo cute!! and her paratha too!!
aww she was even ready to leave her paratha for rudy!!!!!
somrag scene was wonderful
waiting for the next part
Thanks a lot Iqu, I hope that you guys will like the next chappy???
Awesome update..keep it up
Thanks a lot dear Aarti???
Awesome dear
Thanks a lot dear??
Simply superb di
Thank you Soumya??
Awesome
Thank you
Awesome intro
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Awesome dear…thanks for raglak
Thanks a ton dear and no need to thank me???
Oooh meri jaaejaan…SAM!!!!!….awesome sis….u rocked it…my queen of twists,,,i love it…update nxt part sooooooooooooooooooooooon love u lots ❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️❤️️
Thanks a lot Adi jaanemaan??????for loving it❤️❤️❤️❤️Have you read the IshKara and RagSan one?
Awesome episode
Thank you???
Amazing part nd can’t wait for next
Thank you???
fabulous part dii…… loved it…but lil short try to give lil longer plz…..
Thanks a lot and the next one will be longer???
It was awesome. Post nxt part soon.
Btw, I think dat u r making 2 part of it 1 wid IshKara nd RagSan nd da 2nd 1 wid RuMya nd RagLak,right??? Correct me if I m wrong.
Thanks a lot dear and you are absolutly right????
Wonderful story and can’t wait for Raglak
Thanks a ton???
Awesome
Thank you very much?
It’s interesting episode dear and loved it a lot. Thank you soooooooooo much for Raglak story. I don’t know anything about Rumya. Eagerly waiting for Raglak scenes and please post next part ASAP
Thanks a lot dear??? and no need to say thank you???