Hi my lovely friends…thanks for supporting me in all my ways…this is also an joint venture…hehe…concept is my sissy’s Vidhu… here she is well known as mintu…development phase is mine…paasamalar padaippu(siblings venture)…ok ok I catched ur mind voice…i stop my blabbering and let’s move to the plot…
The story starts with a boy holding a girl who is tilting a little and that boy is holding her hand with his hand and his other hand is wrapped around her waist…
They are looking deep into their eyes and stands freezing…she felt with that touch…doesn’t care about other’s they are still same in their position doesn’t moved an inch and doesn’t blinked their eyes staring each other like he will eat her alive…
Like rabne bana di Jodi couples…obviously none other than our sweetie cutiee ever loveable RagLak only..
.\*who other I would pair you all know na…othr than RagLak *\.
Few months before…
Ragini’s bidaai is done…she is leaving her home…her sweet memories…her childhood…her dreams too…
Ragini’s pov
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I can’t control my tears…you all may say that it’s common in every girl’s life…
Yaah…I know but it pains harder for every girl…leaving the house where you grown up…where you have full rights in arguing with anyone…where you are princess…and more over where you can be you whatever may be the reason you may not have to change for anyone over there…
The precious phase of every girl’s life is in their parents home only…
Today I got married to one of the famous and leading industrialist of Kolkata…actually I heard that from people…for the first I met him…he is not like other guys…he respects women…actually I don’t know about it clearly but I believe he respects women…because of that incident a guy in our marriage misbehaved with a girl having bad intentions…
I watched and was about to give him a tight slap but before that my hone waale fiance slapped him back and forth and made him kneel down infront of everyone asking for an apology…
Such a nice guy my fiance is…am not boasting…yaah but some respect for him developed in my heart…
My biggest fear comes to an end…yes my heart feels relaxed I fear of entering into the new house whom I never know and I have never met my fiance..our marriage got fixed by elders…
Our engagement was such a rocking and romantic one which no one would have experienced…
“Engagement without bride and groom”haha..
Yes he went London for a business meet so he haven’t been to the engagement and I was in Delhi for my MBA project proposal…
Both the thing was an neck of the moment planning…our family who believe in values…traditions and rituals and they didn’t called off the engagement stating that in their days they haven’t met bride or groom before marriage and they will see each other on the day of their marriage…
Is it 1400 BC…no na…we are in 21st century…nowadays WhatsApp…viber..imo…fb…skype are trending…even some people ready to mingle through video conferencing I mean understanding each other…
\*don’t stop me in between it’s coming rhymingly na…hehe*\
But see our condition…i thought that he would have call me by secretly tracking me…it’s a wish of every girl…there should be some nok jhok na…am also a simple girl only…but nothing happened like that in my life…
And it comes for the very first time when I saw him in a sandal with marroon colour sherwani…wow he looks handsome…more than his beauty his character touched my heart…
For the very first time I am getting attracted towards a guy that too who is going to be my better half…whoever have this kind of life…
By staring him continuously I forgot about my dreams…oh my dream boy…
Finally everything has done…yes we got married officially and now am Mrs.Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari…
Everything is ok but his name only hitting me…see Lakshya it’s too old fashioned but he is not…
An unknown smile spreads across my lips when he holds my shoulder to console me…
shivers getting into my spines…butterflies are flying in my stomach…
i can feel dum dara dum dara music in my background…my life is like a director Shankar’s movie(famous director of kollywood)hehe…
while thinking about him…his hands moves from my shoulders towards my wrist and he turns me towards him…
his eyes are saying that I am there for you throughout your life…i nods…
I closed my eyes in a sigh of relief and bids my bidaai…am leaving my home…leaving my dream…everything for him…him alone…
Do I love him??please help me guys…help me out…
Am coming…he is waiting for me near the car…
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Ragini’spov ends…
Laksh’s pov
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Why my eyes are getting wet when I see her in pain…
Yeah it’s a common phase in everyone’s life but leaving the home is not that so simple…it will pain more…
Even though maheshwari’s mansion and gadodia’s house are so close but still she will miss her family na…
I know it will pain her it’s me who needs to make her feel comfortable…
We are not lovers and haven’t know each other before…yes you all know na our engagement is the best one which doesn’t happened in anyone’s life…
Infact I met her for the very first time that too on the day of our marriage..fate turned out like that…
But the thing is that when we met for the first time it was hell difficult to separate our eyes from each other…yes we stared each other forgetting the world around us…i felt that spark in her eyes…
And her rose petals are attracting mine towards her asking me to peck it…no no it’s weird…
But I will tell you an secret u shouldn’t open it anyone ok…*I searched her profile in social media inorder to know about her and also how she looks…but unfortunately I can found only her details…yeah her pic is not there..she is like me only…yes I don’t show up infront of media and no common public knows about me…*
but the search doesn’t gets wasted I have found one important trump card to play with…to make her fall in love with me…
oh no I didn’t tell you na…yes I have fallen for her…kandathum kaadal(love at first sight)…
That trump card is !*!*!*!*!you heard it right…please make it as a secret…
Wonder with whom I am talking yeah with my illusion…hehe…
Ok ok…she is waiting for me..
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Pov ends…
Laksh opens door for Ragini and she gets inside the car…
Laksh lifts the pallu of her saree which gets stuck with the car door and give it to her…their hands met…
Laksh closed the door and sits beside her…
She turned back to see her family and her tears didn’t stopped coming out…
Laksh holds her hands tight…
Suddenly she started crying more than before and hugged him from side position holding his sherwani…
His heart beats faster…he puts his hand around her and caresses her hair…
Ragini felt embarrassed and she moved a little…
“you ok…”said laksh and offered her tissues…she wipes her tears…
He sighs something…she shooks her head in what!!
Laksh takes another tissue and wipes the liquid coming out from her nose by holding her heads tightly towards him…
RagLak relatives car crosses them…all opened their mouth widely…haha…yaah It looks like they are kissing each other from side position…
Ragini thanks him…they reached their place and gets down..
All of them make fun of RagLak by giggling and teasing them at back…
Ragini heard it and says “oh shit..”
Laksh too heard it and smiles…Ragini watches him smiling…
“he have gone mad I think…”Ragini gets irked…
Ap takes aarthi for raglak and ragini’s grahapravesh is done…
Followed by other rituals and ap asks RagLak to take rest and sends them to their room…
“wo thanks…”Ragini uttered breaking the silence between them…
“no problem and if you wanna sleep…then carry on..i will be back soon…”laksh takes his laptop and starts working in it sitting on sofa…
Ragini sleeps in cot and murmurs”how mean he is…it’s my first day here and he haven’t said anything…if you wanna sleep then carry on uh…idiot…stupid…”she mimics him…
Laksh laughs seeing her and hides it from her…because he is doing all this desperately…
“how cute you are Mrs.Maheshwari but am sorry…morning will be blossomed in our life for sure…”laksh grinned…
It’s morning…
Ragini wakes up yawning…
“good morning…”laksh wishes by seeing her in mirror who is tucking his shirt…
Ragini closed her eyes immediately while seeing him…
“is it a big deal…whatever…”laksh ignores and went away…
“see heartless man I think…we are newly wedded couple…but he is not even ready to spend time with me…look at me I have fallen for him at first sight…atleast he can talk sweetly na…Mr.Rude…”Ragini smirks…
Then she got freshen up and goes down the stairs for moh dikhai rasam…
Ragini gets down by wearing gunghat…laksh admires her beauty and left mouth open…
“bhaai close your mouth orelse mosquitoes will go inside…”uttu teases him…
Rasam gets started and everyone praises Ragini…
Laksh smiles hearing them praising her pyaari wifey…
“Ragini..go and get change and take rest…”ap sends Ragini to her room…
“it’s ok maa…i will help you in kitchen..”Ragini refused to go…
Ap smiles and says”from tomorrow onwards you only gonna take charge…so take rest for sufficient time..”
Ragini hugged her and goes to her room…
She removes her heavy ornaments aside and sees a note from laksh and asked her to come down without telling anyone…
Ragini scratches her head…
“what he wants really…why he is calling me secretly…is he planning surprise…no no he can’t because his brain won’t work that much…”Ragini got changed with casuals and cover her face with a shawl and reached the place where he asked her to come…
Ragini sees Laksh standing over there..
“what…why did you asked me to come here…tell me I have lots of works to do…”Ragini boasts stating that she is busy…
Laksh pulled her towards him and closed her mouth…
“chup chap chale jao mere saath…”laksh tightened his grip…
“hmmhmmm….mmm…”Ragini makes noise…
“what!!”laksh shrugged…Ragini sighs to take his hand from her mouth…
Laksh takes his hand away and drags her towards his bike…
Laksh sighs her to sit…Ragini sits back and he starts his rider…
“ready to experience your first wish Mrs.Maheshwari..hold me tight…i won’t mind..”laksh grinned seeing her in mirror…
Ragini gave ‘how do you know’ expression…
“I said to hold me…”laksh roared his bike…
“aahh…”Ragini clutches his shirt…they were in high speed…
And finally after an hour travel through national highways they reached some unknown destination…
“where are we now…”Ragini fired him with back to back questions…
Laksh sighs her to keep quiet…
They reached the area where a canopy is fixed and it is decorated with full of her favourite flowers…and she sees a name board which is decorated with pink colour flowers”welcome for your date Mrs.Ragini Laksh Maheshwari”
Layer of tears surrounds her eyes….
“second wish got fullfilled hey na…”laksh smiles and Ragini ran towards him and hugged him tightly…
“still one more is waiting for you…”laksh takes her towards the place where the big one is waiting for her by blindfolding her eyes…
They reached near the seashore…
“here it is…”laksh unfold the kerchief…
“wow…”she was shocked to see the place and a it’s looks like a club…but in open place ….
Laksh sighs something and karoke plays…Ragini was surprised…
Laksh forwards his hand…she nods in no…he voluntarily pulled her towards him and they dance cutely for Arijit romantic hities….
“your dream na my bunny…”Laksh whispered in her ears while dancing…
“bunny…me…am I look like a rabbit…”Ragini makes a pout and was about to leave…
Laksh pulled her towards and she got hit in his chest…
“don’t dare go away from me…i have planned everything for you secretly but you are leaving me alone…haan…how mean wifey…”said laksh…
“ok ok…chill baaba…secretly…what do you meant by that…we got married yesterday only…it was an arranged marriage and we met just a day before…but how do you know about my secret desires…i mean long ride in bike…a date and finally a dance…”Ragini keeps on blabbering her views ..
Suddenly Laksh pecked her lips…first she tried to push him away but she couldn’t succeed in it…finally she also reciprocates…
They parted due to lack of oxygen…
“I love you from the day I heard your name and when i saw your secret desires in social media…will you be my better half…”laksh kneels down and proposed her with a rose…
“aah…”Ragini left mouth opened…
“yes I do love you from the time when I lost in your eyes…”Ragini takes the rose from his hand…
They enjoyed their dinner over there and started partying…
Finally they decided to leave from there…RagLak leaves in their car…
Ragini’s pov…
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He is such a nice guy..aww how cute he is…he fullfilled all my wishes within a day…
My cutiee sweetie pie…
I love you laksh…I don’t have any words to express….
I left from my home with tears in fear of entering a new home…
But it get vanished within a fraction of second…
I love dancing…when I watched reality shows I wanna learn dance but my family didn’t allowed me to learn because of their so called values…
But today you made me dance so nicely…am sorry I didn’t dance you make postures by yourself…
I don’t know that the India’s most famous business icon is an trained dancer…
Before marriage I googled you and found results too as “No results found”hehe…
I felt really bad yesterday but today I am the luckiest girl in the world…
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“hello madam ji gar aagaye…”laksh shooks her…
Ragini smiled widely and she pecked his cheeks and ran fastly towards her room…
Days passes by and they love towards others also grown up…
Laksh taught her how to dance and he fullfilled her wish of becoming an dancer…
Ragini wishes to choose her career in dance…but she doesn’t know how to express to laksh…
Laksh who understood her heart without saying anything…so he planned something for her…
&*&*&*&*&*&*&*&
The scene then shifts to rabne bana di Jodi pose…
All clapped for RagLak’s dance…
They came out from the trance and smiles staring each other…
Yaah…it’s an party organized by laksh for his global success…that’s the reason he said to outside world but for him he organised this for Ragini..to fulfil her dream…
“Ragini…there is a surprise for you…”laksh whispers in her ears and holds the mike and says”the most awaited moment aagaye…yes here comes our guest of honour the Greek god of Bollywood the one and only Hrithik Roshan…”laksh points towards the direction…
Tu meri plays in background…duggu gave his awesome entry by dancing and raglak joined them…
“Hrithik Roshan..i can’t believe my eyes…”Ragini panics in excitement…
The party was awesome..everyone enjoyed…
After rocked the floor…trio joined the dinner…
And Hrithik said to Ragini about how laksh came to meet him for her career…and added that”usually I won’t attend most business party but for you laksh have done a lot…he convinced me with your story…who said that girl’s can’t pursue their career after marriage…i will help you sister in pursuing your career…i asked laksh to accompany you with him to the set and I will introduce you to my friend farah she will help you in your career…”
Ragini got teary eyed and thanked him…
“there is no need for thanking me…it’s laksh who deserves that..go to him and all the best dear…”Hrithik waves his hand and signs off…
Ragini ran towards laksh and found him talking with his friends…
She made an excuse and dragged him behind the pillar..
Ragini hits his cheek playfully back to back…
“areyy…why are you hitting me back to back…”laksh holds both her hands and placed on his shoulder…
“I thought that you will shower me with kisses but reverse is happening…”laksh makes a pout…
“this is for hiding this from me…and your desire will be fulfilled now..”said Ragini and started kissing his cheeks back and forth…
“this is not fair..”laksh pulled her close…
“chi bad boy..”Ragini frees from his grip and ran away…
The next day as said by Hrithik RagLak reached the spot and Hrithik fulfilled his promise by introducing her to Farah..
Ragini reached heights in her career with the help of Farah…it’s all because of laksh without him she can’t get into this place…
Atlast RagLak lead their life happily together…
•••Happy waala ending •••
Quote:love is not getting married to your beloved ones and staying happily forever..it lies in how your love understands you without uttering even a single word…
Stay blessed and take care dear friends ?
~Darshu and Mintu
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Tq dear ? glad that you liked it…
Waah superb chapter. Semma masssssssss. Kalakiteenga boss ??. Chance’a illa. Bayagaram boss ??
Tq dear friend ? hehe…glad that you liked it..
Superb dear friend
Tq my dear friend ? glad that you liked it…
Cute
Tq Sindhu dear ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome sisy…!!! Full credits goes to u only dear.. I just share my thoughts wid u!!!! Ella pugalum ungaluku dhn pasa malarae ?? nenga dhn indha story ku uyir kuduthinga..!!! Raglak conversation last la suprb da..hrithik Roshan surprise sema..!!!! Loved it dharshu sisy.. Take care da!!! Waiting for ur next os ??
Tq da sissy ? unakku pangu irukku da…equal equal…
Hrithik is my fav hero da so used him here…heehe…
Thnks for the wonderful concept da…
practical darshu dear….superbbb ra panirken….but viva vandha mam than question na kedikidey irunthanga…but sir avalava question kekala….nalla answer panirken….tkcr dears
mintu my dear am really chooooo chorry dear….and darshu dear ungal daiyum sry kekuren….For late comment….2 days xam adhanala than late…..sry….venum na situps kuda panren….sry….plz forgive ur crazy stupid olaru vaai sister….plz na….
love u both…A big teddy hug to u both….love u both sissys….tkcr dears….
Asru…no need for sry nd all da..xam daan first..epdi eluthunaai xam lam??i knw nee nalla daan eluthirpa…
It’s k dear sisy..!!! No pblm da..xam dhn 1st..ungaluku ivalo story pudichadhu rmba happy ah iruku da..!!!! *bone crushing from our both da*..Thnq for the lovely comment da..it feel great da. Full credits goes to dharshu da
Viva naale apdi daan da…kelviya ketu kollunga…don’t worry s grade potruvaanga…
Kalakittinga pa. Chanceless.
Aww tq dear sissy ? am glad that you liked it..
Really cute os, loved it
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Tq dharu? glad that you liked it…
Hello raglak fans… I’m sorry to post here…let me first apologize to the writers… bit I need someone to hear me n that’s y I’m posting here… may b u all remember ffs love you my angry man, forgotten past n hired for him…framed before u guys as written by AkshuRosid… but it is all lie… it’s my Rosid works love you my incensed guy, the forgotten past n hired for him… she plagiarised them n framed them as her works without my consent…i have proof for it… just google the titles I told or follow this link…http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4595373 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4673317. http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4730246. see this n tell me what should I do…my hard work is misused… n everyone following it… great.. kindly dnt entertain such stuffs again… n akshaya…all I feel about u… pity
Interesting os dear and loved Raglak scenes a lot. Plz write more Raglak stories
Tq ammu dear ? glad that you liked it…sure dear…
Pasam pongudhu
Super ah irundhudhu
Analum hrithik ah
Laksh
Charachter semmaya irrukku
Keep it up
First of all thnks dear for cmnting…
And yes am die hard fan of Hrithik so jst included him here too..don’t mind uh…
Glad that you liked the plot…
Take cre dear
di it was such a cute awesome and sweet os loved it
di from where do you get these superb ideas
Aww my dr? sissy…am smiling seeing ur cmnts da…hehe..
That credits goes to mintu only da…flow of writing alone goes to me…
Thnq so much da..
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Tq so much dear ? glad that you liked it…
Awesome akka
Tq shri dear? glad that you liked it….
akka akka akka…Samma Samma..ena akka neega..epdi back to back shock kudukuriga…chance ey Illa akka…superb awesome fabulous…no words to express akka..awwww my cute laksh….samma love akka..ur way of writing in love is fantastic..this is exact meaning of love ka…Ayooo enala Mudila I want to hug u nd kiss in ur cheeks akka*hehehe*yes I’m frm Chennai akka…wish I toooo get a hubby like him*over ah aasai padra la..hahaha*ur hubby will be very lucky to have u akka…u will fulfill his love completely…I know it…awwww Nariya pesura la..naa apdi daan akka vai jasthi…hehehe…post ur ffs also akka..waiting for it…bye Tc..love uuuu a lot..
Aww my thangatchi? am blushing..ur kiss reached me..take it*bone breaking hug from me and a sweet kiss*
Tq dear for wishing me…
Ur hubby will take care of you better than laksh..u deserve mre than lucky dear….
Apdilam illada…naanum vayi adipen bayangrama…hehe??
Tc dear..lve u too da…
Awesome….
Tq so much teito ? glad that you liked it…
It’s amazing dear…… I just loved it such a sweet n cute os…… Hope to see more raglak os ffs frm u
Thnks dear soni…and yes u can expect my ff’s…on RagLak
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Tq Saranya ? glad that you liked it…
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Tq jazzy dear ? glad that you liked it…
Wow awesome u nailed it romba nalla irunthuthu
Awww Vk thnks dear for liking it…?
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Tq dear abi? glad that you liked it…
na first nu unga kidaiyum mintu kidaiyum sorry kedu kiren…..am really chooooo chorry….kadha pudichu kudu kekuren sry…..late comment panrathuku…..
os ssssseeeemmmmmmaaaaaa…..chance illa darshu dear…..omg hrithik vandhana omg….Someone pinch me….he is my fav and my brother pathiya kara fan hrithik ku…..oru movie vida madan….10tmys ku mela yavathu pathirvan oru movie ya…..laksh character semmmma…..love him lot….what a great husband….mintu and darshu dear u both r great….love u both for such a wonderful os….tkcr dear
Hey asra ma no chorry…it’s ok da…yupp Hrithik fan uh same kreach…am a crazy fan of him..adhulayum mujhse dosti karoge kaho na pyaar hai lam 40 thadavayavathu paathirpen…all my fav mvie….thambi kum same pinch sonnenu sollu da?…thambi daana illa annana uh da??
awesome work… darshu and mintu… superb… sry for very late comment..
Hehe!!no pblm asthu…thnks dear for liking it…
Superb dear