hi friends!!!!. I tried to upload on Thursday atself but i couldn’t as i got filled up with bundles of work so finally i uploaded today..read and enjoy!!😉.
Sirat finishes her practice and walks on road..
Sirat in mind: now..i will go to temple and ask Panditji about my dream..
Sirat goes to a temple and prays..
Sirat:krishnaji..please show me the right path. Please make my dream true..
Heavy wind blows and the temple bell rings automatically which shocks a pandit who was standing behind lord krishna’s idol..
Pandit in mind:who is praying now?i think lord krishnaji is answering that person’s wish and that’s why the bell is ringing automatically..
Pandit goes out and sees sirat praying and smiles..
Pandit in mind: this girl is praying sincerely and that’s why her lord is answering her prayer.
Sirat finishes her prayer and opens her eyes and sees pandit standing..
Sirat in mind: thank god.. pandit atself came and now i will ask him about this matter.
Sirat goes to pandit and..
Sirat:namaste Panditji..
Pandit:namaste..
Sirat: Panditji..i want to ask something which is making me confused .
Pandit:is it about a dream?
Sirat gets suprised..
Sirat:yes Panditji..but how did you know it?
Pandit:normally the confused people will come to temple only because of dreams and that’s why i guessed.
Sirat:ohh..
Pandit:ok..tell me what’s your confusion.
Sirat tells everything about naira and her and then about the dream too..
Sirat:so i want to know whether this dream is true or not..can you tell this Panditji?
Panditji thinks..
Panditji: i will tell you..but before that take a cocunut and make 6 rounds around the temple and break it before krishna idol. And after finishing it..i will tell you the matter.
Sirat:sure Panditji..
Pandit gives her the coconut and sirat goes to take rounds…
PARALLEL SCENE:
Surekha:Ranveer..go to temple and pray. Today is auspicious day and go and pray for your marriage.
Ranveer makes a face..
Ranveer:mom.. what’s the need for praying for my marriage?i dint become old to face difficulties in marriage.
Surekha:i know it..but i want a good bride for you. So go and pray that you should find a love with a nice girl..
Ranveer:but mom..kartik is elder than me but he is still unmarried then why are you worried for me nowatself?
Surekha:however..kartik is not my own son right?.so just obey my words.
Ranveer:but mom..
Surekha:just go now..no more excuses.
Ranveer makes a face..
Ranveer:fine..i will go.
Ranveer goes to his car and he starts driving the car towards the temple..
Ranveer in mind:i don’t know what’s running on my mom’s mind..she is always after my marriage.
He reaches the temple and goes inside and sees sirat taking round but doesn’t see her face..
Yeh rishta kya kehlata hai plays..
Sirat finishes six rounds and she comes before krishna idol and breaks the cocunut..
After breaking the cocunut she closes her eyes and prays..
Sirat:krishnaji..please give a good news.
Sirat turns while Ranveer who was standing behind looks at her face and gets mesmerized..
Ranveer in mind:woww..what a beautiful lady!.
Hearing the coconut breaking sound.. pandit comes to sirat..
Pandit:did you finish the work?
Sirat:yes Panditji..
Pandit: actually i cant tell you completely because if i tell the exact truth then it will become destruction so i will tell you indirectly..
Sirat:sure Panditji..
Ranveer doesn’t pray and he only stares sirat..
Pandit:if your dream is true then you will surely meet your sister in 30days and if it is fake then you won’t meet her at all.
Sirat gets shocked hearing this..
Sirat:what?then should i search for my sister for upcoming 30 days Panditji?
Pandit:no..you shouldn’t search. If your dream is true then you will find her yourself within 30 days.
Sirat:ok Panditji..
Sirat was about to leave but pandit stops her..
Pandit:take this sindoor..make someone apply this on your forehead as it is gives you protection.
Sirat:sure Panditji..
Sirat takes the sindoor from Panditji and was about to leave but suddenly she hits Ranveer who was staring her and was about to fall but he helds her and all the sindoor gets fallen down..
Both looks each other while Ranveer keeps on smiling seeing her face..
Sirat breaks the eyelock and gets angry on Ranveer and pushes him..
Sirat:how dare you? can’t you see that i was coming but still you was standing like a statue..have you lost your mind? because of you.. i lost this sindoor.. stupid.
Ranveer doesn’t react to sirat’s scoldings and he just smiles looking at sirat..
Ranveer:when you are like angel..then what shall i do?i stood like a statue admiring your beauty..
Sirat gets more angry hearing this and holds his collar..
Sirat:shut up..iam not your heroine to admire me understood?just be in your limits.if i see you again..then I’ll break your bones.
Ranveer doesn’t get affected as he still admires sirat smiling which irks sirat more..
Sirat:hello..are you mad?iam talking to you and you are just smiling at me.
Ranveer doesn’t react as he keeps on looking at sirat..
Sirat gets frustrated and shouts..
Sirat furiously:you have become mad. So keep staring like this for whole day and waste your time..i will leave now. It’s waste to talk with you.
Sirat walks away angrily while Ranveer still smiles..
Ranveer in mind:wow..she looks cute when she is angry. Is this called love at first sight?
THE SCENE FREEZES.
COLLEGE:
College gets over and everyone starts leaving and suddenly the rain starts coming shocking everyone..
Students whispers to each other:ohh noo..now we should wait till the rain stops.
Tanvi Kunal and tina too waits inside corridor looking at rain..
Tanvi:Kunal..iam very angry on rain now.
Kunal gets shocked..
Kunal:what the hell?how could one be angry on rain?it’s a natural effect..
Tanvi:but i cant watch my serial because of this stupid rain. If it does not stop then I’ll become mad.
Kunal laughs..
Kunal:then become mad..so that it will be fun.
Tanvi stares Kunal angrily..
Tanvi:shut up you fool..
Suddenly they think about Tina and they see her standing silently and gets sad.
Tanvi:Kunal..she cant able to enjoy even a little fun like us.iam really sad for her..
Kunal:yes..iam too sad.
Suddenly Kunal gets an idea..
Kunal:Tanvi..why don’t we make Tina happy now?
Tanvi gets confused..
Tanvi:but how?
Kunal:rain dance..when we make tina dance in rain then she will feel happy.
Tanvi:nice idea..rain has power to control feelings. So i think it erases Tina’s sorrow too..
Kunal jokes:now only you was scolding rain but you started praising it now..what a miracle.
Tanvi:shut up..it’s my mouth so i will do whatever i want.
Kunal:fine..now we will call Tina for rain dance.
Tanvi:ok..
Kunal and Tanvi comes in front of Tina and..
Kunal: Tina.. come lets dance in rain.
Tina looks kunal’s lips and understands it..
Tina:no Kunal. Iam not in Mood to enjoy.
Kunal:see..i always see you sad.now you should be happy atleast for us. If you are deaf..that doesn’t mean you should be sad always understood?
Tina understands by looking kunal’s lips and..
Tina:but iam not interested..
Kunal:interest comes only when you join in it..now come and join us in rain dance.
Kunal and Tanvi forcefully takes Tina too dance..Kunal and Tanvi starts to dance while Tina just looks at them…
Tina in mind:i too feel like dancing after standing in rain?shall i dance?..
Tanvi comes in front of her and..
Tanvi:Tina.. common start dancing. It will be fun..
Tina looks at tanvi’s lips and understands it.
Tina:yeah..
Tina too starts dancing in rain imagining a song while Kunal and Tanvi smiles..
Kunal: finally our plan worked.
Tanvi:yes..
Teri Duniyaan Se Ho Ke Majaboor Chala
Main Bahot Door, Bahot Door, Bahot Door Chala
Is Kadar Door Ke Fir Laut Ke Bhee Aa Naa Sakoo
Ayesee Manjil Ke Jahaan Khud Ko Bhee Main Paa Naa Sakoo
Aaur Majabooree Hain Kyaa Itanaa Bhee Batalaa Naa Sakoo
Aankh Bhar Aaee Agar Ashkon Ko Main Pee Lunga
Aah Nikalee Jo Kabhee Hothhon Ko Main See Lunga
Tuz Se Waadaa Hain Kiyaa Isaliye Main Jee Lunga
Khush Rahe Too Hain Jahaan, Le Jaa Duwaayen Meree
Teri Raahon Se Judaa Ho Gayee Raahen Meree
Kuchh Naheen Saath Mere, Bas Hain Khataayen Meree
After some time kartik who was passing that way looks Tina dancing beautifully and gets mesmerized..
He keeps on staring at her beautiful dance..
Kartik in mind:wow..such a beautiful dance.i never expected she is talented in dancing..
Suddenly Tina stops and starts sneezing..
Tina:achoo..achoo..achoo..
Tina in mind: always bad fate is written only for me i think..
Tina sees Tanvi and Kunal enjoying and..
Tina in mind:i should not disturb them..let me alone go from here.
Tina goes and stands in a corner and she keeps on sneezing..
Kartik looks at her and goes near her and..
Kartik:do you want tissue or hot coffee?
Tina doesn’t answer as she dint notice kartik which makes kartik confused..
Kartik in mind:why is she always not answering when i just talk without touching her?she is so weird..
Kartik touches Tina’s shoulder and tina turns to him and gets shocked..
Tina:s..sir you?
Kartik:yes..i saw your dance when i was going out and i really got impressed..then i found you was sneezing here and that’s why i came here to check whether you are fine.
Tina looks his lips and understands it..
Tina:thank you for complimenting my dance sir. Actually i like rain but i can’t enjoy more because of sneezing problem.
Tina again sneezes on kartik’s face shocking her..
Tina:ohh nooo..iam sorry sir.
Kartik wipes his face and..
Kartik:it’s okay..but be careful next time.
Tina notices his lips and understands it..
Tina:ok sir.
Kartik:dint you go home?will you stand here till the rain stops?
Tina looks his lips and understands it..
Tina: actually my brother will come to pick me up sir and that’s why iam waiting for him.
Kartik:then call him and ask him to come soon because every students will leave soon though it’s raining.
Tina notices his lips and understands it and gets shocked..
Tina in mind:i can’t call bhai as i cant hear and if i message him then what will i answer when sir asks me why didn’t you call yet?
Tina dodges her phone and gets shocked seeing niel’s message..
“Tina..mum have fainted due to high pressure and so i have gone to hospital along with mum. So, kindly go home along with your friends safely.”
Tina:mumma..
Kartik gets shocked..
Kartik:what happened?
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina: actually my mum have fainted due to high pressure and so my brother took her to hospital. So bhai asked me to go home safely along with my friends.
Kartik:then I’ll drop you home..
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina:sir..you?
Kartik:why are you suprised?is there any rule that professor’s should not drop students?
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina:no sir..
Kartik:i told you because every students goes drenched in rain but you have cold and so for safety only iam telling that i will drop you.
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina in mind:if dad and mum comes to know that i got cold then they will scold me..so it’s better to go with kartik sir in car safely. He is really very nice person..
Tina:o..o..ok sir. I will come with you.
Kartik starts to go front while Tina follows him back but suddenly she sneezes again when she again walks on rain..
Kartik hears her sneezing and he brings his umbrella and places above the head shocking Tina…both looks each other for sometime as they stand close under single umbrella.
Kartik breaks the eyelock and..
Kartik:i think you are great enemy of rain..so it’s better to walk under umbrella.
Tina understands by looking his lips and nods her head..
Kartik takes Tina to his car and he starts driving..
after sometime kartik notices Tina sneezing again and Stops the car in a coffee shop shocking Tina.
Tina:sir..why here?
Kartik:now..there is no one at your house so normally every girls wont take care of their health when no one is there. So I’ll get you coffee so that you will feel better when you reach your house.
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina: but..but..
Kartik:no buts..just come with me that’s all.
Kartik takes Tina inside the cafe and they sit opposite each other..
Server:sir..what do you need?
Kartik:one coffee please.
Server:sure sir..
Tina who was just looking down doesn’t hear anything..
After some time the coffee arrives and they place near Tina while Tina gets suprised..
Tina:sir..for you?
Kartik gets shocked again..
Kartik:i have ordered only one..i think you already heared it when i told to server. But why are you asking now?
Tina who notices lips gets shocked..
Tina in mind:ohh noo..i never knew that he ordered only one.now i should handle the situation..
Tina:sir..woh.. actually..i..i was deeply thinking about my mum that’s why i couldn’t hear when you given orders.
Kartik:fine.. don’t worry about your mum. Iam sure your mother will get fine soon.
Tina notices his lips and..
Tina:sure sir.
Tina in mind:thank god..kartik sir dint doubt me.
Kartik stares Tina’s facial expression and..
Kartik in mind:i know you are hiding something..there is something fishy on you. Why you are not listening many times? I don’t have any rights to know it but i will find it soon.
Tina drinks the coffee and she applies it on her cheeks too without her knowledge and she finishes her coffee and..
Tina:sir.. lets go.
Kartik looks at her funny face and..
Kartik: first clean your face..
Tina notices his lips and tries to wipe it but she wipes in wrong direction so finally kartik takes the tissue paper and wiper her cheeks..
Both looks each other and..
Kartik:now..lets go.
Then kartik takes Tina and leaves Tina in her home and goes..
HOSPITAL:
Anupama is being treated for sometime and then the doctors comes out..
Niel: doctor..is my mother fine?
Doctor: don’t worry..she is absolutely fine. BP may increased due to sudden shock or by eating more salty items.
Niel hits his head..
Niel:my mother never changes. She eats salt like chocolates..i should make her contrrol now.
Doctor:yes..do that orelse she will get dizzy always.
Niel:sure doctor.
Doctor gives the medicine slip and..
Doctor:you go and get this medicines from medical mr.Niel khanna.
Niel:sure doctor.
Niel takes the medical slip and goes towards the medical but suddenly he hits a women and falls down and that girl falls above him..
Both meets with an intense eyelock..
Both Break their eyelock and they stand up adjusting themselves..
Niel:iam sorry..i dint notice you.
Avni:it’s okay..even iam sorry. You are Niel khanna right?
Niel gets shocked..
Niel:how do you know me?
Avni: actually iam twinkle’s sister Avni. I know about your both relationship..and twinkle have shown your photos to me. And that’s how i know..
Niel:ohh..but twinkle told that she never informed anyone in her family about out relationship.
Avni: ofcourse she is true..she never informed anyone except me. Iam like her friend more than a sister so..she will share everything with me. And even i too never disobey her..so i also dint tell it to our family.
Niel smiles..
Niel:that’s nice.
Suddenly Avni gets worried..
Avni:but i already decided to meet you..
Niel gets shocked..
Niel:why?
Avni: because twinkle’s phone is off from morning. I don’t know what’s going on there but iam scared because twinkle never stays without calling me or answering me but this is the first time..so i feel strange and scared.
Niel gets shocked..
Niel:even she didn’t pick my calls yet..i thought she would be busy in her studies so only she dint pick calls.
Avni:no.. though there are exams nearby, she will attend her closed one’s call atleast. This time…iam really scared that if something bad..
Niel shuts her mouth..
Both meets with eyelock..
Suddenly Niel takes his hands off and..
Niel:iam sorry.. actually i did it to stop you from talking bad. So don’t worry.. nothing bad will happen with twinkle.maybe she is busy in projects..so iam sure she will attend our calls in evening.
Avni slightly smiles..
Avni:yeah..i too hope so. Can we exchange our numbers? because if she dint pick my call then I’ll ask you..
Niel:yeah..sure. even i will call you if she dint pick my call.
They exchange their numbers and..
Avni:iam happy to meet you. So come to our house for your alliance soon..iam eagerly waiting for my twinkle’s marriage.
Niel gets shy..
Niel:sure..
They part ways..
PARALLEL SCENE:
A Dark room is shown..
In that dark..a girl is shown tied up in that corner of the room and she is none other than twinkle.she is struggling hard to get released but her hard ropes around her is not letting her to escape..
Suddenly a strong male voice is heared..
Voice:are you trying to escape miss?no..you can never escape from me. You have to bear the punishment for your mistake.
Twinkle looks at that person and worries..
THE SCENE FREEZES.
NEXT DAY:
a successful party is held for the best companies in Udaipur..so many companies including naksh’s and Aditya’s too attend it. Naksh who was walking in a corner in party hall sees Keerthi standing alone and goes to her..
Naksh:Keerthi..what’s up?why are you standing alone..where is your friend Avantika?
Keerthi:sir..woh..she has fever so she told that she won’t come.
Naksh:ohh..sad. but it’s okay..you can join with me.
Keerthi:sir..but you are sir and iam just employee and so how can i…
Naksh smiles..
Naksh: though we are sir and employee..but we both are humans only so don’t differentiate that silly matter.
Keerthi smiles..
Keerthi:thank you sir.
So naksh and Keerthi sit together while aditya and tara watces them from hiding..
Aditya: your stupid boss never let my plan success.
Tara: don’t worry for him..he is just a silly man. We will do something to hurt Keerthi..
Both thinks something and..
Tara:Aditya..today is a party so why don’t we dance together before Keerthi and my idiot boss?
Aditya smiles..
Aditya:nice idea..i want to hurt Keerthi so that she will leave your boss’s office and come to my office. She is so clever..and i can make my company more success and win manish’s heart if Keerthi works in my office.
Tara:yeah..lets execute our plan.
They do hi fi and after sometime an announcement is made..
Anchor:my dear successful teams..lets start our celebration party with dance. So everyone get ready for a dance party!!.
Anchor switches on the music and everyone start to dance..
Naksh and Keerthi stands simply while aditya and tara comes before them and they dance shocking Keerthi..
Keerthi stumbles:a..ad.. Aditya?
Naksh:Keerthi what happened?
Keerthi points fingers at tara and aditya and..
Keerthi:ad..aditya is dancing with some other girl. He knows that i will come to the party and that’s why i was waiting for him without dancing but h..he is dancing with some other girl..
Naksh looks tara and aditya and gets angry..
Naksh in mind:i know they are cheating keerthi.i won’t let Keerthi break down..i will surely expose them to Keerthi soon.
Naksh pulls Keerthi towards him and starts dancing shocking Keerthi..
Keerthi:sir?
Naksh: see..this is party for company so everyone will dance with random people only so don’t think bad. So we will dance as people will think bad if we stand simply..
Keerthi gets relieved and smiles..
Keerthi:thank you for making me understand sir. If you dint make me understand then i would have misunderstood aditya.
Naksh:it’s okay..
Naksh and Keerthi start dancing together..
zara zara behekta hai, mehekta hai
aaj toh mera tan badan, main pyaasi hu
mujhe bharle apni bahon meinâ?¦..)-2
hai meri kasam, tujhko sanam
duur kahi naa jaa, yeh duri kehti hai,
paas mere aaja rea
yunhi baras baras kali ghata barse,
hum yaar bheeg jaye, is chahat ki baarish mein,
meri khuli khuli lato ko sul jaye tu apni ungliyon se,
main toh hu is khwahish mein,
sardi ki raaton mein hum soye rahe ek chadar mein,
hum dono, tanha ho, na koi bhi rahe is ghar mein,
(zara zara��.baahon mein)
tadpaaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein,
ek baar ey deewane jhoota hi sahi pyaar toh kar,
main bhuli nahi haseen mulakate, bechain karke mujhko,
mujhse yuna fer nazar,
In between naksh looks Keerthi and gets mesmerized and he dances passionately..
ruthega na mujhse, mere saathiya yeh vaada kar,
tere bina mushkil hai, jeena mera mere dil mein,
zara zara behekta hai, mehekta hai
aaj toh mera tan badan, main pyaasi hu
mujhe bharle apni bahon meinâ?¦
hai meri kasam, tujhko sanam
duur kahi naa jaa, yeh duri kehti hai,
paas mere aaja reâ
Aditya and tara notices naksh and Keerthi dancing and they fume..
Tara:we planned to hurt Keerthi but she is happily dancing with naksh..did she really fall for you or not?
Aditya:i made her fall for me..but how come she is not affected by seeing me dancing with you?
Tara:maybe my stupid boss would have consoled her.
Aditya gets angry hearing this..
Aditya angrily:your boss is always flopping my plan..now i wont leave him.
Telling this he angrily takes his gun and moves aside while tara runs and holds him worriedly..
Tara: Aditya.. don’t do anything stupid. I know you have anger issues but you should not vent out your anger by killing him.
Aditya pushes away tara and points the gun at naksh and..
Aditya:if you want to pity your friend then go and cry when he is dead but i wont listen to you now. I want to clear my way..
Keerthi and naksh dances and suddenly Keerthi sees a gun pointing naksh and gets shocked..
Keerthi in mind: ohh noo..who is that?
Aditya fires his bullet while Keerthi pushes naksh and gets shot..
While aditya ties his face and runs away and tara too runs behind him..
Keerthi falls down shocking naksh..
Naksh:keeerthiiiii..
He bends down and he tries wake her up but she doesn’t and he sees blood in her shoulder and gets shocked..
Naksh in mind:ohh my goddd..who shot her?why did that person tried to kill Keerthi?
He sees more blood coming and he lifts Keerthi and walks out immediately..
Naksh in mind:what the hell?i wont spare that person once i find him..
THE SCENE FREEZES.
precap: kartik learns Tina’s truth. Naksh and aditya fight. Ranveer saves sirat.a guy named Aly slaps twinkle. Niel worries..
6 Comments
Wow….means…. This was so freaking amazing yaar… Kaha se itna soch lete ho… Too good… And again what a storyline..,!!
Thank u so much 😊. happy that you loved the story!!💖.
Awesome chappy
Interesting too
Damn Interesting precap
Update soon
Thank u so much 😊.i will upload next episode on Monday😊
Ayy your sister told me that she’ll tell me many stories ! I miss her but am happy now her account will be alive
Yeah..😊