Hello my dear friends. First of all so sorry for late post . I told that I will post my next article soon but due to studies I couldn’t do so. Nowadays I’m not free on my weekends also. From past 3 weeks I’m having tests on every Sunday and this will continue every Sunday. Ho gya na weekend chaupat ?? but it’s ok.
So this article is specially dedicated to my friend cum sister Mitali aka khamoshi. I’m here only due to her otherwise I didn’t knew anything about TU. She helped me where to type my article and how to submit. Nd I’m very grateful to her . Luv u my sister.
Nd thank u TU …. Otherwise I would have never meet these lovely people.
Pls do ignore typing or grammatical mistakes.
The story starts here ….
Scene
A playschool is shown
In ground a girl of approx 3 years is crying but nobody is with her . Everybody is playing.
A boy comes and sits beside her.
Boy – why al u clying.
Girl – ……….. (no response )
Boy pats him but again no response so he also starts crying that too louder than her. Seeing the boy crying she stops nd asks now why he started crying .
Girl – now why al (are) u clying (crying)
Boy – I saw u clying so I also started so u will stop nd see it happened so. Now tell me why al u sitting alone hele.
Girl – nobody is playing with me nd nobody wants to be flend (friend)with me.
Boy – I’m new heeal (here). I also have no flends .
So will u be my flend.
Girl – yey I got a flend nd they both shake their hands.
(Note – read as it’s written. Nd try to pronounce same like small children talk )
Girl – tumhala naam kiya h.
Boy – mela naam kabir kapoor h ol tumhala.
Girl – mela naam saanchi mishra h.
Kabir – taanchi …. tumhala dhal (ghar) tidhal h
Saanchi – oye mela naam saanchi h taanchi nhi .
Kabir – ss …. sss …. taanchi.
Saanchi – acha chol do kabil dhile dhile sikh jaoge.
Kabir – tum bhi to dalat bol rhi ho … mela naam kabir h kabil nhi.
Saanchi – ka. . Ka .. ka … kabil…
Kabir – acha chol do tum bhi sikh jaogi.
Nd they both laughed.
Days passed and they both became best friends.
One day.
Kabir – taanchi …. tum mujhse shaadi kalogi.
Saanchi – sshhh … dhile bolo … gandi baat
Kabir – bolo na
Saanchi – maine veel se baat kar li h . Wo mujhe kal dairy milk laake dega.
Kabir – Agal tum mujhse shaadi kalogi to mai tumto dairy milk silk laake doonga wo bhi bala wala.
Saanchi – thik h to phil mai tumhi se shaadi kalungi.
Kabir – plomise
Saanchi -pinky plomise. Pal abhi nhi abhi to hum chote h na … shaadi to bade log kalte h.
Kabir – thik h to phil jab bale hoenge to kalogi na.
Saanchi – haan.
After one year
Now they had completed their course in play schools and now it was their lastday in play school.
Kabir – taanchi u know I will study in lkg now.
Saanchi – ali wah. …Same pinch kabil. ..now I will also study in lkg.
Kabir’s parents came
Kabir – ok bye taanchi …. we will meet in class aftel holiday.
Saanchi – bye kabil. See u soon. ✋
In school ABC (a random school )
Kabir was waiting for saanchi but saanchi didn’t came.
In school XYZ
Saanchi was waiting for kabir but he didn’t came.
What these innocent kids know that they both got admission in different schools.
Both went home and asked from their parents. Nd parents told them that they might be in different schools. Both parents asked if they had each others number so they can meet but what did they know that they will be separated.
Both soon got busy in their school nd studies but somewhere they remembered each other.
Now they are in class 6th. Both got admission in the same school for their high school studies. Now let’s see how they meet nd will they remember each other.
1 month has passed but they didn’t met till now. Why ??? ? I won’t tell u … read further.
Because both were in 6th but in different divisions.
It was break time . Some were in ground nd some were in corridor .
Saanchi was walking very slowly as she was going to submit her science model.
Suddenly she saw a boy coming from infront who was on his skates. Saanchi understood if he misbalanced her project would be destroyed. She signalled him to stop but he was in his own dreamland . Suddenly he jerked nd he misbalanced.
Both saanchi nd the boy collided. And fell down.
Saanchi got angry and took him to the teacher as her project was completely broken.
Teacher – what is this Kabir kapoor.
Kabir – I’m really sorry ma’am …. I didn’t did that intentionally.
Teacher – u r selected for the competition that doesn’t mean that u will practice anywhere. This is your school not home.
Kabir holded his ears and said I’m sorry ma’am pls give me one chance I will never do again.
Teacher – what will I do with ur sorry. U know how important this project was. This project was selected from our school to be presented in science exhibition in which all schools are participating. After 3 days the exhibition is going to be held and I want this project anyhow. So u will help saanchi to make this project again.
While saanchi was crying.
Teacher – don’t cry saanchi. Kabir will help u. I know u both will complete it bcoz u both are toppers of ur class.
Saanchi – okk ma’am.
Nd the teacher went away from there.
Saanchi – u dumbo …. if u had listened me then this wouldn’t have happened. Now I will have to make again.
Kabir – u stupid girl …if it was that important then why were u roaming with it in the break. Anyone could have collided and this time unfortunately it’s me.
Bg plays
Daur-e-ishqa ek jashan hai
Lekin apna alag tashan hai
Khoon mein sulgi ek agan hai
Beh ke dikhlayega yeh tevar (x2)
Chaahat ke dar pe
Dil ka dharna hai
Naa mar ke jeena
Jee ke marna hai (x2)
Toofan ke humdum
Angaare hain hum
Dhadkan mein thoda sa
Baarood hai khwaahish ka
Jashn-e-Ishqa
Jashn-e-Ishqa…
Saanchi made faces and went away from there.
After school was over saanchi was waiting for her father. Kabir came to him .
Kabir – hey saanchi . Give me your address.
Saanchi – why … now u will rob my house.
Kabir – listen I think u do these dirty things .
I have no interest to know ur address. Ok then do ur project work alone I won’t help.
Nd he starts leaving.
Saanchi – acha acha sorry. Take this.
She writes her adress on a piece of paper and hands over to him.
At evening.
Dorebell rings
Jaya – saanchi see who has come.
Saanchi – going maa
Saanchi goes and open the door. Kabir is standing nd he’s dumbstruck seeing saanchi . Saanchi is wearing a knee length frock with open hairs. She’s looking so cute. In school saanchi comes in very tidy way . 2 ponytail with lots of oil and spects. So it’s obvious for kabir to be dumbstruck ??.
Saanchi waved her hands nd he came into his senses.
Saanchi – hello kabir .come inside.
Kabir – hy saanchi
Saanchi – kabir u sit here I will be back in just a minute.
Kabir sat on the sofa and looked around.
Suddenly kabir’s eyes went on a picture. It was of saanchi.
Kabir’s pov
I think she’s saanchi. She’s looking so cute nd innocent. Nd now she is not less than a bomb.
Meanwhile saanchi came nd asked him to come with her. They both entered a room which was very neat and clean.
Kabir – is this ur room.
Saanchi – yes of course …. but why r u asking so.
Kabir – no I mean …. generally girls room are of pink colour and a lot of dolls r there like my sister has. Nd here ur room is full of books and that also in a tidy manner.
Saanchi laughed – kabirrr … I’m not like other girls. I don’t like to play with dolls or watch TV serials . I love reading books and whenever I’m free I clean my room .
Leave these things let’s decide what to do now we have very less time.
Kabir – don’t worry … we will manage …. first let’s make the list of things that we need. Then tomorrow we will complete it.
Saanchi – ok and she starts making the list . While kabir was busy searching on Internet saanchi fall asleep.
Kabir’s pov – she’s not such bad as I was thinking.
He caresses his face , takes the list and goes.
Next day in school
Saanchi – why did u went without informing. U should have at least leave a note.
Kabir – omg, how much u talk. Listen u fall asleep while I was preparing so I took the list and went. Today I will bring all the things and we will complete today only.
At evening
Kabir and saanchi were busy preparing the model while jaya called her to take snacks for them.
Kabir – first give me scissor then go .
Saanchi – take from that drawer.
Kabir went and opened the drawer …. he was dumbstruck to see ??.
That’s all for today. I will try to post next one soon. So stay tuned.
What made kabir dumbstruck ???
Nd pls pls pls do drop comments. Nd if not comments then pls do ?or ?. If u don’t like then pls do give me ur suggestion . I will try to cope up with my mistakes.
Take care ☺
24 Comments
wow its nice and their play school talks are awesome
i think he saw their childhood pic
Thank uu shweta. Keep guessing. U will get to know in next one. Nd good morning dear ??
Wow priyu ???? it’s soooo cute!! And the dialogues…… ???? I think Kabir saw something that connects with their childhood ??? a photo or a gift are something like that!!!
Nice story the journey from childhood to higher standard is nice I think may be kabir is dumbstruck because he saw saachi old photos air letter that he has written for his best friend kabir her first love
Please priyu fast update next half story cannot wit
Nice story the journey from childhood to higher standard is nice I think may be kabir is dumbstruck because he saw saachi old photos air letter that he has written for his best friend kabir her first love
Please priyu fast update next half story cannot wAit
Woooow,,really amazing epsd nd now can’t wait plz update soon..
Such a cutee ff…..w8ing for d next one…post it soon
Allay allay meli pyali naagin ne kitna pyala os likha h.. Detta tumne..???.. So sweet cute kanchi os till now… Amaz outstanding yaar.. Childhood convo.. Is superb.. Nd ye kya aaj ??ne zahar ki jagah itla pyaal kaise lutta diya..???.. Outstanding yaar..?????post nxt asap.. Or apna ff kab post krne wali h bye.. Meri jaan ab insta p taang khichte h baki jo bachchi h????.. Nd i think so childhood pic ho gi sanchi and kabir ki may be.. Per tere dimag ka kya bharosa hamein galat sabit krne k chakkar m kuch or kar daale????.. Ok bye.. Lovv u???
Excellent one dear….. i loved it to the core. . . . . I liked all the scenes. . . . Will be waiting for next episode. .
Oye meri pyaari naagin……bachpan yaad aagaya yaar baby talk se…..About Kabir being dumbstruck maybe he saw something like diary or let’s say photo.Depends upon the number of shots u r planning.Let me keep these futile guesses aside.Waiting for the next shot to get published.
Arrey Priyu this was tremendous….Out standing….Fabbbb….plzz rriyu post asap…can’twait to read an other part……Luvv uuu….jana.
Wowww nice..
Its really amazing dear….. And i think kabir found a memory related to their childhood…… Update soon
superb story with different idea i just love this story
post next one asap
and i think kabir found something related to their childhood………………
tc………….love you priyu………..
It’s amazing loved it
It’s amazing
Oh this is so nice post next one ASAP till then bye and tc
It’s amazing loved it
Awsome
Ot was super amazing…n starting ki story padh k toh hasi aane lg gyi??…tum mjse shaadi krogi????…super nd update soon???
Hyy ….i used 2 b ur silent reader..but ater reading dis, i thought 2 break my silence…it was very well written…..n as a silent reader i always read all of d ffs but often i dont get tym to leave comment…but today i got tym??
So so so beautiful story………. Awesome yaar i am eagerly and more eagerly waiting for the next episode………this one of my favorite os yaar………please priya update soon……….love u dear…….
Hey Priyu……Outstanding Mindblowing…..jhakkas…….post asap……sorry log in ni kiya aalas ki wjh se?
Amazing yaar tum ne tum mela Dil hi le liya. Bachpan yaad aaygi. lub u Der saaraaa pyari naagin