It’s our love story #kaanchi #one shot (Part 2) Last Part

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Now let’s move on to the story
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Pls do ignore grammatical nd typing mistakes.

Kabir – saanchi first give me scissor then go.
Saanchi – take from that drawer.
Kabir opens the drawer and he’s dumbstruck to see ??

The drawer was filled with dolls. ??
Kabir’s pov – such a big lier she’s. Says that she don’t like dolls nd here the whole drawer is filled with dolls.
Meanwhile saanchi came
Kabir – u lier. …u said u don’t like playing with dolls nd here the whole drawer is filled with dolls.
Saanchi – how dare u touch that. Nd btw u blind …. can’t u see these all dolls are new. I haven’t opened them yet. Yes these r mine I got them on my birthday. I don’t like to play so I have collected them when I will go to orphanage I will donate them there.

Kabir felt guilty for his behaviour.

Kabir – I’m sorry saanchi. I shouldn’t have reacted.
Saanchi – it’s ok kabir . It isn’t your fault. Anybody could have thought that .
Leave these eat this paasta and let’s complete the left over work.

Next day the teacher was very happy to see the model. In exhibition their model was tagged best one and their school got first prize.

They became good friends.

One day both the sections of class 6th were playing truth and dare in groups. Fortunately saanchi and kabir were in same group. The bottle was spinned and it stopped on saanchi. Saanchi chose dare. Kabir teased her huh she has no guts to say truth. Saanchi got angry and she chose truth.
Benamika (bina naam wali ??) – ok saanchi, so u tell us about your nickname which we don’t know and who gave u this name.
Saanchi ( smiles ) – my childhood best friend used to call me taanchi bcoz at that time we couldn’t pounce correctly nd I used to call him kabil.
While kabir was shocked to hear this. He couldn’t believe his ears.
The bell rang and all the students went to play . While saanchi was picking her bottle he tried to talk to her but she didn’t listened.

A million dollar smile appeared on kabir’s face. His happiness has no boundary. He started jumping and dancing same like when India wins in cricket match (because I do so??)

At evening Kabir went to her house nd rang the doorbell.
Saanchi came and she was shocked to see kabir dancing madly at the door

Saanchi – what the hell is this Kabir. Have u gone mad or what. Why have u come now.

Kabir saw saanchi he ran to her and hugged her tightly. Saanchi tried to come out of his grip but then he started turning round and round
Kabir – saanchi ….. saanchi. ….saanchi I’m so so so happy. I can’t believe u are infront of me.
Saanchi looked in a confused manner.
Saanchi – what are u talking about kabir. Say clearly
Kabir – u r my saanchi … my taanchi whom I missed so much.
Saanchi was shocked.
Kabir – yes saanchi yes …. u r only my taanchi and I’m ur kabil. Kuch yaad aaya buddhu.
Saanchi couldn’t believe her ears. She also started jumping and she hugged kabir so tightly that she will never let him go.
Saanchi – kabir I missed u so so so much.
Kabir – I missed u too saanchi.

Just then jaya came hearing their shout.
Jaya – what happened saanchi. Why u both are making noise.
Saanchi ran to her
Saanchi – ma he’s my kabil. U remember I always said I miss my best friend. He’s the same kabir.
They both talk which they had conserved in their stomach. ???

5 years passed happily and they both started liking each other. Both knew about each others feeling but never expressed .

Now they both were in class 11th nd in same division ??.

Teacher enters the class . All students good morning ma’am.
Teacher – good morning students. And one important announcement for u all. As u all know Day after tomorrow is Raksha Bandhan so principal sir has decided that every girl will tie rakhi to the boys.
So girls the boy sitting beside u will be ur partner and u will tie rakhi to him. Nd boys don’t forget to bring gifts for your sister .
And no one will try to escape from this giving excuses ( because there were many couples in the class but none of them knew about kaanchi ?)

Now let’s see what is KaAnchi’s expression.

It’s obvious they will be shock ??? because they both sit together on the same bench ?
They both looked each other

Kabir’s pov – no no no this can’t happen. Saanchi can’t tie rakhi to me. Now what will I do.

Saanchi’s pov – OMG …. now what to do I can’t tie rakhi to kabir in my dreams also.

The whole day both were in tension.

Next day in school
Saanchi was sitting on her chair with rakhi in her hand . She was so tensed ( are tension to hogi na jiske saath shaadi ke sapne saza rhi h usko rakhi kaise bandhegi?)

Kabir enters the class and sees saanchi holding rakhi. He went there silently kept his bag and went out.

Other girls were showing their rakhi .one of them said thank God kabir doesn’t sit beside me otherwise I would have to tie rakhi which I can never do even in my dreams also. ( Kabir ko bhala koi bhai kyu banana cahega. ….. all girls of the class were mad after him )

In the assembly the principal asked to tie rakhi there itself.
Saanchi’s eyes were filled with tears but she didn’t let them come out.
Both were coming towards each other then suddenly kabir fainted.
Teacher’s pick him up and found his body burning like coal.
He was taken to the sick room and given medicines. After sometime he came into his senses.
Teacher asked saanchi to go and tie rakhi in the sick room only .

Saanchi moved towards the sick room and saw kabir.
She went inside and sat beside him.
Nobody was there ???

Saanchi – ka …. ka … kabir I can’t do this.
Kabir – I know saanchi that’s why I did this.
Saanchi gave a confused look ??

Kabir said yesterday night he kept onions under his arms so that his body temperature would rise and it happened so.

Kabir gave her a victorious smile ??

Saanchi – wah u should get an Oscar for this. Btw thank God tumne mujhe bacha liya ….. mai tumhe rakhi nhi baandh sakti kyuki …….(she paused )
Kabir – kyuki ?
Saanchi – kyuki ….. she blushed and ran out of the room.

Outside the room
Saanchi stood there blushing .
Saanchi’s pov – how to tell here I’m dreaming of wearing nuptial chain of your name so how could I tie u rakhi .

Inside room
Kabir was also smiling
Kabir’s pov – I’m dreaming our names on our wedding card. How could I let u tie me rakhi and make u my sister ??

Flashback ends.

Kabir – offo saanchi itna sochogi to buddhi ho jaogi.
Saanchi – kabir I can’t believe that we r married now …. I’m married to my best friend …. my childhood love ?
Kabir – yes saanchi tumne mujhe pinky plomise liya tha and “THIS IS OUR LOVE STORY”.
We r married now nd today’s our first night.
Saanchi – I also know … so what

Kabir gave her a naughty smile.

Saanchi – kabir ….. jaisa tum soch rhe ho na waisa kuch nhi hoga.
Kabir – achaa. ….. he starts moving towards her .
Saanchi – okk then catch if u can ? .
Nd kabir chases her. Suddenly saanchi stops. Kabir pulled doori of saanchi’s blouse . He starts moving towards her. A shiver runs down her body .
Finally kabir reaches her and turns her to him. He caresses her face and picks her in his arms and places her on the bed.
Before turning off the light kabir turns back and says

( or kitna padhoge beshramo ….. first night hai kuch to privacy dedo. Oops waise bhi mai kyu bol raha hoon …. tumhari writer ko bas itna hi aata h likhne … isse zyada isko likhna bhi nhi aata??? to ye lo baba Ji ka thullu. )

Next morning.

Sunays falls on them . Both are sleeping peacefully in each others embrace.
Saanchi wakes up and sees kabir sleeping so she goes and gets ready. She comes out of bathroom and starts drying her hair. Water droplets from her hair falls on kabir and he sees saanchi. She tries to wake up kabir but he pretends to sleep.
She goes near him suddenly kabir pulls her and she falls on his chest.
Kabir – good morning wifey
Saanchi – very sweet morning hubby.
Kabir – it’s not sweet morning but u can make it sweet.
Saanchi blushes and kabir captures her lips ? . After sometime Saanchi breaks the kiss . Get ready fast kabir we have to go to hospital also.

Kabir – what is this saanchi …. we got married yesterday only and today we are going hospital. … that’s not fair …. I’m not going anywhere this week. I also want to spend some time with my newly wedded wife. And kabir pouts …. suddenly saanchi kisses his pout leaving him in shock ??

Saanchi – as u wish jaan she winks? and runs out of the room .

Kabir touches his lips and smiles ….says not bad ??

After two months
At hospital

Saanchi in kabir’s cabin.

Saanchi ? – how dare she touch u.
Kabir – saanchi. .. first listen to me
Saanchi – don’t take her side …. u come home then I will show u who am I.
And she walked out.
Kabir – hey bhagwaan …. bacha lena …pata nhi aaj kya hoga.

At evening

Saanchi had already came early.
Kabir comes and he walks silently. There was pin drop silence in the house.
He stood infront of ganesh idol
Kabir – bappa pls aaj bacha lena saanchi ke prakop se .
God’s voice comes from background.
( Same like Mai Tera Hero when varun prays infront of Idol and God’s voice comes from background ) ???
” Ab to tujhe sirf ek hi jan bacha sakta h or wo h khud saanchi.Bolo Saanchi Mata ki jai”

Kabir slowly comes infront of the room and sees saanchi glaring him.
Kabir – saanchi …. first listen me na.
Saanchi – how dare that chudail touch u.
Kabir – first of all she’s not chudail …. she’s riya …. Riya Malhotra and secondly that was my mistake .. she was just helping me to clean my coat.

Now saanchi’s anger was on cloud. ???

Saanchi – now u r taking her side ….. she’s Riya Malhotra ( she mimics ) ….. mai kya Mar gyi thi .. couldn’t u call me.
Kabir – saanchi I …. I thought

While saanchi threw pillow on him

Kabir – u were busy in surgery …. nd I swear I didn’t asked her help she herself came

Saanchi – get the hell out of my room . Go and sleep in the hall

She pushes him out of the room .

Saanchi – and don’t dare to sleep in other rooms otherwise from tommorow u will be out of my house. Now u see what I will do tomorrow. U just wait and watch.
Nd she closes the door on kabir’s face …..
Boooom ???

Next day

Kabir gets up and finds a note on the table.
He reads

Good morning dear hubby.
Today I have important work so I’m leaving early. See u at hospital.
Luv u ???

At hospital.
Kabir enters and he’s shocked to see ?….
The whole sdch members were standing there
Saanchi – come here kabir. I have to make an important announcement.

So ladies and gentleman …. may I have your attention please. I have called u all here to inform that from today all the female workers of sdch are sister of Dr.kabir kapoor . Today every female worker will tie him rakhi.
All the workers as well kabir stood shocked there.
All started murmuring.
Kabir come and sit here.
Nd the inauguration of this will be done by Dr. Riya Malhotra. A Big hand for Dr. Riya pls ???
Ria – what the hell is this saanchi. I’m gonna not do this.
Anand Malhotra came and said Ria do as saanchi is saying otherwise I will rusticate u from here.
Ria – dad …. what nonsense is this.
Anand – do fast or I rusticate u.
Ria made faces and she came forward and tied rakhi to kabir . All clapped while saanchi smirked ? and Ria left in anger. ?
After that one by one all the female workers tied rakhi to kabir.
Kabir sitting there was following his wife’s order. ???

In kabir’s cabin

Kabir sat on his chair and started untying all the rakhis.
Saanchi came and locked the door.
She came and sat on kabir’s lap and kept both her hands around his neck and stared him lovingly ???

Kabir – what ….. now happy . Ho gyi man ki Murad puri.
Saanchi – yes. … very happy. Now no dr. Or nurse would try to flirt with u. U are mine. U were mine …. u r mine …. and u will be mine forever.
Kabir – acha by the way how did Dr.Malhotra supported u.

Flashback
Saanchi went in malhotra’s cabin and tells him about ria’s doings. She says today she will do something and if he didn’t support her …. unfortunately she and kabir will have to resign. Malhotra will never want to loose 2 best doctors of his hospital so he agreed.

Fb ends

Saanchi gives him a victorious smile ??
While kabir was in shock ??
Saanchi – muh band karo patidev warna machhad ghus jayenge. Nd “IT’S OUR LOVE STORY ?. ??
Kabir smiles – not bad ???
Kabir wraps her waist and pulls her more close. He starts decreasing the distance between their lips and finally they both gets involve in a deep kiss ?.

THE END.

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