Hey guys ….Dolly is back again …thanks for the responses …keep going on
I hope this episode doesn’t disappoint u all ,
Here is the story ,
Swara was shocked and sits on the sofa in a thud ..
She doesn’t know who to choose …one side her brother who is her life and other side the promise made to her friend …who has and is trusting her ….
She knew sanskar would stop the marriage at any cost if she chooses riya ….
And if she says about riya …then sanskar would kill her to death ……
She is Stucken up .
Sanskar felt bad seeing her condition …..his face felled pale ..
He knew he wasn’t doing good ! And that to with his love
Yes the fact is he loved her …loved her like he’ll
The first time he saw ….he fell for her …..it was his anger which overpowered him ………
But now also it’s his angry side …which is showing his hate towards her ……
Sanskar : swara u don’t have whole day ….. (fake anger)
Swara (tears) : I …..I …choose my brother …..I….I…want his life to be …happy ..why he should suffer because of me
She said making her heart like a stone
Sanskar smiles …..before he could say further
Swara (smile with anger) : but …but …..I won’t be alive to watch all this …..
After I say about the where riya. …the next minite I will be dead ….
Saying this she takes knife and keeps near her neck
Sanskar was shocked with the reply and her sudden action ….
Swara (closing her eyes) : I will say where riya is ..she is …..
Before she could say ….Sanskar throws the life and pulls her closer and kisses her hard ……
He sucks her lips until it swallow’s…….
SWARA was shocked with his action …she tries to break but Sanskar overpower’s her ….
Finally Sanskar leaves her ….
Sanskar (angrily) : if u die what will I do ….what is the meaning of me being here …miss swara dixit .
He pulls her arms tightly and pins her to wall
Sanskar (angry) : answer me …answer me ….
SWARA just looks into his eyes ….which shows the true love for her ….
Sanskar (angry) : yes ….I love u damm it ….I love u …miss swara dixit
Swara was numb tears were rolling in her eyes .
Suddenly the door bursts open…..laksh and other’s enters with a growing angry face …(both maheshwaris and dixit)
Laksh goes ND slap’s swara hard ….
This shocks everyone …including swara
Laksh (angry ND tears) : didn’t u consider me as ur brother ….didn’t u think before that I am still alive ….did I treat I like a stranger before
He was busting the anger on her …….
Swara was holding her cheeks and standing with tears flowing …..
Sanskar was seeing the maheshwaris ..with guilt …..
Ragini goes forward to sanskar …
She raises her hand but stops
Ragini (tears) : if I touch u na …that same will come to me ..chiii I hate saying u my brother ….for ur goodness u started to play with my life .
Chiii I regret sanskar …I regret now saying u my brother …
Saying this she runs down crying ……..
Mishti and ap hugs swara
Ap (tears) : once u could have said about sanskar to us …na …….y r u getting into trouble swara ……he was the killer …and now is trying to kI’ll u too ……
SHE goes near sanskar
Ap (tears) : I am ashamed of u sanskar ….I never knew that my values went this much wrong ….thank’s for proving us the world’s worst parents it was a good lesson ….
Saying this she follows ragini and goes down .
Laksh was sitting on the bed with his eyes closed with hands …
Sanskar was standing with his head bow down
Dp and shekar comes to him
Shekar (angry) : u have played with my daughters life …..u gave her poison ….luckily she is out of danger …what would have happen just think once ….
I may have lost her forever ….do u get it …Mr Sanskar maheshwari
U …..u …how could u …..I treated as my son . didn’t I ? …huh …didn’t I ? answer me
(Sanskar was quiet )
shekar : it’s waste to talk to u ……and never ever think that u will get swara. ….how could u even say u love her . shame of u
Saying this shekar goes down with tears in his face …he wasn’t strong to face his brave daughter
Now it was dp who was standing with a guilt anger and was literally scared about his son future …which is going to shatter in minutes now .
Laksh takes his hand from his eyes ….and looks at sanskar with blood shot eyes ..
He was like …he would smash and crush sanskar the next minute ..
He gets up and goes towards sanskar …but swara comes forward of him .
This shocks and makes everyone curious …..
Dp (tears) : as a father I shouldn’t say but laksh u r free to do whatever u want …swara don’t stop him ..
Swara (cries) : I don’t want this to happen to any girls ND specially girls like riya…….I have learnt a great lesson ….if u punish like this …I am sure he won’t understand …but intend to take more revenge …it’s us who r spoiling his life …
If ap aunt and dp uncle would have been strict with him …he wouldn’t have been stuck up as a womanizer after all
(This pierced sanskar’s heart )
Swara : I know he did wrong ….but life is all about a second chance ..if we don’t forgive him what us he difference between him and us …
And sanskar (turning to him)
Swara : yes I admit I lived u truly and wad ready to even leave my parents for u …but thanks for teaching me a good lesson
That if u don’t obey ur parents and fly in ur own way …
The thing u r doing ..mould have happened to me also
Thank’s (saying this swara leaves crying)
All looked shocked and we’re proud of swara …..she proved that her parents values didn’t go wrong
Laksh comes
LAKSH (angry) : listen ..I had a doubt on u from the beginning …..and for ur kindness riya is I’m USA in our orphanage home …..
Sanskar looked shocked ….
Laksh : Dont be shocked …I dont want to explain how I came to know this …..because it’s useless
I am leaving u because of my sister …only because of swara …u r standing here …..
I am warning u ……or take it has a threat.
I should never see u behind swara or near her ….if I see so
I won’t mind going to jail on a murder case …
Saying this he goes ….
It was only dp and sanskar …..
Dp sits in a thud !
Dp ; u have proved me my growing up values …thanks …first time I have bow my head that too behind my best friend …now say me whether shekar will trust me back …
Not only urs but even u have put ur sisters life at stake ….
Thanks a lot …..thanks
Saying this dp leaves…..a tear falls from sanskar eyes …
(THE first time he is crying for something)
He sits down ….
Sanskar (cries) : I have spoiled my life …it’s all destroyed …I have wasted the wonderful life …I am waste …..God take me …I don’t deserve to live …….I hate myself ……I am bad …..
SAYING this he cries
Will god hear his prayers or not …..
Will swasan life take a turn
Stay tuned ..
Precap : a handsome boys entry …who becomes swara’s life partner …..then Sanskar ?
Ragini being raped ……….laksh to become a overprotective brother …..and gets his life partner
I am excited to write the next parts ..are u ?
Comment for a quick update from me this week itself
The more comments …the more romance and twists in the next episodes …
Thanks for reading
17 Comments
Nice… waiting for next…
Ragini being raped.. qqaa!! was it done by Laksh? hmmm !!! i know i have to wait..don’t be late Dolly…
Thnk u…. ;-*
Awesome….?
Awesome dearr ??
Nice
So nice….
Plz don’t seperate swasan…..
Make swasan love story ….
Plz continue We Will Be Forever
Swasan chaye sth
Nice.pls update first love is always first ..swalak ff
its thrilling now 😉
m damn xcited dear 😉 😉
plz post nxt asap…… 🙂 🙂
wating na,….. 😉
Loved it…
Yup exctd for precap bt ragini being raped ? dis is scary… is laksh rspnsble for dis?
Wtttt????oh no ragzzz!!!!! Precap is so scary yaaar….update ws superbbbb…keeep rockng n stay blessed…post nxt part sooon????
update next part soon. and please 1st love always 1st update.
nice as always..tc..
superbbb dear…
superb… precap is scary
Sorry for not commenting in previous chappy bcz I was busy with one exam….Okay,I am not angry with you??…About chappy, awsm as always….loved it..precap is shocking???…keep it up dear…
Take care
Keep smiling?
Awesome dear…waitng fr nxt
Scary precap