Hi guys I’m your Anee and this time I have something very different for all of you…I don’t knows How many people will like it….but I wrote it…I just doing hope that you all will like it…
So this OS I wrote only on the demand my friend Bebechana and Our TU’s Anonymousaa she suggested me to write OS on RIBIR….Now a days my former kaanchi fans started to like RIBIR more than Kaanchi….because Riya LOVES to kabir that Saanchi didn’t valued to his LOVE…so the conclusion of this is that RIBIR is Perfect than Kaanchi…and friends either they are looking good or not bad..
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Hi I’m Riya Malhotra… you all know me very well… I have need no introduction… you people are thinking that I’m bad girl @ SDCH…. but what you even think positive about me??… I’m not that bad girl. Initially I was… but someone’s return love changed my whole life a lot… now I’m completely positive character… after getting him in my life… I truly understand that what actually life is….I understand everything in his embrace…. initially he was only my CRUSH then he became my LOVE now he turned into my LIFE… I can proudly say that I can’t live without him even I can’t expect my life without him…. but my readers who are reading my story I want to inform all of you that to getting my love… that way wasn’t easy for me.. I struggle and bear lot of pain in that way.. Then finally I got success because someone said me that my love was pure like Crystal…I valued to the diamond that’s y my love won…. Ok let me tell you my love story…
Let’s begin:
When Saanchi rejected Kabir in the mandap and got married to veer….. After that Kabir was left heartbroken he wants to leave from there forever…. I was looking for him… I can’t tolerate this…. one fine day Kabir returned to hospital…I was so happy that he came back…I flew like in the sky…I thought now no one remained who come btw us….it was wonderful feeling that I was felt…
At Kabir’s cabin
One day I went Kabir’s cabin…
Knock knock..
Come in…He said
I went in the cabin with hopeful smile and saw he was busy in the file…I saw him…he was looking dam handsome I was gradually stepping in…I wasn’t able to take my eyes off from him.
I uttered his name…KABIR….
He didn’t heard but he looked at me….I was nervous…he asked what by eyes expression…
Me: Hi KABIR…I I mean kabir Sir…Good afternoon
He kept his file down on the table and he was coming towards me…my heartbeat was running fast….a beautiful and magical smile consistently was on my face…he came near to me and stood there I couldn’t controlled myself and hugged him tightly….
Ohh!! God kabir sir I’m so happy for you…I’m so happy that you came back…Kabir Sir…
I was feeling good but suddenly he broke the hug and jerked me away….I was very shocked at his sudden gesture that was hurting me a lot…and I was just looking at him..
Kabir: Dr. Riya are you really happy for me??
Me: y..ye..yeah SSir..
Kabir: Just shut up…he yelled at me.
I afraid he laughed…I double shocked
Me: Sirr Are you okk??
Kabir: Me?? He asked very interestingly…what happened to me….Look at me I’m absolutely fine He flew hands in air…Dr. Riya I was heard that you love me a lot…you can do everything for me…but. He nodded negatively it never seems..
I took step forward…Kabir Sir I can do everything for ask..
He moved other side…Go Dr. Riya I don’t need your help…Go and laughed on me like others…your love was just infatuations nothing else…he turned towards me….Even you don’t know the meaning of word love…he came besides me and grabbed my shoulders and he made direct contact into my eyes…u know what Dr. Riya “Love says be happy in your Loves Happiness”…will you happy to see me happy with another girl??
On that Time I was felt too much pain in his deep eyes….on that time somewhere I understand the meaning of love…he leaved me and goes out from there…I remained there while staring at him he was going.
At night kabir’s words echoing in my ears….I couldn’t able to sleep peacefully…I was roaming in my room after some time I wanted water for drink…I took jug and start walking towards kitchen….I reached at kitchen and there I saw Saanchi and veer was romancing in kitchen, To see me they parted ways…they felt awkwardness and went from there for room silently…I was very furious on them and looking at them but they were going….on that time I took jug aside and took oath to make hell sanveer’s relationship…and will ruin their life…because veer wasn’t my brother he was my step brother and I didn’t love him so much as I love to kabir…I wants to give kabir’s all happiness to him…If kabir’s happiness lies in Saanchi then Saanchi must be have to him not veer…
I started to create problems for Sanveer but every time I was thwarted…but to prove my love is true I didn’t stopped to create rift between them…kabir wasn’t know about that… What I’m doing for his happiness..
After lot’s trails finally that day was came when Saanchi slapped veer for not trusting her anymore. But let me clear that wasn’t happened from my trails it was truth of their relation because veer was immature like child and he was easily humiliated by others…that was not first time that he was insulted her before marriage many time he humiliated her by saying her characterless girl…this drama was on between them….every time he insulted her then came to her and apologized her and Saanchi she for gave her and that break up patch up drama was going on….but this time I amazed Saanchi slapped him in front of everyone….I really enjoyed that moment…
Veer: How dare you??
Saanchi: yes veer I’m asking you the same question, how dare you to humiliate me??
Veer: Saanchi dad was right you are selfish and characterless girl..
Saanchi: zabaan sambhal ke veer….Even I was so stupid mom said me that you are also that Malhotra bcoz you are his blood Toh yeh din toh dekhnaa hi thaa na mujhey….she cried…and grabbed his curler….for you veer I lost my mom’s trust.. I defamed her I hurt her…even for you I changed my name from Saanchi Mishra to Saanchi veer Malhotra and you?? For you I leaved to Dr. Kabir and his Love.
He freed himself from her grip…and pushed her away….
Saanchi you came with me just for my money nothing else…otherwise dr. kabir main kiya kami thii…All hospitals Girls have crush on him… You leaved him for me…he clapped…Woow said in melodramatic voice…U know what Saanchi he raised finger towards her…U know what Saanchi?? I didn’t saw cheap girl like you…
Saanchi put hands on ears…and shouted just shut up veer….it’s enough your nonsense….you go to hell….I want divorce from you now….you does not deserves me…mujhey toh kiya tum kisi ko bhi deserve nahi kartey…she leaved from there…
That day was really happy day of my life…now it was time to Saanchi go back in kabir’s life….
That night I had surgery with dr. kabir…we spend good time together…I was very happy to work with him as I always want this….that day tears appeared in my eyes kabir noticed that he came close to me he wiped my tears through his finger…and he said
Riya you know what that tears have very special place in our lives….so don’t waste your tears for someone….as I…he was quiet and leaved from there I was looking at him confusingly.
Some days passed veer and Saanchi got divorced in these day I had lot of chances to spend time with Dr. kabir…I understand him by nearly…somewhere in his company I start feeling very special….we did lots of surgeries together….I assisted him in various projects….in each and every moment I met with another Kabir…I saw his new avatar…My love was increased for him….whenever I thought him with Saanchi tears start falling from my eyes….I didn’t knew why I was feeling like that?? It was my own decision to unite kabir and Saanchi to make kaanchi….so why I was feeling so sad.
That night I couldn’t sleep whole night…and one more thing I noticed that kabir took my name Riya He didn’t call me as Dr. Riya….he called me with only Riya which was meaning of that Riya…Riya… Riya I didn’t understood that I’m going to do that was right or wrong??
After sanveer Divorce dad threw to veer out of the house he became bankrupt…Because veer did so much bad with all …..Veer remained like na ghar ka na ghaat ka.
Ane after sanveer Divorce kabir became normal with Saanchi they were talked nicely with each other….I felt really uncomfortable to them together….
One day I went to Saanchi she was sat in the cafeteria….nobody was there she seemed very upset….I kept my hand on her shoulder she turned to see me…
Ohh Riya…you here?? Is everything is alright?? She asked
Yeah I’m here…but not everything is fine, everything should have to be fine…
What?? She asked confusingly.
I mean Saanchi…don’t you think that you did big mistake in your life??
Saanchi: I..I..I’m not understand…what u want to say??
Me: Okk I’m directly come on the point….I’m talking about Dr. kabir…don’t you think that you committed big mistake in your life to leave him in the mandap….I mean he was only one who always stood behind you…who supported you in every good or worse situation….and look at you…you rejected him for veer…he didn’t understand your love…but kabir’s love was always true and pure towards you.. he can’t tolerate tears in your eyes that’s why on the wedding in fact in the mandap he threw to you towards Veer for your happiness…you didn’t valued him…you didn’t understood his love…you didn’t saw pain in his eyes.. you didn’t try to understand his side His point of view and off-course not his love for you…but his love was true everyone can see that not you….how much I call you stupid…after saying I laughed and went from there…when I was going Saanchi was lost in thoughts and I wiped my tears that welling from my eyes..
Saanchi saw flashback scenes on her with kabir that how many times kabir saved her from trouble…that she was sharing each and every little problem with him…how he was always supporting her…she reminiscing all that scenes. And she cried a lot….she ran and ran she reached at kabir’s cabin but kabir wasn’t there.
After that I was started ignoring to kabir…kabir was coming near to me for talk with me but I didn’t talking with him.
One day Saanchi said to kabir that Kabir sir I want to tell you something…
Yeah Dr. Saanchi say I’m hearing…but he busy in his files
Dr. Kabir I’m really really really sorry for not recognizing your love towards me…
Kabir shocked and looking at her…What??
Yes kabir I realized my mistake that I was wrong…you warned me that veer wasn’t perfect for me but I didn’t heard you…I’m sorry she knees down and held his hands
Dr. Kabir will you forgive me for hurting you??
Dr. Kabir will you accept me as a part of your life??
Dr. Kabir will you marry me??
Kabir was dumbstruck he didn’t believed what he was hearing??
Kabir little smiled then his phone resonates he attend the call
Hello…said Kabir
Hello Dr. Kabir from SDCH??
Yeah Dr. Kabir speaking…and who are you??
Dr. Kabir here Dr. Riya met with an accident she is admitted in city hospital she is consistently taking your name please come fast.
Phone was fell down from kabir’s hand he freed his hand from Saanchi’s hand and ran from there immediately he rushed at hospital Saanchi looked on.
Kabir reached at my ward…I was lied on the bed he came near to me tears welling from his eyes…he gradually took steps towards me…I was murmuring Kabir kabir kabir..
He sat beside me he caressed on my forehead I opened eyes…
Kabir.. I uttered
Riya he said softly
Me: Kabir Sir you come
Kabir: Yeah Riya I’m with you tumen kuch nahi hoga..
Me: But kabir Sir
Shuu…he nodded don’t call me kabir Sir call me Just Kabir
I nodded yes
Me: Kabir why you came here..aap ko toh Saanchi ke saath hona chahiye tha…then I saw Saanchi at the door…I called her near to me she came I kept her hand in kabir’s hand. Then suddenly kabir jerked her hand he pecked on my fore head Saanchi shocked.
What are you doing Riya?? Asked kabir
Kabir you loved her na?? I replied.
I was loved her but not now….he said very softly
Means?? I asked
Means Riya You need to meaning to understand. Because Riya I LOVE YOU.
I was shocked at his confession Saanchi was there now tears welling from her eyes.
He stood and said to Saanchi…U know what Saanchi I want to thank You…because if you don’t ditched me then how I get my true love….He looked at me…Riya I heard your and Saanchi’s conversation while you were making realizing to her mistake on that time I realized my love my feeling for you…he again turned towards Saanchi…Saanchi after your rejection my heart broken like glass every piece of my broken heart killed me each and every time. But on that Riya was stood for me she make an efforts to cheer me she tries a lot to make me happy while spending time with her I started forget you I started move on from your betrayal….and that time I was able to truly understand her and her point of view to loving…when she started to ignore me I felt that pain that I didn’t felt for you but Riya ignorance was hurting…
Now I can proudly saying I LOVE RIYA. She is perfect life partner for me… he came near me held my hand proposed me…Will you marry me
I said Yes Kabir I Will. And I LOVE YOU TOO..
Saanchi ran from there holding tears in her eyes.
After someday I recovered from my injuries in the care of kabir…one day he brought soup for me @ hospital I was on the bed and really happy to see soup I immediately snatched soup from his hand and took a sip he was admiring me I was behaving like a kid and I was about take another sip.. he said: Why you tried to break sanveer marriage??
I was shocked and I stopped drinking…Who kabiii…Ahh main woh kabir…how you know about that??
Kabir: What you thought mujhey kuch pata nahi chalega that what were you doing??
Me: But how??
Kabir: My eyes were always upon you…now no more questions…give answer of my question.
Me: Toh main kiya kartii Kabir…You was loved to Saanchi your happiness lied in Saanchi and you says me that LOVE SAYS BE HAPPY IN YOUR LOVES HAPPINESS…and you were my Love and I wasn’t able to see you in pain that’s why I did that….Ufff I said in one breathe.
He looking at me…So what you think I’m that kind of bad person for sake of my happiness will I break any pair anyone’s house anyone’s happiness you took me wrong if you was loving me then there were lots of ways to make me happy…it wasn’t need to break their marriage Riya..
I held my both ears…Okk I’m sorry Kabir I’m really Sorry but let me clear you that sanveer divorce wasn’t result of my doings…
He laughed yeah I know
Me: You know??
Kabir: yes I know that you are master of making traps you were always thwarted….
Me: what do you mean you are saying that I’m fool??
Kabir: Ummm not exactly like that.
I hit him on chest silently Kabirrr
He laughed me too join him.
So Guys this was My LOVESTORY that I was told I wasn’t bad girl initially I was but Kabir’s LOVE changed me and my life completely soon we were got married and started lived happily ever after.
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Bechaari meri Author Anee ne boht mehnat kii hai…
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Hi Bibu (Anonymousaa) dear thank you so much for encourage me write this OS…Hope you dear will like it.
Love you all
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Anosha(Anee)
7 Comments
It’s just awesome anee, first time I love riyas character, her unconditional nd one sided love is really nice. You write really good. Keep writing dear
Aww….Anee this is soooo good.Mindblowing yaar…this love story seems too pious than any other so called true love tales.Loved this to the core yaar….I am speechless..#mission_Ribir begins???
This story is really outstanding,amazing,wonderful and awesome story………….I can’t say any word for this story yaar…….I am just speechless yaar reading this story……….but one think yaar i am a die heart fan of kanchi pair so ribir pair ko dill se man nahi paya…….kya karo yaar vikram or swarda ka chemistry dil me itna bas gaya jo nikal ne nahi pa rahi hu……….. Thanks dear for give us such a beautiful and nice and awesome and superb and mind blowing and sweet and pure love story………love u dear……..tc yaar
Anee u rocked it yaar…too good.. emotional but very meaningful..so hapoy to read an awsm article gere after so long ❤❤❤ love u dear
Its so amazing
anee….too gud yaar….lvd it…..post us ff soon….lv uh???
I didn’t know what to expect from ribir, bit you turned the tables. It was really nice to read this os. Actually I couldn’t initially accept her. But as I proceeded further, slowly I started seeing her in a new light. Good job dear.