Hello everyone, Sana here….
Earlier i use to read and comment on ff & Os … Now i thought to give it a try….. This is my first piece of writing….. I know it won’t be upto ur expectations…..
I m not an excellent writer lyk u all….but i ll improve i promise…..
I hope u all will lyk this…
:):):):):):):)
Lets begin with smile
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SHOT 1–
XYZ college is shown….
A girl is seen entering the cllge gate. She is wearing pink crop top and blue faded jeans…. Her beautiful brown eyes is shown that carried some pain. Her beautiful pink lips is shown which has lost its smile…..
Her face is shown ….. She is none other than Twinkle……
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Twinkle was walking in corridor lost in her own world……
Then a boy keeps his leg in front of her which she doesn’t notice and fell on ground…. While the boy look at her smirking……
TWINKLE stands up…..
Tw: Yuviii….(angrily:@:@:@:@:@:@:@:@:@)
Yes the boy was Yuvraj…….
Yuvi: Jaan….. aakhir kab tak aise dar dar ke thokren khati phirogi…..
Tera pyaar to tujhe dard dekar chala gya…… Chod diya tujhe…. Akela…..
[He left frm their smirking ]
Twinkle ran frm there crying……
A pair of eyes was watching all this & has tears in his eyes…..
[He is revealed to be Kunj]….
Kunj: I m srry twinkle….
Mein hun zimmedar teri iss halat ka…. Mein kya krun twinkle mein majboor tha….(He cries)….
I LOVE U TWINKLE….. I really do….
He remembers the day when he was going to propose twinkle …….
[smiles while remembering…..]
FLASHBACK…..
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In nxt part……:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Special thnks to RAMYA…..
PRECAP : FLASHBACK……
Till
then…
Good byee…..
Love u all….
18 Comments
Nice episode sana plz post soon
Interesting.
Nice intro.
Waiting
Amazing
Post soon
Amazing & awesome start sana ??
Interesting plot dear ?????????
Post soon plzzzz
Can we be friends????????
Ok bbye
Luv u
Awesome
Post soon
lovely episode
do continue
post soon
Thnku frnds…..
nice epi
Nice and wonder why kunj left twinkle post soon.
Thnku sidmin … Nxt post may be tomorrow…
Amazing epi
Nice episode… ?
awesome…
i.just loved it…
mujhe bhul gayi tu na…
post soon..
love u.,
Gud go dear…. continue soon
I always do support u
Awesome
Post soon
Sry sana i know i m really late
But was busy
Btw very good start keep it up
Love u & ya pardone me
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Wooah!!!! It was amazing yrr..??????????????????????? …..can’t wait for the nxt…..
Very eager to know what will happen nxt….superb yrr.. u r a very nice writer..?????????????
Post asap.
Love u!?
Awesome sana amazing
It’s really superb
And it’s all only your credit.
So don’t thank me
And I already said in friendship thank you are not allowed.
Great going
Love you keep smiling