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Anika is standing on the cliff where mahi goes in IB…she is facing the edge and crying…just then shivaay touches her shoulder…she knows its him so she turns around and sees him with tears in her eyes…she does not notice the others behind him…
Shivaay – wer were u anika…he hugs her
Anika – Shivaay im sorry…but
Shivaay – What but…she keeps her finger on his mouth….
Anika – Shivaay I need to say something please listen to me…I know that you have always wanted a girl who has naam khoon khandaan…but I was never suitable for you…I know u accepted me for Ansh…don’t worry I wont come in between your new relation but please done separate me from Ansh I wont be able to live without him…
Hearing this all start to laugh on Anika and she starts to cry loudly….Shivaay hugs her and tells her
Shivaay – Anika u r mad…totally mad…how can ever leave you…you are my everything…
Anika – Shivaay please don’t lie I saw you…
Shivaay – well will you tell her or what(he signs Mahi)
Mahi – Bhabhi is this the girl you saw…he gets Shipra…Anika looks at a shivaay and sakshi…she turns to go..shivaay holds her hand…
Mahi – Bhabhi im sorry…all this misunderstanding is because of me…
Anika looks confused and asked him- what are you saying how did you come in between…
Shivaay – all this raita is because of this idiot and tells her all that happened…
Mahi – Sorry Bhabhi I should have not hid from you and told you…anika holds his ears…
Shivaay – Ani this shows how much you trust me…he goes angrily…
Rudra – Arre yeh billi aur billu ki toh chalti rahegi…they always fight like this…lets go…Bhaiyaa you continue we are leaving…
All leave except shivika…
Anika – Shiv pls listen…
Shivaay – no you don’t love me that’s y you don’t trust me…
Anika – Shiv(she hold his hand and turns him…she cups his face) I love you like crazy I cannot see you with anyone…next time I swear to god I will kill anyone who comes close to you..saying this she kisses shivay on his lips…
Shivaay –(shocked due to anika’s bold behavior) hmmm im liking this avatar…mrs Jealous singh oberoi…
Come here…he pulls her closer and leans in for a kiss…they continue kissing passionately till they are out of breath
Shivaay – never will I leave you I love you more than anything…..and leans in for another kiss…
They notice no one is there and then shivaay carries her in his arms till the car…
Anika – Shivaay lets go I need to apologise to mahi and shipra as well…
Shivaay – there is time for that…comes here…he keeps her on the bonnet and starts kissing her on her neck and trils down till her throat…
Anika cannot say anything just she moans shivaay!!! This makes him more wild and he continues…he kisses her till he reaches her cleavage and slowly starts opening the buttons of her kurta till its all open…
Anika – shivaay we are out in the open what are you doing…
Shivaay – there is no one here….if you conscious come…her takes her to the car…
Slowly they kissing and undress themselves and shivaay comes closer to take it to another level…they spend the next few hours in passionate lovemaking in the car till it turns dark and is late at night….
They are resting and suddenly shivaay phone rings…
Pinky – beta where are you…ansh has been restless for a while is anika ok please get her soon…
Shivaay – yes mom we will come shortly…
Anika – im such a bad mom…I have left my baby all alone…
Shivaay – you have another baby to take care na….he laughs and hugs her…
Precap – Mahi Marriage celebrations begin…
14 Comments
Awesome… post next soooooooon…
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It is nice
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Fantastic episode dear ????? plzz do post the next update ASAP
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Awesome yaar…. Post the next part soon..
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Awesome dear…
Superb dr…..
Thanks Nitestar—a beautiful love story. I read all 23 chapters and enjoyed it to the max.