Hello my dear friends. I was very happy to your comments. I had never expected that u all were missing this ff. Ur love and support made me write this one soon. I’m thank to all from the bottom of my heart for liking the previous episode. I got 40 likes on previous one without any dislike. Thankq so much for this. It’s a humble request to Silent readers pls do give ur feedback. It boost up the writers. And where are all the TU ke kaanchi writers. Come back soon and complete your ffs. We all are waiting for your next episodes.
Enough of my bak bak let’s move on to the story
Pls do ignore grammatical and typing mistakes
At midnight
Saanchi wakes up and sees the jug is empty. She tries to get up but couldn’t do so. She thinks to call kusum but seeing the time 1:30 she doesn’t calls. Slowly slowly with the help of wall she came to the kitchen and as she was taking bottle from the fridge she turned felt something and around to see …. both shouted and due to misbalance they both fell down. Saanchi was on the top of kabir leading to a deep eyelock. ???
(Actually kabir came to check as he heard noise from the kitchen. The lights were off so he got frightened to see saanchi as her long hairs were messed up and he had forgot that saanchi was also living there. So as saanchi turned back he shouted and they both fell down.)
Bg plays
Mere maula maula Mere maula
Man matwala kyun hua hua re
Man maula maula
Mere maula Mere maula
Kis Taraf hai aaasmaan
Kis taraf zaameen
Khabar nahi Khabar nahi
O O
Jab se aaya hai sanam
Mujhko khud ki bhi
khabar nahi Khabar nahi
oo oo Hosh gul
sapno ki mein bandhu pull
Aankh kab khuli
Khabar nahi khabar nahi
They both gets into their senses when they hear coughing sound . Kusum heard their shout so she came . She was smiling there while both got up and looked here and there to avoid their embarrassment.
Kusum – what happened saanchi ??
Saanchi – n..nothing .. I just came here to fill the jug.
While kabir left in order to avoid questions.
Kusum – u could have called me or kabir. U are very weak saanchi.
Saanchi – aunti I’m ok now nd it was midnight … I thought u might be sleeping so I came myself.
Kusum – acha … now come with me I will make u sleep.
Both kusum and saanchi went to saanchi’s room.
Kusum covered her with the blanket and started caressing her face. Saanchi was smiling. Kabir was seeing them through the window and smiling too ???
Saanchi – aunti u go and sleep now. I’m fine.
Kusum switched off the light and went to her room.
Next morning
Kusum and kabir were having breakfast .
Saanchi came down.
Kusum – good morning saanchi. Come and have breakfast with us.
Saanchi – ??good morning aunti …. (she paused for a mini second) g..g good morning sir.
Kabir (While eating ) – good morning saanchi ?
Saanchi came and sat beside kabir. Kabir was sitting on the middle chair. Kusum was to the left of kabir so saanchi sat on right side ??
Saanchi was about to take curd while kabir also forwarded his hand on same and they both put the hand on same spoon. Both quickly removed their hands.
Kabir – u take first.
Saanchi – it’s ok sir … u take first u also have to go to hospital.
After breakfast kabir left for hospital.
At hospital.
Anand and Adarsh were very happy that saanchi and jaya were in jail .
Ms Fernández came to isha and pragya.
Ms – dr. Isha … Dr. Pragya …. Dr. Kabir is calling both of you.
PraSha – yes ma’am.
In kabir’s cabin
PraSha – may I come in sir.
Kabir – yes (While reading the files )
PraSha – good morning sir.
Kabir – hoon … good morning….While reading files
Kabir – so from today try to keep eye on dr. Malhotra and if gayatri ma’am comes then on her bcoz then only we can get some clue about that CD. I’m sure gayatri ma’am will come today. Nd I will try to find proofs against dr. Malhotra’s illegal business. This will make saanchi’s case more strong.
PraSha – yaa sure sir.
Kabir – and make sure nobody comes to know about our plan and saanchi has got bail.
PraSha – don’t worry sir … we won’t let anyone know this … we will handle this.
They come out and goes for their respective duties. Pragya sees veer and tries to talk to him.
Pragya – veer ek baar humari baat to suno.
Veer – ab kehne sunne ke liye kuch baaki nahi raha. To Behtar hoga hum is baare me baat naa kare.
Pragya – tum saanchi se pyaar krte ho na. Ek baar uski khatir samajhne ki kosish karo.
Veer – mai pyaar karta tha … now I hate her.
He burst ourt And goes .
Pragya (keeps hand on her head) – abe yaar kamamse ye nalayak ko kab akal aayega.
Isha was listening to their conversation.
She comes and taps on her shoulder.
Isha – ab koi fayada nahi veer ko samjhane se.
Pragya – abe yaar ab tum bhi yhi bol rahi ho. Samajhti kahe nahi wo dono ek dusre se pyaar karte h.
Isha – if veer truly loved her then where’s his trust. Time to time he has insulted her. Everytime he needs proof for believing her. Kal ko jab Malhotra ka sach bahar aayega phir aa jayega maafi maangne. Agar pyaar h to vishwas kaha h.
(In yesterday’s episode the same happened …. if he believed saanchi and jaya then why didn’t he believed jaya that the gun didn’t had any bullet. I know the same gonna go happen …. when gayatri will be exposed again he will ask sorry and will repeat the same dialogue … ???mujhe pata hai mai tumhare maafi ke layak nhi hoon and blah blah blah ….. sorry guys kya karu gussa nikal hi jaata h but I feel the same )
Pragya – yaar but ee sab ek misunderstanding hai .
Isha – leave it pragya … Let’s see what destiny decides.
At evening again kabir called them.
Kabir – did u both got any information.
Isha – no sir
Pragya – sir I heard dr. Malhotra talking to gayatri ma’am on phone. I couldn’t hear clearly but he was very tensed . Only I could listen this ” nahi gayatri tum aisa nahi kar sakti … thik hai tum jaisa kahogi waisa hi hoga”.
Kabir gets up from the table and says.
This means something is there between Malhotra and gayatri. We need to find out.
PraSha – but what to do sir.
Kabir tells them … plan muted ?
Kabir – I hope this plan works out.
Precap – kabir and PraSha to fix camera in malhotra’s cabin. Kabir to take ria’s help.
I know this one was boring so now only 3 episodes are left over. I hope the next one will be liked by u all.
NOTE
ATTENTION PLEASE
This is especially to inform all the TU writers … our friend cum sister cum
zombie (nick name) always comments on every article “POST AS AS POSSIBLE” . So guys support me … last she posted her ff 1 month ago and everytime she pokes us …. to aap sab bhi iss ladki ko daato ki ye bhi jaldi se post kare hum intezaar kar rahe hai.
Lots of love to all my lovely friends and sisters.
Bye
Take care till I post next one ??
30 Comments
Superb episode n accidentally dislike button dab gaya that sorry
Thank uu dear nd it’s ok … m glad u liked it ☺☺
Hyy priyanshi……..dekh mein 5 bje uth gyi ????…comment 5;30 pe krri hu……ky kru uthi pdhyi krne k liye thi but mann ni lg rha tha…fir yaad aaya ki betaal ka ff aa gya hoga aur padhne aa gyi…….neend aa rhi h???…but sau ni skti??…koi ni mri ramayan ko yhi khtm krti hu aur ff was khidkitod, mindblowing❤❤❤…….aur itti jldi sirf 3 shots m khtm kr rhi h tu???…koi ni…hope ki tu jldi se dusre plot k saath padhare…tata and hav a nyc day???
Hyy meri dayan. . . Aapka bohot bohot sukhriya jo aapne mera ff 5.30 me padha. Thoda padh legi to tera hi fayada hoga. …btw mai kyu bhasan de rhi hoon mera to khud hi man nhi lagta ?? anyways luv u toooooo meri dayan ? ? ?
its awesome beautiful
love kanchi kabir more
hum sabko gussa aaraha hain veer ki dekh kar in serial
zombie is niyu right you ask her on behalf of me also that POST ASAP
Thank uu so much swethaa. Yey gussa to bohot aata h but kar v kya sakte h . Ohh I forgot to mention niyaa is zombie. Yaa I ask her daily to write. .. but pata nhi intezaar kab khatam hoga ?? luv u loads ? ? ?
So so beautiful and awesome and amazing and superb episode yaar……kanchi ka scene to outstanding tha yaar……….
Thanq dear ??
Nice episode..
Thanq dear ??
So amazing…..and what you said about veer is true i agree with you on
Thanq dear ?? nd don’t know when this drama will get over
Fantastic episode dear. Agree with you on veer behavior. Hope ki serial mein bhi CVS ko pata chal Jaye ki trust is base of every relationship aur phir sanveer ko permanently alag Kar ke kanchi Kar de. Eagerly waiting for next episode. Post it ASAP
Thanq dear. Nd don’t know when this breakup patchup drama will get over and pls u post soon m eagerly waiting. ?? luv u loads ? ? ?
haha………..betaal ki bachhi………..aakhir tune phirse kamaal kar di………not fair……..abey yaar, har baar itna khidkitod, mast mind blowing episode likhegi, toh hamara ff koi kyun padhega………..not done jinny, not done…………haha……..arey mazaak kar rhi thi………..kya yaar, ab main tujhse gussa hoon…….kab tak wohi same amazing mindblowing khidkitod jhakaas bolti rahoon……..pakk gyi hoon, isse likhte likhte……..ab kuch naya try karti hoon…….ex-naagin, tune apne zeher se hum sabka dil jeet liya………ek dum madhosh kardiya…………ye kya tha, mujhe bhi nhi pata………but haan, isi se kaam chala de………aage ka ig pe……….& haan, zombu ko likhna hi padega, wo bhi jald
???sukhriya brahmu. Abhi time nhi h isilye jaldi se bol rhi hoon. Tu kya mujhse kam h . Tera ff ya article humesa mind blowing hota h . Luv u meri brahmu ☺??
Awesome….
Thanq dear ??
Priyanship ji aap bahut achchi lekhika ho .. Àap har darshay ko uchhtam tarike se bayaan krti ho…. Ishwer aapko sada khush rakhe aapko bhin bhin parkaar k tarkeeb de jisse aap or bahut kuch lekhan ka karya kar sakein. … Or hamein aapke lekhan ko padhne ka sobhagya praapt ho aapse yahi ek nivaden h ki aap kisi or ko pareshaan karne ki vartalaap se durri banaye rakhe.. Sab karya samay anushaar hota h..???.. Aapki shubh chintak …pranam??
Aapka Boho bohot dhanyawad sublekha Ji. Hume bohot khushi hui jaanke ki aapko humara lekhan pasand aaya. Or hum aapki kahi baato ka dhyan rakhenge. Dhanyawad ????
The episode was very amazing please post the next one ASAP pleasssseeeee.
Thanq dear ??
superb story but a little short please write a little long as because your story is superb bas man karta he ki padhte rahu………..or tume aa gayi hmm…………itne din koi wait karvata he kya????
please recap dalna next time se to pata chale ki last part me kya hua tha………so this were my suggestions
no back to story it was fab, mind blowing, superb, amazing …………………
post next one asap and be regular on TU…………
tc…….love you…………
Jaisa hukum meri behen … or haan is baar bhool gyi agli baar se pakka recap doongi. Nd it’s my pleasure dear that u like my ff so much that u want to read more and more. Luv u loads sweetie ??
Pata hai kya hua naanitaal(naagin+jinni+betaal yaar ??)mene pad toh liya par pehle mujhe jyaada kuch samajh nhi aaya phir baad mein realize hua ki mene isse pehle wali epi toh miss kardi thi.Ab isse pehle ki tu tamatar aur jutto ki baarish karde mein ye batadoon ki phir mene padli aur ab comment kar rhi hoon.
What shall I say…I am speechless.How can someone write sooo good.If u continued writing khidkithod(In bm’s accent),awesome,ravishing,cool ffs then the CVs of SDCH will boil water in a spoon and drown thenselves there.Seriously yaar bhut damdaar epi tha.Loved this to the core.
Aur kya kaha?Blur aarhi hai!!!Saayad mene ab 3 chaps mein ye ff khatam karnewali baat suni.Saayad vehm higa kyuki naagin ka ff ko itni jaldi khatam hone toh mein nhi denewali toh agar yesi bichaar aaye toh mera naam lelena phir sab gayab!!!Luv u meri naanitaal ab baaki baatein toh hoti rahegi IG pe….???
Behen zyada nhi bolungi. . Ig pe tera answer de doongi. Bas tujhe acha laga na mere liye bohot hai . Luv u loads meri jaan ? ?
Great chapter dear and your Right Veer never trust Sanchi and when Gayatri will get exposed he will come to her and say sorry again? Anways Keep on posting! Exicted for next epi
Thanq so much dear ??
Amaz mindblowing ff yaar too good aaj jyada kuch nhi kahungi ?ab m tabhi bolungi jab main nxt ff post kar lungi ?? tab tak bye tc..per nxt wale tere post p mahabharat likhungi bachke rahna ???.. Lovv u ????
Sukhriya zombu. Mai v zyada nhi bolungi. .. time kam h … pakka next wale pe tere mahabharat ka intezaar karungi