Hello my dear sweeties and friends. Thank u all for showering your love on me and my ff. I was jumping after reading your comments. I have replied to all the comments ??
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Ok first move to the story. ..Otherwise my panchaiti will go on like this.
Pls do ignore grammatical nd typing mistakes ??
Recap – saanchi and kabir fell in kitchen. In hospital kabir isha pragya tries to find out the truth. Pragya veer isha conversation. Pragya gets to know something about Malhotra and gayatri. Kabir tells his plan to pragya and isha.
In evening
Kabir comes home and kusum opens the door.
Kusum – aa gya …. chal fresh ho jaa phir Chai saath me piyenge.
Kabir – jaisa aap kahe maa.
While kabir was going to his room he thought to see saanchi once as she was not well. Kabir went inside and found nobody.
Kabir’s pov – maybe she’s in washroom.
So he left from there .
When he came to hall he heard some voice from the kitchen . He thought again kusum is working.
Kabir (While going to kitchen ) – Maa. How many times I have to tell you …. you shouldn’t do these works … it’s not …
He saw saanchi frying samosas.
Kabir – saanchi you here.
Saanchi – sir aap aa gye … u sit outside see I have made samosas and tea . It’s almost done …. she said while frying.
Kabir – saanchi why are you doing these. … you are weak. … you should take rest
Saanchi – sir I’m perfectly fine now and I was bored …. I have nothing to do …. no patients …. no doctors (she was lost while saying these )
Kabir felt bad
Kabir’s pov – only few days more …. I promise you will be back in hospital with same respect and dignity …. you will get all your rights .
Suddenly saanchi shouts
Saanchi – ouch. … she starts shaking her fingers.
Kabir jerks and sees saanchi screaming in pain.
Kabir takes her hands and in his and starts blowing air in order to give relief to burnt area.
Kabir – tumhara dhyan kidhar rehta h. See u burnt your hand. Come I will bandage it.
He brought her to the hall and started bandaging it while saanchi was staring lovingly.
Bg plays
Pyaar ka lafzon rang hai pyaar ka
Bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali baar ve
Bahaara bahaara ke chain toh huwa faraar we
Bahaara bahaara huwa dil pehali, pehali baar ve
Meanwhile kusum came.
Kusum – what happened
Saanchi – nothing aunti. …it’s just a small…
Kabir interrupted
Kabir – what nothing. .. it’s very deeply burnt
Kusum – I told you not to do this. ..
Saanchi – aunti relax …. I’m fine nothing happened.
After that kabir told his plan to kusum and saanchi.
Saanchi – are u sure sir this plan will work out.
Kabir – let’s see.
Next day in hospital.
Kabir secretly went into malhotra’s cabin and fixed the spy cameras. At home saanchi was keeping eye on the footage.
Saanchi was bored sitting infront of camera . She was about to get up then she saw anand and Adarsh discussing about something and then Adarsh gave him a file and then anand kept in his safe and the keys in drawer.
Saanchi feels something fishy.
She calls kabir.
Kabir’s phone showed the name SM.
Riya was there discussing about her patient. Kabir sees the caller id … he asks riya to go .
Riya outside the cabin.
Riya – now who …. is ….this SM. Is she kabir’s gf. No … no this can’t happen. I can’t let that SM snatch my kabir. I will find out who is she.
She went away from there stamping her foot.
In cabin
Kabir – yes saanchi. What happened
Saanchi – sir I saw dr. Malhotra and Adarsh sir discussing something and after that Dr. Malhotra kept files in his safe and then keys in drawer. I’m sure sir something is wrong.
Kabir – don’t worry saanchi I will find it.
Suddenly somebody knocked the door.
Kabir – come in
Isha – may I come in sir.
Kabir – yes … what happened why are u in hurry.
Isha – sir I was passing from Dr. Malhotra’s cabin I saw Adarsh sir giving him a file and he said “bhaiya ye file kisi ke haath nahi lagni cahiye. Agar ye file kisi ne dekh liya to humare saare dhando ka parda faash ho jayega”.
Kabir – this means that file has all the records of his black marketing.
Meanwhile pragya also came.
Isha tells her about that.
Pragya – now what to do sir . How we will get that file sir.
Kabir – I will bring that file.
Isha – but sir it’s risky.
Kabir – don’t worry. First let’s try.
Anand was going for a surgery meanwhile kabir took the opportunity and entered in his cabin. He was about to open the drawer riya came . He started moving here an there .
Precap – kabir to take ria’s help. Saanchi says now I will go to Malhotra mansion.
So sorry guys for same precap. This episode seemed me lengthy so I stopped here only. It’s good na u will get one more episode ?? Next one would be posted soon.
And in last one I forgot to mention zombie is our wonderful writer as well as sweet sister Niyaa. So finally day before yesterday she posted after a long time. I hope she will post regularly.
Trisha where are you dear. 1 week is over. We are waiting for your article. Come back soon …. our kaanchi family is missing you.
Lots of love
See u soon.
Take care. ??
22 Comments
Areeeee abhi toh apn ne ig pe baat ki thi…mein padhne jaa rhi thi ki mobile ne kha 1 baar TU ki website check krle…fir dil baag baag ho gya ….mazaa aa gya padh k…kabir aur sanchi toh buss ab yhi dekhne ko milte h….aur dhanyawaad mra itta warm wlcm krne k liye aur ab jsa ki tune bola h jinny betaal??…update soon…till then gn..lots of luvv to u??
???mera bhi yhi haal h . Sukhriya dayan . Mujhe humesa support or encourage karne ke liye ????
Superb…
Thanq dear ???
Amazing
Thanq dear ??
So so amazing and awesome episode yaar…….. Kabir and sanchi scene is superb and mind blowing yaar………..post soon yaar…….
Thanq dear ??
Sheet belt baand le jinny bola tha naa nxt time mahabarat likhungi.. Ab pure haq se likhne wali hun..first of all maine tera ff padhna start kiya kusum aunty ne kaha kabir fresh ho k aa sath m chai pite h nd kabir n kaha yess mom jaisa aap kaho…??so point ye tha ki i skipped CHAI word??.. Nd then kabir said jaisa aap kaho maa… Omg mera reaction???matlab aaj maa beta ko pila diya priyu ne that too sath me????… Hasna mat wrna pitegi???.. Amaz fadoo epi yaar .. Phaad daala hilla daala…per ye kya ye kab se lengthy ho gya mujhe to tere or epi se ye chotta laga?chal achaa h jaisa tune kaha ek or episode padhne ko mil jayega??? chal ab bye kyaa ab ff likhdaalun tere uper????.. Ab ig p milte h waise bhi aaj to teri sis ghar p nhi rahne wali???.. Lovv u meri pyaali jinny ??good mrng have a nice day??
Mai ready hoon or tera mahabharat nhi funny essay laga. Padne ke baad din bhar has rhi thi or baaki to tujhe pata hi h. Sukhriya meri zombu.? or sun jaake eye check up kara le . Fee ki chinta mat kar humare TU group me sab chanda ikkatha kar lenge ?? luv u loads meri zombie ???
as usual mind blowing
haha and we are getting one more epi right
every scene is wonderful dear
Thanq dear ??
Aww ??? Kabir and Sanchi was so cute ??? awesome Priyu ???
Thanq dear ?? Nd I’m waiting for ur next episode of unwritten love of destiny ?? pls post soon ???
meri pyaari jinny,urf naagin mahodaya………..aapko jaankar bohut prasann matlab, khushi hogi ki hame aapka ye article(iska hindi word nhi maaloom)hame bohut se bhi bohut zyaada achha laga……….mann kiya ki ye kabhi bhi samapt na ho, par ye kya……..aapne toh isse bohut jaldi samapt kar diya……..ab aapne kaha hai, ki aap hame ek aur adhyay(episode ko adhyay hi kehte hain right……haha) dene waali hain, toh aap ye baat apne dimaag se bilkul bhi jaane nhi dijiyega……….dhanyavaad……..
uff…….kya yaar, hamesha ek hi tarah likhte likhte bore ho gayi thi likhte likhte so for a change aisa likha……..haha…….oye yaar, mujhe lag raha hai, ki mera cmmnt tere epi se bada na hojaye, isliye isse yhi end karti hoon, baaki baatein ig pe………luv u meli pyaali jinny
Sukriya sukriya brahmu Ji. Hume jaan ke bohot prasanta hui ki aapko ye pasand aaya par ab aaplog ko ek or adhyaaya nhi milega or uske liye hum tahe dil se maafi cahte h. Agla adhyaaya prakashit ho chuka h. Luv u tooo brahmu meri jaan ???
Why do I have a bad feeling about this.?. I feel like our gang is going to fall in some big trouble. Hope everything gets fine anf they succeed. Waiting eagerly for nxt ep?
Thanq dear. And the next one is already posted ?? u will get all your answers there. ???
superb ff post next one soon and sorry for short comment because exam he na……….
Aa gya next wala. Or koi nhi exam hone ke baad bhi tune comment kiya. Thanq sweetie. ???
Naagin jee humein apka ye shrinkhala bhut pasand aayi.Riya jee ko bhi dhanyawaad kehne ka mann kar rha hai kyuki mujhe ye aabhaas hua hai woh Kabir jee ko maddat avashya karegi…ab bas dusre shrinkhalaon ki intezaar hai.Aapke yese hi sarvottam kahanaiyon ki intezaaar mein…
Dhanyavaad!!
Haye hum aapke jitne gyani nahi h …. but hum samjh gye aap kya kehna cah rhi h. Sukriya bibu baisa. ????