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Shot 2
Amritsar airport
Kunj along with Maya ND sana reached Amritsar … Kunj felt very happy after all he came to his mother land after soo many days … He came out to see ushar already waiting for them … Kunj goes to them takes their blessing ND Maya too … Usha takes sana from Maya …Usha was having tears of happiness in her eyes …..
K: ma kya hua ap to kyu rahe ho .. plzzz ma I can’t see ur tears saying this he wipes tears
U: nai putta these are happy tears IAM SOOO happy to see u all again after long time saying this she side hugs him
M: OK beta come let’s go
All went towards car ND drove off … Soon they reach sana mansion…All get down ND kunj ND Maya were shocked to see the decorations made to mansion.
K: papa wats all this …
M: beta we arranged a small party to welcome u …
K: papa ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat thi …
U: beta jaroorat thi … Kyuki u came here after long 4 years
K: but ma interrupted by Maya
M: kunj it’s OK ma aur papa is very happy with this so don’t deny their wish
K: OK ma saying this all went inside the mansion ….
Ushar: OK beta we r going outside to invite guests to evening’s party u trio go ND rest for sometime ….
K: OK ma
Luthra mansion
Twinkle was working in kitchen .. just den she heard a ring of door bell ND she went to see who it is …. She gets a shock to see ushar in the door steps… Tears are rolling down her cheeks …… She was standing der like a statue lost her senses she came to reality due to Anita’s voice
A: who is that twinkle (shouting )
T: mummy ji usha aunty ND manohar uncle are here … Uncle ,aunty get inside.. says twinkle .. as soon as they enters she took their blessing
Ushar: jiti rahe beta …
U: cupping her face … How r u beta .
T: ji aunty IAM fine ND aap
U: IAM gud beta ..
T: uncle how r u
M: IAM fine beta
T: ji uncle come take ur seats I will get u something to eat
Ushar: no no beta iski jaroorat nai hai we came to invite u for small welcome party of my son kunj …
T: kunj…With tears
Ushar: ha beta he came to India today itself ND he is going to be here permanently …. Anita ji plzzz do attend this party along with ur family ..
A: ji zaroor we will come
Ushar : OK ji we will leave now saying this they left saying twinkle to come
A: wat r u looking for go ND get ready ND inform uv to come home fast (rudely)
Twinkle nodes her head ND goes to her room ND bangs the door
Twinkle sits on the floor leaning to door ND starts to cry .. “y he came back again.. I can’t see him with another girl ….. I loved him SOOO much but he didn’t .. even he didn’t know abt my feelings…babaji y u brought kunj again in my life .. I was forgetting him but again u made him to come in front of me .” Saying this she starts crying again … After sometime she goes to wardrobe ND takes a photo in which kunj is teasing twinkle .. who is with puppy face ND kunj is laughing … IAM missing those days spent with u kunj ..” I love u soooooo much ” saying this she starts to cry hugging that photo …
At evening
Sarna mansion was filled with guests… Ushar wer inviting the guests just den kunj along with Maya comes downstairs…. Kunj goes to his frnds ND Maya to her frnds all wer enjoying the party … Just den twiraj comes to party along with Anita ..
Twinkle was wearing red netted saree with matching accessories looking damm cute ???? … Kunj gaze falls on twinkle who just entered ND a smile appears on his lips he excuses himself ND goes to twinkle … Twinkle saw kunj ND by looking at her lovr her heart got slipped … Tears were rolling in her eyes but she controlled her tears
K: wow twinkle wat a pleasant surprise saying this he hugs her … Twinkle felt his touch ND she too reciprocates …
T: hi kunj …. How r u
K: IAM fine … BTW twinkle r u married … But u didn’t invited me for ur marriage this is not fair Twinkle makes a fake anger
T: this sadu didn’t changed yet murmurs… Kunj it’s not like that …. U were busy in ur business so I didn’t invite u … IAM sry now plzzz leave this anger Na saying this she turns his face
K: OK but wer is ur husband ..
T: she was abt to call uv just den Maya along with sana comes to twinj
M: hi twinkle how r u saying this she hugs her … IAM SOOO happy to see u
T: me too Maya ….
M: den wats up ..How is ur married life ..
T:yeah it’s going gud ( with a fake smile ).. btw is this ur daughter
M:yeah my daughter sana
T: wow sana she so cute… Saying this she takes sana from Maya ND started playing with her
Kunj was admiring twinkle .. just den he observes wound on her hand ..ND gets scared
K: twinkle wat is this … How u got hurt… Asks with concern ND Maya too looks at her
T: it’s nothing kunj I got hurt wen I was cooking says with tears (guys uv bet twinkle for not giving his coffee on time with a belt …. )
K: Twinkle can’t u do ur work properly ND carefully ha idiot
M: kunj apply some ointment to her I will go to the guests
K: OK Maya I will … U give sana to Maya
T: no kunj it is not needed now IAM fine.
K: no twinkle IAM not gonna listen u anymore u come along with me … Saying this he takes her from der to his room
This all was witnessed by uv ( yes guys he was watching them from the beginning with blood shot eyes ) he follows twinj …ND stands outside the room
Kunj room
Kunj was applying ointment to twinkle ND he was scolding her for not taking care of her … Twinkle was wincing in pain ND looking at him lovingly with tears …
T: ahhhhh kunj … Slowly
K: it’s OK twinkle it would be paining but u will get relief after sometime
T:ouchhh
K: sry sry I will do slowly …
Uv was standing der with blood shot eyes he tightens his fist … By listening to wincing sound of twinkle … He misunderstood that twinkle is having s*x with kunj by listening sounds ( idiot uv ??????? …. I wanna kill this uv… But I can’t because he is important in my fs Na so ????)
Uv goes from der with anger ….
Kunj had completed his first aid …. Soon party gets over ND twinkle bid bye to kunj ND his family …
K: OK twinkle come again … We will meet soon saying this he hugs her … Anita looks this ND fumes in anger …Btw u didn’t introduce me to ur husband who is he
Uv: IAM her husband comes uv in front of kunj
K: uv ….. Looks at him with a shock ND he looks at twinkle who is bowing her head
Screen freezes
Hope I reached ur expectations ..
Y kunj was shocked to see uv ?????
Wat uv will do with twinkle ?????
Wats there in between twinj ND uv ????
To know stay tuned
Plzzz ignore grammatical errors ND typing error no proof reading
Plzzz comment guys …. If I get 20+ comments den I will post next shot soon or else forget abt the next shot …. IAM not blackmailing u guys … IAM serious this time ……. I will not plead u to comment because it has gone beyond the limits …. ND some ppl are really impossible they don’t want to comment but they want free entertainment……. So guys if u want my ff ND fs to be posted den comment or else I will stop writing ND I will not post … It’s up to u guys …
I too have my life IAM also hell busy in my work ND studies but IAM writing it to entertain u guys .. u r not worth to it really.. IAM not gonna say sry for talking like this y because IAM right at my place
ND some want comments for their writing but they won’t comment for others … This is not fair
This time IAM damm serious if I won’t get 20+ comments IAM going to stop writing ND leave tu forever … IAM not blackmailing u guys just IAM saying the fact which is haunting ND hurting me a lot since from months …
U comment genuinely.. if u ppl don’t like my ff u just tell me …
Keep smiling
Bye
Loads of love
Urs
Nisha
28 Comments
Awsm episode dear…
Loved it..
Finally twinkle and kunj met???
Don’t know what uv will do with twinkle now…
And plzzz dear don’t quit tu..u r a very writer??But u have a right to be angry bcoz many of the readers enjoy free entertainment…
But plzz dear write for us who desperately waits for each n every ff…
Take care
Love u loads
Fabous dii..
Loved it..
Too good…
Love u..
Post soon
Awesome dear
Hate dis UV
Love u post soon
Nice episode! Pls post the next episode soon..
Ohhh god yrrr it was fab??????
This yuvi…??????????
Awww sooo cuteee yrrr kunj was applying ointment on twinkle’s wound..????
Loved it to the core..????
And why kunj was shocked to see uv?…
Does he know him???…
Please post soon…
And yeah comment guys on this ff and on all other ffs which u read…it has become a really big issue guys…
Nishu di don’t worry …u will definately get 20+ comments….?????
Love u!!!!!??????
It was awesome yaa pls post soooooonnnn❤️
Awesome
It’s amazing
Post soon.
nice episode plz post soon and plz dont quit
Thanks fr posting…. The episode was awesome, really waiting to read more.
Plz don’t quit as u r a very gud writer, ull Def get comments but plz don’t stop writing, plz write for us who r desperately waiting for the updates n r commenting.
Amzing loved it
And hey dont be sad or angry u r writing marvellous dont stop
post soon. amazing
firstly, awesome epi yr
kya likha h super se bhi upar mtlb gazab !
pta ni ab uv kya krega twinkle ke sath !only u knows
& we also wants to know so plz nishu don’t quit & stop writing!
we luv u & ur writing also plz
& ur r right at ur place because some people demand comments for their writing but they are not ready to comment on other post !
other silent readers plzz start commenting
post next soon
luv u
plz write for us who desperately wait for ur post
Superb episode di I loved it to core of my ❣ heart plz plz its my request post soon this Yuvi is mental it’s doesn’t mean the sound of ouch only come when — ?????
Amazing episode post soon ok
Felt sad about twinkle love kunj consult for twinkle let’s see next what happened in their life ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
Unique story line most pain
Ok bye di lots of love you ?
Awesome
Post soon
Nice episode
Awesome fabulous episode yrrrr
aur iss bewkoof uv ne kya samajh liya ……
aur bechari twinkle kunj se pyaar krti h feeling bad for twinkle yrrr rona aa gya koi apne pyaar ko kisi aur ke saath kaise dekh sakta h
post soon dear kyoki ab wait nhi hoga…….
aur plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz don’t quit tu yrrrr me jaanti hu apni jageh bilkul sahi h jo free ka hi entertainment le rahe h aur cmt. nhi kr rahe yrrr plzzzz silent readers plzzzzz cmt. kro guys plzzzzz
luv u nishuuuu
Diii!! The episode is just mind blowing..kunj n twinkle knew each other? N twinkle loves kunj..n this uv..kuch bhi sochta h ye gadha…n n n i m really excited fr the next episode…plzz post soon no..n u will get comments..plzz Dii post krdo na..love Ya!! ♥♥
It was very awsm and uv did veryyyyyyyy bad with twinkle and kunj should do something pass post the next soon
It was very awsm and uv did veryyyyyyyy bad with twinkle and kunj should do something pass post the next soon and unite twinj as I can’t see maya with kunj as uv and twinkle are somewhat cute but maya and kunj no plssssss
Awsome episode.loved it..plz post soon
Finally twinj meet and hope this uv won’t do anything to twinkle post soon
nishuu diiddaaa ♥
pakka kuch toh hai plsssss dida plss plsss post asap plssssshhhhhh ♥
i srsly cant wait n wont be able to wait gosh m jst sooooooooo excited for it f**k dis uv how culd he even think like dat hearing twinkle dat too wincing in pain does’t he knw he nly gives her pain not kunj nly blo*dy uv does dat uhhhhhh dats y she winces in pain god disgusting dida plsssssss post soon i cant wait to knw more n read more srsly m soooooooo excited gosh ♥
i was thinking nly twinj knew eo phele se i knew it ♥ bas w8 kr rhi thi n ab nahi kar skti w8 ♥
see u asap dida ♥
love u ♥♥♥
Superb chappy.
Can’t wait for next.
That was just amazing nishu di ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
N bechari twinkle first of all uv n Anita ka torcher n upar se heart break ??
She used to love him?
This uv is so cheap n cheap thinking ?
Uv must have troubleshoot twinkle during clg Days
Pata Nahi
Dekhenge
Post soon??
Waiting ??
Nishu akkaaaa!!!
Wooooow! You are so amazing!
This was so good… I loved the way the story is proceeding…
Especially your style of narration of Twinkle’s emotions never fail to amaze me!
You are the best akka! Twinj had a past… That is so painful…
Waiting excitedly for your next.. so don’t you dare stop writing!
Omg this fs is amaIng di..
Really loved it..though iy is emotional..but i love sad stpries..?
Uv is jz a cheapo,ppooor twinki??
Post soon di?
Awesome Amazing akka
OMG what will happen to twinkle now
This uv ma he is good for nothing duffer
And why was kunj shocked
Amazing